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Hi! This is Anchored Cannons, The Rebellion. This was a quick little Fanfiction made the 27th, of December 2015. My name is Eeveewings, and i'm a tiny little creature who's trying to improve on writing! Thanks for looking through this... and have a good day! Forms Form To Make Mouse: Pictures for refs. OR Links. Ref: Name: Age: (optional) Gender: Personality: Likes: (2+) Dislikes: (3+) Rebellion?: CLOSED Extras: Eeveewings ![]() ![]() Name: Ev Age: 19 Gender: Female Personality: Bipolar each one is each sigh of her bipolarness - Hostile, Chill - - Nice, Sweet, Hiding - Likes: Dark things, Rain, Manga, FOOD / Hiding under things,Sweaters , Light things Dislikes: Each side dislikes each others likes. so uhh... Extra: She will switch sides, Rebellion?: Leader. Magickitten ![]() Name: Aksai Boki (only its family call Aksai 'Magiac' because Magiac doesn't tell its real name to others, even if it was its own best friend. Age: Hidden, but 17 Personality: Nice and always saying sarcastically to others who knew Magiac for a month. Cautious and not sure but little nice to mouse who Magiac met for few days. Likes: Likes taking a nap, spying to get information Dislikes: Hates loud mouse, awful dirty and dark places, sunny days Rebellion?: Yes Magiac loves survivor, and even if Magiac could get injured a lot, Magiac still thinks it was fun. Extras: Magiac is a vampire, but tries hard not to take others' blood. Magiac learns fast whenever meeting a mouse, but still cautious until Magiac knew them for a month. Csonewforyou ![]() Name : Chuck Age : 18 Gender : Male Personality : Patient,Expresssional,Smart,Brave Likes : His dark chocolate,and mice. Dislikes : Parties,totems,a "think outside the box" joke. Rebellion : Maybe,but yes. Extras : Had a good moves for upcoming cannons. Bublamorce Ref: sorry,i started drawing him (it's my oc),and i'm almost finished. But i'm too lazy to draw a mouse version ![]() Warning,big! ![]() Normal mouse ref (ignore the black hair at the end,it's supposed to show that it's not there): ![]() Name: Okaru Age: (optional) Unknown,seems to be one of the survivor veterans,acts like he is 26 Gender: Male Personality: Nice to others,Helpful,Sometimes quiet (mainly when injured),Hard on noobs/new mice Likes: (2+) Music (mainly electro),Survivor,Bootcamp,Having all the power,Having fun Dislikes: (3+) Being injured,Being cornered,Noobs that act like pros,Being captured Rebellion?: ( Yes / No ) Yes,survivor lover Extras: He has a little different fur and skin,that make his wounds hurt even more that they would (but he loves survivor,so it doesn't stop him!),Rumours go around,that he was badly injured in survivor,so that's why he has robotical hands,Can have normal hands or survivor specialized gear,He can transform his hands,if he needs the other version 30 posts ✓ 50 posts ✓ 100 posts X ᴬᶫᵐᵒˢᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ 130 posts X Chapter 1: -_______12 Mice Left For Vampires._______- As a new mouse came in, Ev knew that it would be slightly harder, but she didn't mind she was slightly pro-ish. The map loaded in. It was a vampire map. "R. I. P." She muttered, watching a mouse turn into a vampire. "I'm... vamp? Man." The mouse scattered, chasing mice all around. Ev watched, laughing historically as the tiny mice ran from the ugly vamp. Even though she knew the mice under was pretty, but the vamp skin was just... gross. It looked like a bat goat to Ev. Ev found a tricky spot and stood there, waiting for a vamp to come to her side of the map. "So uhh...-" Ev read the mouse that joined user. "Uh Magiac is it? Anyways, Welcome." Ev's words seemed blunt, but she wasn't rude unlike the other mice. "U-uh...Hi?" Magiac stood there to say, then turned to chase the mouse teasing Magiac, "Gah!" Ev jumped back and started running away from a fresh vamp mouse. 4...3...2...1... "Oooh I'm shammie!" Ev laughed, placing down her companion cube Ev placed a portal in front of the cube, where most of the mice were standing, then she quickly placed another, by the edge. To death. Half of the population still stood in the map, and Ev had put a cannon through the death portal, it teleporting to the line of mice on the wood. 2 jumped. Magiac, and mouse who was a guest. "Nice, nice." Ev clapped, and quickly spawned the portal in front of the guest mouse, ending their life on that map. "Spare or don't care?" Ev asked, waiting for the small mouse called Magiac to answer. "I...uhh...don't car- KUH!?" Magiac said, but before finishing, she got flown off the map my Ev's cannon, Leaving Ev to sit for 3 seconds to laugh. "Haha, pfft." Ev said, flying around the map with her black shaman wings. "You-...re...goo-ood..." Magiac's compliment faded as the purple void took her in. taking the 3 seconds quickly away. Chapter 2: -_______Gold Risen From Earth_______- Ev waited, the next round rolled in, and it seemed a new mouse came in each map, Oh whatever...It's not like they'll hurt me through spirits. Hah, doubt they know what they are. Ev thought, she was building determination. "Oh... I'm a shaman?" The shaman looked up, they're time was boldly ticking and so where they. "Hmm..." The shaman looked around, throwing cannons about everywhere, killing a 3rd of mice each time. "I'll just let them settle in... " They threw a cannon off, it danced away only killing was seemed to be a paper ball. He left off onto the edge, placing the orange portal down on the wood platform. Then walking onto it, placing the blue one above them, ending in an infinite loop. "Spare... eh?" Ev laughed, noticing Magiac hiding under the wood platform. Every morning Ev would come up to see the survivor platforms, The sun would glaze upon the witty mice and leave a beautiful glossy look, Ev loved it, it warmed her. "Don't ya like the sun?" Ev asked, Magiac, who replied with a soft ‘no’ head nod. "Just uhh... too bright. Too hot." She 'complained.' "O-okay...?" Ev walked away, clearing mad. She loved it, it was practically an insult. But something told her to like the mouse. Ev looked a little closer. She saw the Shaman's user: Chuck. "So, you're not new...?" Ev questioned him, a little distraction helps. "I suppose you could say that." He said, clearly not distracted. "Oh...?" Ev sighed, watching the time quickly count down to 30 seconds. "So uh, Ev is it...? Oh look out! Ehehehh..." Chuck chuckled at his cannon hitting Ev off. "Back fired." Ev laughed, flying up from the cannon to the edge of the small platform above her. Time began to end, as Chuck sighed. Ev had won with 3 other mice. 3...2...1... Chapter 3: -_______3 is a pact, packed with MARSHMALLOWS!_______- Ev sighed, knowing that the last shaman's work wasn't their best. The next map was a double shaman map. It was Ev and a Souris. The Souris was afk and bursted into bubbles, Ev was left to kill the mice. "Pfft HAHA!" She laughed as multiple mice fell trying to get to her platform. Ev watched as Magiac, Chuck, and a 'different' mouse where together, watching Ev closely. Ev focused on the mice trying to get to her platform, she shot her cannon, neatly decorated with wings and a shaman tail decor. As the mice flew off, and some jumped, Ev flew down by the three mice, observing the new one, it's 'arms' were some robotic machines. "Different...and interesting." Ev thought, blowing the population of the jumping mice out. "Eh, I'll spare you." Ev smiled, placing a small fire down and eating marshmallows. "Oh...? Okay." Magiac smiled slightly, throwing a marshmallow down along with a piece of Swiss. "Don't mind if I do~" Chuck said, roasting some of Ev's sweet marshmallows. "So uh...O...taku?" Ev laughed in her mind, staring at the mouses firm expression. "Okaru..." He grunted, his voice mushy after swallowing the marshmallow hard. "Oh! Aha..." She awkwardly laughed, watching the time click down to 0. Chapter 4: -_______Camping N' Shamming_______- MAGIAC'S POV As Ev, Chuck, Okaru and I talked through the next vampire map, we cautiously watched as a mouse came up to us... or rather, a vampire mouse. Ev took my hand paw, bolting me up on a platform, my thick fur swayed heavily, and the two other mice followed us. As each map went by, the four of us became friends, I was still cautious but I was trusting Ev, and Chuck, ANNND Okaru. It had become the time of day where all the mice would sleep, or stay up a little late, just to practice. Ev had suggest all four of us camp out in a survivour of our own. Chuck had also took part of this, taken that he's pretty smart. "Y'know, how about we train here, then rest in my Utility?" Ev suggested, we all nodded, Dodging her colourful shaman-based cannons. I hated them kinda, the wings would always smack my face, diverting my attention, then I get knocked off by the stupid cannon again, swiftly falling into the void. After we trained, we all walked to Ev's Utility, It was a snowy wonder land, the snow sparked freshly and she began to put down some fire wood, then making a fire. We had marshmallows again. "Today was fun.." I smiled, resting on a tree branch. "Yeah really!" Okaru agreed, I could sense the pain in his 'arm', he flinched every time he picked up his marshmallow stick. "Ev.. could you ch-change the map please?" Chuck suggested, shivering too, "Yeah, just wait." She smirked, changing it into a 2 room map. One was for Me and Ev, the other for Chuck and Okaru. "Thank you Ev." Okaru smiled. He seemed nice. And Chuck nodded in agreement. "As always. Anyways, I'm-ma hit the hay." She said pulling out her own mattress to sleep on. I began to do the same. Chapter 5: -_______Confusions... and ...a cat?_______- "Ready to pack up and train again?" Okaru asked them all, they all nodded. "Why of course, let me search for a low room" Chuck began to look on the room search. Ev leaned in, suggesting one or two survivour maps. Magiac began to fix her and Ev's mattresses. "Ah! This one. It's low mice right?" Ev asked, showing them the board. "Sure!" They all agreed, and proceeded to the room. "Aha! More mice for Mikaou to eat! Nomnomnom~!" A strange 'mouse' named Mikaou came up to Magiac, nibbling on their tail. "What...?" Okaru looked at the mouse-cat. "Strange... is it even mouse?" Chuck looked further into the being. "Aye, get of Magiac!" Ev said, taking the mouse by one hand and plopping onto the ground, then setting her foot onto it. "Owwwie... Mikoau hurt...a lot..." They whined, flicking their tail. As the next map rolled in, Ev looked at the one cat mouse, then looking at Magiac's determined eyes, as well as chucks and Okaru's. "Ev... stay determined." Okaru encouraged her. "I'll... try." Ev nodded, looking at chuck, who also slightly nodded to her. After a few maps rolled in, Chuck became shaman, swiftly darting Ev and more mice go. "Hah! Serves you right. Mikaou's back hurts now because of you!" Mikaou's cheeks puffed and she darted a cannon, letting Okaru get hit. "Hnng, at least I'm shaman next..." He mumbled, mapping out his plan. After at least 1-3 mice were down, it was only . . .
Chuck grumbled, aiming successful cannons, but letting the mouse bounce on them didn't help. He wouldn't let them be spared. Even though Mikaou's stupid squeaky voice and her encouragement for herself didn't help that. By the next map, all the mice began to see big text appear in the skies. [Moderator] Reconstruction in survivor, please leave. Thank you! ;-) "Hmm... weird..." Ev said looking over as the next map swiftly came through. "We should head to my utility again...okay?" Ev said, leaning to the edge of the map. And off they went. Chapter 6: -_______Ev is different...?_______- "I wonder what they're doing... maybe they're taking off totems? Yeah!" Ev cheered at her silly mumble, having the other three just look at her a bit. "Ev...?" Magiac began. "Y-yes?" Ev looked up, her glossy eye filled with determination struck Magiac's attention quickly. "The forums... won't work..." Magiac pointed out, the three checked. "T-they won't...?" Ev asked, even though she proved it true. "Yeah... they won't" Chuck said looking up, then at Okaru to see if he had anything to say. "This is strange... REALLY strange... this never happened before...right?" Okaru asked, trying to recall his memory. Just then ― Knock, knock! Ev went up to her utility door. "Wh-who... is it?" She asked, hoping it was a construction mouse or something. "It's M-Mikaou... and... Mikaou's cold and wet... hnnnnng meeoww~" She whined, the rain had been so silent Ev didn't even notice. "Why are you meowing?" Chuck said getting to walk up to her. "We-ell... Mikaou's a cat! Meeooww! Heeya! Mikaou is the strongest cat and will eat ALL OF YOU!" She boldly introduced herself. "Well... come on in..." Ev said, quickly getting a towel for her. "Thank you... By the way... w-what are you're names... Mikoau dose'nt want to eat friends..." Mikaou asked them politely. Ev's heart struck, the word friend was rarely considered for her. "Well, I'm Okaru, this is Magiac, that's Ev, and over there is Chuck." Okaru answered. "Um... you're hair Ev...?" Magiac walked up to Ev, feeling her hair that was turning soft and lavender, take over her thick dark hair. "What about it?" Ev smiled, looking up at Magiac. "Hmm... this is different...w a y different Magiac thought, just smiling and replied. "Oh just, it's really nice." "T-thank you! Ev smiled greatly. "Well anyway, Mikaou thinks we should play around in Ev's really cute utility as shammies!" Mikaou danced around with her towel like a cape. "Why not? It sounds a lot like fun!" Ev said, beginning to put shaman accessories on everyone. They then played as Shamans, spawning anvil gods and many more, until night fell. Chapter 7: -_______Took away the perfect happy ending_______- EV(E)'S POV After days of me smiling and happy, I went to go try to see a survivour room, the option was gone. Stepping back multiple times slowly, my legs buckled, and soon, unbuckled to a fall, my breath became short and I came to be claustrophobic, I felt the side I call 'normal' numb the pain in my chest, and I got up, my eyes piercing, causing one to hurt. "Soon... they'll feel the pain of the cannon, I muttered under my breath, flipping my eyepatch, my black and white sight came to blind me, I quickly flip it down again to see colour. "Chuck, Magiac, Okaru!" I call out to them, they flip their little pretty faces to see me. "We're taking revenge. Survivour... is down, it's gone." I sigh, watching them widen their eyes. "What will we be called?" Chuck asked, seeing if I had an answer. "The Rebellion." I say, my voice serious. "Let's go." I say, walking to a vanilla room. The mice filled the area as we walked into the map, we farmed until I was shaman. This map is SO easy. But... they deserve this. Complaining rats took away...me. I thought, placing a companion cube on the cheese. I pull a tight string on my friends. The balloon on the other end flying and hitting a wood roof, higher than I could fly. Shooting the mice with my cannon, I give the signal for Chuck, Magiac, And Okaru to get the cheese as I build a bridge to the cheese, taking off the companion cube, then a bridge to the hole. As the next map rolled in, I told the three, this is what we'll do. Until survivour comes BACK. Chapter 8: -_______ Anvil God._______- Many weeks of doing this evil plan, seemingly, The Rebellion got off Scot-free, It was until the day Ev became normal, She did it over board. She used the... Anvil God. And it took many days to get it to go back to it's Hell. "All who gain and support the Rebellion, come to Mouse Headquarters!" A loud voice called over all of Transformice. Marlee wondered about the Transformice Headquarters, She quietly followed the gang. "This makes Mikaou so angry!" Mikaou cried out, watching as Ev did nothing to show care. "What are we going to do? Ev.. you brought out the Anvil God!" Chuck yelled at her, yet, she kept walked forward. "They'll let us go. None of us got reported before." She used no tone, and by the time they got there, Magiac began to rant too, though, she seem not the ranting type to Ev. "How could they not let us be arrested, you got us into this, Ev! Get us out." So, Ev began into the the huge building, her heart raced, but she didn't like Racing, she liked Survivour, and thats what she was fighting for. "Hm... Ev...Eeveewings, Correct?" Tigrounette looked up at her, she spotted other Admins, Moderators, and even Map Teams, they nodded, and so did she. "You made the Anvil God, what a shameful choice." Zou sighed, writing down on papers. "Correct, Zou." Ev sighed too, fixing her hair in place. It seemed many minutes, the mice whispered, and wrote down words, passing them around, It seemed like an hour before they spoke, but one said something that Ev thanked. "You have ... more chances, Alright? Same for your team." One of the moderators called out. Ev's eyes widened, and her heartbeat slowed to a steady pace. "How!? Man, never thought that would happen." She sighed. "Thank you.. I'll think better nex-" "Go now." They ordered her, and she dashed out, a wide grin on her face. The gang looked up at her, expecting bad news. "We're free. They just took one of our chances." Ev sighed, sharing her cheese with them. "Thank gosh, I was scared The Rebellion would be banned for life!" Marlee gasped, hugging Ev. "Thanks, Marlee. It means a lot." Magiac stood beside Ev, still disappointed in her friend. "Yeah, thanks." Okaru agreed, walking torwards the two, flinching from his robtics. Chuck nodded, "We better go, we most likely won't want to be around." He smirked, heading off torwards Mikaou, who had began to run with happiness. Okaru followed after Chuck, nodding. "C'mon, Ev, Marlee." Magiac whispered to the girls, and the three giggled, watching as Mikoau would fall or run in circles constantly. Chapter 9: -_______Strike 2_______- Baseball, the year was rolling around to it once again, and everyone would watch with Ev to get their minds off of their deeds. Ev always felt guilt when ever the batter would miss. "Strike 1!" The words haunted her brain at night. But casually, she would eat it off or something. Today was the day Zou left. What was it? Was it because she had to be dealing with the Anvil God, instead of thanking the mice more? Had it been Ev's fault, once more? She was only a silly 19 year old who couldn't even afford herself a bigger house for the Rebellion. "Alright, day two.." Ev squeaked to herself. Casually, she would cook breakfast with Magiac, but they had gone out to vote. Chuck, Okaru, and Mikaou too. She was alone, and the egg she had be frying was brown by now. "What's gotten into me.." She yelled at herself, hitting her head against a wall. The pain tingling her patched eye, and the bruise began to fleet into pain. She grunted and ignore the pain as she laid on the couch, watching TV. "I could always run. More mice are supporting the Rebellion... besides the mods." She sighed. "Maybe.." She smirked. "I'll do it." She ran out the door, to the election polls. Marlee sighed as Ev was going once to the Transformice Headquarters. "Why does she always have to bring in violence?" Marlee asked Magiac, who shrugged and sat in the waiting hall instead of outside, like last time. Chuck told Okaru the whole thing, after all, he stood back, being stuck in the medal detector for a looonnnggg time. "So she fought with one of our haters? Then she got.." Okaru asked, slightly confused. "Yeah, It was kinda funny, but stupid of her. She needs to fix her additude." Chuck sighed, watching as Mikaou walked over. "Magiac told Mikaou to stop chewing on herrrr..." She whined, eating a minnow, which was kinda big. The two shuddered at the fish, and began to get up, and they all sat next to Magiac, and Marlee. "If she gets in trouble again..." Marlee didn't finish, her shoulders tense from the thought. "She might get pushed out into therapy." Magiac sighed. "What about being banned? She'll be stuck in jail! She was out onl-" Okaru got intterupted by Chuck. "They can't just ban a mouse these days" He muttered, watching Marlee pat Mikaou as she yawned, laying her lap. "I'll take her home." Okaru sighed, nudging Mikaou up. "Mika...ou... is so ti..tired.." She yawned, making a cute mew noise while so. The whole time trying to get Mikaou out the door without passing out was enough for Ev to come back. "Stupid moderators. We were only fighting because she thought I wasn't fit for the job!" She yelled, running out of the hall, making Mikaou suddenly wake up a little. "We...go home?" She mumbled half asleep. "Yeah, c'mon guys." Marlee sighed, she felt like she was apart of the Rebellion, but truthfully, she was a supporter. She let Mikaou's weight push down on her side as she hoisted her up on her feet. Magiac helped too, and Okaru and Chuck talked about how mad Ev was. "It's just... just because you don't like them... doesn't mean they can't do what they wanna do." Okaru sighed, looking back at Chuck. "She must be trying to get Ev banned. After all, she has only one chance left." Chuck sighed. "Although, shes too young to be put in jail. She'll be forced in bootcamp." He sighed, Magiac glancing at him. "Don't tell me she'll have to wear those ugly brown uniforms..." Marlee spoke for Magiac. "Yea...h...uglY!!" Mikaou yelled through a sleepy face. Okaru looked up. "Bootcamp is fun for practice. But when you seriously are stuck to doing it.. I suppose its repetitive." He sighed. All of them got to the Utility House. They watched baseball with Ev. Her anger slightly gone. Though, her face went paler than her white fur, her ears dropping and her eye widening. "Strike 2!" Chapter 10: -_______Failed and Shout_______- "I can't take it!" She screamed at the crew, Mikaou wailing in the background. "Ev- Ev... just calm down.." Marlee tried to hand her a ice pack, just for it to be slammed on the ground by Ev. "Aaugh.... it...OWww..." Ev cried, holding her eye, the patch gone, and fresh white fur was uncovered. Half of her face was bruised, giving her a lavender tinted face. "Ev- Evv...... what if the doctor can't do anything? Mikaou wonders! What if your skull cracked? Mikaou is sad..." Mikaou questioned, sniffling. "She'll be okay. Every game resets," Chuck stated, placing her dark purple hair out of her hand's way. "But she left right when she died, so what if she doesn't reset this pain?" Okaru emerged from the kitchen, handing Mikaou a saved minnow. Her tiny head shaking 'no.' "She'd heal." Magiac sighed, sitting by her feet as Ev wailed, the pain was enough with out the blow, but she had to be shot by a cannon in the head too. "I-I... can...mana...ge" She muttered. She had stopped wailing because the tips of her hair were lilac by now. She flinched intensely as she tried getting up. "No! Ev... don...ugh." Marlee tried stopping her as she limped to the kitchen. "What happened to my legs!?" She screamed, flopping onto a stool. "Doc said you should lie down, you had been burnt while knocked out by a fire a mouse made." Magiac answered. Ev glanced at her leg. "I'm just... surprised I cannoned myself." She scolded herself per usual. "He said you need to stay home. For at least another 2 days." Okaru read the doctors note, Chuck nodding. "Yeah, She also prescribed you fraises and cheese." He held a bottle of fraises and cheese. they were pill size, and they stopped pain and stress. "I'm glad." She sighed, cleaning the burn, groaning at every ragged wash of her wet cloth. "How about you guys go to something, I need to rest." She suggested, bandaging her burn, and wrapping a bandage around her head, placing her eyepatch on like nothing. "You sure?" Magiac asked. Ev nodded, taking her daily prescription. "It's late, so we'll just eat out?" Marlee suggested, Okaru and Chuck nodded. Mikaou sighed. "Mikaou thinks, what if Ev gets-" Interrupted by Ev, Mikaou's ears shot up. "I'm fine! Just go with them." She yelled, laying on the couch with her leg carefully placed. She seemed better after taking the fraise and cheese and cleaning up and bandaging. "Alright, alright." Chuck laughed at her attitude. "We'll go to a standard cafe." Okaru guessed, walking out with the other 4. Later, after the 90% of the gang left, Ev watched the news, boring stuff of cheese stolen and tribes invaded. Ev watched and tempted until she heard her name. "Ev wing, failing to breathe, had knocking herself out with her OWN cannon! A failed cannon shot had hit her, and she passed out. A mouse burned her too. She is doing okay." The reporter say through the pixel screen. Ev growled at the words. They had no right to talk about that! She sighed, eating CheesePockets and OJ until they had gotten home, she ended up sleeping through the rest of "The Walking Vampires." Chapter 11: -_______The pair of new shoes._______- Sneakers... they roamed against the hall. The hallway of nothingness, the blank walls filled with bright posters. What time had this been? Ev's tiny white ears twitched with anxiety. "Hey! Stop that!" A faint voice caught her eyes, "Huh?" Her squeaky voice echoed. The look of a blue hair mouse being pushed by a orange haired girl caught her eye. "W-wind... Stop!" The blue haired mouse shouted. "Really...you think of so?" This so-called Wind talked back, whipping around. She almost ran into Ev, although she darted to the right, falling into a line of lockers. "Ev! Make sure Maka doesn't go to any teachers, she'll learn that once or twice that it doesn't end!" Wind laughed, and Ev blink both of her shiny pink and blue eyes. The blue haired mouse, called Maka; stood up. " 'One day!' she'll get that no one likes her." The mouse spoke. "What if I like her, Maka?" Ev claimed. "Then you're just like the others." Maka glared at her, walking off towards a water fountain. Ev woke up, blinking for only one eye to see. "Another dream... dam-" "Morning Ev! You have a visitor." Okaru inturrupted her from her nap. Okaru exited from the room as soon then. "Ev! Hey there." The same voice Wind had from the dream, more mature, came from the darkness as Ev rose up to see the mouse. "Wind... Hi." Ev waved, sitting next to her. "How have you been?" Wind's voice was clearly cracking at the chance of pretending to be nice. "Fine, I guess." Ev stared into the mouse's mask's eyes for some sort of lying. Wind had been staring at her burn, Ev could tell by the tilt of the mask. "Nice burn there, where'd you get it? Oh wait I did it! Ha--" "You did?" Ev raised her voice. "Yup. The marshmallows were greeeaaaat!" Wind exaggerated, "Too bad you limped away as soon as you woke up, you have to keep it as a reminder now! Never, ever, leave a roun-" "I know." Ev paused, sighing heavily. "Why are you here?" She finished, looking into the mask of Wind. "Oh. Well... I though me and some people from our old school could have a reunion." Wind muttered, her voice sharp as she got easily mad at Ev, being mad too. "Oh. Who is it then?" Ev wondered, was Maka going to be there? Like in her dream? "Oh! Me, you, Maka, Crybaby, Luna..." Wind nodded. "Also, Chuck and Magiac... and Okaru-- those people, are out doing the whole rebellion thing. It's kinda cool, y'know? I give you props to that." Wind complimented, cringing after so. "Thanks..." Ev sighed. "We better go to see Maka and Luna, then." Ev got up, limping to the door. "Oh. Luna is sick, so it's just us 3." Wind reminded herself and Ev, going to the door. She noted Wind's red shoes. Then limped after her as she went outside. Maka greeted the two by the Atelier801's bar. "Hey guys." She called out, adjusting her black frames. "Maka! Hey, how are you?" Ev called out, not really happy at Wind's sight, but still exited to see her old schoolmate. "I'm great. What about you... and Wind?" Her voice seemingly hostile. "I'm fine... Wind is-" "Wind is great, how are you Plant?" Wind pushed at the 19 year old. "I'm fine, stop acting like a stupid 14 year old." She yelled back at Wind, the two exchanging dirty glances. "Anyway, I heard how Wind is still a wrecker and burned your leg. I'm surprised you didn't heal- Oh... you left- never mind..." Maka cut herself off. Ev nodded, walking into the bar with the two. "Uh. Table of three." Ev spoke to the fellow mouse, she leading the two upstairs. "Thanks." Maka nodded, taking her sit across from the two. "So! Maka... how have you been with your little plants and book stuff!? I heard you're even nerdier now!" Wind laughed, making Ev chuckle. "It's true.." She nodded, setting her flowerless crown on her head, not crooked. "Even better!" Wind finished her laughing. The waitress came by. "I'd like some hazelnut coffee... still kinda drowsy." Maka nodded, looking at Wind and Ev. "Oh... just something simple. Polka Pola." Ev smiled, darting her eyes at Wind. "Oh! Just getting me something that's red." She giggled, nudging Ev. "Now... coffee, what are YOU thinking!?" Wind laughing with Ev. Ev seemed to be a road, and Wind had rubbed off on her like a tire. "I don't know Wind-y." Maka grunted, looking at her menu. "NEVER call me that again." Wind seemed to growl, and by this time, Ev had already been setting her side of the table up. "Here you go girls..." The lady gave them all their drinks, Wind ending up with something with a bitter smell. "Now what would you like?" She continued. "Oh! Um... just... get me frosted waffles or something..." Maka rushed herself, busy fighting with wind before. "C h e e s e b u r g e r" Ev drooled, linking her soft white lips. "Eh, what shes having." Wind pointed her thumb at Ev, shaking the pepper on the counter after the waitress left, the top coming off, with the remaining pepper pouring out. "Whoops." "That was..." Maka stopped, expecting one of the two pals to finish her. "Wow... I though you too friends would finish-" "Heh, if anything I'm a lone-wolf." Ev laughed, walking off, not noticing Magiac watching. Chapter 12: -_______The fight lead to a cry_______- EV'S POV Constantly, regret fled through me. I knew what I said had hurt her, and the rest of the rebellion. By this time, I was on my own, bashing at mice. Had I not let my temper loose, I wouldn't have been here. In boot camp, the real thing. Earlier, I have found this tiny kid, he was lost and he seemed scared, I helped him out... that's a lie, kinda. I was hostile, but he said he had nowhere to live or parents. I decided... My friends are gone... my job is seriously just working at the shop, and well, I had decent cheese. I decided to adopt him. I wouldn't be his mom, i'm not fit for that, by maybe someone else could. By the time I was sent off for boot camp, he was in tears, and I had no one to trust. Besides... Maka! She'd help right? She acted strange when I pulled him up, but she decided to take him in, as his mother. And I was gone. Boot camp was strangely silent, and every time I failed, I could feel my tongue bruising as i bit it slightly. It seemed like it was my stress reliever. I hated boot camp, although.. it was my punishment. I had to do it. And i'd get little calls from the kid. His name was Dalton, and he was so caring for me. Had I actually made that choice to keep him, the weeks ago I had hatred towards the world? I didn't know, I couldn't decide, what was the world giving for me? Was it trying to make me give in? Surely not, if it was... would I have to at some point in time? That day I left, it seemed like the atmosphere was thick. The kid had been crying, and Magiac as yelling at me, and the kid. the same with the rest of the rebellion. Had they thought I was the traitor, although they were the ones not doing what we planned? It angered me, and I knew the kid was going to stay strong though that. Dalton hadn't been strong, when I found him, but a little caring had pushed his confidence. Sometimes, I wondered... what if I never found Dalton? Would the little thing still be crying a river everyday in that vanilla room? I couldn't stand those thoughts. And the day I had given his backpack for his school, his eyes lit up, and darted into the bus. It reminded me of myself. The fight felt like lava burning me, it was terrible. I had been taking no guilt, until now. Would they ever forgive me? I could hear they're words right now. "She was hanging with that bad influence ! She can't go to the boot camp with her leg!" Chuck would say. "It's punishment, the leg was the influence's fault." Okaru you suggest. "No. It's no ones fault..." Marlee would try to calm them down. "Mikaou misses Ev-" She would get interrupted by the steamed Magiac. "Shes a traitor! Don't feel pity." Magiac would defend they're hurtfulness I had caused. And Wind would be laughing, thinking it was funny that I walked off with my remark. "Heh, if anything I'm a lone-wolf." I would laugh, walking off. Not noticing Magiac watching me. This all happened because of that slight laugh and 6 words. Even if wind or Maka cared, I didn't blame anyone. Only myself. And now, look at me, i'm in boot camp. Although so... had I made the right choice to let Maka guide him correctly? 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Forms: wut? ;-; you mean being a vampire? Ref ![]() Name: Aksai Boki (only its family call Aksai 'Magiac' because Magiac doesn't tell its real name to others, even if it was its own best friend. Age: Hidden, but 17 Personality: Nice and always saying sarcastically to others who knew Magiac for a month. Cautious and not sure but little nice to mouse who Magiac met for few days. Likes: Likes taking a nap, spying to get information Dislikes: Hates loud mouse, awful dirty and dark places, sunny days Rebellion?: Yes Magiac loves survivor, and even if Magiac could get injured a lot, Magiac still thinks it was fun. Extras: Magiac is a vampire, but tries hard not to take others' blood. Magiac learns fast whenever meeting a mouse, but still cautious until Magiac knew them for a month. omg, im asking my own same oc for some fanfictions but i can't help- old habits- BTW U WRITE AWESOME :^) |
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Magickitten a dit : I'm sorry but uh I forgot gender in my forms XP so if you can add gender? (Even though I can tell Magiac doesn't have a correct gender.) I added it in. Thank you~~ I'm going to wait for more mice to come, before writing Chapter 1, If you don't mind ^ ^ ; E: And ty I try to write good okaoky |
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eeveewings a dit : Its okay. I'm always very patient, unless i realise that i wasted time, which is the only one way to make me flip **** so quickly. Anyway, DA CHAPTERS MOOAAARRRR I luv it doe :'3 Btw, Magiac is really fast, and can't be a shaman because it was a vampire. Its wings have also its fur like the snow leopard fluffy fur, which was the reason people cant see it was really a vampire and thinks it was just an outfit. The wings would always hide behind the back. I used to survive almost all of rounds in survivor a long time ago, so it's a good reason that Magiac was fast and could survive some moves easily. Unless the idiot Shaman does any totem like boxes, or all cannons, cheating. (Magiac will live in pure luckiness, because all shamans who does that are laggy, but still, can injure it doe. ) |
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I got tired of waiting so ye. Also sorry Magiac your vamp map failed and you got p0wned Chapter 1: -_______12 Mice Left For Vampires._______- As a new mouse came in, Ev knew that it would be slightly harder, but she didn't mind she was slightly pro-ish. The map loaded in. It was a vampire map. "R. I. P." She muttered, watching a mouse turn into a vampire. "I'm... vamp? Man." The mouse scattered, chasing mice all around. Ev watched, laughing historically as the tiny mice ran from the ugly vamp. Even though she knew the mice under was pretty, but the vamp skin was just... gross. It looked like a bat goat to Ev. Ev found a tricky spot and stood there, waiting for a vamp to come to her side of the map. "So uhh...-" Ev read the mouse that joined user. "Uh Magiac is it? Anyways, Welcome." Ev's words seemed blunt, but she wasn't rude unlike the other mice. "U-uh...Hi?" Magiac stood there to say, then turned to chase the mouse teasing Magiac, "Gah!" Ev jumped back and started running away from a fresh vamp mouse. 4...3...2...1... "Oooh I'm shammie!" Ev laughed, placing down her companion cube Ev placed a portal in front of the cube, where most of the mice were standing, then she quickly placed another, by the edge. To death. Half of the population still stood in the map, and Ev had put a cannon through the death portal, it teleporting to the line of mice on the wood. 2 jumped. Magiac, and mouse who was a guest. "Nice, nice." Ev clapped, and quickly spawned the portal in front of the guest mouse, ending their life on that map. "Spare or don't care?" Ev asked, waiting for the small mouse called Magiac to answer. "I...uhh...don't car- KUH!?" Magiac said, but before finishing, Magiac got flown off the map my Ev's cannon, Leaving Ev to sit for 3 seconds to laugh. "Haha, pfft." Ev said, flying around the map with her black shaman wings. "You-...re...goo-ood..." Magiac's compliment faded as the purple void took them in. taking the 3 seconds quickly away. Dernière modification le 1451352660000 |
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Forms : What....? Alright,It be just a...magic mouse... Ref : ![]() Name : Chuck Age : 18 Gender : Male Personality : Patient,Expresssional,Smart,Brave Likes : His dark chocolate,and mice. Dislikes : Parties,totems,a "think outside the box" joke. Rebellion : Maybe,but yes. Extras : Had a good moves for upcoming cannons. |
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eeveewings a dit : lmao that's so true i would try to act strong. btw, im not shy, just confident. x3 |
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I will join this amazing fanfic,when i get home I really like it Can you reserve me one mouse slot,please? Dernière modification le 1451323080000 |
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bublamorce a dit : Of course, and sorry I didn't read this earlier, I was sleeping til 5 pm :P Anyways, will do~! E: Do you want to be the last mouse in the rebellion orrrr? (also, I can raise it higher if you want to think on it!) Magickitten a dit : Oh, I'm sorry... I just took off the part where shes not that talkative towards new mice she meets.. ha ha.. Also, I'm re-reading your form, is Magiac's real name Aksai Boki? OR Magiac? I was confused. Sorry XC Dernière modification le 1451352900000 |
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eeveewings a dit : My mouse is gonna be in the rebellion |
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Can't wait for next chapter |
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eeveewings a dit : It's Aksai Boki, but Magiac doesn't trust anyone, so she calls herself Magiac. Only her family calls her Aksai. cx |
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Magickitten a dit : Thank you, I was very confused, sorry :( Csonewforyou a dit : If I sleep at all, I will do it after. If I don't, I'll try to write it soon (not before I sleep, that's bad quality in it's place.) And I'm sorry this is getting off topic, But I guess it's not at the same time? I'll write chapter 2 soon! |
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eeveewings a dit : No need to be sorry, it's okay. xP |
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Btw, Bubla I won't include your mouse until you have a form. Sorry. rip the sun from Magiac u hirt ets feelungs ALSO i'm sorry chuck that you nvm spoilers for the bad p-FUN YEAH FUN. Chapter 2: -_______Gold Risen From Earth_______- Ev waited, the next round rolled in, and it seemed a new mouse came in each map, Oh whatever...It's not like they'll hurt me through spirits. Hah, doubt they know what they are. Ev thought, she was building determination. "Oh... I'm a shaman?" The shaman looked up, they're time was boldly ticking and so where they. "Hmm..." The shaman looked around, throwing cannons about everywhere, killing a 3rd of mice each time. "I'll just let them settle in... " They threw a cannon off, it danced away only killing was seemed to be a paper ball. He left off onto the edge, placing the orange portal down on the wood platform. Then walking onto it, placing the blue one above them, ending in an infinite loop. "Spare... eh?" Ev laughed, noticing Magiac hiding under the wood platform. Every morning Ev would come up to see the survivor platforms, The sun would glaze upon the witty mice and leave a beautiful glossy look, Ev loved it, it warmed her. "Don't ya like the sun?" Ev asked, Magiac, who replied with a soft ‘no’ head nod. "Just uhh... too bright. Too hot." She 'complained.' "O-okay...?" Ev walked away, clearing mad. She loved it, it was practically an insult. But something told her to like the mouse. Ev looked a little closer. She saw the Shaman's user: Chuck. "So, you're not new...?" Ev questioned him, a little distraction helps. "I suppose you could say that." He said, clearly not distracted. "Oh...?" Ev sighed, watching the time quickly count down to 30 seconds. "So uh, Ev is it...? Oh look out! Ehehehh..." Chuck chuckled at his cannon hitting Ev off. "Back fired." Ev laughed, flying up from the cannon to the edge of the small platform above her. Time began to end, as Chuck sighed. Ev had won with 3 other mice. 3...2...1... Dernière modification le 1451900880000 |
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Gah. It doesn't seem fit for the smart Chuck. |
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Csonewforyou a dit : I'm sorry ;-; |
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eeveewings a dit : Btw,i'm Bubla I will make an 'entry',but without ref. We don't have a PC on our vacation. I will have to draw him. Thank you for understanding :) |
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bublamorce a dit : SO SORRY! I just like... sorry X( IT's like calling me Evee, I did that to youuu Anyways, yes I understand~ And if not, I can make him a ref by the drawing. :) |
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eeveewings a dit : MOOAR CHAPTERS cries i luv them so much as de other fanfictions :'< |