[Fanfiction] ;; Oh No! ;; |
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`` Oh No! `` Hello guys, as you can see, i'm making a fanfiction. I do not accept fandoms. It's. Related. To. TFM. Not 'Undertale' or etc like that. I'll
BIG-ASS STORY. WATCH OUT. There shall be saviours who will save the world. Umm, i'm new at dis so.. oh wait. (checks some fanfictions) K IM GOOD NOW 24 oc(s) needed!~ (yes im seriously, but i'm a great multitasker and also copying personality. also, there will be so much chapters, for like, 30 with 1000 words? well, bad at how much and etc, but lets see. i dont know about de future of havin that much chapter, but wish me a luck if i get Writer block. ) 6 oc(s) in the fanfiction. Be careful for the big thing ahead! Ref : Magickitten Ref : ![]() Real Name : Akayu Kouka Username : Aka Gender : Male Age : 17 Class : Archer ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal ( Half-Vampire meaning not full-vampire such as brown pelt, etc. i da creator so i can do wutever i want, vampire or normal mouse. c: atleast i'm not a freaky big red-black winged cat with unicorn horn ) Dislike : Sunny/hot days, ugly things ( i live 2 beauty ), dark creatures Like : Beautiful places, cold night, nice mouse to talk with, joking. Hate : Ugly creatures, being poked, being tricked, warriors. Love : Spying to get information, being derp-mode, tricking others. Personality : Really confident, yet noisy and annoying. When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) --Being in derp-mode, trying to be funny. When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --Cautious and making sure. Weapon (1/2) : Bow (excellent sight, meaning excellent aiming.) Extras : Can ruin some plan, and annoy **** out of smart asses. Has the bandana to cover his mouth, so people wouldn't run away which he doesnt like it, and hid his vampire-fangs as secret. He has actually wings, but the wings are behind his back being folded, and at same time had the same fur like his snow-leopard fur, so it would hide easily. Oceanpawgal This seams awesome What's undertale Ref : http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBzfQd8mJik-xUWdlL6l_d5y9lvDPrru_WmiVaEeVs7bhDHmuB1nr3D3Q Real Name : America Steder Username : Mer Gender :Female Age : 16 Class :tracker ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Sham Dislike : soft speakers being forgoten stuck up people Like : Pepy people loud people Hate :dumb and smart people who are stuck up Love : smart and dumb people who arnt stuck up Personality : Pepy smartpeople thinks shes a nerd but she just has the smartness of one childish its hard to have her get a grasp of things unless shes fully focused When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) --at first she tries to be a peacemaker but after she fully understands what's going on she isn't Pepys doesn't talk unless absolutely needed When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --not really understanding what's going on Weapon (1/2) : shotgun Extras : Smartiewolfs Ref : ![]() Real Name : Loujain Username : Lou Gender : Female Age : 15 Class : tracker ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : normal Dislike : white chocolate, jerks, red velvet cake, her brother Like : doodling/sketching, staying alone at home, reading books Hate : the sun (especially when it's sunset, she really gets threatened by her horrible memories from the past -terrible flashbacks-) Love : she loves liquid music, she loves watching tv, and exploring mother nature Personality : wild, cheerful, playful, assertive, and kind hearted but ech, sometimes she can be cold-blooded for no apparent reason When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now): first of all, she acts really sarcastic, and she always looks blunt and rude, but after that she tends to open up more When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?: like i said, she really acts brutal and witty in some way? but then once she gets used to you, she becomes more friendly and easy to get along with Weapon (1/2) : her psychic abilities, and her power to read minds Extras : whenever she's pissed off, her eyes glow red with fury, tempting to let them know that she's going to corrupt their minds Csonewforyou Ref : ![]() Real Name : Jerry Henson Username : Jerry Gender : Male Age : 39 Class : Commander ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal Dislike : Nothing. Like : Being strong,smart,games. Hate : Nothing. Love : G-A-M-E-S. Personality : Smart (sometimes stupid),Nice When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) Cautious then nice. When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? Stupid. Weapon (1/2) : A rope-sword. Extras : Nothing special about him Bublamorce Ref : ![]() Real Name : Okaru Xawyer I did it again.. Username : WhiteFur Gender : Male Age : 18 Class : Warrior ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal mouse Dislike : Loud noises, Mice who push him aside, Bitter food, Dry throat Like : Playing around with others' feelings, Music Hate : Being cornered, Injuries, Mice who troll him Love : Fights, Power, Gaming, Skiing Personality : Nice to others,but can snap necks,if mad. Pretty quiet sometimes,mainly when injured or sick When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) --Very,VERY cautious,but then after some time,pretty good friend When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --He will be 'growling' at the mouse,not talking to it much. Weapon (1/2) : Crystal sword (making ref for it) Extras : His skin and fur are different,because they make injuries even more painful that they are. He's not supposed to look like Sans from Undertale. It's my personal ref,that i play with,so please. Pikuh ![]() Not yet.. Most Common Normal Less Common Rare Very Rare Legendary Unknown ONLY BEST FRIENDS CAN BE LEGENDARY/UNKNOWN. Normal Dernière modification le 1452184320000 |
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This is quite nice Cant wait to see more of this i would submit a character but nah Dernière modification le 1451351640000 |
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You seemed to put a lot of effort into this. I will consider making a mouse, but I will watch your progress. -Ev |
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eeveewings a dit : OF COURSE I PLACED LOT OF EFFORT. xDD i failed so much when i tried to place some tabs for first time winterflurry a dit : I'll try to make a perfect chapter. Right now, it's night and i could do it tommorow nao. I have also other things to do, like protecting and checking etc. also im reading my 'own' story gg, i can even forget everything for a sec now imma just have my eyes being hurt e3e Dernière modification le 1451353500000 |
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BEST CHAPTER WILL READ AT BEDTIME |
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This seams awesome What's undertale Ref : http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTBzfQd8mJik-xUWdlL6l_d5y9lvDPrru_WmiVaEeVs7bhDHmuB1nr3D3Q Real Name : America Steder Username : Mer Gender :Female Age : 16 Class :tracker ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Sham Dislike : soft speakers being forgoten stuck up people Like : Pepy people loud people Hate :dumb and smart people who are stuck up Love : smart and dumb people who arnt stuck up Personality : Pepy smartpeople thinks shes a nerd but she just has the smartness of one childish its hard to have her get a grasp of things unless shes fully focused When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) --at first she tries to be a peacemaker but after she fully understands what's going on she isn't Pepys doesn't talk unless absolutely needed When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? --not really understanding what's going on Weapon (1/2) : shotgun Extras : Dernière modification le 1451386980000 |
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oceanpawgal a dit : Thanks a lot! But damn, stomach ache. 1# problem for women. cries i hate 2 boys for 4 super parts you'll be in de first chapter nao cx |
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smartiewolfs a dit : psSST is tHAT NATSU !11!!1 Anyway, here you go. Read da chapter. x3 Ocean, i hope i got things right about your OC. >~< btw shippers are allowed to enter this thread lmao `` Hello! `` 1 Chapter Everything was black with the awful silence ringing around but that lasted for few seconds, as something- golden light started to shine out of nowhere, a golden sun raising itself away from the black ground whilst the clouds slowly became visible, turning lighter each minute as well the sun changing to white. The sunlight landed on some place, which were almost everywhere now as things started to be warm. Lot of birds looked at the sun raising itself, which some of them bounced away from the branch before flapping its wings, now diving under the lot, green yet fresh plants. The mouse was walking around with a backpack until he perked his ears as he heard something, which he turned to the birds now quickly raising itself, gliding above the mouse which yelped ducking on the ground. He watched as the birds flied higher, flapping wings again. Aka sighed. ` Sometimes i think they're either crazy or they always wanted to race with others. ` He went on with his way to the town, which was far away, called Radean Town. Radean Town was a town where you get the dagger, pickaxes and etc. It was like a gigantic shop, because there are lot of mouse who wanted to sell valuable things. It would take few minutes for him to arrive, and he was grateful that he didn't care about some spooky monsters in darkness, unlike most of female mouse. After walking for few minutes, he climbed onto the gigantic log which he jumped and landed to the ground. Raising his head, he looked at the bigger town in front of him. He then went on his way as he walked through the town, exploring some new things around. When suddenly he heard something - more like yelling, he turned his head perking his ears toward in confusion. ` Mm? ` There are two bigger mice who seemed to be talking with a mouse, which seemed strange- by the kitty hat and the pink hair. ` After all those plans, you have done nothing but ruined. ` The female mouse muttured. ` But .. ` Another leopard mouse yelled. ` No buts! ` Aka couldn't help that he can't watch, this poor mouse was being .. Aka then took the pebble from the sand ground, and threw the pebble at the leopard mouse's head, hitting. The brown mouse stared, which the female mouse stared in surprise. ` Alright, who hit me?! ` The leopard mouse hissed as he turned his head, which Aka lashed his tail around his feet. ` Me. Why not? ` Aka said. Though in future i will regret it later. Or i think so.. His thought was interrupted, as he noticed the leopard mouse charging at him, which he took the bow out and aimed the arrow quickly. After letting go of the string, the arrow quickly then thrust toward, which the leopard mouse yelped as he ducked, the arrow hitting into the brown mouse's butt. That made the female mouse not sure whenever to chuckle or stare in surprise, but her answer was 'chuckle' as the brown mouse yelped in pain and ran quickly around in circle. ` Ow! Ow! ` The leopard mouse then hissed, as he took one of the mouse that yelped, ` That's it, no games for you anymore-- !! ` The mouse was thrown at Aka, both of them being hit slamming at the shop which was behind, the white mouse yelping inside. Aka pushed the brown mouse gently, and said. ` Damn, anger issues much? ` He said, and turned his head as he saw the shadow above him, to the leopard mouse which was about to drop the bigger rock onto Aka right now. Dernière modification le 1451395320000 |
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Magickitten a dit : omg no that's frosch beautiful chapter with beautiful ending - im not going to be a total grammar nazi but there are some mistakes in the capter especially this: "from those mean mouse" mouse itself is not the plural of it, so you should replace that with 'mice' so that the sentence can make more sense sorry if i sound critical tho |
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smartiewolfs a dit : its k i have like, disease of always typo/grammar? cx |
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Ref : ![]() Real Name : Loujain Username : Lou Gender : Female Age : 15 Class : tracker ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : normal Dislike : white chocolate, jerks, red velvet cake, her brother Like : doodling/sketching, staying alone at home, reading books Hate : the sun (especially when it's sunset, she really gets threatened by her horrible memories from the past -terrible flashbacks-) Love : she loves liquid music, she loves watching tv, and exploring mother nature Personality : wild, cheerful, playful, assertive, and kind hearted but ech, sometimes she can be cold-blooded for no apparent reason When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now): first of all, she acts really sarcastic, and she always looks blunt and rude, but after that she tends to open up more When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?: like i said, she really acts brutal and witty in some way? but then once she gets used to you, she becomes more friendly and easy to get along with Weapon (1/2) : her psychic abilities, and her power to read minds Extras : whenever she's pissed off, her eyes glow red with fury, tempting to let them know that she's going to corrupt their minds have my first born child |
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smartiewolfs a dit : k accepted c: |
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OKAY, FINISHED :^) `` Watch Out! Vampire! RawrRawr-- `` After the sunset, Aka and the female shaman which was now a mouse, went to the bigger tree which had lot of rooms inside. As they both entered, it was a big room and indeed noisy, with lot of mice. He turned around his head looking in awe, it was his first time coming in this gigantic tree. Whilst that in the background, the female mouse noticed something and then she went walking away.` Where should we go? ` He said turning his head, only to notice that the female mouse was gone. He glared with slight annoyance in his look. Maybe she doesn't always be focused on other things that was important instead. Oh well, he thought. He went to the bar and sat onto the soft chair, which he looked to the black mouse that was washing some glasses and etc. ` Hey? ` He called out. After giving some of cheese, he had gotten his bottle with milk whilst turning his head around lot of mice talking loudly. He got up from the chair and went to the corner so others wouldn't notice. He watched whilst slowly drinking the milk after taking bandana off, slightly enjoying the view. That's when a familiar face appeared right next to him, ` I found something! ` That scared the hell out of him because he spit lot of milk out, which few of mice laughed but didn't notice something strange about him. ` Heh. ` He murmured whilst wiping his mouth with his fluffy arm before taking the bandana onto his mouth back. ` What something? ` He looked at the female mouse. Lucky she didn't notice because of something. ` Well, this! ` She had a glowing bubble on her paws. ` Oh, look. Another new module. ` He said as he looked at it. ... Infected? The female mouse said as she took his paw, both of them placing onto the glowing bubble. ` We're going to play this! ` At first i didn't understand, though.. why am i playing with a stranger i just met? Or was it because he saved me? Well, nevermind about that. She thought. ` And don't forget, my name is America Steder, but call me Mer. ` As they both entered in a room with #infected the room name, he and she watched the vampires chasing some mice. Seems pretty challenging. He thought. As the time ended leaving a next round, Mer and Aka had spawned. He waited for few second, and someone as mice turned into a brown vampire suddenly. I haven't seen one of the vampire before, but they do look like an ugly pig covered in mud actually, even if i was one of those species. Well, i'm half atleast. He thought, until he heard a screech which he turned his head whipping to a vampire behind him, unfolding the brown, larger wings outside quickly. ` SCRREAACCCHHH--!! ` The vampire quickly hit its muzzle to the wall, whining in pain because Aka had ducked and ran away. ` Too bad, eat the dirt instead, ` Aka said. Mer looked to see a vampire now going for her, which she jumped onto another platform and pushed the rock, rolling. As the vampire jumped onto the edge, the rock was in front of it suddenly, the vampire screeched in surprise-- BAM! Mer waited for few second, until she heard lot of sudden 'poof'. Lot of vampire were gone by falling due to the bigger rock. Aww yes. Mer thought. Dernière modification le 1451406960000 |
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help i have writer block but here u go i'll post a long one next time ;p `` New friend! Hello! `` After lot of rounds, Mer and Aka had survived. They both were panting, but it was worth because it was fun. Aka looked at the mouse still playing. Much energy? He said. ` Hey, Mer- ` He turned to see Mer already being gone. NOT AGAIN. He looked around wondering where that female mouse could be, which he noticed her going toward the blue portal, which was used to leave the room.` Wait, come on, i'm not so fast unlike you. ` After leaving the room, there was another larger tree, along with some of plants. Some mice were looked like they were also exploring as well. Mer was walking quietly, as bored. She noticed another portal. ` What is it? ` Aka asked. Mer answered. ` I don't know, let's try it. ` She sounded energetic as if she wanted to try it again, which Aka groaned in annoyance whilst following after Mer. That's when suddenly a scream was heard as if something was falling down, and THUDDD-! Mar whipped her head in surprise, only to see a white- no, different pelted mouse. Another female mouse raised her head shaking some small twig away, and then asked in a confused tone. ` Uh, what happened? ` Mer stared. ` ... ` She was confused and noticed Aka was struggling under. ` halpz. ` He muttured softly, which the female mouse realised and got off. ` Oh! I am so sorry! ` She said in indeed a 'sorry' tone, as she lashed her tail. Aka was patting some dust away. ` Yeah yeah, it's okay, so how the flying blazes did you fall from the tree or sky? ` He asked. The female mouse rolled her eyes. ` Pfff, dont even need to ask of that. I'm going now. ` She said, which Aka thought with annoyance. She's weird.. The female mouse perked her ears, as she turned her head slightly to Aka. ` That was rude, genius. ` He was slightly freaked at that. How did she know about what am i thinking? Dernière modification le 1451430360000 |
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four chapter. mmm, this time it's long. yay. yay. y-- oh yeah, i hope in ending that it's okay, like, getting your OC's personality right, smartie .3. ` Adventureeee~ ` The female mouse was explaining the story, and Aka had noticed that each minutes she was slowly getting to be friendly to get along with. However, Mer was actually focused on some other things but at least she doesn't walk away magically. ` And then this mouse accidentally pushed me. After that, i fell onto the web and then the web broke, as i fell onto a big leaf, and then the bigger branch aaand then through the leaves, and now i crashed onto you. ` Aka was amazed at how he didn't get a headache from a mouse falling onto him like that so high. Well, atleast things in her way had made her not so faster or heavier. like a rock falling to water without anything in its way. How did she get on the tree, anyway? He thought. ` And then i was like, oh shet! ` She said as she did gestures like crazy, which Aka said. ` Okay okay, that's believable. ` She giggled as she tugged her hat onward slightly, and she said lashing her tail. ` Well, i gotta say, those blindfolds.. how do you even see through? ` Aka perked his ears toward, as he shrugged lightly. ` I don't know. ` He lied quietly. ` Weelll.. okay. ` She said not sure. Although he doesn't know, i think something is.. She thought. ` So, you are going to that portal, right? ` She said as she pointed at the portal, which Aka turned to. ` Well, this, ` He said as he watched Mer. ` mouse Mer wanted to go. We were just curious to see how it would be like in the portal. Anyway, what's your name? ` He asked. The female mouse blinked for once before turning her head to the side. ` Nope. ` He glared. When- oh wait, i bet she could read mind magically. ` Of course, i can read mind duh! ` She yelled as she almost lunged forward, scaring a lot outta Aka for a sec. ` Hey- yes, you can read mind when you just want to, like magic! ` He murmured. ` At least Mer looks nice than you! ` Aka twitched his hidden eye in annoyance, as he raised his imaginary eyebrow. ` ... Well, anyway, do you want to follow us or not? Because Mer and i am going to leave now. ` She blinked. ` Now? ` He replied. ` Yes. ` Mer looked at the two mouse which was about to argue now, which she got up and went on sneakily toward the portal. Dernière modification le 1451518140000 |
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aka get rekt |
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smartiewolfs a dit : yesssss whistle~ aka just got his ass rekt by a girl~ |
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Ref : Edit : nevermind,so there's one : ![]() Real Name : Jerry Henson Username : Jerry Gender : Male Age : 39 Class : Commander ( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal Dislike : Nothing. Like : Being strong,smart,games. Hate : Nothing. Love : G-A-M-E-S. Personality : Smart (sometimes stupid),Nice When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now) Cautious then nice. When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like? Stupid. Weapon (1/2) : A rope-sword. Extras : Nothing special about him Dernière modification le 1451531760000 |
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Csonewforyou a dit : //looks at your class// //looks at the classes tab// //noticing that only Legendary/unknown are for best friends// oh k you are accepted ;p will appear in next chapter now. |
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Omg America is just as I thought she would be gi cant wait for more |