prologue- might not be fit for younger audiences

Her desk is messy, full of dull, sad drawings. Her wounds ache, blood pooling on the floor. Another day,with more obstacles to face. She's curious about the other side, a bit too curious. Little does she know she shines like a star, her beams shining the Night's silhouette. She's special on the inside, but it isn't enough to stop her.
She drives out to the highest mountain peak, climbing it with all the energy she has. The high winds pick up and blow at her ears, but she carries on. Finally she reaches the top peak. For a moment she listens to the strong wind blowing though her ears, telling her to climb back down and live a normal life. She reflected upon this for a moment, but she had made her choice. She jumped, but something strange happened. She looked around, her eyes focusing on the sky, now filled with vibrant colors. She continued to fall, then her body went limp as she hit the bottom. Everything went black, But only for a few moments. She opened her eyes, and instantly knew she wasn't in heaven nor hell. She looked around some more, and reluctantly got up. From that moment she realized this wasn't Earth, either.

This is Emu's story.

feel free to critique.

Okay , Spoiler but she's NOT dead.
Ehh character slots closed, exceptions for friends.
If you happen to be a close friend;

Name:
Gender:
Age:
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Extra(s)?:
Bio:


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Characters

Name: Emu
Gender: girl
Age: 17
Ref:
Extra(s)?:nop
Personality: smart, creative, depressed (depressing)
Bio: Was bullied in high school for having an 'imagination.'


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Thanks! Stay tuned for more!

oo sounds interesting

Name: Whiplash
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Ref:
Personality: Very gentle and caring, despite her sharp name. She's very agile, and seems to act more like a deer than a mouse. Whiplash loves all things nature, and cares for all life like it's her own big garden; she handles each living thing with great care.
Extra(s)?: Runs more like a deer than a mouse, but still has a bit of a rodent-like nature to her.
Bio: Whiplash wasn't very certain of things at a moment in time, but she knew two things: she had been 17 at the time, and she was a mouse that was taking on deer-like traits. Her name seemed to call for her inside her mind, and she took it willingly. She always had loved nature, and although she had seemed to have woken up somewhere with bad amnesia, her gentle and positive outlook on life gives her a great personality and loyalty.

Accepted, adding to op

gj on a female character <3

^ accepted, I'm like gonna attempt to write ch 1.
pls save me from double post X'3

-Saves-

:3 Can't wait for chapter one!

chapter 1 in the works

Birdluv a dit :

Her desk is messy, full of dull, sad drawings. (Maybe describe one drawing here so we can get a feel for it. If you describe it well, you might not need to explain her background at all.) Her wounds ache, blood pooling on the floor. (If the wounds are that deep, wouldn't she be dead/in too much pain to move?) Another day, with more obstacles to face...
She's curious about the other side, a bit too curious. (Why?) Little does she know she shines like a star, her beams shining the night's silhouette. She's special on the inside, but it isn't enough to stop her. (In what ways is she special? What do you mean "her beams shining the night's silhouette"?)
She drives out to the highest mountain peak, climbing it with all the energy she has. The high winds pick up and blow at her ears, but she carries on. (Make a mention somewhere that the winds are strong, making this into some sort of battle.) Finally she reaches the top peak. For a moment she listens to the strong wind blowing though her ears, telling her to climb back down and live a normal life. (I like this sentence.) She reflected upon this for a moment, but she had made her choice. (Maybe elaborate on her thoughts here?) She jumped, but something strange happened. She looked around, her eyes focusing on the sky, now filled with vibrant colors. She continued to fall, then her body went limp as she hit the bottom. Everything went black, but only for a few moments. She opened her eyes, and instantly knew she wasn't in heaven nor hell. She looked around some more, and reluctantly got up. From that moment (This phrasing makes the sentence a little awkward.) she realized this wasn't Earth, either.

I hope I'm not offending you by critiquing this. I hope this helps instead of hurts. I think this story has a lot of potential and will end up being something very interesting. Keep writing!

Oh not at all ^u^
I'll make sure to look over this!
And thanks <3