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The gray
Lolbroekxd
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The gray

This story is about a tribe, the Bizar, hated by all other tribes because of their behaviour. They are all gray, which is one of the reasons everyone hates that color. Everyone wants them gone for good so they don't have to worry about avoiding these mice anymore. What will happen? Will they be able to get them out of their sight, or will they attack back and ruin the fun for all others?

I try using a new methode (I hope) nobody has ever done before. You'll often have to click a link to play some music in the background while reading the story to create some kind of atmosphere. I'm not sure if I'll ever finish this fanficion. I only will if the first part(s) get positive feedback. :)

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Lolbroekxd
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Part 1: The world of transformice
(play https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=22rNDeqe9sY)
Somewhere in the huge world of transformice lies a peaceful village, named CheezVil. It’s inhabited by kind mice from the Cheez tribe. Most tribes in transformice live in peace with eachother, with a few exceptions of course. Everyone likes the mice from Cheez, they are always so helpful and positive. In CheezVil also lies one of the biggest gold and diamond mines. The gold and diamonds are used to create fancy items for them to wear and are worth loads of cheese. The major of CheezVil is called Joah. The town has never been so alive before he had all the power and control. He fixed all the cheese issues they had by sending more racers to go get cheese on the other side of a large and difficult terrain to cross. They usually return with more then enough cheese to feed the whole town and even pay the civilians for their loyalty to Joah. Most of the civilians are rich enough to effort all the items they want, made out of the materials they get from the mine. Joah makes a great shot to become the president of transformice, which gives him the power to help every single tribe in need. He already hands out cheap items to the poor mice living in a local tribe nearby. It was basically the heaven on earth.
(stop music)
Almost everyone loves him because of what he does, except for the Bizar tribe. They don’t know much about them, but what they do know is not much good. They’re all gray, poor, thieves and hate Joah. CheezVil has a few mice from Bizar working in the mines for a little bit of cheese. You can say they are held there and see it as some kind of prison, but nobody really cares much about them. Whenever they see one of them, they’re stealing or yelling bad stuff about the major. Joah tells everyone stories about how he got attacked by their tribe and what lies they’re spreading about him. He wants them out of his sight as soon as possible. That’s one of the main reasons why everyone hates the color gray.
Takumi
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This is an interesting fanfic
Can't wait for the next chapter!
didn't play the music because using phone and I'm too lazy
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