×

Langue

Fermer
Atelier 801
  • Forums
  • Dev Tracker
  • Connexion
    • English Français
      Português do Brasil Español
      Türkçe Polski
      Magyar Română
      العربية Skandinavisk
      Nederlands Deutsch
      Bahasa Indonesia Русский
      中文 Filipino
      Lietuvių kalba 日本語
      Suomi עברית
      Italiano Česky
      Hrvatski Slovensky
      Български Latviešu
      Estonian
  • Langue
  • Forums
  • /
  • Transformice
  • /
  • Fanarts
  • /
  • Fanfiction
  • /
  • [Fanfiction] ;; Oh No! ;;
1 / 4 › »
[Fanfiction] ;; Oh No! ;;
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451348880000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#1
  0
  • Home
  • Story
  • Mice Slot
  • Character Stats
  • Characters Ref 1 page
  • Characters Ref 2 page
  • Classes


http://imgur.com/jzD8RZp.png




`` Oh No! ``


Hello guys, as you can see, i'm making a fanfiction.
Why? Because i had that feeling in my chest for few days, and i thought
i could release it by writing. I was nervous, but oh well. To see
what this fanfiction is about, go to the 'Story' chapter. To see some
chapter, go to 'Chapter'. Simple. ( i know that most of you know
about it, but im sure there are idiots. xD )


I do not accept fandoms.


It's. Related. To. TFM. Not 'Undertale' or etc like that. I'll
take any OC(S) you have, though. Just.. no princesses,
son/daughter of leaders, demons, anime boys, etc.
There are some classes you can take, in the Classes tab,
though.



Only normal mouse, not vampire or cat.
You can have atleast 1 - 3 OC(S) added if you want, and
think also deep to make sure you don't forgot something
that is important. (happened to me a lot times. rip me)




BIG-ASS STORY. WATCH OUT.
` Million years ago.. There used to be three living world, created by one creator.. She used to be beautiful and calm, yet wise. The three living yet small world used to stay away from the bigger planet, Earth. The creator was called Gavras. Gavras also had made the three living planet be away from each other, so others uninvited from each wouldn't get in the wrong planet. Gavras also made the grass, river, beautiful creatures, etc. Gavras knew it was hard even if she was a creator, doing everything whilst alone. So she created three leaders for each planet. The living three world also got a name. MiX, LeX, StC. MiX was the normal one. LeX was the darker one. StC was the lighter one. (no racist. just like good/bad) After lot of years being passed already, three leaders had their own people, to build together, or have proper members gather with each leader and talk about what should be next in the future. But, the darker leader's mind suddenly changed, as well everything about him. That's when lot of days went suddenly wrong, because the darker leader -- as the strongest vampire, had teleported some bad creatures, including skeletons and even cats- to the MiX. Gavras and StC realised that they had to seal the black leader, but that also meant having them both turn into some old mice, or even worse- being dead. They both did the power in case to protect the MiX along with the only one leader now, because the two leaders disappeared, along with Gavras. Although she was a creator, she wouldn't disappear, but it turns out she had an unknown reason which nobody knows, only the black leader. MiX leader realised that everything will be hard, but he was grateful because he could create some. After all, he was the most trusted by Gavras. He used the chance to make rooms like vampire, survivor, modules, etc. Along with shamans. Normal, Hardcore, Divine. There used to be few of divine shamans. (me : laZY aSSES !! ) But although the leader can be immortal, he wasn't actually. For a good reason. He was only one which wasn't immortal. He lived for a very, very long time for like thousand years though, but the time finally passed. The LeX and StC planet was not known anymore now, but only very, very few mouse do know because there were few of them being trusted by MiX leader. MiX leader finally vanished after lot of thousand years, and all of mice along with shamans find it now hard to live, but they had became stronger because of MiX leader. They were grateful for that. Almost million years ago now after lot of hundred years still passing, things were okay. Some of mice had started the rumour about a myth for no reason magically, but almost million mice ignored them. Lot of mouse were bored, so they went on an adventure to a cave, and suddenly they found something mysterious, a larger blue gem. Next morning, lot of mouse were carrying it to the other empire that was remaining in a gigantic place, called HighSun Empire. Every time a sunset comes, they were told to be very beautiful in the spring season. HighSun Empire had also a king because of MiX leader, and the king ordered them to place the gem somewhere in a safe yet hard to find out, big room. Again, next morning yet unexpected, because there were weird objects (daggers etc)somewhere, appearing now. And it seems lot of mouse also had a talent in them. It's as if the blue gem was the key to have the life even easier, by having 'classes', said the knight in the gathering room. And it was true. Even there were other challening rooms, lot new foods now, etc. But.. With the day the MiX world being currently at the time now, there used to be a glitch. A bad glitch and they couldn't fix now that the creator, leaders aren't here. The glitch was about some map glitching, bad creatures from even LeX planet coming on and..


.. strongest creatures beside the cats, the vampires were now back after the long time like million year ago. Will the MiX world, only one remaining as living planet, survive or be gone ? That there wont be any mouse anymore?



There shall be saviours who will save the world.


Umm, i'm new at dis so.. oh wait. (checks some fanfictions) K IM GOOD NOW

24 oc(s) needed!~

(yes im seriously, but i'm a great multitasker and also copying personality. also, there will be so much chapters, for like, 30 with 1000 words? well, bad at how much and etc, but lets see. i dont know about de future of havin that much chapter, but wish me a luck if i get Writer block. )

6 oc(s) in the fanfiction.

Be careful for the big thing ahead!


Ref :
Real Name :
Username :
Gender :
Age :
Class :
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form :
Dislike :
Like :
Hate :
Love :
Personality :
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Here
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--Here
Weapon (1/2) :
Extras :



Magickitten
Ref :http://imgur.com/Q2VT2cd.png
Real Name : Akayu Kouka
Username : Aka
Gender : Male
Age : 17
Class : Archer
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal ( Half-Vampire meaning not full-vampire such as brown pelt, etc. i da creator
so i can do wutever i want, vampire or normal mouse. c: atleast i'm not a freaky big red-black winged cat with unicorn horn )
Dislike : Sunny/hot days, ugly things ( i live 2 beauty ), dark creatures
Like : Beautiful places, cold night, nice mouse to talk with, joking.
Hate : Ugly creatures, being poked, being tricked, warriors.
Love : Spying to get information, being derp-mode, tricking others.
Personality : Really confident, yet noisy and annoying.
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Being in derp-mode, trying to be funny.
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--Cautious and making sure.
Weapon (1/2) : Bow (excellent sight, meaning excellent aiming.)
Extras : Can ruin some plan, and annoy **** out of smart asses. Has the
bandana to cover his mouth, so people wouldn't run away which he doesnt
like it, and hid his vampire-fangs as secret. He has actually wings,
but the wings are behind his back being folded, and at same time had
the same fur like his snow-leopard fur, so it would hide easily.

Oceanpawgal
This seams awesome
What's undertale

Ref : http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBzfQd8mJik-xUWdlL6l_d5y9lvDPrru_WmiVaEeVs7bhDHmuB1nr3D3Q
Real Name : America Steder
Username : Mer
Gender :Female
Age : 16
Class :tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Sham
Dislike : soft speakers being forgoten stuck up people
Like : Pepy people loud people
Hate :dumb and smart people who are stuck up
Love : smart and dumb people who arnt stuck up Personality : Pepy smartpeople thinks shes a nerd but she just has the smartness of one childish its hard to have her get a grasp of things unless shes fully focused
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--at first she tries to be a peacemaker but after she fully understands what's going on she isn't Pepys doesn't talk unless absolutely needed
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --not really understanding what's going on
Weapon (1/2) : shotgun
Extras :

Smartiewolfs
Ref : https://i.imgur.com/WuCfoE8.png
Real Name : Loujain
Username : Lou
Gender : Female
Age : 15
Class : tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : normal
Dislike : white chocolate, jerks, red velvet cake, her brother
Like : doodling/sketching, staying alone at home, reading books
Hate : the sun (especially when it's sunset, she really gets threatened by her horrible memories from the past -terrible flashbacks-)
Love : she loves liquid music, she loves watching tv, and exploring mother nature
Personality : wild, cheerful, playful, assertive, and kind hearted but ech, sometimes she can be cold-blooded for no apparent reason
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now):
first of all, she acts really sarcastic, and she always looks blunt and rude, but after that she tends to open up more
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?:
like i said, she really acts brutal and witty in some way? but then once she gets used to you, she becomes more friendly and easy to get along with
Weapon (1/2) : her psychic abilities, and her power to read minds
Extras : whenever she's pissed off, her eyes glow red with fury, tempting to let them know that she's going to corrupt their minds


Csonewforyou

Ref : http://imgur.com/IAMyBHt.png
Real Name : Jerry Henson
Username : Jerry
Gender : Male
Age : 39
Class : Commander
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal
Dislike : Nothing.
Like : Being strong,smart,games.
Hate : Nothing.
Love : G-A-M-E-S.
Personality : Smart (sometimes stupid),Nice
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
Cautious then nice.
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
Stupid.
Weapon (1/2) : A rope-sword.
Extras : Nothing special about him


Bublamorce

Ref : http://i.imgur.com/bE2s1JW.png
Real Name : Okaru Xawyer I did it again..
Username : WhiteFur
Gender : Male
Age : 18
Class : Warrior
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal mouse
Dislike : Loud noises, Mice who push him aside, Bitter food, Dry throat
Like : Playing around with others' feelings, Music
Hate : Being cornered, Injuries, Mice who troll him
Love : Fights, Power, Gaming, Skiing
Personality : Nice to others,but can snap necks,if mad. Pretty quiet sometimes,mainly when injured or sick
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Very,VERY cautious,but then after some time,pretty good friend
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--He will be 'growling' at the mouse,not talking to it much.
Weapon (1/2) : Crystal sword (making ref for it)
Extras : His skin and fur are different,because they make injuries even more painful that they are.

He's not supposed to look like Sans from Undertale. It's my personal ref,that i play with,so please.


Pikuh
http://imgur.com/svhtEWK.png


Not yet..
Most Common
Normal
Less Common
Rare
Very Rare
Legendary
Unknown

ONLY BEST FRIENDS CAN BE LEGENDARY/UNKNOWN.

Normal
Physical Attacks
50/50
Normal Speed
Normal Strength
NORMAL

Sorcerer
(took me few minutes cuz idk but) Magical Attacks
Supporter
40/50
Fast Speed
Normal Strength
TACTICAL

Archer
Light Attacks
40/50
Fast Speed
Little Bad Strength
QUICK

Rogue
Physical Attacks
30/50
Fast Speed
Normal Strength
SNEAKY

Warrior
Defender
Heavy Attacks
60/50
Slow Speed
Good Strength
STRONG

Ninja
Light Attacks
30/50
Sonic Speed
Low Strength
SILENT

Tracker (Three needed)
Physical Attacks
Supporter
40/50
Fast Speed
Normal Strength
SMART

Commander (One needed)
Heavy/Fast Attacks
Defender
70/50
Fast Speed
Good Strength
SMART/STRONG

High Commander (Two needed)
Three Attacks; Heavy, Light, Magical
Defender
90/50
Fast Speed
Good Strength
SMART/TACTICAL/STRONG

More classes coming soon..



Dernière modification le 1452184320000
Winterflurry
« Citoyen »
1451351280000
    • Winterflurry#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#2
  0
This is quite nice
Cant wait to see more of this
i would submit a character but nah

Dernière modification le 1451351640000
Eeveewings
« Citoyen »
1451352480000
    • Eeveewings#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#3
  0
You seemed to put a lot of effort into this.

I will consider making a mouse, but I will watch your progress.

-Ev
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451353320000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#4
  0
eeveewings a dit :
You seemed to put a lot of effort into this.

I will consider making a mouse, but I will watch your progress.

-Ev

OF COURSE I PLACED LOT OF EFFORT. xDD
i failed so much when i tried to place some tabs for first time


winterflurry a dit :
This is quite nice
Cant wait to see more of this
i would submit a character but nah

I'll try to make a perfect chapter.
Right now, it's night and i could do it
tommorow nao. I have also other things
to do, like protecting and checking etc.

also
im reading my 'own' story
gg, i can even forget everything for a sec
now imma just
have my eyes being hurt e3e

Dernière modification le 1451353500000
Sea
« Censeur »
1451360700000
    • Sea#6504
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#5
  0
BEST CHAPTER WILL READ AT BEDTIME
Oceanpawgal
« Citoyen »
1451386260000
    • Oceanpawgal#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
#6
  0
This seams awesome
What's undertale

Ref : http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBzfQd8mJik-xUWdlL6l_d5y9lvDPrru_WmiVaEeVs7bhDHmuB1nr3D3Q
Real Name : America Steder
Username : Mer
Gender :Female
Age : 16
Class :tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Sham
Dislike : soft speakers being forgoten stuck up people
Like : Pepy people loud people
Hate :dumb and smart people who are stuck up
Love : smart and dumb people who arnt stuck up Personality : Pepy smartpeople thinks shes a nerd but she just has the smartness of one childish its hard to have her get a grasp of things unless shes fully focused
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--at first she tries to be a peacemaker but after she fully understands what's going on she isn't Pepys doesn't talk unless absolutely needed
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --not really understanding what's going on
Weapon (1/2) : shotgun
Extras :

Dernière modification le 1451386980000
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451393220000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#7
  0
oceanpawgal a dit :
This seams awesome
What's undertale

Ref : http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBzfQd8mJik-xUWdlL6l_d5y9lvDPrru_WmiVaEeVs7bhDHmuB1nr3D3Q
Real Name : America Steder
Username : Mer
Gender :Female
Age : 16
Class :tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Sham
Dislike : soft speakers being forgoten stuck up people
Like : Pepy people loud people
Hate :dumb and smart people who are stuck up
Love : smart and dumb people who arnt stuck up Personality : Pepy smartpeople thinks shes a nerd but she just has the smartness of one childish its hard to have her get a grasp of things unless shes fully focused
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--at first she tries to be a peacemaker but after she fully understands what's going on she isn't Pepys doesn't talk unless absolutely needed
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --not really understanding what's going on
Weapon (1/2) : shotgun
Extras :

Thanks a lot!
But damn, stomach ache.
1# problem for women.
cries
i hate 2 boys for 4 super parts

you'll be in de first chapter nao cx
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451394360000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#8
  0
  • Blah
  • Chapter-1
smartiewolfs a dit :
BEST CHAPTER WILL READ AT BEDTIME

psSST
is tHAT NATSU !11!!1

Anyway, here you go.
Read da chapter. x3

Ocean, i hope i got things right about your OC. >~<
btw shippers are allowed to enter this thread lmao

`` Hello! ``


1 Chapter


Everything was black with the awful silence ringing around but that lasted for few seconds, as something- golden light started to shine out of nowhere, a golden sun raising itself away from the black ground whilst the clouds slowly became visible, turning lighter each minute as well the sun changing to white. The sunlight landed on some place, which were almost everywhere now as things started to be warm. Lot of birds looked at the sun raising itself, which some of them bounced away from the branch before flapping its wings, now diving under the lot, green yet fresh plants. The mouse was walking around with a backpack until he perked his ears as he heard something, which he turned to the birds now quickly raising itself, gliding above the mouse which yelped ducking on the ground. He watched as the birds flied higher, flapping wings again. Aka sighed. ` Sometimes i think they're either crazy or they always wanted to race with others. ` He went on with his way to the town, which was far away, called Radean Town. Radean Town was a town where you get the dagger, pickaxes and etc. It was like a gigantic shop, because there are lot of mouse who wanted to sell valuable things. It would take few minutes for him to arrive, and he was grateful that he didn't care about some spooky monsters in darkness, unlike most of female mouse. After walking for few minutes, he climbed onto the gigantic log which he jumped and landed to the ground. Raising his head, he looked at the bigger town in front of him. He then went on his way as he walked through the town, exploring some new things around. When suddenly he heard something - more like yelling, he turned his head perking his ears toward in confusion. ` Mm? ` There are two bigger mice who seemed to be talking with a mouse, which seemed strange- by the kitty hat and the pink hair. ` After all those plans, you have done nothing but ruined. ` The female mouse muttured. ` But .. ` Another leopard mouse yelled. ` No buts! ` Aka couldn't help that he can't watch, this poor mouse was being .. Aka then took the pebble from the sand ground, and threw the pebble at the leopard mouse's head, hitting. The brown mouse stared, which the female mouse stared in surprise. ` Alright, who hit me?! ` The leopard mouse hissed as he turned his head, which Aka lashed his tail around his feet. ` Me. Why not? ` Aka said. Though in future i will regret it later. Or i think so.. His thought was interrupted, as he noticed the leopard mouse charging at him, which he took the bow out and aimed the arrow quickly. After letting go of the string, the arrow quickly then thrust toward, which the leopard mouse yelped as he ducked, the arrow hitting into the brown mouse's butt. That made the female mouse not sure whenever to chuckle or stare in surprise, but her answer was 'chuckle' as the brown mouse yelped in pain and ran quickly around in circle. ` Ow! Ow! ` The leopard mouse then hissed, as he took one of the mouse that yelped, ` That's it, no games for you anymore-- !! ` The mouse was thrown at Aka, both of them being hit slamming at the shop which was behind, the white mouse yelping inside. Aka pushed the brown mouse gently, and said. ` Damn, anger issues much? ` He said, and turned his head as he saw the shadow above him, to the leopard mouse which was about to drop the bigger rock onto Aka right now.

` OH NO YOU DONT! `

Suddenly, Aka heard a poof which he tilted his head to side, seeing a cannon coming toward in a sonic speed. ` HOLY, ` He yelped as he ducked, the leopard mouse being slammed by the back, of a bigger cannon with Aka staring in pure surprise and shock. ` DAMN. ` He ended the sentence, as he crouched with lot of crash sounds being heard. Slowly turning his head to see, he noticed the leopard mouse was now unconscious in a broken shop. ` ... ` He turned his head to the female mouse- wait what? She was a shaman? The shaman came toward, which she looked down at Aka raising her paw out to him. As Aka got up, he looked at the shaman. ` You are a shaman? How come.. ` The shaman smiled. ` No need to ask. Normally, i wouldn't care about you, but since you saved me from those mean mice who care about only blue gems.. ` Aka noticed the shotgun on her back. I am not even going to think of going on her bad side. Note to myself.



Dernière modification le 1451395320000
Sea
« Censeur »
1451395020000
    • Sea#6504
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#9
  0
Magickitten a dit :
smartiewolfs a dit :
BEST CHAPTER WILL READ AT BEDTIME

psSST
is tHAT NATSU !11!!1

Anyway, here you go.
Read da chapter. x3

omg no that's frosch
beautiful chapter with beautiful ending
-
im not going to be a total grammar nazi but there are some mistakes in the capter
especially this: "from those mean mouse"
mouse itself is not the plural of it, so you should replace that with 'mice' so that the sentence can make more sense
sorry if i sound critical tho
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451395320000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#10
  0
smartiewolfs a dit :
Magickitten a dit :
smartiewolfs a dit :
BEST CHAPTER WILL READ AT BEDTIME

psSST
is tHAT NATSU !11!!1

Anyway, here you go.
Read da chapter. x3

omg no that's frosch
beautiful chapter with beautiful ending
-
im not going to be a total grammar nazi but there are some mistakes in the capter
especially this: "from those mean mouse"
mouse itself is not the plural of it, so you should replace that with 'mice' so that the sentence can make more sense
sorry if i sound critical tho

its k
i have like, disease of always typo/grammar? cx
Sea
« Censeur »
1451396820000
    • Sea#6504
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#11
  0
Ref : https://i.imgur.com/WuCfoE8.png
Real Name : Loujain
Username : Lou
Gender : Female
Age : 15
Class : tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : normal
Dislike : white chocolate, jerks, red velvet cake, her brother
Like : doodling/sketching, staying alone at home, reading books
Hate : the sun (especially when it's sunset, she really gets threatened by her horrible memories from the past -terrible flashbacks-)
Love : she loves liquid music, she loves watching tv, and exploring mother nature
Personality : wild, cheerful, playful, assertive, and kind hearted but ech, sometimes she can be cold-blooded for no apparent reason
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now):
first of all, she acts really sarcastic, and she always looks blunt and rude, but after that she tends to open up more
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?:
like i said, she really acts brutal and witty in some way? but then once she gets used to you, she becomes more friendly and easy to get along with
Weapon (1/2) : her psychic abilities, and her power to read minds
Extras : whenever she's pissed off, her eyes glow red with fury, tempting to let them know that she's going to corrupt their minds

have my first born child
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451396940000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#12
  0
smartiewolfs a dit :
Ref : https://i.imgur.com/WuCfoE8.png
Real Name : Loujain
Username : Lou
Gender : Female
Age : 15
Class : tracker
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : normal
Dislike : white chocolate, jerks, red velvet cake, her brother
Like : doodling/sketching, staying alone at home, reading books
Hate : the sun (especially when it's sunset, she really gets threatened by her horrible memories from the past -terrible flashbacks-)
Love : she loves liquid music, she loves watching tv, and exploring mother nature
Personality : wild, cheerful, playful, assertive, and kind hearted but ech, sometimes she can be cold-blooded for no apparent reason
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now):
first of all, she acts really sarcastic, and she always looks blunt and rude, but after that she tends to open up more
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?:
like i said, she really acts brutal and witty in some way? but then once she gets used to you, she becomes more friendly and easy to get along with
Weapon (1/2) : her psychic abilities, and her power to read minds
Extras : whenever she's pissed off, her eyes glow red with fury, tempting to let them know that she's going to corrupt their minds

have my first born child

k accepted c:
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451406540000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#13
  0
  • HAY
  • Chapter 2
OKAY, FINISHED :^)

`` Watch Out! Vampire! RawrRawr-- ``


After the sunset, Aka and the female shaman which was now a mouse, went to the bigger tree which had lot of rooms inside. As they both entered, it was a big room and indeed noisy, with lot of mice. He turned around his head looking in awe, it was his first time coming in this gigantic tree. Whilst that in the background, the female mouse noticed something and then she went walking away.` Where should we go? ` He said turning his head, only to notice that the female mouse was gone. He glared with slight annoyance in his look. Maybe she doesn't always be focused on other things that was important instead. Oh well, he thought. He went to the bar and sat onto the soft chair, which he looked to the black mouse that was washing some glasses and etc. ` Hey? ` He called out. After giving some of cheese, he had gotten his bottle with milk whilst turning his head around lot of mice talking loudly. He got up from the chair and went to the corner so others wouldn't notice. He watched whilst slowly drinking the milk after taking bandana off, slightly enjoying the view. That's when a familiar face appeared right next to him, ` I found something! ` That scared the hell out of him because he spit lot of milk out, which few of mice laughed but didn't notice something strange about him. ` Heh. ` He murmured whilst wiping his mouth with his fluffy arm before taking the bandana onto his mouth back. ` What something? ` He looked at the female mouse. Lucky she didn't notice because of something. ` Well, this! ` She had a glowing bubble on her paws. ` Oh, look. Another new module. ` He said as he looked at it. ... Infected? The female mouse said as she took his paw, both of them placing onto the glowing bubble. ` We're going to play this! ` At first i didn't understand, though.. why am i playing with a stranger i just met? Or was it because he saved me? Well, nevermind about that. She thought. ` And don't forget, my name is America Steder, but call me Mer. ` As they both entered in a room with #infected the room name, he and she watched the vampires chasing some mice. Seems pretty challenging. He thought. As the time ended leaving a next round, Mer and Aka had spawned. He waited for few second, and someone as mice turned into a brown vampire suddenly. I haven't seen one of the vampire before, but they do look like an ugly pig covered in mud actually, even if i was one of those species. Well, i'm half atleast. He thought, until he heard a screech which he turned his head whipping to a vampire behind him, unfolding the brown, larger wings outside quickly. ` SCRREAACCCHHH--!! ` The vampire quickly hit its muzzle to the wall, whining in pain because Aka had ducked and ran away. ` Too bad, eat the dirt instead, ` Aka said. Mer looked to see a vampire now going for her, which she jumped onto another platform and pushed the rock, rolling. As the vampire jumped onto the edge, the rock was in front of it suddenly, the vampire screeched in surprise-- BAM! Mer waited for few second, until she heard lot of sudden 'poof'. Lot of vampire were gone by falling due to the bigger rock. Aww yes. Mer thought.



Dernière modification le 1451406960000
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451416320000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#14
  0
  • Hay
  • Chapter-3

help
i have writer block
but here u go
i'll post a long one next time ;p


`` New friend! Hello! ``


After lot of rounds, Mer and Aka had survived. They both were panting, but it was worth because it was fun. Aka looked at the mouse still playing. Much energy? He said. ` Hey, Mer- ` He turned to see Mer already being gone. NOT AGAIN. He looked around wondering where that female mouse could be, which he noticed her going toward the blue portal, which was used to leave the room.` Wait, come on, i'm not so fast unlike you. ` After leaving the room, there was another larger tree, along with some of plants. Some mice were looked like they were also exploring as well. Mer was walking quietly, as bored. She noticed another portal. ` What is it? ` Aka asked. Mer answered. ` I don't know, let's try it. ` She sounded energetic as if she wanted to try it again, which Aka groaned in annoyance whilst following after Mer. That's when suddenly a scream was heard as if something was falling down, and THUDDD-! Mar whipped her head in surprise, only to see a white- no, different pelted mouse. Another female mouse raised her head shaking some small twig away, and then asked in a confused tone. ` Uh, what happened? ` Mer stared. ` ... ` She was confused and noticed Aka was struggling under. ` halpz. ` He muttured softly, which the female mouse realised and got off. ` Oh! I am so sorry! ` She said in indeed a 'sorry' tone, as she lashed her tail. Aka was patting some dust away. ` Yeah yeah, it's okay, so how the flying blazes did you fall from the tree or sky? ` He asked. The female mouse rolled her eyes. ` Pfff, dont even need to ask of that. I'm going now. ` She said, which Aka thought with annoyance. She's weird.. The female mouse perked her ears, as she turned her head slightly to Aka. ` That was rude, genius. ` He was slightly freaked at that. How did she know about what am i thinking?



Dernière modification le 1451430360000
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451463780000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#15
  0
  • Blah
  • Chapter-4
four chapter.
mmm, this time it's long.
yay.
yay.
y--
oh yeah, i hope in ending
that it's okay, like, getting
your OC's personality right,
smartie .3.

` Adventureeee~ `


The female mouse was explaining the story, and Aka had noticed that each minutes she was slowly getting to be friendly to get along with. However, Mer was actually focused on some other things but at least she doesn't walk away magically. ` And then this mouse accidentally pushed me. After that, i fell onto the web and then the web broke, as i fell onto a big leaf, and then the bigger branch aaand then through the leaves, and now i crashed onto you. ` Aka was amazed at how he didn't get a headache from a mouse falling onto him like that so high. Well, atleast things in her way had made her not so faster or heavier. like a rock falling to water without anything in its way. How did she get on the tree, anyway? He thought. ` And then i was like, oh shet! ` She said as she did gestures like crazy, which Aka said. ` Okay okay, that's believable. ` She giggled as she tugged her hat onward slightly, and she said lashing her tail. ` Well, i gotta say, those blindfolds.. how do you even see through? ` Aka perked his ears toward, as he shrugged lightly. ` I don't know. ` He lied quietly. ` Weelll.. okay. ` She said not sure. Although he doesn't know, i think something is.. She thought. ` So, you are going to that portal, right? ` She said as she pointed at the portal, which Aka turned to. ` Well, this, ` He said as he watched Mer. ` mouse Mer wanted to go. We were just curious to see how it would be like in the portal. Anyway, what's your name? ` He asked. The female mouse blinked for once before turning her head to the side. ` Nope. ` He glared. When- oh wait, i bet she could read mind magically. ` Of course, i can read mind duh! ` She yelled as she almost lunged forward, scaring a lot outta Aka for a sec. ` Hey- yes, you can read mind when you just want to, like magic! ` He murmured. ` At least Mer looks nice than you! ` Aka twitched his hidden eye in annoyance, as he raised his imaginary eyebrow. ` ... Well, anyway, do you want to follow us or not? Because Mer and i am going to leave now. ` She blinked. ` Now? ` He replied. ` Yes. ` Mer looked at the two mouse which was about to argue now, which she got up and went on sneakily toward the portal.

` Hey, you just got here and talked with me for little, now you are going already?! ` She whined.
` Of course! I mean, who would love to be squashed by a female mouse falling out of nowhere and then talk with her?! ` He replied with annoyance again.
` Hey! You talked with me as well! And i said sorry before i explained THE STORY to you! The reason is the story! ` She said doing a gesture at her head, to show Aka was stupid.
` Well, i'm going, so i am sorry you GENIUS ! ` He yelled.
` Oh, i can't handle a boy like you, so annoying- wait where is that mouse? `
` Well, i can't- Huh? ` He turned to see Mer gone.

` ... `
` ... `
` So, did that happen to you often? ` She asked.
` Three times, because met her today. ` He said causally with one of his imaginary eyebrow raised.
` Ah. That must be annoying. `
` Indeed. ` He replied calmly.
` ... `
` ... `
`` MMMEEEERRRRRRRRRRR! ``



Dernière modification le 1451518140000
Sea
« Censeur »
1451465700000
    • Sea#6504
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#16
  0
aka get rekt
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451466060000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#17
  0
smartiewolfs a dit :
aka get rekt

yesssss
whistle~

aka just got his ass rekt by a girl~
Csonewforyou
« Consul »
1451466360000
    • Csonewforyou#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#18
  0
Ref : Edit : nevermind,so there's one : http://imgur.com/IAMyBHt.png
Real Name : Jerry Henson
Username : Jerry
Gender : Male
Age : 39
Class : Commander
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal
Dislike : Nothing.
Like : Being strong,smart,games.
Hate : Nothing.
Love : G-A-M-E-S.
Personality : Smart (sometimes stupid),Nice
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
Cautious then nice.
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
Stupid.
Weapon (1/2) : A rope-sword.
Extras : Nothing special about him

Dernière modification le 1451531760000
Magickitten
« Citoyen »
1451466540000
    • Magickitten#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
    • Tribu
#19
  0
Csonewforyou a dit :
Ref : Micetigri won't work,so tommorow.
Real Name : Jerry Henson
Username : Jerry
Gender : Male
Age : 39
Class : Commander
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal
Dislike : Nothing.
Like : Being strong,smart,games.
Hate : Nothing.
Love : G-A-M-E-S.
Personality : Smart (sometimes stupid),Nice
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
Cautious then nice.
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
Stupid.
Weapon (1/2) : A rope-sword.
Extras : Nothing special about him

//looks at your class//
//looks at the classes tab//
//noticing that only Legendary/unknown are for best friends//
oh k


you are accepted ;p
will appear in next chapter now.
Oceanpawgal
« Citoyen »
1451514480000
    • Oceanpawgal#0000
    • Profil
    • Derniers messages
#20
  0
Omg America is just as I thought she would be gi cant wait for more
  • Forums
  • /
  • Transformice
  • /
  • Fanarts
  • /
  • Fanfiction
  • /
  • [Fanfiction] ;; Oh No! ;;
1 / 4 › »
© Atelier801 2018

Equipe Conditions Générales d'Utilisation Politique de Confidentialité Contact

Version 1.27