Welcome to the new topic! I'll start writing at random times :)

[CHAPTER 1- SMALL BEGINNINGS]





It was just a normal day at a country without any problems, It was perfect peace. No wars, Hunger, Anger, Pain, Sickness. Everything was just perfect.. Just perfect. No one had fights. It was eternal peace. But nowadays, Things are not that good, People had arguments over little things. Selfishness. And cruelty was common. This is the story of Keira, A young mouse who has excellent Leadership, and was given permission by the government to run a Project called the Cheese Project to give cheese in other places were mice lived. But shortage on cheese. Her first destination was in Transformice Island, A place where many Humans play as virtual mice. One where violence and selfishness were common. She starts by giving hope and cheese to those who are being bullied, She plans to give advice and hope to Vanilla maps, Survivor maps, Defilante, Module, Racing, And Bootcamp She starts by making a map in a small international utility room. There, she will make a little office. But before that, she must ride the airplane and make it there safely. But will she...?

[Chapter 1- Small Beginnings- Part 2]

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It was just a normal Friday, Keira was having a dream. "The airplane... Crashed?" She said, "No! Help me!" She said in a worried state. "Wake up Keira, Time for your planeride!" Someone said in her sleep, It was familiar, But never heard before.., She woke up, She cleaned her eyes a little bit. She took her Alarm Clock, Her eyes widened. "OH GOD, IM LATE!" She said in a surprised matter. She opened her closet and took her Baggage which she handled last night. She took her outfit which she also handled. She ran outside of her den and went to the Airport.

Next Part.. (If you'd like to read spoilers)

mvehpower a dit :

[CHAPTER 1- SMALL BEGINNINGS]


It was just a normal day at a country without any problems, It was perfect peace. No wars, Hunger, Anger, Pain, Sickness. Everything was just perfect.. Just perfect. No one had fights. It was eternal peace. But nowadays, Things are not that good, People had arguments over little things. Selfishness. And cruelty was common. This is the story of Keira, A young mouse who has excellent Leadership, and was given permission by the government to run a Project called the Cheese Project to give cheese in other places were mice lived. But shortage on cheese. Her first destination was in Transformice Island, A place where many Humans play as virtual mice. One where violence and selfishness were common. She starts by giving hope and cheese to those who are being bullied, She plans to give advice and hope to Vanilla maps, Survivor maps, Defilante, Module, Racing, And Bootcamp She starts by making a map in a small international utility room. There, she will make a little office. But before that, she must ride the airplane and make it there safely. But will she...?

This is really like Transformice nowdays.

Wait.

Let me rephrase a rule about this.


Im not offending your fanfiction but, This is still your first book and..yeah.
I think multiple threads are allowed if yeah...theres more than one fanfic series book.

Anyway happy writing! I cant wait to see more chapters!

Ohz, but can you delete one topic? im just a newbie here :3

[CHAPTER 1 PART 3 SMALL BEGINNINGS]

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Keira frantically ran towards an aisle, shes usually this clumsy when shes panicking, and before she knew it she bumped onto a strange one-eyed mouse. "O,O'" Keira said on her chat. "Hey, watch it!" He said in annoyance. "Okay, Okay im sorry..." She said. "Gosh, what a rude guy, Probably a tourist from somewhere..." She said to herself. She showed her ticket to a lady and the lady let her in, She saw the airplane. It was pretty huge. Anyways, she got in. She took out her book of flights and started to read...

NEXT THIS CHAPTER.

may I join in :3

Sure, Gonna make a tweak in the story.