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Contents:
Red font - Introduction
Orange font - Prolouge/Chapters
Yellow font - My characters
Green font - Form
Blue font - Slots
Purple font - Banner request

Welcome to my new Fanfiction, mice!
The contents are:
Mystery
Horror
Adventure
Comedy

http://i.imgur.com/VsR5GIJ.jpg
Prolouge:

"Hey Mizu." Ella said to her friend, Mizuki, while tapping her shoulder.
"What?" Mizuki asked her slightly. She then took a bite of her cheese
"Wanna go to the movies? I wanna take a break from vanilla." Ella asked her in a tired-like voice.
"Yeah sure im in. Who's utility?" she asked.
"Hmm... I thought about Ivy's utility. Her utility is really popular!" Ella exclaimed excitedly.
"I know, right! Remember the time there was 385 mice in her cinema map? It was really off the hook!" Mizuki exclaimed back.
"Yeah! It was really hot there since it flooded with mice." Ella replied.
"Ok then. Let's go to Ivy's utility tomorrow night." Mizuki said.

They farmed cheese to by 3D glasses.
They met again the next day.


Here are some characters I made :/
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Name: Mizuki
Age: 22
Personality: Adventurous, matured, off the hook, positive, a scaredy cat sometimes.
Gender: ♀
Ref: http://i.imgur.com/GjL1Dib.png
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Name: Ella
Age: 19
Personality: Girly, fearful, loves roses, always positive, immature, sometimes matured
Gender: ♀
Ref: http://i.imgur.com/jX7S2jz.png
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Name: Ivy
Age: 20
Personality: Generous, kind, always help mice.
Gender: ♀
Ref: http://i.imgur.com/84iCw6H.png
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These are the forms if you wanna join:
Name:
Age:
Personality:
Gender (♂ or ♀):
Ref:

Artwork reference is allowed

/!\ YOU MUST NOT USE SOMEONE ELSE'S ARTWORK WITHOUT PERMISSION OR ELSE I WONT ACCEPT IT /!\


Okay here are the slots:
7/15 normal mouse slots
1/10 zombie/creepy monster mouse slot
Ivy is half monster and normal mouse Its a spoiler so I blocked it :|


Edit: Credits to Icegirlypro! She made the banner luvely ^J^


Happy reading!
^_^

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Name: Crystal Wintermoth

Age:18

Personality: She can be quite serious and flirty, she often helps anyone without a reason :3





Le ref: Just imagine her with leopard fur, Headphones (red), blue Applejack hair and a blue rose e3e
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Name : Samyna (Sammi-Nah)

Age: 19

Gender: ♀
Personality : Likes to taggle along with people,Sometimes she gets over dramatic, She is really Creative and cute Love to draw!

Ref: http://i.imgur.com/NQkYNhV.png

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Oh characters! They're accepted ^o^

I may have time to write the first chapter.

Keep tuning in for updates!

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Name: Crystal Wintermoth

Age:18

Personality: She can be quite serious and flirty, she often helps anyone without a reason :3





Le ref: Just imagine her with leopard fur, Headphones (red), blue Applejack hair and a blue rose e3e

Your gender...?

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~CHAPTER ONE~
The Creeps



"Mizu, are you sure this is Ivy's utility? Its really creepy from the outside, I dont wanna see the inside!!!" Ella exclaimed.
"They're just some horror decorations. Its Halloween!" Mizu replied and tried to make her calm down.
When they were about to enter, some mouse bumped behind Ella. *Thump!*

"Oww! Hey!" Ella shouted at the mouse who fell on her back.
"Uhhh..i'm sorry. Oh anyway, my name is Samyna! Crystal invited me here to watch movies. Its my first time here." The mouse said.
"Ahh! Lucky you! You got invited to a famouse utility!" Mizu said, cutting off their tension.
"Really? What in the odds!" Samyna exclaimed.
"Quick chattin. If we dont go in, we will just stand up, seatless!! That is not a good reason to stay positive!" Ella said.

"Okay okay. Miss "Sunshine and Rainbows" is starting to summon thunders and rain." Mizu said, obviously teasing Ella.

When they got in, the utility was swarming with mice, but only about 50 of them.
"Hey Samy! I've been looking everywhere for you!" An unusual voice said.
"Crystal! I made new friends! Mizu, Ella, meet Crystal!" Samyna said, cheerfully.
"Um..Hi!" Ella greeted Crystal.
"Ehhh I have no time to say hi. We should find seats quickly!" Mizu said.

When they found seats they began watching the movie.
30 minutes later, mice were covering their noses.

"Huh? What the heck is going on??!!" Mizu asked.
"YIKES! ZOMBIEMOUSE!!!" Ella exclaimed.
"Goodness gracious! We have to get out!" Crystal exclaimed
"Agreed." A random mouse said.
"How the hell did this place had zombies?" Another mouse said.

Some mice ran outside, but came back with fear.
"ZOMBIEMICE ARE INVADING THIS SERVER!" The mice exclaimed.
"WELL THEN LETS GET OUT OF THIS SERVER! THERE'S NOTHING ELSE TO DO BUT TAKE THE NEAREST AIRPORT!!!" Mizu shouted to the mice.

Will they get to the airport and survive? or die beyond the zombies?

Find out!

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Name: Tiffany, Called Tiff or Tiffy by her friends
Age: 15
Personality: Girly but still, she will take a dare no matter what!
Gender :♀
Ref:http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/024/8/b/untitled_drawing_by_snowstormishdabest-d8f7sl8.png

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I can make for you a banner?
I'll make tomorrow,because lazy and zone time (02:11 RO).
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icegirlypro a dit :
I can make for you a banner?
I'll make tomorrow,because lazy and zone time (02:11 RO).

Thanks for the offer! :D


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Name: Tiffany, Called Tiff or Tiffy by her friends
Age: 15
Personality: Girly but still, she will take a dare no matter what!
Gender :♀
Ref:http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/024/8/b/untitled_drawing_by_snowstormishdabest-d8f7sl8.png

Okay accepted.

If i dont get a guard or zombie form next month, ill be making them.
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~CHAPTER TWO~
Safe Server, or is it?



"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" All the mice screamed.
"We cannot take cars! They're already invaded!" Ivy shouted.
"Come on, everyone! Get in my REALLY REALLY BIG AND LONG truck! Its also connected to an open R.V. Everyone can fit there!!!" A mouse said.
"Hey, you look familiar.." Ella wondered at the mouse.
"T-T-Tiffany?" Mizu asked.
"Long time no see..ehh?" Ella asked.
"JUST GET IN!!!" Samyna shouted.

When all of them got in, everyone secured doors and locked them.
Tiffany drove the truck with the R.V. and was near the airport.
Then suddenly, everyone got slammed on the walls of the truck.
"Uhh...Tiffy, whats going on???" Ivy asked.
"WERE HERE! GET OUT OF THE TRUCK AND BOARD THE PLANE!!!" Tiffany shouted.

When everyone is in the plane, the pilot mouse was driving fast, and everyone was hoping they escape.
Then suddenly, everyone felt downward force.
"Huh?" Mizu wondered.
"Whats happening???" Crystal asked.
"THIS IS YOUR PILOT SPEAKING!!! THE PLANE WILL CRASH ON WATER SURFACE IN 5 MINUTES!!! EVERYONE PREPARE LIFEVESTS, THE SLIDE DOOR, OR DIE!!!!!!" The pilot screamed on the microphone.

Some mice screamed in panic, some prepared their life vests, and some opened the doors.
When everyone got out, only Mizu, Ella and Samyna were left in the plane.
"COME ON GUYS GET OUT!!!" Crystal shouted at them.
"WE CANT! THE PLANE IS SINKING!!! REMEMBER THAT WE THREE CANT SWIM??!" Mizu replied, exclaiming.
She and Ella got out, but Samyna was left in the sinking plane, plunched to her death.
"Dont save me! Save yourselves!" Samyna said, making them her last words.
"SAMY! NOOOO!!!" Crystal shouted in tears.
"Sorry, kiddo. Shes not gonna come back." Mizu said and tapped Crystal's shoulders. "Rest in peace, my dear friend."

When they got in the server, it was really cold and some mice froze in fear.
"This server is not safe for mice to gather cheese, isnt it???" Ivy asked.
"Yeah." Ella replied.

Is Samyna dead? Or alive?
Will they survive in the cold?
Are there any monsters with them?

Find out!

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I got too excited to write the second chapter XD Sorry!
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xD

It was halarious.
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"Come on, everyone! Get in my REALLY REALLY BIG AND LONG truck! Its also connected to an open R.V. Everyone can fit there!!!"

Especially this :D
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XD thanks

I laughed at everything i wrote -except Samyna's death-

I pretty like the part when the pilot screamed into the microphone like, 10+ mice were already deaf after that! XD

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i can feel the desperate atmosphere

this is quite good imo
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sirusthemice a dit :
i can feel the desperate atmosphere

this is quite good imo

angelfromaj a dit :
xD

It was halarious.
Tiffany a dit :
"Come on, everyone! Get in my REALLY REALLY BIG AND LONG truck! Its also connected to an open R.V. Everyone can fit there!!!"

Especially this :D

Thank you guys!
-Has a very satisfying smile that it goes off the face-
http://i.imgur.com/dxsq1zA.png

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queenlordess a dit :
sirusthemice a dit :
i can feel the desperate atmosphere

this is quite good imo

angelfromaj a dit :
xD

It was halarious.
Tiffany a dit :
"Come on, everyone! Get in my REALLY REALLY BIG AND LONG truck! Its also connected to an open R.V. Everyone can fit there!!!"

Especially this :D

Thank you guys!
-Has a very satisfying smile that it goes off the face-
http://i.imgur.com/dxsq1zA.png

Oh god..
ARE YOU SAMNYA'S ZOMBIE??!?!?
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angelfromaj a dit :
queenlordess a dit :
sirusthemice a dit :
i can feel the desperate atmosphere

this is quite good imo

angelfromaj a dit :
xD

It was halarious.
Tiffany a dit :
"Come on, everyone! Get in my REALLY REALLY BIG AND LONG truck! Its also connected to an open R.V. Everyone can fit there!!!"

Especially this :D

Thank you guys!
-Has a very satisfying smile that it goes off the face-
http://i.imgur.com/dxsq1zA.png

Oh god..
ARE YOU SAMNYA'S ZOMBIE??!?!?

No... ;A; I'm just a rat burger

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http://i.imgur.com/O9xTmoK.jpg
Here.
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^^ That picture reminded me of a quote from the song Skyfall:
"SKYFALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL WE WILL STAND TALLLLLLLLLLLLLLL AND FACE IT ALL TOGETHER!!!"
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XD I think i may have time to do the third one...

Anyway Angel...

WHAT??! XDXDXDXDXD ITS NOT PART OF THE BANNER even though the song is good X)

Anyway great job on the banner! x) I LIEK it!

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~CHAPTER THREE~
Into the Cold, Out of the Cold



After everything, they gathered cheese and made camps.
Then, an ice cube was moving across the water.
"UGH! Mizu, I caught something HEAVY!!!" Ella shouted.
"It's not a fish! Its an ice cube! A HEAVY ONE..." Mizu said.

When they took out the ice cube, they found Samyna frozen in it.

"C'mon! Let's dig it to free Samy!" Ella said.

When they dug Samyna out, they laid her near the fire and wrapped her with warm blankets.

"Hnngg. Hnngg. What happened? Where are we? Ella?" Samyna asked.
"Were glad that you're alive..." Ella said and sighed in relief.
"I wish we will get out. Soon." Mizu said.

Then, a zombiemouse appeared.

"OH NO!!!!" The mice screamed.

They ran off to a big boat leaving one mouse behind.
"Huh? Where's Ivy!?" Crystal asked.
"Shes not important anymore!" Mizu said.
"But why?" Crystal asked again.
"UGH FOR CRYIN OUT LOUD DO YOUR CONVERSATION ON THE POOP DECK!" The Captainmouse said.

The mice moved to another server. And it's the French server.

"Mhhh! Do I smell french bread with cheese?" Ella, Crystal and Samyna said.
"Sigh. Pigs. They never skip cheese french bread." Mizu said, teasing them.
"What? It feels good to eat like a pig!" Ella replied hysterically.
"Ahem. What if you get roasted like rat burgers?" Tiffany said, joining in with Mizu

Is Ivy in the boat? Or is it?
Will they live better in the french server?

Find out!
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A suggestion: (In spoilers cause if you do it this might spoil it)
MAKE THEM MEET ADMINS!
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