Hello, this is my first ever fanfic so I hope you'll like it. This fanfiction will take place in the world of Transformice and is seen through the eyes of a young mouse named Cristy. She was neglected by her family and had to survive on her own, this story shows the struggles for her as she tries to fit in with all the other mice. If you would like to enter a character for this fanfiction, please fill in this form:
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I'd like a good mix of characters, so please don't all just say your mouse is good or bad, I would like at least half of them to be good and another half to be bad. I'd also like mixed genders please, not all being girls or all being boys. I'd pretty much just like a mix of everything.

Anyway, here are my characters so far:

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Age: 14
Gender: Female
Name: Cristy
Personality: Forgiving, caring and loyal. She will stick up for herself whenever it's needed and would never betray her friends.
Biography: Cristy was neglected as a small child and was dis-owned by her parents, since she was left to live on her own (when she was 6) Cristy tried to find friends, but unfortunately she was bullied and nobody seemed to accept her. Only now has she found her best friend and she must stay close to her in order to be safe.
Good or bad: Good.

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Age: 14
Gender: Female
Name: Crimson
Personality: Happy, upbeat and popular, or at least until she became friends with Cristy anyway. Crimson would never leave Cristy's side and always stands up for her.
Biography: Crimson used to be very popular with the other mice, but because she became friends with Cristy, Crimson lost her friends. Crimson doesn't care that she lost her friends, she just wants to stay with Cristy.
Good or bad: Good.

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Age: 16
Gender: Male
Name: Bryce
Personality: Buff and mean, he is very rough and always gets into fights. He has cuts all over his body and everyone is scared of him, he's the leader of the bad guys.
Biography: Bryce was brought up in a family full of tough mice, he was taught how to fight at a very young age and seems to have mastered it. Although, he still is a bit dim.
Good or bad: Bad.

Owned by Boefie:

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Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Luca
Personality: Has a specifice hate for girly womans, and uses sarcasm alot. Confuses people alot, and she loves it. Her black hair, looks like nylon in the moonlight, wich she utterly hates. Looking pretty itself, she just hates it. She is the perfect bad guy, and will never give up.
Biography: As kid her parents fought alot, since mom was cheating, and she got dragged all over when they got divorced. She finally decided to stay with dad, and left her mom behind till the day of tomorrow.
Good or bad: Bad

Owned by Smalltoes:

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Age: 15
Gender: Male
Name: Gabriel
Personality: Quiet and shy. He never really speaks to anyone but his friends, he's a wuss and never likes to cause trouble.
Biography: Gabriel grew up in a quiet and peaceful town, until his parents got kidnapped. Ever since then Gabriel has found it difficult to cope, his parents were never found but he still thinks they're alive somewhere.
Good or bad: Good

Now for the prologue:

Cristy scattered around the deserted survivor room, it had never been this empty before, not when she'd been there. She clambered up a thin wooden wall and reached the top to look around. "Nobody," she whispered to herself. Cristy jumped down from the wooden bridge and landed swiftly onto the stone floor. She twitched her ears as she heard a paw quietly touch the floor. Cristy conjured a cannon and aimed it at where she had heard the sound. A mouse jumped out at her and grinned as she pounced. "Nice aim, but I'm too fast for you!" said the smiling Crimson as she landed on top of Cristy.

Sounds great!
Do you actully play survivor?
If you dont do it alot, i would suggest you to look at the athmosphere in the rooms.

Im looking foreword to see more of this! I love how the details dont get boring ^^

Im totally suggesting a character
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Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Luca
Personality: Has a specifice hate for girly womans, and uses sarcasm alot. Confuses people alot, and she loves it. Her black hair, looks like nylon in the moonlight, wich she utterly hates. Looking pretty itself, she just hates it. She is the perfect bad guy, and will never give up.
Biography: As kid her parents fought alot, since mom was cheating, and she got dragged all over when they got divorced. She finally decided to stay with dad, and left her mom behind till the day of tomorrow.
Good or bad: Bad

Boefie a dit :

Sounds great!
Do you actully play survivor?
If you dont do it alot, i would suggest you to look at the athmosphere in the rooms.

Im looking foreword to see more of this! I love how the details dont get boring ^^

Im totally suggesting a character
Reference:
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Luca
Personality: Has a specifice hate for girly womans, and uses sarcasm alot. Confuses people alot, and she loves it. Her black hair, looks like nylon in the moonlight, wich she utterly hates. Looking pretty itself, she just hates it. She is the perfect bad guy, and will never give up.
Biography: As kid her parents fought alot, since mom was cheating, and she got dragged all over when they got divorced. She finally decided to stay with dad, and left her mom behind till the day of tomorrow.
Good or bad: Bad

Thank you so much for entering, your character has been accepted. :D
I'm glad you like the story so far. ^^
I play a fair bit of survivor, but not too much. I'll definitely play some more to get a feel for the rooms.

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Age: 15
Gender: Male
Name: Gabriel
Personality: Quiet and shy. He never really speaks to anyone but his friends, he's a wuss and never likes to cause trouble.
Biography: Gabriel grew up in a quiet and peaceful town, until his parents got kidnapped. Ever since then Gabriel has found it difficult to cope, his parents were never found but he still thinks they're alive somewhere.
Good or bad: Good

Can't wait for the first chapter.

Smalltoes a dit :

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Age: 15
Gender: Male
Name: Gabriel
Personality: Quiet and shy. He never really speaks to anyone but his friends, he's a wuss and never likes to cause trouble.
Biography: Gabriel grew up in a quiet and peaceful town, until his parents got kidnapped. Ever since then Gabriel has found it difficult to cope, his parents were never found but he still thinks they're alive somewhere.
Good or bad: Good

Can't wait for the first chapter.

Thank you for entering, your character has been accepted.
Adding characters to the OP.

I may write chapter one soon. Stay tuned.

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I'd also like mixed genders please, not all being girls or all being boys. I'd pretty much just like a mix of everything.

Do you mean genderfluid/mix, non-binary genders, or just all varieties of genders?

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Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Dalias
Personality: Dark, bloodthirsty, innocent-looking, driven of desire, free-spirited.
Biography: Her career was nothing more than the art of deceiving. She always kept her feelings hidden and only focuses on the job at hand. Sees no time for making friends, however, if she was interested in friends, she'd make sure that they had the same interests as she possesses. She may seem cute to the opposing team, but she packs more than just a punch or two. Hates following orders but she knows that her job is at stake if she doesn't. Occasionally found spacing out if left alone.
Good or bad: Bad

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Age: 20
Gender: Female
Name: Scarlat
Personality: Always gets into trouble, adventurous and very friendly. Sometimes she can betray her friends. She knows how Cristy feels. Always fights for her friends even if it costs her life.
Biography: When Scarlat was 6, her parents neglected her and were mad at her even about little things. Two years later, Scarlat lived alone and didn't make friends. But now she has friends and will fight her enemies no matter what.
Good or bad: Good

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a dit :VoirMasquer

I'd also like mixed genders please, not all being girls or all being boys. I'd pretty much just like a mix of everything.

Do you mean genderfluid/mix, non-binary genders, or just all varieties of genders?

I don't really mind, I'll accept genders of non-female or non-male characters, so all varieties pretty much.

Adding characters to OP, both have been accepted.

Sits here waiting for the chapter, totally patient

Okay, okay, okay. I'll write the chapter.

Still no chapter :(
The sucky thing is that all the good fanfic threads get inactive even though they didn't even reach the second page...

Sounds awesome. I wanted to apply.
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Age: 22
Gender: Female but she transformed herself into a male. (Lol i tried making a unique character ._.)
Name: Arianna
Personality: A very sweet girl but really wanted to be a guy. She is very helpful, kind and considerate. She is also generous.
Biography: Was a very beautiful girl. But at the day before her 18th birthday, she had decided she didnt need love. So, she cut off her beautiful hair, erased her makeup, take off all her girly things and replaced it with guy things. She left her home, leaving a note that she is dead. She is now wandering everywhere in Transformice. She never told anyone that she is a girl, so she cant face her past.
Good or bad: Good
(Her first picture shows her real gender, then the other one shows her other gender)

oo cool i want in :D !!
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Gender : Female
Name: marusel
Age: 18
Personality: Evil,Mean Bossy A loner Stalker-ish Likes to get in fights And every time its night she comes out.
Biography. She run for her life at the end of the world. she would do what ever she could to save Herself Not anyone else but herself. She dislike everyone Because everyone Tried to kill her because she was evil.Not everyone likes her shes not a friendly get together person. She hunt stuff for days intell she find shelter she was a lone wolf with nothing to do but kill people and take their souls like she was commanded to do.
Good or bad: Bad

hmm.. i want in to :D!

Gender: Female
Name: Jade
Age: 17
Personality: Loves to dance, Happy,SMILE!,Sunshine,Loves eletronics!!! And IS SUPER HYPER!!!
Biography: That one day when I was rolling down a giant hill.. A flash of sunshine hit my hit while warm water hit my legs I got mud and grass on my clothes when i popped back up on my feet i felt Sunshine run through my heart while my face turned pale As all her blood as well Turned Red then green and went back into her body! Mother Nature.

Good or bad : Good

Would my character be of interest to you :D?


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Name: Zazan Finlayson (normally just Finlayson or Fin)
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Personality: Very playful and jovial with rare exception. Often taunts and cheers on his friends in equal measure, and very absent-minded.
Biography:
Finlayson was born the disgraced son of his village's shaman, and with a number of peculiarities. His body was weird for a mouse; he was unusually large for a mouse, his tail was a little short, his feet were big, and even his inherent scent would cause some unease in the other mice around him. Worse, despite being the Shaman's son, he had very little magical ability if any at all. In a village that had emphasized Shamanism to the point that his did, that alone guaranteed his disgrace. All of this was for good reason-- his mother was a rat. All of these factors together made him very unpopular in his home town, to the point that he was often even excluded from coming along with his fellows whenever they would foray out to search for cheese. He would usually wind up collecting food for the mischief on his own.
Rat blood wasn't without its advantages, however. Finny is quite a bit more resilient than his fellow mice, able to swim farther, go for longer times without food or water, dig much deeper, and is even able to stomach things poisonous enough to kill other mice rather comfortably. All these extra abilities aren't worth his ousting in his mind, but he takes all things in stride. There's no reason to get saddened by things you can't change, thinks he, so he'll make the best of it. He just wishes he had an opportunity to prove that he was more than some freakishly giant mouse that smelled like death, that he was just like everybody else if not even a little bit more.

Alignment: Good

Extras:
-Rat blood; no ability to use magic despite blood relatives
-Larger body; big feet, thick tail, bigger overall
-Rat scented; Rats often eat mice, and as such the scent of rats can activate mice's primal fear of predators if he's not careful
-Resilient; A bit tougher than most mice

I can't post the picture here, but I can give you the link.

Reference: C:\Users\Student\Pictures\Ref.png
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Name: Misakiio Furawāmausu (Japanese for flower mouse, she always wears a flower)
Personality: Timid, kind, caring, crazy, bubbly, random
Biography: (nuuu.. /rolls into sunset/) She's an orphan. She has ADHD, but at the time, people didn't understand her and they thought she was mental. She went through a lot of bad things before they could verify she wasn't insane, and she hates talking about her parents' death or anything about her past.
Good or bad: Good, but she has mental outbursts where her brown fur is brown-gray and her flower is red and acts insane, so that would be her bad side. These can last up to only 2-3 minutes, however, so it's never really a problem, and she's good, most of the time.

misakiio a dit :

I can't post the picture here, but I can give you the link.

Reference: C:\Users\Student\Pictures\Ref.png
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Name: Misakiio Furawāmausu (Japanese for flower mouse, she always wears a flower)
Personality: Timid, kind, caring, crazy, bubbly, random
Biography: (nuuu.. /rolls into sunset/) She's an orphan. She has ADHD, but at the time, people didn't understand her and they thought she was mental. She went through a lot of bad things before they could verify she wasn't insane, and she hates talking about her parents' death or anything about her past.
Good or bad: Good, but she has mental outbursts where her brown fur is brown-gray and her flower is red and acts insane, so that would be her bad side. These can last up to only 2-3 minutes, however, so it's never really a problem, and she's good, most of the time.

that 'link' can't be seen by anyone because it's a link from your computer
you need to upload it to imgur or whatever and then provide the link

also friends i think this story is abandoned because the author last posted on 22/07/2014

Aww. I can't use imgur or get an account.