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[Fan-fiction] The Journey Back Home
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Hi everyone! My name is Eva.

I always had the love for writing , so here I am in my own fan-fiction thread!

Please keep in mind that I am not English and I am still improving. Correct me if you see a few mistakes in my chapters!

I really hope to get readers!

some chapters might have art!

Currently in need of 0 characters!
Mice 6/6
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Name : Sarai Levin
Age : 20
Gender : Female
Personality : brave , sarcastic.
Bio : During the war , when Sarai was 5 , she was kidnapped from her home and was locked up in a jail. She always wanted to escape and find her parents. Sarai is the only hard-working slave , because her dad once free'd over five hundred slaves from the same jail. Everyone knows The Levins. When Sarai was younger , she always looked up to her dad , who is an adventurer. In Sarai's mind , he is a hero. Well , her mother is a writer which Sarai has no interest in..
Skills : Sarai is good at hiking and fighting. She tried to escape the jail several times and that's where she learned that. Also good at making fire.
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Name : Gryphon Kishitani
Age : 15
Gender : Male
Personality : Stubborn, dreamer, prankster, mysterious
Bio : During the war, at age four, Gryphon was kidnapped and separated from his parents, whom he later found out were slaughtered after listening to a conversation while hiding in the air ducts. Crestfallen, he stopped trying to resist his slave drivers and accepted his life. However, after seeing Sarai try so hard to defend her father - the one who'd freed him and the others - he decided to try to escape. He dreams of celebrating Halloween.
Skills : He's good at destroying things, especially if he loses his temper. He's also stronger than most mice, but not stronger than the slave drivers. He can easily start a fire and keeps small bombs hidden in-between his neck and scarf, where the slave drivers can't see or get ahold of them.


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Name : Wesea Gutowski
Age : 17
Gender : Female
Personality : Shy , friendly , strong
Bio : At the age 8 , her parents died . They were shot by a tank during the war. Wesea was almost kidnapped , but she was able to escape and run away to the forest. One day she found a jail in the forest and wanted to check it out. She was cought by the guards and was locked up in a cell. Wesea maganed to escape , although she was worried about the other slaves. Wesea is still haunting around the forest , but she promises one day to help those slaves.
Skills : Good at building , has learned that from those 9 survival years. Also a good fighter.

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Name : Caig Heayuki
Age : 14
Gender : Male
Personality : Sarcastic , quiet , friendly
Bio : Caig only remembers when he was taken away from his mother's arms by a stranger who he never saw. Then he fainted and woke up in a jail cell. He was fasting. The only thing he thinked about is his mother. Is she alive? Is she okay? Although Caig was a shy boy , he was also a curious boy. He listens to every single guard conversation at night. He knows the jail's secret exits , all the jail's passwords and also - Paul Levin , the rescuirer of this jail. Knowning the secret exits , Caig hasn't maganed himself to escape yet. Maybe there are other people who need to escape too? He can't go alone.
Skills : Caig is a good climber . Flexible , good figther and strong , but couldn't beat 3 mice at the same time.


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Name: Lacrima Kishitani
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Personality: Clever, loves joking around, extremely intelligent, loves sweets
Bio: Gryphon's older brother. Neither of them realize that they are long-lost siblings. Lacrima works behind the scenes, doing technological work for the slave drivers, as he was kidnapped long before Gryphon after a battle in the town he was staying in with his grandmother. The slave driver that captured him - seeing his potential - gave him to a rich family in a secluded mansion not far from the jail where the captives were held. There, he did technological work for them and his new family. He is often seen with a white chocolate bar, and visits the jail often.
Skills: Is extremely skilled with a computer and other electronic systems. He has developed a cloaking device that allows him - and him only - to be turned completely invisible.


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Name : Lele Jearine
Age : 16
Gender : Female
Personality : Extrovert , loud , brave , stubborn
Bio : Her parents sold her for a new computer to a group of criminals. Lele couldn't forgive her parents. She hated them. How could they sell her?! Lele somehow escaped and ran to CheeseVille , a city famous for it's buildings. But what she didn't know is that the city was the main target of the war. She was kidnapped like a lot of children , and then brought to a jail. Locked up , cold , fasting and knowing that no one who loves her. She wants to get revenge and escape.
Skills : Really strong and good at fighting , learned it from the long years in jail. Good at solving mathematical tasks.

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''Please let me out! I can't wait any longer!'' Sarai shouts. ''No , now shut up and sweep the floor! This is all your daddy's fault! Now you take it back!'' The guards shout at her all the time. ''He is a brave man! HE IS A GREAT PERSON!'' Sarai drops the broom. She doesn't care. ''What are you doing?! Get back to work!'' A guard pushes Sarai. Her body touches the cold stone ground. She gets up , takes the broom and sweeps the floor. ''I will escape this hell someday.''

#worstprologueever

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Sarai and Gryphon - Chapter 1
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Sarai and Gryphon meeting Caig - Chapter 2
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Gryphon - Chapter 4
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ooo
this sounds interesting~!!!
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Name : Gryphon Kishitani
Age : 15
Gender : Male
Personality : Stubborn, dreamer, prankster, mysterious
Bio : During the war, at age four, Gryphon was kidnapped and separated from his parents, whom he later found out were slaughtered after listening to a conversation while hiding in the air ducts. Crestfallen, he stopped trying to resist his slave drivers and accepted his life. However, after seeing Sarai try so hard to defend her father - the one who'd freed him and the others - he decided to try to escape. He dreams of celebrating Halloween.
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Basgetti a dit :
ooo
this sounds interesting~!!!
http://i.imgur.com/Tk3ehTU.png
Name : Gryphon Kishitani
Age : 15
Gender : Male
Personality : Stubborn, dreamer, prankster, mysterious
Bio : During the war, at age four, Gryphon was kidnapped and separated from his parents, whom he later found out were slaughtered after listening to a conversation while hiding in the air ducts. Crestfallen, he stopped trying to resist his slave drivers and accepted his life. However, after seeing Sarai try so hard to defend her father - the one who'd freed him and the others - he decided to try to escape. He dreams of celebrating Halloween.

Gryphon is now a character of The Journey Back Home! Interesting bio c:

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Blooberrytea a dit :
Basgetti a dit :
ooo
this sounds interesting~!!!
http://i.imgur.com/Tk3ehTU.png
Name : Gryphon Kishitani
Age : 15
Gender : Male
Personality : Stubborn, dreamer, prankster, mysterious
Bio : During the war, at age four, Gryphon was kidnapped and separated from his parents, whom he later found out were slaughtered after listening to a conversation while hiding in the air ducts. Crestfallen, he stopped trying to resist his slave drivers and accepted his life. However, after seeing Sarai try so hard to defend her father - the one who'd freed him and the others - he decided to try to escape. He dreams of celebrating Halloween.

Gryphon is now a character of The Journey Back Home! Interesting bio c:

Thanks~ ^.^
I look forward to seeing more of this story~
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ohhh

i honestly always wanted to be a part of a fanfiction , but never got the chance .
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Name : Wesea Gutowski
Age : 17
Gender : Female
Personality : Shy , friendly , good builder
Bio : At the age 8 , her parents died . They were shot by a tank during the war. Wesea was almost kidnapped , but she was able to escape and run away to the forest. One day she found a jail in the forest and wanted to check it out. She was cought by the guards and was locked up in a cell. Wesea maganed to escape , although she was worried about the other slaves. Wesea is still haunting around the forest , but she promises one day to help those slaves.
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Austejuxs a dit :
ohhh

i honestly always wanted to be a part of a fanfiction , but never got the chance .
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Name : Wesea Gutowski
Age : 17
Gender : Female
Personality : Shy , friendly , good builder
Bio : At the age 8 , her parents died . They were shot by a tank during the war. Wesea was almost kidnapped , but she was able to escape and run away to the forest. One day she found a jail in the forest and wanted to check it out. She was cought by the guards and was locked up in a cell. Wesea maganed to escape , although she was worried about the other slaves. Wesea is still haunting around the forest , but she promises one day to help those slaves.

Accepted. Welcome to TJBH!
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oooohhh
good character designs *.*
I need to make fanart for this
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oh mi god that would be amazing <3
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Name : Caig Heayuki
Age : 14
Gender : Male
Personality : Sarcastic , quiet , friendly
Bio : Caig only remembers when he was taken away from his mother's arms by a stranger who he never saw. Then he fainted and woke up in a jail cell. He was fasting. The only thing he thinked about is his mother. Is she alive? Is she okay? Although Caig was a shy boy , he was also a curious boy. He listens to every single guard conversation at night. He knows the jail's secret exits , all the jail's passwords and also - Paul Levin , the rescuirer of this jail. Knowning the secret exits , Caig hasn't maganed himself to escape yet. Maybe there are other people who need to escape too? He can't go alone.
Skills : Caig is a good climber . Flexible , good figther and strong , but couldn't beat 3 mice at the same time.
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Omg
good characters everywhere *o*
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Xxagsxx a dit :
http://i.imgur.com/sblCfTo.png
Name : Caig Heayuki
Age : 14
Gender : Male
Personality : Sarcastic , quiet , friendly
Bio : Caig only remembers when he was taken away from his mother's arms by a stranger who he never saw. Then he fainted and woke up in a jail cell. He was fasting. The only thing he thinked about is his mother. Is she alive? Is she okay? Although Caig was a shy boy , he was also a curious boy. He listens to every single guard conversation at night. He knows the jail's secret exits , all the jail's passwords and also - Paul Levin , the rescuirer of this jail. Knowning the secret exits , Caig hasn't maganed himself to escape yet. Maybe there are other people who need to escape too? He can't go alone.
Skills : Caig is a good climber . Flexible , good figther and strong , but couldn't beat 3 mice at the same time.

hello hello hello Caig
accepted


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Omg
good characters everywhere *o*

IKR JUST TWO MORE
AND THATS IT
A CHAPTER
BOOM
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I can make another one
if you want me to
lmao
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yes please
it would be really great
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Name: Lacrima Kishitani
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Personality: Clever, loves joking around, extremely intelligent, loves sweets
Bio: Gryphon's older brother. Neither of them realize that they are long-lost siblings. Lacrima works behind the scenes, doing technological work for the slave drivers, as he was kidnapped long before Gryphon after a battle in the town he was staying in with his grandmother. The slave driver that captured him - seeing his potential - gave him to a rich family in a secluded mansion not far from the jail where the captives were held. There, he did technological work for them and his new family. He is often seen with a white chocolate bar, and visits the jail often.
Skills: Is extremely skilled with a computer and other electronic systems. He has developed a cloaking device that allows him - and him only - to be turned completely invisible.
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Basgetti a dit :
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Name: Lacrima Kishitani
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Personality: Clever, loves joking around, extremely intelligent, loves sweets
Bio: Gryphon's older brother. Neither of them realize that they are long-lost siblings. Lacrima works behind the scenes, doing technological work for the slave drivers, as he was kidnapped long before Gryphon after a battle in the town he was staying in with his grandmother. The slave driver that captured him - seeing his potential - gave him to a rich family in a secluded mansion not far from the jail where the captives were held. There, he did technological work for them and his new family. He is often seen with a white chocolate bar, and visits the jail often.
Skills: Is extremely skilled with a computer and other electronic systems. He has developed a cloaking device that allows him - and him only - to be turned completely invisible.

yesss totally adding this
tysm


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Name : Lele Jearine
Age : 16
Gender : Female
Personality : Extrovert , loud , brave , stubborn
Bio : Her parents sold her for a new computer to a group of criminals. Lele couldn't forgive her parents. She hated them. How could they sell her?! Lele somehow escaped and ran to CheeseVille , a city famous for it's buildings. But what she didn't know is that the city was the main target of the war. She was kidnapped like a lot of children , and then brought to a jail. Locked up , cold , fasting and knowing that no one who loves her. She wants to get revenge and escape.
Skills : Really strong and good at fighting , learned it from the long years in jail. Good at solving mathematical tasks.

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bye 1st chapter tomorrow

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Chapter 1
''Who are you?''

Sarai was sweeping the floor. ''Faster! Faster! Faster! Work harder , dummie!'' The guards kicked her legs and she fell on the cold stony ground. ''Why are you doing this to me? My dad is a savior. He is a great man. He shouldn't be hated. He has to be respected!'' Sarai got up. '' I am done.'' ''Then go to your cell. GO!'' A guard started laughing at Sarai. She couldn't handle it. She ran to her cell and the guards locked her up. ''I'll escape..I'll escape..I'll escape...'' Sarai kept promising herself. She took a small rock that layed on the ground and drew a line on the stony wall. Here , and there goes another one . There we go.''HEY HEY HEY! Don't you dare draw on the walls! Do you want to clean it up? Huh? Get up and make me a martini.'' A guard cought her drawing the escape plan. Yes , the ESCAPE PLAN. But he couldn't see what it was. Oh you don't know how badly she wanted to escape , just run away and find her parents. Live safely. No society. ''What's taking so long? Get out ! Where's my martini?! '' The guard couldn't wait any longer. Sarai kicked the door and a guard opened it. ''Don't kick around doors , dummie. Now go to the kitchen. Ask Jamie for the recipe.'' Jamie is a cook at the kitchen. He can't cook at all. The slaves have found plenty of his hair in their food. Anyways , Sarai went to the kitchen. ''What ya looking for , Sa?'' Jamie asked. ''Don't call me that. What's the martini recipe? Tell me. Quick.'' ''Woahhh , don't be harsh. Let me see.'' Jamie took a note from the recipe book. ''Here , Sa.'' Sarai got out of control. ''That's not my name! Stop it , Jamie.'' She grabbed the note and went to the table to make a martini for the guard. After Sarai was done , she left the martini recipe on the table and started walking near her cell , where the guard was wating for her. ''Get back to your cell.'' The guard quickly grabbed the martini and started sipping it like he hasn't drank a martini for five days. He drinks those every day. Sarai was walking near her cell , and then she saw a guy. He was standing in front of her door and it looked like he was waiting for something. White hair , scarf , eyepatch. ''Who are you? What are you doing near my cell?'' Sarai was confused. ''I saw your escape plan. It's pretty good. Want to escape together?'' The guy asked her. ''Yes. But what's your name?'' ''Gryphon. Gryphon Kishitani. Nice to meet you.''

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soz its long

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hah
Gryphon's personality is perfect
you aced it
11/10
nice chapter
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oh why thank you

Basgetti a dit :
hah
Gryphon's personality is perfect
you aced it
11/10
nice chapter
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oh nice chapter!
keep it up ;)
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Austejuxs a dit :
oh nice chapter!
keep it up ;)

glad you liked it

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