[Fanfiction] Treachery |
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Hello and welcome to yet another one of my fanfictions, but this one will actually be based in the world of Transformice, mainly the traitor rooms. I won't reveal ANY of the plot to you, as I want this to be a surprise to y'all. v Prologue below. v Prologue Harvey gazed around the room and looked at the mice, trying to guess who was the traitor. Suddenly someone was bitten right next to him, he ran, not looking back, the wind blew into his ears and he jumped onto a grass platform, away from all the other mice. "IT'S HARVEY!" someone yelled just before they were scooped up by a few bubbles, she sat in them with a disappointed look on her face as she rose up into the grey sky above. Characters: Reference: ![]() Name: Harvey. Abilities: Fast, smart and cunning. Personality: He's not the best of people to be friends with, but will be close to anyone whom he trusts. He doesn't die for people, he can be quite selfish, but he will protect people as long as it doesn't cost him his life. Sex: Male. Favourite colour: Peach. Favourite type of music: Jazz. Reference: ![]() Name: Ginny. Abilities: Sweet, great at dancing and understanding people. Personality: Childish and crazy, Ginny enjoys eating strawberries and loves nothing more than to dance around like a maniac. She doesn't care what people think of her, but loves conversations and hugs. Sex: Female. Favourite colour: Pink. Favourite music: Rock. Well, if you'd like to enter in your own character, please fill out this form. I am not promising that I will allow your character, as I only want so many. I'd love to see some interesting and thought out characters, please. Character form: Reference: Name: Abilities: Personality: Sex: Favourite colour: Favourite music: Dernière modification le 1419986280000 |
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Reference: ![]() Name: Berry Abilities: Creativity and a wild imagination Personality: Perky, lacks common sense, most of the time can take responsibility for her own actions, very hyper. Sex: Female Favourite colour: Bright red (same color as her hair) Favourite music: R&B, Pop, some dubstep. |
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Ahh I wanna join! I mean im really interested! Reference: ![]() Name: Miazurma Abilities: She can solve any math problem like a calculator, is good at making arts especially environmental paintings and she has the specialty of being lucky and was known to levitate things by focus. She is also excellent in using the sword. Her home land is Japan so she knows how to speak Japanese. Personality: Peaceful, matured, has common sense, she speaks in a really soft and silent voice. She never became a traitor once in her life. Sex: Female Favourite colour: Black, white and red. Favourite music: Love songs and other music that dosent contain shouting, anger or rock stars. |
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hey this can be nice Reference: ![]() Name: Sirinna Abilities: skilled at shaman flying and is very fast (most of her assets lie on the shaman side, full mech/wind) Personality: speaks openly and casually to anybody, sounds kind of rude and will tell you the truth in your face. rarely regrets her actions and can get annoyed easily. might act villainous at times. oh and i forgot. she's an asshole to most people, for reasons or randomly. Sex: female Favourite colour: dark blue Favourite music: (heavy) metal/screamo and trance Dernière modification le 1420216020000 |
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Okay, I think I have enough characters now. You've all been accepted. I might post the first chapter today. ^^ |
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Chapter 1 Harvey peered at each and every mouse, soon people were being sucked up by bubbles all over the room. "GET HARVEY!" someone shouted behind him, he ran, knowing what was coming, no-one was going to dare get him. He chanced a glance,turning his head he saw a white mouse with a beret, her cravat flapping beside her as she ran towards him. Harvey leaped onto another grass platform, the mouse behind him did the same, her bright red hair flailing behind her. "You can run, but you can't hide!" she shouted. "Yeah, I can run for a while, darling," he said back to her angrily. "It ain't me, alright? I'm no traitor!" Suddenly, a grey mouse with long hair, a rose, a green headband and a heart dangling off her tail jumped over Harvey and landed swiftly behind him. "He isn't the traitor, alright?" she yelled over the voices of the other mice, who all protested angrily, insisting that it was Harvey. "While you where having a party chasing him, two of your so called innocent mice were bitten!" Harvey's savior pointed behind the white mouse who suddenly squeaked in pain as her leg was bitten by the traitor behind her. Harvey crossed his arms and laughed at the foolish white mouse as she sat in her bubble, apparently unaware that she was being humiliated. The mouse in front of Harvey slapped him and told him to run, but too late, he was bitten by the traitor. "You needn't have saved me, you know, I was doing just fine!" hissed Harvey as he re-spawned in the next map. "I wouldn't call being chased doing fine!" she snapped back as she ran away from him. Harvey rolled his eyes and turned on his heel and walked glumly away from the other mice. He climbed up a grass block and sat on the top. A violently pink mouse was staring at him, Harvey recognized her face. "Accuse me of being a traitor again, I dare you." "I won't, I made a mistake. Ginny, by the way." "I've got a headache." "I'm not surprised with all that yelling you were doing! You made Bird quite upset." "No, your outfit... what he hell are you wearing? It's making my eyes sting." "Well, I like it. You don't seem like much of a nice person after all!" and she turned and left him. Harvey noticed that no-one was coming after him, perhaps Bird or Ginny had warned them that he wasn't a nice mouse the mix with... but traitors never cared about that, come to think of it, Harvey didn't remember anyone bursting into bubbles after they had been bitten. This was quite suspicious, he wondered if he should go check it out. A groan left his mouth as he plodded of the block and landed on the ground below. A strange sight met his eyes, a mob of mice were surrounding Bird and Ginny, all with hungry looks on their faces. Harvey was quite startled to see this odd behavior. The white mouse, unaware to Harvey, was waiting on a large ledge, she pounced, making Harvey jump, and landed on a squat mouse with large red eyes and bucked teeth. The white mouse clawed at the squat one's eyes. "YOU IDIOT!" screamed Harvey, running at the mob. -- *Note, the white mouse is supposed to be EJ's, sorry if any of you got a bit confused. Dernière modification le 1420229940000 |
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Yesyes I knew who the white mouse was, I love this fanfic though I need to do fanart sometime |
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ejaffa a dit : Thank you. [size=7]I would love some fanart. ;w; |
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Chapter 2 He, dropping all suspicion, bounded over mice to get to the foolish red-haired white mouse, who now had her cravat wrapped around the mouse's mouth. "Give that here," he snapped, gripping the cravat, which tore in his hand. "You're fixing that," said the mouse. "Fine, but are you completely idiotic? Seriously, do you not know what this means?" "No, but I want to help them," she said, pointing at the cowering mice that were Ginny and Bird. "Well, fine, we will, but don't take matters in your own hands!" said Harvey, as another white mouse was pulled into the circle of the angry mob. Harvey turned and saw that she had long black hair and a bunny on her headband. She swore loudly and looked to see Harvey staring at her. "Go on, take a bite," she said viciously. It took a moment for Harvey to realize what she meant. "I'm not brainwashed like these weirdos," he replied, jerking his paw at the mob. "Don't even know why I'm trying to help here, probably end up dead anyway." Harvey punched a few zombie-like mice and aimed a kick at another, which dodged it. "Oi, watch it!" she said softly, but in an annoyed tone. Yet another white mouse jumped and turned in midair, landing on a small black mouse with glowing, red eyes. She grabbed her large knife and stabbed it straight through a mouse's chest. Blood pored everywhere, only Harvey and the two white mice really noticed, the others were either cowering, or in the mob. "Well, that worked, do it with the others," said the first white mouse. "Oh, and, um, Berry, by the way." She stuck out her arm, wantin Harvey and the other white mouse to shake it. "Oh, hi, I'm Miazurma," said the other. "No, time for introductions!" said Harvey wafting his hand. "But we might as well learn everyone's name." "Well if it bloody helps, I'm Harvey, that's Bird, Ginny, and... er," Harvey shook his head. "Don't know her name... wait... you're all girls?" "Yeah, so?" said Miazurma. Harvey shook his head again. Miazurma shrugged and stabbed a few more mice, blood all over the circle now. Harvey wretched and nearly vomited, but held it in. Berry stared at him, almost sniggering, he looked at her in disgust, but ignored her just the same. Nearly all the mice had been killed, but surely they would re-spawn in the next map, Harvey said this to Miazurma, who simply said that they would only re-spawn if they turned into bubbles. "Like she's done it before," thought Harvey. Ginny, Bird and the other mouse were finally saved, thanks to Miazurma's nifty sword work. They thanked her, or at least, two of them did. Miazurma stared at the ungrateful mouse. "And you are?" she said, again in her soft voice. "Sirinna," she said, as if she didn't want to be there. Harvey rolled his eyes and ran to the other side of the room, away from everyone else. He sighed, sat and was sick all over the floor. He noticed that the cravat was still clutched tightly in his shaking hand, he got up, walked a few paces, making sure not to step in his own vomit and sat back down again, pulling a small threading needle out of his bow tie, along with a roll of thread from behind his ear. "Lucky I always keep spare thread in case my bow tie gets torn." Shakily, he poked the thread he had pulled off from the roll into the hole in the needle and stitched the cravat back up. "Good as new." -- Yes, mice are physically incapable to vomit, but I wrote it purely for the entertainment of me and the reader. |
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Yess I wouldn't be myself without my cravat I'm waiting for a really epic moment to draw fanart for |
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Wait a min. "Harvey watched and nearly vommited" LOL!!! |
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Updates every Wednesday and Saturday! Nope, this didn't work. Dernière modification le 1429446900000 |
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Can i add someone? If so.. Reference: ![]() Name: Cloud Abilities: Run REALLY fast, is epic (in her perspective) and is SUPER good at trolling. Personality: Well, shes kind and will do anything for her friends, but she will lie if she is a traitor and say someone else (who was near when she killed them) did it. Like me :D Sex: Um, excuse me, but i am a FEMALE! Favourite colour: Anything with green. Favourite music: DuBsTeP. And Pop. |
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angelfromaj a dit : smalltoes a dit : Sorry, but I stand by what I said before. I'm not having loads of characters to look after, as it gets difficult. |
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I'm so sorry guys! I had a lot of homework to do today and also I'm going to be ordering pizza, I'm so sorry if I don't post a new chapter today! :c I really wish I could, but today's quite busy what with homework and stuff. If I can, I'll post a chapter tomorrow to make up for the lack of chapters today. Again, I'm sorry. |
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I'm too good at not doing things on time, well, have a chapter. Chapter 3 "Hey, Harv-" said a pink mouse in the shape of Ginny, who had stepped in the puddle of vomit that still lay on the floor. Making a large squelching sound, she lifted one foot and stepped back. Her face looked as though she might be sick too, Harvey couldn't help but snigger meanly at both the look on Ginny's face and her sick covered feet. "You weren't... that's never..." she couldn't exactly get the words out in her disbelief. "I WAS, and that IS," sniggered Harvey as Ginny's eyes widened an her hands reached up to her mouth. "I NEED to wash this off!" she squealed as she hopped onto one foot and then the other, which just seemed to make the situation worse as the vomit flew in all directions. Just at that moment there was a loud scream from behind Ginny, Harvey, who didn't care much for Ginny's problem, ran past her and rushed to the sound of the crying mouse. The sheer strangeness of the scene that met Harvey's eyes made his jaw drop. Sirinna, who actually had a mean smile on her face, had Miazurma's sword in her hand. Miazurma had a look of anger on her face and glared at Sirinna, Miazurma's eyes focused on her sword and, Harvey had no idea whether he was imagining it or not, the sword jerked in midair Miazurma stretched out her hand and grabbed the sword, waving it menacingly in Sirinna's grumpy face. "Was just a joke," she said to Miazurma, her eyes thin slits. "Don't care," Miazurma smiled as she trotted off to Harvey. "And you were doing what exactly?" "I-" started Harvey when Ginny appeared behind him, she breathed softly, which caused the fur on his neck prick up. Harvey was struck with a strange feeling, one that made him uneasy. Slowly, he turned his head and there was a smiling Ginny. "I was just stitching up..." he said slowly, not taking his eyes off Ginny. "Uh, why are you looking at me like that?" Ginny said, in a slightly hoarse voice. Harvey squinted his eyes, wondering whether she was creating some kind of sick joke or not. Then, Berry, who seemed to be rather pleased with herself, snatched her cravat from Harvey's limp hand. "Harvey, what's wrong?" said Bird, also coming closer to the group. Harvey shook his head, as though being snapped out of a trance. "Nothing," he said in a high pitched voice. Turning his head away from Ginny, he saw the group, except for Sirinna, looking at him in a worried manner. Ginny crept from behind him and addressed the rest of the group. "We should move to a different room," she stated, again with her slightly hoarse voice. "Like a vanilla or something. These traitor rooms don't seem to be very safe," nobody but Harvey seemed to notice her slight change of voice. Dernière modification le 1429448220000 |
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I finished the chapter above, so read that before this one. I am so sorry for the unexpected hiatus, honestly, I forgot about this. The updates every Wednesday and Thursday thing seems to have gone down the drain. -- Chapter 4 As the group moved to an almost full vanilla room, Ginny smiled menacingly behind everyone’s back. At this point, Harvey was very suspicious as to what was going on. “Are you sure anywhere is safe at the moment?” he asked calmly. “Come on, Harvey,” said Sirinna as though he was stupid. “It’s only the traitor rooms, look everyone’s normal!” “Yeah, everyone,” he whispered to himself as Ginny wandered away from the group. “I’m just gonna say hi to everyone!” she said in a falsely cheerful voice. Harvey, who wouldn’t let her do something without him noticing, followed her. The group stared. “What’s gotten into him lately?” said Bird. “Dunno, who cares? Let’s just get some cheese,” said Berry eagerly. Ginny, with Harvey close on her tail, introduced herself to some mice. Sadly, the mice didn’t know Ginny was acting strangely. Harvey hid behind a bush, not wanting to let slip his position to Ginny, as he may not have been able to discover what was going on. The mice asked Ginny if she’d like to help them collect cheese, to which she said yes. Harvey watched from a distance as the three mice pattered away. “I have to follow them,” Harvey thought. Climbing out from behind the bush, he stepped closer to the trio, making as little noise as possible. Suddenly, a shaman flew in front of Harvey, causing him to halt. “Why are you stalking these fine mice?” the shaman said in an annoyingly posh voice. “I! We- uh,” Harvey’s voice trailed away as though someone had snatched his voice box. “You what? This room isn’t for stalkers like you!” the shaman’s voice was grating on Harvey’s nerves. “I was not stalking!” he shouted, some of his anger from the way he felt etched into his voice. “What would you know about it you posh prat?” The whole room stared at the bizarre situation, including Harvey’s group. He groaned and tried to push the shaman out of the way, which was a daft move as the shaman formed a cannon that hurled his body to the end of the map. “How dare you!” barked the shaman. “What gave you the right? Why would you?” “Get out of my way! That pink mouse has been infected and is going to endanger all of us if you don’t get the hell out of my bloody way!” yelled Harvey, almost forcing his lungs out of his chest. “What is this nonsense you speak of? What infection is this?” The group pushed their way through the crowd to stare and hiss at Harvey. “What are you talking about? Ginny’s fine!” said Berry. The group nodded, but Miazurma stretched her neck to get a clear view of Ginny and her two new friends, all of which had a malicious grin on their face. Miazurma tried to speak, but only a soft croak of disbelief escaped from her mouth. Harvey got up and preformed a rude hand gesture that was aimed at the shaman. The group stared at Ginny. “Y-you… this isn’t true is it?” said Bird. “It most certainly is,” cackled Ginny. “Prepare to be infected!” |