[Fanfiction] Indigent |
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Hi! This is my first Transformice fanfiction! I thought of this topic of a story for awhile now, and I took consideration for posting this in the fanfiction section. Remember, feedback is welcome! Please be soft with it though, i'm a bit nervous. ^^" So, since that's out of the way, lets begin! PROLOGUE Chapter 1 The two mice walked along the soggy mud next to the busy riverbank filled with fish. There were fishermen waiting for a tugging bite on the bait. Smoke realized something. He sniffed the wet air and caught a scent of something that smelled delicious. The inquisitive mouse crept closer to the human. He squinted to see what he had in store. Corn! He went to check his storage to see if he had any more corn. "Hey! Wait up Smoke!" Fang shouted. "What're you do-" Smoke slammed Fang's mouth shut as he snooped around the fisher-man's stash for any luck. "Augh!" Smoke groaned. "No luck!" Characters Storm is a black mouse with a red, raggedy bandanna. He's always in an adventurous mood! Fang is a dark-grey mouse with sharp incisors. Fang is loud, creative, and fun to talk to! Dernière modification le 1417454700000 |
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This is going great ^^ i might just have to make a mouse if i can :) Good Luck! |
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Ooo this looks good! May I be allowed to post a character, if you dont mind... ![]() Skyla is a white mouse with blue accessories. Skyla is heartless, fearless, mean, nosy and didnt know about care, kindness, generosity, love, friendship and happiness. She have a french accent but uses it in mean things. Wait i think im gonna be a main character...cos..i posted first. But ill see what will it be! Also, keep improving your story ^^ best of luck! |