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Insanity lurks in every shadow Hello everyone! NO DONT RUN, i'm getting it spell checked. Link gave me a great idea, and yeah. Here we are. Its about a group of mice, abducted and tortured. I know this intro sucks, but im seriously super tired. I'm going to edit it later. ''Shut up'' He poked me hard with his gun, forcing me to be silent. With big eyes I stared into the darkness before me, just wishing I could catch a glimpse of my attacker. He laughed softly ''You're tough huh, most girls cry.'' ''Who are you?'' I whispered, slowly panicking. He bent over, and whispered in my ear. ''I am your doom.'' Thanks Funkyghost and Ilingirl for making half of the characters for me!! Premade characters name: Aila Personality: Mostly rude and harsh, tends to be sarcastic and a great leader. She never seemed to fit in, nowone really loved her. All her rage turned her into a great leader That one that gives no mercy. history: She never had a great live, her mom didnt cared about her, and her dad went to the army. ref: ![]() Name: Raven Ref: ![]() Personality: Cocky and sarcastic , she always hides her insane side from people in hope that she will be respected and role model , she sometimes realises that her warm and immature personality liked more than the mask she hides behind History:Ignored by people and relatives , she hid in her bubble trying to go unnoticed for the longest time , she was a box full of paranoia and anxiety waiting for somebody to help her escape her nightmare and insanity shes been trapped in since the incident... now , captured and tortured here , she tries to use her traits to escape this place. name: Dominique personality: two-faced, nice then insane history: he went full insane and killed his family Ref: ![]() name: Mira Personality: Happy and innocent, quite young. She was always loved by everyone, and hasent really figured out the real world. history: Always got everything she wanted. Everyone liked her, and she never was an outsider. ref: ![]() Name: Rosien Personality: Casual girl, doesnt cares about much things. Likes to sleep and relax. Has an obsession for being clean though history: Grew up in a normal family, nothing special ref: ![]() Name: Esmee Personality: Creative dreamer girl, likes to live in her own world. history: Got bullied cause she was a little dreamy, though her parents accept her. ref: ![]() So, as you can see i really need some male characters!! Just fill in this form Name: Ref: Personality: History: Yeah, they're open now. Dernière modification le 1415213880000 |
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Hi there. Name: Jarvis Ref: ![]() Personality: Cheery, blind to dark situations, can get cocky, athletic. History: No one knows how people could put up with Jarvis, was the one thing she always wondered. She thought of herself as annoying but didn't seem to mind. Very optimistic when she shouldn't be and always seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. However that doesn't seem to affect her unrealistic energy and athletic skill. |
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While your story may be spell checked, the grammar and use of words are not used right. You should consider get somebody with good grammar and spelling to review it for you. Sometimes you can get the same person to expand on your ideas but that's up to you. |