One day in Transformice, some Shaman weren't doing their job correctly. They didn't let the other mice get to the cheese. It might not seem like a big problem, but now, those Shamen are getting worse and worse. They've become evil now. There are a group of evil Shamans and a group of good Shamans. The good shaman leader believes that the other shamans should stop. Other shamans agree with it, and join the group. Now they're trying to save Transformice...

(THIS IS MY FIRST FANFICTION.) I'm making this huge so you can notice it. Please remember this.
You are free to make your own character for the story.

Characters (Good):

Name: Rayvac
Personality: Intelligent, brave.
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Role: Leader of the Good Shaman. (He's a shaman)

Name: Nick
Personality: Helpful, Cowardly
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Role: 2nd in command (Currently Shaman)

Name: Violet
Personality: Sweet, helpful, Brave, a good leader.
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Role: Innocent (Currently Shaman)

Name: Mary
Personality: Intelligent
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Role: Medic mouse

Characters (Evil):
Name: Omega
Personality: ...Evil I guess? lol
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Role: Leader of the Bad Shaman (Shaman)

Name: Jak
Personality: Sneaky
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Role: Hunter mouse

Story

Chapter 1
"Waah!" A mouse named Violet was running away from cannons. She went into the nearest mouse hole possible. "Wait for me!" Her friend, Nick, was following her, panting. She went into the mouse hole. They stayed inside to catch their breath. Violet caught sight of something shiny, that seemed to be floating. It was a crown. "Ooh, shiny!" Violet couldn't resist shiny things. "Wait! It could be a trap! It's even floating, how is that possible?!" Nick yelled to her. Violet scurried over to the crown. She was about to grab the crown when she tripped over something. "What are you two doing here?" A voice called. "We come in peace!" Said Nick, "We're just running away from another Shaman shooting cannons at us... We went here since this was the nearest mouse hole." The mouse hole got lighter. Nick and Violet spotted a shaman mouse! "ACK! DON'T HURT US!!" Violet cringed. She scurried over to Nick. The shaman chuckled. "Don't worry, I'm not going to hurt you. I know what's going on. Some shaman have become... Evil. They're abusing their powers." "Oh," said Violet. "Why don't you join me? There's plenty of room," said the shaman. "Sure," said Violet and Nick. Just then, a crowd of mice appeared, and cheered. Violet covered her ears. "I thought you said... There was room!" She told the shaman. "Yes, there's plenty of room. Speaking of rooms, there ARE rooms in this mousehole. Plenty of 'em. Pick one!" The shaman smiled. Violet and Nick nodded and went to find a room for both of them.

Chapter 2
The rooms in the mouse hole were very small to have the most room possible. "Huh, guess we'll need different rooms..." Nick told Violet. They chose two rooms that were right next to each other. They used a sharp stick to carve their names on top of their room entrances. Then they went back down to the shaman. "Oh, hi," the shaman said. "Uh... Hi," replied Violet. "We have our rooms. Also, I never got your name. I'm Violet," she pointed to Nick, "And this is Nick." "I'm Rayvac," said the shaman. "Anyway, Nick. I need you to be my second in command. You seem brave," Rayvac said. "Me? Wha?" Nick was confused... "I need you to go outside to get some cheese for all of us. We have a large stock of cheese, but it has to get bigger since more and more mice are moving in," Rayvac explained to Nick. "But he could get hurt!" Violet replied. "That's why he has to be ready for what will happen," Rayvac told her. Nick shook his head and looked outside the mouse hole. He noticed a mouse that seemed to be patroling, looking for someone. "Keep looking for them!" A voice called. Nick looked up and saw a black and orange mouse, balancing on a tree branch very well. "That must be the Shaman," Nick thought to himself. Worried, he scurried to the cheese. As he picked it up, the patrolling mouse said, "I sense another mouse here. It's not just the two of us." The mouse swirled around and faced Nick, who was running to the mouse hole as fast as he could to the mouse hole. The patrolling mouse sprinted over to Nick and tackled him, making Nick drop the cheese. Nick looked at the mouse's face, but he had a mask on. "Hey," said the mouse. "I'm Jak, and you DO NOT take our cheese. Take it back. NOW. Or else!" Nick stared at the mouse. He was frozen with fear. He was not far from the mousehole, he could've made it! "I'm saying this again. Get the cheese and take it back," Jak said. Nick scurried out of Jak's reach and went to the cheese. He walked closer to Jak... But he sprinted away to the mousehole! Jak sped to him, now holding his dagger in his mouth. Rayvac appeared in front of Jak and blocked him. He used his powers to lock him in a cage. "Go go go!" Rayvac yelled to Nick. Nick raced back into the mouse hole, panting. Violet walked over to him. "...What happened?!" Violet asked.

Chapter 3
"...I don't want to talk about it," Nick told Violet, dropping his cheese. A medic mouse ran up to Nick. "Are you okay?" the mouse asked Nick. "Yeah, I'm... Ouch..." Nick replied. He looked at a scratch on his arm. "I'll fix you right up. Follow me," said the medic mouse. "I'm Mary, and i'll heal you." Nick and Mary went to a room that was filled with all sorts of medicines and bandages. Mary took Nick's arm and wrapped a stretchy leaf around it for a bandage. "There, now don't take that off until it's healed. And don't shake that arm too much," Mary explained to Nick. Nick went back to Violet after that. "I'm going to take you to my room. Heal there," Violet told Nick. She held his and and brung Nick to her room. Nick curled up in a ball in the middle of the room. "Just stay right there and don't move your arm too much. Nick looked down. Violet sat next to him. "Hey, don't feel sad," she told Nick. While that happened, Rayvac didn't let any other mouse outside until Omega and Jak left. Mice decided to barricade the mouse hole entrance with rocks. Mice went back to their rooms, enough has happened that day. It was getting late. Rayvac went back to his room, too. He needed to rest himself and his powers. During the night, Omega and Jak had left, since they noticed no mouse was coming out after what happened. They went back to their own mousehole. For the rest of the day, Omega acted like a snub.

Chapter 4 (Sorry for the really long wait)
Everyone woke up the next morning. Rayvac went to go outside, but the exit was blocked by a huge boulder! The other mice panicked. "What happened?" Violet asked. "I think they blocked out the exit to steal all the cheese, to make us starve!" Rayvac replied. "Can't you use your shaman powers to cannon the boulder out of the way?" Nick told. "No, I'm not taking the risk. It could just bounce off and hit me or someone else in the face. I'm their leader, their only leader. If I get injured, who will lead them?" Nick and Violet exchanged glances. "Well, you two seem worthy to become shamans," Rayvac told them. With a snap of the finger, Violet and Nick became shamans! "Now, if you abuse this power, I will have to take it away from you, got it?" They nodded. All of the shamans used cannons to break down the barrier and get outside. Nick looked around, and he gasped.

Chapter 5
All of the cheese was gone. The area was empty. Jak and the Shaman were gone. "They're hoarding all of the cheese!" Nick called to Rayvac. They scurried outside. Violet looked up at the night sky. "I have an idea," She said. Violet threw down her umbrella so suddenly Nick jumped, and both of them watched it fly away. "We can't make too much sound." Violet explained. "What are you even doing?" Nick asked. Violet shushed Nick and concentrated on locating the other Shaman's hole. "I sense it... Over here." Violet pointed to a dark forest. "Are you sure that'll be safe?" Nick trembled. Rayvac shrugged. "Only way we can get our cheese back." The three mice crawled to the dark forest.

Chapter 6
Nick's body shook as him, Violet, and Rayvac trudged deeper and deeper into the forest. Nick tried to get out of getting lost in the forest. "H-hey, maybe we don't have to go get the cheese... W-we could j-just eat sticks!" Nick plucked a stick from a nearby tree and took a bite out of it, only to spit it out right after. "Nick, come on. You're such a scaredy mouse." Violet told Nick. Rayvac stayed quiet. Soon the straight path suddenly stopped and arched downward into a slope! Violet, Nick, and Rayvac tumbled down.

Nick spotted a rather shady mouse hole. It seemed like it belonged to Omega. Violet noticed it too. "Come on. Let's go over there." Nick didn't follow. "Nick, aren't you going to come?" "Eh... I'll just g-guard." "Alrighty then." Violet and Rayvac scurried to the entrance of the mousehole, which, strangely, had no protection whatsoever. Violet quietly popped her head inside, checking if the nation of evil shamans was awake or not. Surprisingly, all of the mice inside were asleep, including Omega, who was sleeping in a rather awkward way on his throne. "Look!" Rayvac whispered to Violet, pointing at a nearby stash of cheese. Violet tip-toed over to the pile and gathered the cheese and passed it to Rayvac. Rayvac created a large bag to hold all of the cheese. They ran to Nick and handed the bag to Nick, who collapsed when he held the bag. "Okay, let's go." Violet tried to escape, but the slope downwards was too high up.

Chapter 7
"Well now what are we supposed to do?" Violet said as she slid down the hill. "We don't have the flight skill, so we can't just fly up!" Suddenly, a familiar mask peeked through the entrance of the mousehole. "Hey!" Jak called out to the three mice struggling to cilmb up the steep slope. Nick looked back, and then started to panic as the masked mouse charged towards him. "We need to do something quick! Rayvac, do you have the flight skill?!" Rayvac answered Nick's question by quickly sprouting wings. "Yes. I do. And we need to get the heck out of here!" The shaman picked up Nick and Violet as Jak crashed into the side of the hill. Rayvac flew back to their mousehole. Violet took the bag from Nick and took it inside, then dropped it on the ground with a loud thud. Nick was shivering in fear. "What if the mouse is hunting us down now?? I bet he already alerted the entire Evil Shaman tribe to come and take the cheese and a couple of lives." Violet looked over at him. "Hey! Don't worry, if an entire mouse army comes for us, I'm sure 3 shamans will be able to take them on!" Nick just sat there. Violet has never been this confident before. "Well, it's getting late now. You should probably go to sleep," Rayvac told the mice. "B-but what if they attack us in our sleep?!" Nick's voice trembled. "Oh, don't worry. I'll stay up to protect us," the shaman replied. Then the two young mice headed to their rooms to sleep.

This looks like it'll be an interesting story

Thanks! I wanted to make it seem the most interesting I could!

Aye!
This story might last longer..
Plus, Its very interesting!

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