| ~Fan-Fic~ The Darkness and the Light *Book 1 - Darkness Comes* |
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Hi!! Shy here and I am really happy to do this! So as you can see, i'm doing a 'book' so i need some of you here in my story!! (EDIT:i didn't like how i put gore and nasty stuff so i put the warning different :P) Before you enter this series and read it, I will give you warning: WARNING: This following book will have some bad language and creepy stuff in it and is rated PG 13! You have been warned! If you want to be in this book, here is what you need to do! Ref: Name(full name, please): Age: Gender: Personality: Evil or Good?: Powers: Extras(if has extras): And for anyone who wants to be BG characters: Ref: Name(full name, please): Age: Gender: Personality: Extras(if has extras): There will be five slots (outside of my characters)! So, hurry if you want to be in it!! (and there will be Back Ground characters! But only 10 slots! okie, now my characters: Main Characters: Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Daisy Silverlock II Age: 13 Gender: female Personality: Very girly, but can be very brave when it comes to saving people and showing that she isn't fully girly. She has a sense of humor and can easily laugh. Evil or Good?: Good Powers: she will use what she calls her 'Sweet-talk-and-smiles' Extras(if has extras):She will use her 'sweet-talk-and-smiles' to get information out of people and can sometimes use it on the Evil(depending how weak or strong they are.) Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Maddison Scarlett Silverlock Age: 16 Gender: female Personality: She is a tomboy. She can't stand girly stuff. But she can stand Daisy. She is a geek for games and a nerd for comic books and manga. She is very smart and always gets A+. When you say she needs to be early or just on a certain time, she will always will be early. Evil or Good?: Good Powers: sees very odd things such as ghosts and things a mouse can't see. Extras(if has extras): She is Daisy's oldest sister. And she is nearsighted but she tells people that she needs them or else she'll go blind because she doesn't want annoying questions like 'why can't you take your glasses off since you're nearsighted?' Only Daisy, her mom, and Maddison's friends know the secret. Back ground characters: Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Anya Angel Silverlock Age: 27 Gender: female Personality: She is very protective to her daughters and will fight to save them, even if it costs her her life. She is supportive and doesn't like seeing anyone sad. Extras(if has extras): her husband died in a cat attack. When I see a character, I'll put it right here below this! List of OCs: main characters: Marissa Carmelite Walker - Sunsetsparkz Nook Alexis Ryden - Imaewsome Darky Rekaso - Darkdayboom Alice Hearth - Xprincessj Sita Elega - Darkdayboom bg characters: The place was dark; I couldn't even see where I was. All I saw was a mouse... a mouse that was black with deep, dark red eyes, almost black as its fur. I wanted to run and call for help, but I was stuck there like glue. "You're stuck here, little mouse," it said walking towards me. "You're going to stay with me... forever... AHAHAHA!" I woke up with a start. I was panting, wide-eyed, and shaking like crazy. I looked around my room. Ah, good, no one here. I sighed with relief. It was just a nightmare, nothing more. But it felt too real for a dream, as if... No, it was a dream, I told myself. Nothing of it was real. "Oh Maddy~!" a cheerful voice called. It was Daisy. I groaned. My own too goody young sister. I know she was just thirteen and still really young, but still, she was annoying. She acts like a five-year-old, all princess-y with her little crown and her little bow on her tail, ugh, too girly for me. "What is it, Daisy?" I asked. "Well, Mama wanted me to tell you that you're going to be late for high school in thirty minutes." she smiled innocently. "WHAT?" I screamed. I looked at my alarm clock, which didn't go off. “I’M GOING TO BE LATE!!!” I got my blue bandana, my glasses, and tied my hair into a ponytail. I grabbed my purple backpack and sketch-book and ran down stairs. I passed my mom, whom was making her famous cheese pancakes. “Honey, aren’t you going to eat brea—” she began. “Not now, Mom, I’m going to be late!” I interrupted her and went out the door, running as fast as I can. “Hope my friends won’t ask about this,” I muttered to myself. *NOTE* I did some of this on Microsoft Word Starter, so that's why the some of it looks funny. :P .:Chapter 2:. Class Trouble After blocks of running, I finally got to my school, Shaman Sword High School, the home of the shamans, or so they say. The school is not like an ordinary school like all around the world, no, it teaches the students about being a shaman and helping the mice with cheese and such. It’s boring, really, just learning boring stuff. That’s probably why the students are snob-nosed. They care for lots of experiences, not the mice. But in the school they think they know all the shaman stuff to where they don’t do their studies. Since they don’t they get their lazy butts to work, they get Fs. But when they have tests, they come running to me or my friends, since we listen to the teachers. But we don’t give them the answers. One of my friends and the oldest friend I have, Nick Rin Grey, does that. He comes running to me. Always asking, ‘Can you help me with this test?’ and yet I help him with the tests. I sometimes feel guilty, but he’s my friend, friends help friends, right? But he’s always been a trouble maker since day one. He never cares for rules, and because of that, he always getting in trouble. I don’t follow his lead, I try to warn him, but he refuses. I walked in the school, looking for my locker. The welcome wasn’t very welcoming, as usual. The students looked at my silently, hostile or puzzled because I’m always not late. I looked around, trying to find my locker again. Ah, there it is locker 13. I opened it up and put my sketchbook in it. As I closed my locker, a cheerful voice greeted me. “Hi, Maddison,” It was Nook, one of my friends. I turned and greeted her back. “Hi, Nook,” I said, “How’s it going?” “The usual,” Nook said. “Going on the internet and playing games.” “Oh,” I muttered. She twitched her left ear. “Why are you later than early? I thought you were an early bird.” she asked. “Well, my alarm clock didn’t go off and when I woke up, my sister told me I was going to be late.” I told her. I didn’t want to tell about the nightmare I had, it still scared me even there. “Oh,” She looked surprised. I looked behind her to see if the others were with her. They weren’t, I wonder why. “Where are the others?” I asked her. “They’re at Nick’s locker.” She told me. “Come on, let’s go and see them.” “Okay.” We were waling passed a lot of kids who were giving funny looks. We didn’t notice and walked on. When we got to Nick’s locker, we saw Darky, Marissa, and Nick talking. It was a nice thing to see Mari talking to people, she’s always alone. “Hey, guys,” I said. “Oh, hello Maddy,” Nick said. “So how are you?” Mari asked. “Fine,” I told her. “Just fine.” Darky looked up at the clock above Nick’s locker. “We all should be going to our classes. School’s starts in four minutes.” “Well, bye guys,” Mari said. We all went to our classes. Mari and I were in the same class, Shaman teachings. Well this is going to be fun, I thought as we walked into the classroom, just fun. We all were shamans, getting to know how to use planks properly. We know how to use planks, or course, but our teacher, Mr. Carnell, still wanted to teach how to use planks properly. “Now, can anyone tell me how to turn the plank?” he asked. “Ugh,” I mumbled, “how much do we need to know about planks?” “Quiet you,” a student snapped at me. “Keep your mouth shut, I’m trying to hear!” “I was only mumbling.” I told her. “How in the world can you not hear?” “What in the name of cheese is going on, girls?” Mr. Carnell demanded. “Well, Ms. Silver-snail,” the girl began. “Silverlock,” I snapped. “Whatever,” she said, “Is being rude about your class.” “What?” I growled. “I did no such thing!” “You said when we will get out of this class,” she told him. “Liar!” I snapped. “That’s enough,” Mr. Carnell said. But I didn’t stop. “You have no right to lie about what I said!” I sneered. “Shut up you idiot,” she said. “You shut up.” “That’s enough!” The teacher yelled now, “Detention, both of you!” Great, now I’m going to have detention and my mom will ground me probably for a month. I thought. .:Chapter 3:. That Stalker Two days later . . . I was in a place that was white as snow. The sky was white, the ground was white. I felt the coldness in the air. I shivered. Where am I? I thought as I looked around. “Welcome,” said a deep voice. I turned to look who it was. It was a man with a black helmet, brown hair, and ginger and brown fur. I never saw him before. “W-who are you?” I asked. “I am the King of Pureness and Dreams,” he told me. “I walk in dreams of those who have lost the light.” “The light?” I twitched my ear same as a mouse does when it’s not sure or doubt something. “I’m not blind!” He smiled. “The light is balance, my friend. You have lost the knowing of good and evil.” I stared at him. Twitched my ear a second time, and then asked, “What do you want from me?” “I can show you the light. I am the King of Pureness. I help those who have lost the light and now found it because of me.” “Okay, but how can you walk in people’s dreams? Or show them the light?” The king’s smiled wavered. “You see, my friend, this helmet,” he took off his helmet and showed it to me, even though I saw it on his face. But it was glowing with a deep blood red aura I had never seen before. “Is the reason why I can walk in dreams, but it cannot show me the light. For I have known the light ever since I was a child.” he said as he put back on his helmet. Great, I thought to myself. A stalker, whoopee! Now he can see all the most private things about me! “Okay, and who are these, oh, lost-and-found mice?” I asked him. “You will soon find out.” the king told me. “And one more thing,” I told him. “Yes?” “How are you in my dream anyway?” “Like I said the helmet gives me the power to go in dreams.” “No, I meant do you have another soul of something? You have to be dreaming of one mouse so the other mice won’t know there are other mice having the same dream.” “Well,” he paused, looking unsure about an answer. Nice, this dude doesn’t know what to say. Then the sky was shattering. “What’s happening?” I asked rather nervously. “You’re waking up,” the king said. I panicked. “You mean I WAS SLEEPING IN CLASS?!” I shrieked. “I do not know.” He said calmly. “But when it is nighttime, meet me near the hills next to your house.” “But-” “Nick, wake your stupid rat butt up!” a familiar voice hissed. I woke up and adjusted my eyes, it was Maddison scolding at me as usual. “W-wha?” I groaned. “How long was I asleep?” “Half of the class time you idiot!” she said. “What?” I immediately raised my head up. When I looked in front of me I saw the shaman skills teacher, Mrs. Boring. I know right? A hilarious name for a teacher, but trust me, don’t laugh at her. She’ll give you detention. “Um,” I tried for a smile. “Hi?” “Detention for you mister,” she said. “Oh,” I muttered. While in detention I was thinking about the guy. What did he call himself? King of Neatness and meat? King of Pureness and Dreams? I’m going for number two. I grunted and remembered what he told me. Meet me near the hills next to your house. Why the hell he wanted me there? I dunno. Oh wait I remember, to show me the others and his place. Well I’m going there. And nothing will stop me. .:Chapter 4:. Secrets shall be revealed I was in my room, waiting for a right time to get out of the house and go to the borders to another server. The hills weren’t in our side, it was on a server that I never knew side. I decided I would get out by jumping the window next to my bed. “Nick,” called a female voice. “It’s time for dinner.” it was my “adopted” mom. Great. I never got along with her, no matter how much she loved me, I never loved her back. That lady is a lady that will squeeze you to death and will act really kind to you. That may seem great, outside the squeezing part, but I never liked that type of kindness. “All right, all right, I’ll be there.” I called back. “Just give me a couple of minutes.” “Okay, darling,” I heard her walking back to the kitchen. Finally, a time to escape! I quickly opened up my window, and ran away. It was time to see the so-called “king” and his servants. strange, I thought as I looked at the hills where there used to be green beautiful grass, now it was all brown. I might need to take a closer look. I heard a rustle 4 feet away from me. I looked around, trying to find a hiding spot so I won’t get caught. The bushes are thin, so that won’t work. If I hide behind a tree I would easily get caught. Aha! Climb a tree! I need to climb a tree! I quickly got to the tree with the fullest leaves and hid. What I didn’t expect to see was Nick Rin Grey. I suppressed a growl. I never, ever liked Nick. He was one of those kids who bully me. “Now I’m here. But where the hell is the mansion?” he growled. Mansion? There never was a mansion around these hills. “Ah, Nick, you came,” an unfamiliar male voice said. “Yeah, well, I have no idea where is the mansion. Do you know where it is?” Nick asked. “Yes, yes. I always hid it from the naked eye because of the impure ones.” Impure ones? What is he saying? “Come, we must go to the mansion before some impure one is here.” the man said. “All right,” Nick responded. “Hope you’re mansion is nice.” “You’ll see, Nick Rin Grey,” the man smiled down on him. “You’ll see.” Right when they started to walk I blacked out. Then after seconds—at least, I think it was seconds—I woke up. I was startled I blacked out when I wanted to see where they go. It was like something didn’t want me to see where they go. “Alice?” a familiar voice called my name. “Why are you laying on the ground? And why are you here?” I turned around and saw the girl who is most of the time alone Marissa, I think her name was. “Wha—oh, hi. Well, I need to tell you something that you will might believe or not.” and so I told her everything I saw, about the man, about something about the mansion. She was silent for moments then said, “We need everyone.” “Everyone? What do you mean?” I asked. “My friends—outside of Nick.” she told me. “Like, right now?” “No, tomorrow night,” she muttered. “I’ll say that I’ll have a sleepover, and most likely all of them will be there. I’ll ask Maddison to bring her little sister. This is very serious.” I slowly nodded. “Okay,” I said quietly. “So I guess I’ll see you tomorrow night.” “Yes. Get all the strength you can get because we’ll be training our powers.” My eyes widened. Then slowly I understood and slowly I nodded. “Well, good-night, Marissa.” “Good-night, Alice.” .:Chapter 5:. The Sleepover “Another day of school, no doubt about it,” I muttered. “But something will be revealed.” As I walked towards my friends—except Nick, he wasn’t there. Which made the situation a lot more easier—who were just talking, as usual, then when I came close enough, Darky noticed me. “Hey, Mari!” Darky greeted cheerfully. “Hi,” I said. “So, there’s something you need to tell us, Carmel?” Nook asked. “I know you, all of us do. You have something to say, right?” “Yes, of course,” I replied. “I’m going to have a sleepover at my place and I was hoping you guys would come.” Darky had this grumpy look on his face. “I don’t do sleepovers! There for girls!” Well, Darky’s making this hard. I told myself. Maddison turned toward him. “You hang out with girls, Dark.” she told him. “So why don’t you go to sleepovers? Not all sleepovers are for girls.” Darky rolled his eyes. “Yeah. Sure, whatever. Anyways, what will be there? Will there be chocolate? Cake?” I hesitated. I should’ve thought about that. “Yes, there will be chocolate,” I told him slowly. He slightly looked more interested. “All right, but there will be no makeovers. I’m not dressing up as a girl.” Maddison crossed her arms and scoffed. “Same here, dude. I’m not a girly either. Not like my sister.” “And Maddison, can you bring your sister?” I asked. Maddison looked very surprised. “What? Why? She’s going to be all happy and hyper. My mom won’t like it.” “But you can make Daisy behave, right?” “Well, yeah, but still, she’ll still be hyper.” “Well, I think it’ll be fine. Don’t worry.” “‘Don’t worry’, that’s what they all say.” she muttered under her breath. “So, who else will be there?” Nook asked. “A girl name Alice Hearth.” I told her. “Wait, who?” Darky asked. “Alice Hearth,” I repeated. “She’s quite unique.” Nook twitched her ear. “Isn’t she rich? Like rich rich? You’ve seen that diamond on her tail.” “She’s kinda rich,” I corrected. “Anyway, she’ll be there at my sleepover.” “And who else? Will Nick be there, too?” Maddison asked. “No,” I said firmly. “No?” She looked surprised again. “But he’s your friend!” Darky groaned. “I guess I’ll be the only boy there, won’t I?” he muttered miserably. “Alice said that she doesn’t want him there,” I said. Maddison looked like she was about to rage and punch someone. “So this . . . Alice doesn’t want Nick to be there for no reason?! He’s your—!” “He’s bullying her, Maddy!” I snapped. “She doesn’t want to be bullied somewhere she wants to go!” “But—” Maddison was interrupted by Nook. “She’s right, Maddy.” Nook told her. “If she’s getting bullied by Nick, then let her have at least peace from him.” Maddy huffed. “Fine.” “Great,” I clapped my hands together. “So, we’ll all be there?” “Yes.” they said in unison. Then the bell rang. “Shit! Shit! Shit!” Maddy ran fast like lightning. “I’m going to be late!” We all looked at her as she ran until she disappeared from sight. “So,” Nook turned to look at all of us. “See ya’, guys,” I was in my house, waiting patiently for the others to arrive. I heard a knock on my door and opened it. Alice was the first one to be at my ‘sleepover’. “Hi,” I greeted. “Hello,” she greeted back. “Come in, make yourself at home.” I told her. “Thanks.” She walked in my house and landed on the couch. I sat with her. “Are the others coming or what?” she asked me. “Oh, there coming, don’t worry.” I told her. “Okay. And, um, how did you find out they all had powers?” I chuckled a bit. Then responded, “Because they stand out more, Maddison told me once that she sees things that others don’t see, Darky told me about an incident he had about lighting himself on fire and didn’t get damaged by it, Nook told me about a prank she thought would be funny on a popular girl getting mud all over her by tripping on a rock. She said that a paper bag the girl was going to step on turned into a rock, and the girl fell on the mud. And Maddison also told me about her sister ‘charm-speaking’ to a friend. Daisy wanted some milk and cookies, and her friend did it. She said that Daisy’s friend does not take kindly of obeying little kids, Even her own friend. Actually, her friend never served a kid who was younger than her. But she did serve Daisy. These stories they all told me were very supernatural.” “All right,” she said. “So what’s your power?” “Changing the weather,” I replied. “Oh, okay, well, mine’s turning into a demon,” I looked at her, I was scared. She took noticed and quickly said, “N-no no, you got it wrong! I have the will to! I only use it for certain things, and attacking people is not one of them.” “Oh,” I chuckled nervously, “that’s good.” A knock came from the door. “Come in,” I called. “Hey, where is everybody?” a familiar male voice asked. It was Darky. “Hello,” Alice said nervously. “Oh, hi,” Darky greeted her. “You must be Alice, right? The kind-of rich girl Mari said?” “Yes, that’s me.” she said. “Well, nice to meet you.” “Hello? Anybody here?” Nook skipped into the room, with her blanket and pillow. “Well, of course, Nook,” Maddison told her. “I mean, you heard Mari say ‘come in’ didn’t you?” “Oh, I’m so excited!” squealed Daisy. “A sleepover! I wonder if we’re doing makeovers!” Darky turned quickly and said, “No, please. I’m a dude. I don’t do makeovers.” Daisy laughed. “Oh, that would be so funny to see you wearing makeup!” “Good, we’re all here,” I said. “So where’s the chocolate? You said it would be here.” Darky said. “Oh, about that . . . there’s no chocolate, or a sleepover.” I said. “WHAT?!” Daisy screeched. “No sleepover?! You lied to us?!” “I had to! There’s something you need to know . . .” :Chapter 6:. I'm on Fire? ". . .the point is that you all have powers." The room gone silent for several minutes. My left eye twitched, I have never heard so much craziness in my whole life. First I got tricked, then I have been told i got powers! what the hell . . .? "Mari, care to explain how we got powers?" I asked. "I mean, these. . . i guess gifts we got, how did we get them? they shouldn't just appear out of nowhere." Marissa smiled slowly, very rare to see the girl smile. "You were born with these powers, you know." she told me. "Wait, what—?" Nook started to say. "You know as well as I, Mari, that you're talking crazy." Maddison chirped in. "Yes, I know, Maddison, but you got to believe me," Marissa sighed. "These powers have been living with us ever since we were born. I never believed powers were real, but ever since I was in junior high I changed. I changed the weather with my anger, and people around me avoided me, looking at me like I was a psycho. I never knew what I did back then, but I know now." "So, you're telling me that I was born with this demon inside me? That's fantastic!" Alice said with sarcasm. Carmel shook her head. "That's a different story," she told Alice. "Something I have no idea about." "For cheese's sake!" I groaned. "Are we going to stay here and chitchat and do nothing but talking about our magic?" "Wait—I have magic?" Daisy's eyes sparkled. "Oh my gosh! Yes! Now watch me do some awesome rainbow magic!" she tried to summon rainbows with her mind. This kid is so annoying, I thought. "Daisy, this isn't time for silliness," Maddison scolded her. "But—" "Your sister's right, you know." Alice told her. Daisy huffed. "Fine. Have it your way." She muttered. "So, since you guys don't 100 percent believe me," Mari said, "then let me show you something from our friend here." she pointed at me. "Wait, what are you going to do?" I asked and slowly backed away from her. "Alice, a match, please," Marissa told the horned girl. "What are you— oh, okay." she grabbed a pack of matches, grabbed one, and tossed it to Mari. Oh no, she's going to light me on fire! panic started to bubble in me. "Marissa! What in the world—?!" Nook started to shriek as a tiny flame sparked. Marissa threw it at my fur, and the flame started to spread. i screamed like a little girl—well, not really, you know what I mean—and ran in circles and yelled, "GET WATER! GET WATER!". Daisy couldn't stop laughing, and the others were panicking—except Carmel and Alice. Five minutes went by. "Okay, I think we have enough of the fire, Mari." Alice told her. "Oh, right," she unexpectedly summoned a small rain cloud. The cloud started to rain on me and put the fire out—thank goodness. I was perfectly fine, no burnt spots, except water all over me. I sighed. "Tell me, Marissa," I began. "WHY THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT?!" Daisy was still laughing like crazy. "Oh! That was hilarious! Can you do that again?" she said between laughs. Marissa ignored Daisy. "Because I wanted to show you that you have a power to be immune to fire." she said. "Couldn't you at least let Alice show hers?!" I asked. "Then you would think she's a monster and not equal." she said in a matter-of-factually way. I rolled my eyes. "Whatever." "All right, all right, Marissa, you got us to believe," Nook caught her breath. "Now tell all of us what our powers are?" "Okay," Marissa began. "Maddison's power is to see very odd things that a normal mouse can't see, Daisy's is charm-speaking to people, yours is making illusions, like tricking people into seeing ghosts or whatever, Darky's—well, you know his. Alice's is turning into her demon form, and mine is changing weather." " 'Kay," Daisy looked confused. "Um, I don't mean to sound rude but—is this witchcraft or magic? that's what all I want to know." "neither, actually," Alice answered. "It's just your powers, they're just there to protect people." "But in comics, villains also have powers, as well," I reminded her. Maddy sighed. "That's one thing I never thought could happen," she muttered, then looked very serious, "So, this road we're taking, Nick's on the wrong side, isn't he?" Marissa nodded sadly. "But we can help him, right?" "Maddy, I don't think—" Mari began. "We can help him, right?" she repeated her question. "He's been my friend ever since we were little kids! I can't fight him, can I?" "I guess we can try and save him, but don't think he will choose our side instantly." "Okay, can we go now?" Daisy asked. "Yes, it's almost midnight," Marissa responded, "We all need rest for tomorrow. Sadly, since we talked so much, we didn't have time to train. But tomorrow's Friday, right? so we can train for the weekends and such." We all nodded in agreement. "Seems fair," Maddison said. "Then it's settled," Alice said, "tomorrow night we begin training." .:Chapter 7:. Loyalty in Thee I was in the mansion. It was glorious still, same black marble i have seen. All decorated with weapons, books, and fake skeletons—or at least, i think they were fake. I was practicing with the King with battling. He said if i am loyal to him, i will have obstacles to prove i am loyal. I didn't know what he meant, but it seemed serious. So, i was going to prove my loyalty to him. I was determined to prove i am loyal, but i needed to practice my moves. We were using swords, long, black blades with a red dragon handle on each sword. I swear the dragon handles looked creepy, but cool a the same time. The King was trying to slice me (but i know he didn't do it on purpose), and was aiming right at my chest. He charged and i dodged, remembering all the things he told me. Keep your eye on your opponent. See what will they do, then surprise them with a blow. I kept my eyes on him, he was charging at me again. When they are close enough, dodge. He tried to slice my head off, but i dodged. Now it was my turn. When trying to attack with a sword, you must see the weaknesses and when the opponent will be off-guarded when they dodge, some will not look at you in the eyes when they dodged. Others are harder . . . I swung my sword straight at his side, he dodged and was not looking at me. I knew this was my chance and went for it. I surprisingly sliced his left ear. He looked like he was suppressing a shriek of pain, but i tried to think it was a trick. I went for his side again, and surprisingly i cut it a little. "Very good, Mr. Grey," he said with a smile, "very good." "Thanks," I said. "So, what's next?" I defeated that Sita girl. Oh wait, now i'm talking about that girl? Yep. I am. Sita looked kind of pretty in my opinion—but probably hot for some guys, but since she has a diamond replacing one of her eyes, some guys might rethink that—but i will tell you now that she is very wicked. She is like those popular girls at school, pretty with an attitude. She's always boasting about stuff. I don't really like that. I would like a girl like Maddison, kind-hearted, smart, pretty—oops, ignore that—and well, a nerd. "You will have your first obstacle tomorrow." he said. "Oh," that was all i could say. I was too excited to say anything. "What's the obstacle?" "You'll soon find out," he said with a grin, "very soon." 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| Lol this seems pretty interesting XD Dat chapter doe :D Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Marissa Carmelite Walker (She's mostly called Carmel or Mari) Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: Shy, silent, girly and mostly, alone. She's also smart and productive. Evil or Good?: Good Powers: She has the power to change the weather any way she likes, in a specific time and place. Extras(if has extras): Even though she's girly, she's also pretty violent. Whenever she gets angry, it rains and thunder and lightning go on. Whenever she's really happy, the day becomes sunny and whatsoever. But if she goes crazy and out of her mind she will turn limitless and the weathers mix up. That's why nobody fights with her anymore. Or even talk with her. Ever... |
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sunsetsparkz a dit : Approved ^^ |
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| Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Nook Alexis Ryden Age:16 Gender: Female Personality: Sarcastic, funny, loves the internet too much, really insecure, outgoing, loud, and loyal. Along with that she's pretty smart but is really stubborn and annoying at times. Evil or Good?: good Powers: Nook can change realities and what you see. Extras(if has extras): She's really sneaky but almost always gives herself away because she laughs too much. She's not mad really at all, but if she is, you better run. Listens to music a lot. Dernière modification le 1435771440000 |
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| 2 slots left now! *EDIT:i was too lazy to make another warning that was different :P and i put 'justice' on KoD (King of Dreams) on the name ;-;so i replaced it, now dreams.* annnnd i forgot my evil ocs. I am 2 lazy to edit the thread thing, so here they are. :U don't worry, this wont effect the slots! :) Ref: ![]() Name(full name,please): Nick Rin Grey Age: 17 Gender: male Personality: he is a troublemaker, so gets in detention a lot. He always likes to mess around and never seem to get caught. Even though he is on the Evil side, he is kind of caring towards people. Evil or Good?: unknown (but he is evil but doesn't know it.) Powers: none Extras(if has extras): He was Maddison's best friends until he 'turned'. (this is one thing that will be in the story! :D) Ref: ![]() Name(full name, please): Jack Sky Huntsman (also known as the King Of Dreams and High Pureness--you will know why there is 'pureness' in a chapter and 'dreams' in the extras X3) Age: 35 Gender: male Prsonality: He is very smart so his plans rarely backfire. He is the most evil person you'll ever meet. Evil or Good?: evil Powers: goes into mice dreams Extrs(if has extras): at times when he enters dreams and sees a blind mouse/a mouse that does not know justice(<---see what i did there?:3),he will act like a friend to get the mouse on his side, he did that to Nick. But if he sees a 'unpure' person, like the Good(which are pure than him, but he wants to make the word pure a ruined word), he will give them nightmares. So, there. now let me play TFM.*^* Dernière modification le 1435869240000 |
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| Ref: ![]() Age: 15 Gender: Male Personality: Giantly introverted, Decently intelligent mainly just passing tests at a quick pace, very skeptical about even the littlest things, daydreamer, looks and acts usually very calm but can get pissed of on touchy subjects, reckless Evil or Good?: Good Powers: Immune to fire Extras(if has extras): Loves chicken and chocolate and would be slightly more interested in the topic if they are mentioned. Hates stereotypes. |
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| Hi guys!!! im just going to say.... HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!!! :D But if ur not from the USA, then this is a random update X3 and also, i might need at least 1 or 2 evil ocs cuz i am bad at thinking more evil ocs. so, yea. XP bye for now! |
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| UGHHHHHH. I CANT DELAY THIS STORY ANYMORE!! X< <--- god that sounds like a kid. sorry for the 2 slots but they will be in chapter 3 or more(depending when they are here/born yet :3) Here's the story. .:Chapter 2:. After blocks of running, I finally got to my school, Shaman Sword High School, the home of the shamans, or so they say. The school is not like an ordinary school like all around the world, no, it teaches the students about being a shaman and helping the mice with cheese and such. It’s boring, really, just learning boring stuff. That’s probably why the students are snob-nosed. They care for lots of experiences, not the mice. But in the school they think they know all the shaman stuff to where they don’t do their studies. Since they don’t they get their lazy butts to work, they get Fs. But when they have tests, they come running to me or my friends, since we listen to the teachers. But we don’t give them the answers. One of my friends and the oldest friend I have, Nick Rin Grey, does that. He comes running to me. Always asking, ‘Can you help me with this test?’ and yet I help him with the tests. I sometimes feel guilty, but he’s my friend, friends help friends, right? But he’s always been a trouble maker since day one. He never cares for rules, and because of that, he always getting in trouble. I don’t follow his lead, I try to warn him, but he refuses. I walked in the school, looking for my locker. The welcome wasn’t very welcoming, as usual. The students looked at my silently, hostile or puzzled because I’m always not late. I looked around, trying to find my locker again. Ah, there it is locker 13. I opened it up and put my sketchbook in it. As I closed my locker, a cheerful voice greeted me. “Hi, Maddison,” It was Nook, one of my friends. I turned and greeted her back. “Hi, Nook,” I said, “How’s it going?” “The usual,” Nook said. “Going on the internet and playing games.” “Oh,” I muttered. She twitched her left ear. “Why are you later than early? I thought you were an early bird.” she asked. “Well, my alarm clock didn’t go off and when I woke up, my sister told me I was going to be late.” I told her. I didn’t want to tell about the nightmare I had, it still scared me even there. “Oh,” She looked surprised. I looked behind her to see if the others were with her. They weren’t, I wonder why. “Where are the others?” I asked her. “They’re at Nick’s locker.” She told me. “Come on, let’s go and see them.” “Okay.” We were waling passed a lot of kids who were giving funny looks. We didn’t notice and walked on. When we got to Nick’s locker, we saw Darky, Marissa, and Nick talking. It was a nice thing to see Mari talking to people, she’s always alone. “Hey, guys,” I said. “Oh, hello Maddy,” Nick said. “So how are you?” Mari asked. “Fine,” I told her. “Just fine.” Darky looked up at the clock above Nick’s locker. “We all should be going to our classes. School’s starts in four minutes.” “Well, bye guys,” Mari said. We all went to our classes. Mari and I were in the same class, Shaman teachings. Well this is going to be fun, I thought as we walked into the classroom, just fun. We all were shamans, getting to know how to use planks properly. We know how to use planks, or course, but our teacher, Mr. Carnell, still wanted to teach how to use planks properly. “Now, can anyone tell me how to turn the plank?” he asked. “Ugh,” I mumbled, “how much do we need to know about planks?” “Quiet you,” a student snapped at me. “Keep your mouth shut, I’m trying to hear!” “I was only mumbling.” I told her. “How in the world can you not hear?” “What in the name of cheese is going on, girls?” Mr. Carnell demanded. “Well, Ms. Silver-snail,” the girl began. “Silverlock,” I snapped. “Whatever,” she said, “Is being rude about your class.” “What?” I growled. “I did no such thing!” “You said when we will get out of this class,” she told him. “Liar!” I snapped. “That’s enough,” Mr. Carnell said. But I didn’t stop. “You have no right to lie about what I said!” I sneered. “Shut up you idiot,” she said. “You shut up.” “That’s enough!” The teacher yelled now, “Detention, both of you!” Great, now I’m going to have detention and my mom will ground me probably for a month. I thought. *LE GASP* nu way! v Dernière modification le 1436398680000 |
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| When i saw the chapter.... ![]() |
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queenlordess a dit : o my gurd ;w; ty!!!! but the third/fourth chapter will be less funny and more intense ;) since im kinda going back and forth on the Good and the Evil. but ty again <3 i luv making ppl laugh ^w^ Dernière modification le 1436410740000 |
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Chapter 2 a dit : Jesus omg this is a amazing chapter I loved this one I will beg for more soon Shymouselite a dit : I have an idea but i don't have a ref you if you want I could try a detailed description if you want. |
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darkdayboom a dit : ty and sure, you can give me a detailed description. thats fine. :) |
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| ooh ill join! (sorry if main characters are full ^^') Ref: Normal Form: ![]() (Oops i made the fur too light, ignore that) ![]() Name(full name, please): Alice Hearth Age: 16 (Just became 16 a month ago) Gender: Female Personality: Alice is disliked by some of the other students, as rumors go around about her being "super-rich"(based on the diamond tail item she wears). She is bullied by the fact that she is kind of a "teacher's pet" and a "nerd". The meaner students think they deserve to be rich, not this little nerdy girl. Alice is pretty weak on the inside, and she often takes things seriously. However, she manages to ignore all the bullies, despite all the mean notes she gets in her locker. But most of the time, she is very happy and cheerful, and tries to defend her friends. She is pretty smart, but is also cocky sometimes. Being a "teacher's pet", she does not get into trouble a lot. But when she does, it's probably because she got in a minor fight with someone, or started to daydream. Alice really loves chocolate, and the teachers let her have a piece one a day, as they think it actually does help her pay attention in class. Finally, she is scared of a lot of things(like insects, and even her own demon form) Evil or Good?: Good Powers: She has a demon form which she can turn into as long as it's past 4:00pm (16:00), or whenever the sun has set. The horns on her head become longer, and any blue item she wears turns green. In this form, she can use any ghost's power and do whatever she likes with it. When the sun first rises, she starts turning back into normal. Alice doesn't like using her demon form, as she fears evil will take over her and corrupt her. Extras(if has extras): She is actually only kind-of rich, and they live in a nice house. Dernière modification le 1436564040000 |
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shymouselite a dit : Ok! Ref: A white fluffy mouse with Dark blue hair in a bun, wears a very long light blue scarf, left eye replaced with a sinister diamond, eyelashes seem to sparkle, has a scar on the top of her forehead. Name(full name, please): Sita Elega Age: 27 Gender: Female Personality: A seemly dainty figure on the outside (Not counting the diamond replacing her left eye) but she likes to let people know she could kill them there loved ones and all there dreams of hope in a flash, very flirty, boastful but does live up to her boasts majority of the time, hates almost everything or says she does, very loud, selfish. Evil or Good?: Evil Powers: Telekinesis Extras(if has extras): Was born without her left eye. Comes from a very rich family. Used to living around cold areas making herself able to deal with cold better. |
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Xprincessj a dit : darkdayboom a dit : ok, MAIN CHARACTERS ARE FULL NOW! thank you! but background characters will be opened! |
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| chapter 3. WHOOOO! but somethings fishy.... .:Chapter 3:. Two days later . . . I was in a place that was white as snow. The sky was white, the ground was white. I felt the coldness in the air. I shivered. Where am I? I thought as I looked around. “Welcome,” said a deep voice. I turned to look who it was. It was a man with a black helmet, brown hair, and ginger and brown fur. I never saw him before. “W-who are you?” I asked. “I am the King of Pureness and Dreams,” he told me. “I walk in dreams of those who have lost the light.” “The light?” I twitched my ear same as a mouse does when it’s not sure or doubt something. “I’m not blind!” He smiled. “The light is balance, my friend. You have lost the knowing of good and evil.” I stared at him. Twitched my ear a second time, and then asked, “What do you want from me?” “I can show you the light. I am the King of Pureness. I help those who have lost the light and now found it because of me.” “Okay, but how can you walk in people’s dreams? Or show them the light?” The king’s smiled wavered. “You see, my friend, this helmet,” he took off his helmet and showed it to me, even though I saw it on his face. But it was glowing with a deep blood red aura I had never seen before. “Is the reason why I can walk in dreams, but it cannot show me the light. For I have known the light ever since I was a child.” he said as he put back on his helmet. Great, I thought to myself. A stalker, whoopee! Now he can see all the most private things about me! “Okay, and who are these, oh, lost-and-found mice?” I asked him. “You will soon find out.” the king told me. “And one more thing,” I told him. “Yes?” “How are you in my dream anyway?” “Like I said the helmet gives me the power to go in dreams.” “No, I meant do you have another soul of something? You have to be dreaming of one mouse so the other mice won’t know there are other mice having the same dream.” “Well,” he paused, looking unsure about an answer. Nice, this dude doesn’t know what to say. Then the sky was shattering. “What’s happening?” I asked rather nervously. “You’re waking up,” the king said. I panicked. “You mean I WAS SLEEPING IN CLASS?!” I shrieked. “I do not know.” He said calmly. “But when it is nighttime, meet me near the hills next to your house.” “But-” “Nick, wake your stupid rat butt up!” a familiar voice hissed. I woke up and adjusted my eyes, it was Maddison scolding at me as usual. “W-wha?” I groaned. “How long was I asleep?” “Half of the class time you idiot!” she said. “What?” I immediately raised my head up. When I looked in front of me I saw the shaman skills teacher, Mrs. Boring. I know right? A hilarious name for a teacher, but trust me, don’t laugh at her. She’ll give you detention. “Um,” I tried for a smile. “Hi?” “Detention for you mister,” she said. “Oh,” I muttered. While in detention I was thinking about the guy. What did he call himself? King of Neatness and meat? King of Pureness and Dreams? I’m going for number two. I grunted and remembered what he told me. Meet me near the hills next to your house. Why the hell he wanted me there? I dunno. Oh wait I remember, to show me the others and his place. Well I’m going there. And nothing will stop me. now you know why I named it "That Stalker". Because of him. |
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| Ooo another chapter Good nice chapter! |
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| new chapter :D |
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| Lol cant wait for chapter 4 :3 |
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| woo chapter 4! guess what will happen my friend :3c .:Chapter 4:. I was in my room, waiting for a right time to get out of the house and go to the borders to another server. The hills weren’t in our side, it was on a server that I never knew side. I decided I would get out by jumping the window next to my bed. “Nick,” called a female voice. “It’s time for dinner.” it was my “adopted” mom. Great. I never got along with her, no matter how much she loved me, I never loved her back. That lady is a lady that will squeeze you to death and will act really kind to you. That may seem great, outside the squeezing part, but I never liked that type of kindness. “All right, all right, I’ll be there.” I called back. “Just give me a couple of minutes.” “Okay, darling,” I heard her walking back to the kitchen. Finally, a time to escape! I quickly opened up my window, and ran away. It was time to see the so-called “king” and his servants. strange, I thought as I looked at the hills where there used to be green beautiful grass, now it was all brown. I might need to take a closer look. I heard a rustle 4 feet away from me. I looked around, trying to find a hiding spot so I won’t get caught. The bushes are thin, so that won’t work. If I hide behind a tree I would easily get caught. Aha! Climb a tree! I need to climb a tree! I quickly got to the tree with the fullest leaves and hid. What I didn’t expect to see was Nick Rin Grey. I suppressed a growl. I never, ever liked Nick. He was one of those kids who bully me. “Now I’m here. But where the hell is the mansion?” he growled. Mansion? There never was a mansion around these hills. “Ah, Nick, you came,” an unfamiliar male voice said. “Yeah, well, I have no idea where is the mansion. Do you know where it is?” Nick asked. “Yes, yes. I always hid it from the naked eye because of the impure ones.” Impure ones? What is he saying? “Come, we must go to the mansion before some impure one is here.” the man said. “All right,” Nick responded. “Hope you’re mansion is nice.” “You’ll see, Nick Rin Grey,” the man smiled down on him. “You’ll see.” Right when they started to walk I blacked out. Then after seconds—at least, I think it was seconds—I woke up. I was startled I blacked out when I wanted to see where they go. It was like something didn’t want me to see where they go. “Alice?” a familiar voice called my name. “Why are you laying on the ground? And why are you here?” I turned around and saw the girl who is most of the time alone Marissa, I think her name was. “Wha—oh, hi. Well, I need to tell you something that you will might believe or not.” and so I told her everything I saw, about the man, about something about the mansion. She was silent for moments then said, “We need everyone.” “Everyone? What do you mean?” I asked. “My friends—outside of Nick.” she told me. “Like, right now?” “No, tomorrow night,” she muttered. “I’ll say that I’ll have a sleepover, and most likely all of them will be there. I’ll ask Maddison to bring her little sister. This is very serious.” I slowly nodded. “Okay,” I said quietly. “So I guess I’ll see you tomorrow night.” “Yes. Get all the strength you can get because we’ll be training our powers.” My eyes widened. Then slowly I understood and slowly I nodded. “Well, good-night, Marissa.” “Good-night, Alice.” heh heh! what will happen? you shall find out soon! >:3 and im kinda sorry it's a little short, im behind right now. ill be trying to do this every friday. :U n plus i randomly found out i can do the italic like this: [ i][/ i] (not with the spaces, you know wat im talking about) and it will do it when i transfer this story to here. nice. im so smart X3 |