yey first character c:
this character mostly based off my tfm costume and personality

Name : Suzume Tanaka
Appearance :
Gender: female
Age: 16
Personality: Athelic, curious, joyful, honest and caring.
Backstory : Hey everyone! I'm Suzume Tanaka! I was born on Dececember 13 1999 if ya don't bother! In flashback, my mom died in 2009... she died for unknown reason. So did my dad died as well in 2014, I know the cause of his died. When my dad and me went to a forest, most of the cats attacked us, he threwed up a sacrifise, luckily i escaped but my dad did'nt, so that's how he died. I also have a sister, but I don't have any brothers or younger ages in my family. My sister is gone, I think she died. I'm just like Hisaka, I live alone as well. So thats all the I'm going to say here!
Other powers : don't really know what to put, mind for some examples?
Suzume will be a side protagonist.

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Side Antagonist


Name: Rei Arize
Appearance:
Gender: Female

Age: 21

Personality: Disconsolate/ Depressed

Backstory: (I'll do first person perspective-ish) My name is Rei Arize. I used to be a normal person, just being myself. Until Valerie Oshrio took over our government. I had almost turned into a beggar, living on the fringes of life. Then, someone came to me and said Valerie wanted to see me, so I complied. I ended being some sort of servant in the shadows, forcing to do 'dirty' work. If I try to 'run away' from what I'm forced to do, i'll end up with death. I guess this is my fate, then...

Other powers/Elemental Magic: (Maybe Water?)

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yey first character c:
this character mostly based off my tfm costume and personality

Name : Suzume Tanaka
Appearance :
Gender: female
Age: 16
Personality: Athelic, curious, joyful, honest and caring.
Backstory : Hey everyone! I'm Suzume Tanaka! I was born on Dececember 13 1999 if ya don't bother! In flashback, my mom died in 2009... she died for unknown reason. So did my dad died as well in 2014, I know the cause of his died. When my dad and me went to a forest, most of the cats attacked us, he threwed up a sacrifise, luckily i escaped but my dad did'nt, so that's how he died. I also have a sister, but I don't have any brothers or younger ages in my family. My sister is gone, she probably died in my thought. I'm just like Hisaka, I live alone as well. So thats all the I'm going to say here!
Other powers : don't really know what to put, mind for some examples?
Suzume will be a side protagonist.

Accepted! Although I would appreciate if you town down the bright pink a bit??
Also, I hope you don't mind me changing the backstory up a little (grammatical issues) since bad grammar in paragraphs bother me.
and as for the other powers, you can see in the parenthesis is says "elemental magic". Meaning, you can be an elemental wizard. For example Hisaka (main character has to have a power duh (jkjk)) is an earth + water wizard. I think a fire elemental would fit Suzume's personality

1. Alright then. I just going to say i used the generator so the customize will be a bit diffrent.
updated version :


2. I forgot to mention about that I'm not an expert in grammers, sorry, my bad!

3. Alright then! Suzume's element will be fire! Thanks for that!

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Joining! :D
Name (include surname please): Nick Xawyer (Yesh,weird surname,but i'll go with it..)
Appearance (include a picture):
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Quiet,Angry,Sad (sometimes angry,sometimes sad,because of what happened in the past)
Bio/Backstory (optional): (First Preson style as others did) Hello. My name is Nick Xawyer. I was born 19. 11. 1999. Dark times.. My father died even before i get to meet him. My mother died when i was 5. I was forced to hide in shadows,and sometimes steal things to eat. I learned things the hard way,and i survived. I always carry my rune knife with me (refference at the end),that i got from my best friend. He also got killed,when i was looking for his knife,because he droped it somewhere. I have lots of scars. One on my right arm in the shape of lightning bolt,one on my chest,which almost killed me,and one over my eye,but i can stil see. I'm forever sick with a weird kind of sickness,which is making me weak,when it comes. I alwas cough blood and it hurts. No cure wasn't found yet..
Other powers?(Elemental magic only (for now)): Lightning? (Please!)

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Joining! :D
Name (include surname please): Nick Xawyer (Yesh,weird surname,but i'll go with it..)
Appearance (include a picture):
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Quiet,Angry,Sad (sometimes angry,sometimes sad,because of what happened in the past)
Bio/Backstory (optional): (First Preson style as others did) Hello. My name is Nick Xawyer. I was born 19. 11. 1956. Dark times.. My father died even before i get to meet him. My mother died when i was 5. I was forced to hide in shadows,and sometimes steal things to eat. I learned things the hard way,and i survived. I always carry my rune knife with me (refference at the end),that i got from my best friend. He also got killed,when i was looking for his knife,because he droped it somewhere. I have lots of scars. One on my right arm in the shape of lightning bolt,one on my chest,which almost killed me,and one over my eye,but i can stil see. I'm forever sick with a weird kind of sickness,which is making me weak,when it comes. I alwas cough blood and it hurts. No cure wasn't found yet..
Other powers?(Elemental magic only (for now)): Lightning? (Please!)

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His knife ref(I tried my best):

Sorry, I'm not going to accept this one. It's not entirely your fault though. I think that not everyone's life should be miserable and tragic, because in reality, it's not. Also, you didn't specify whether he's a protagonist or antagonist, and the year is off. Because my fanfic takes place in present time, that would make your character 58 years old. (oh my gosh I just realized you made his birthday my birthday)

New chapter coming out very soon :D

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Joining! :D
Name (include surname please): Nick Xawyer (Yesh,weird surname,but i'll go with it..)
Appearance (include a picture):
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Quiet,Angry,Sad (sometimes angry,sometimes sad,because of what happened in the past)
Bio/Backstory (optional): (First Preson style as others did) Hello. My name is Nick Xawyer. I was born 19. 11. 1956. Dark times.. My father died even before i get to meet him. My mother died when i was 5. I was forced to hide in shadows,and sometimes steal things to eat. I learned things the hard way,and i survived. I always carry my rune knife with me (refference at the end),that i got from my best friend. He also got killed,when i was looking for his knife,because he droped it somewhere. I have lots of scars. One on my right arm in the shape of lightning bolt,one on my chest,which almost killed me,and one over my eye,but i can stil see. I'm forever sick with a weird kind of sickness,which is making me weak,when it comes. I alwas cough blood and it hurts. No cure wasn't found yet..
Other powers?(Elemental magic only (for now)): Lightning? (Please!)

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His knife ref(I tried my best):

Sorry, I'm not going to accept this one. It's not entirely your fault though. I think that not everyone's life should be miserable and tragic, because in reality, it's not. Also, you didn't specify whether he's a protagonist or antagonist, and the year is off. Because my fanfic takes place in present time, that would make your character 58 years old. (oh my gosh I just realized you made his birthday my birthday)

New chapter coming out very soon :D

Okay,screw it.
I will edit the thing. Will you accept it after i correct it? Please c:
And oh my! I just came up with a random date xD
And,you can put him where you want. Customize it how you want,i don't care,just accept it and write awesome stories! :D

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Joining! :D
Name (include surname please): Nick Xawyer (Yesh,weird surname,but i'll go with it..)
Appearance (include a picture):
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Personality: Quiet,Angry,Sad (sometimes angry,sometimes sad,because of what happened in the past)
Bio/Backstory (optional): (First Preson style as others did) Hello. My name is Nick Xawyer. I was born 19. 11. 1956. Dark times.. My father died even before i get to meet him. My mother died when i was 5. I was forced to hide in shadows,and sometimes steal things to eat. I learned things the hard way,and i survived. I always carry my rune knife with me (refference at the end),that i got from my best friend. He also got killed,when i was looking for his knife,because he droped it somewhere. I have lots of scars. One on my right arm in the shape of lightning bolt,one on my chest,which almost killed me,and one over my eye,but i can stil see. I'm forever sick with a weird kind of sickness,which is making me weak,when it comes. I alwas cough blood and it hurts. No cure wasn't found yet..
Other powers?(Elemental magic only (for now)): Lightning? (Please!)

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His knife ref(I tried my best):

Sorry, I'm not going to accept this one. It's not entirely your fault though. I think that not everyone's life should be miserable and tragic, because in reality, it's not. Also, you didn't specify whether he's a protagonist or antagonist, and the year is off. Because my fanfic takes place in present time, that would make your character 58 years old. (oh my gosh I just realized you made his birthday my birthday)

New chapter coming out very soon :D

Okay,screw it.
I will edit the thing. Will you accept it after i correct it? Please c:
And oh my! I just came up with a random date xD
And,you can put him where you want. Customize it how you want,i don't care,just accept it and write awesome stories! :D

Maybe??
I would suggest you send it to me in a PM.
Anyhow...
I'm sorry for being inactive on this ^^;
to kind of make up for it I updated the prologue to be much longer (and better, of course)

Thanks for the link, now here is the new render for Rei:

Wish I could apply but I don't have a way to do a ref on my kindle and my computers broke

Side-Antagonist? o:
Name: Robin Jayebrew
Appearance:
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Personality: Malevolent, Clever, and Tricky.
Bio/Backstory (optional): Banished from his previous home for a misplaced murder, he now wanders randomly. He's a winter lover, and not affected much by the cold. Despite being framed for killing, he loves messing around with others. However, he would never purposely kill someone.
Other powers?: Ice and Shadow magic
Other Info: His eyes are extremely easy to notice. They're a bright pink-red color, and someone could easily get lost in the evil warmth they bare by looking into them. He often refers to his parents as "dead," though they are really alive. In his eyes, they are dead, because they hadn't even tried to defend him in court.

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Side-Antagonist? o:
Name: Robin Jayebrew
Appearance:
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Personality: Malevolent, Clever, and Tricky.
Bio/Backstory (optional): Banished from his previous home for a misplaced murder, he now wanders randomly. He's a winter lover, and not affected much by the cold. Despite being framed for killing, he loves messing around with others. However, he would never purposely kill someone.
Other powers?: Ice and Shadow magic
Other Info: His eyes are extremely easy to notice. They're a bright pink-red color, and someone could easily get lost in the evil warmth they bare by looking into them.

accepted~
and with that all character slots are now closed.
I might have to edit chapter 2 for it to make sense dang it

well you'll have to wait until the weekend
I'm pretty busy until then :3

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well you'll have to wait until the weekend
I'm pretty busy until then :3

sob
I'm never online on the weekeeeeeends
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I finished chapter two!
cLIFFHANGER HELL YEAH
[/#.]
[#chapter 2]

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"Please, let me take a little break. I'll be content with just five minutes! I promise I'll get right back to work, in fact-"
A blueish gray mouse was on her knees, the polished floors burning at her legs, despite being covered by a pale gray skirt. Her matching gray hair cascaded over a mask of a silver shade, designed with small gray swirls.
A black mouse, covered in armor, stood over her. His mouth curled into a smirk. "Oh? You want to take a break? I don't think Valerie would approve of that. But..."
"You let me off, then?" Blue eyes shone under a grand chandelier.
"You wish! You'd better get back to work, or else." The armored guard swung his foot, sending the female mouse flying across the hall, groaning and close-eyed, her curly hair spread across the marble tile. The gray mask was knocked off her face, yet there didn't seem to be a difference in her appearance. After a few seconds, a groan escaped her mouth.
Her eyes became fogged, as she slowly stood up, wincing at the stinging pain in her side.
"You." She spat, "You think I'm no better than a peasant, do you? A weakling, a servant who can be bossed around! I'm no weakling, I can assure you that. I'm Rei, and I do wish you to address me so." The black-furred mouse who kicked her shuffled backwards as Rei advanced. "My fate will not be sealed here or now. But yours will. I'm going to send you to hell!"
"No... please, spare me."
"Oh, you'd like to be spared?" Rei mocked, "I don't think Valerie would approve of that."
Mist swirled around her body and dark turbulent water formed at the tip of her fingers.
"Die." Rei raised her hands and a fountain of pressured water sliced at the guard, shattering the armor and sending the wet lump of fur he was flying. The water disappeared as she lowered her arms and the black mouse landed with a soft thud.
"Goodbye~" She sang in a singsong voice as she strolled out of the corridor, leaving behind the male mouse, and her mask.
She hadn't even noticed one of the arched windows was covered with small crystals of ice, hiding behind them a cold pair of pink eyes...watching her every move.
[/#chapter 2]

ROBIN, FUCK YEAH

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well you'll have to wait until the weekend
I'm pretty busy until then :3

sob
I'm never online on the weekeeeeeends
E//

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[#.]
I finished chapter two!
cLIFFHANGER HELL YEAH
[/#.]
[#chapter 2]

Spoiler

"Please, let me take a little break. I'll be content with just five minutes! I promise I'll get right back to work, in fact-"
A blueish gray mouse was on her knees, the polished floors burning at her legs, despite being covered by a pale gray skirt. Her matching gray hair cascaded over a mask of a silver shade, designed with small gray swirls.
A black mouse, covered in armor, stood over her. His mouth curled into a smirk. "Oh? You want to take a break? I don't think Valerie would approve of that. But..."
"You let me off, then?" Blue eyes shone under a grand chandelier.
"You wish! You'd better get back to work, or else." The armored guard swung his foot, sending the female mouse flying across the hall, groaning and close-eyed, her curly hair spread across the marble tile. The gray mask was knocked off her face, yet there didn't seem to be a difference in her appearance. After a few seconds, a groan escaped her mouth.
Her eyes became fogged, as she slowly stood up, wincing at the stinging pain in her side.
"You." She spat, "You think I'm no better than a peasant, do you? A weakling, a servant who can be bossed around! I'm no weakling, I can assure you that. I'm Rei, and I do wish you to address me so." The black-furred mouse who kicked her shuffled backwards as Rei advanced. "My fate will not be sealed here or now. But yours will. I'm going to send you to hell!"
"No... please, spare me."
"Oh, you'd like to be spared?" Rei mocked, "I don't think Valerie would approve of that."
Mist swirled around her body and dark turbulent water formed at the tip of her fingers.
"Die." Rei raised her hands and a fountain of pressured water sliced at the guard, shattering the armor and sending the wet lump of fur he was flying. The water disappeared as she lowered her arms and the black mouse landed with a soft thud.
"Goodbye~" She sang in a singsong voice as she strolled out of the corridor, leaving behind the male mouse, and her mask.
She hadn't even noticed one of the arched windows was covered with small crystals of ice, hiding behind them a cold pair of pink eyes...watching her every move.
[/#chapter 2]

ROBIN, FUCK YEAH

well
it took me a good ten minutes to think of adding that last sentence