? ? ? How are you supposed to submit a character if you don't know what the story is about.

Sorry I was in a rush ill fix things

Everythings fixed sorry for the inconvenience I was made to watch the super bowl

Chapter 1

Marlee went back to traitor later that morning and first checked to see if she could spot Traitor or hear his voice. She let out a sigh of relilf when she didn't see him or hear him. " Anyone see this mouse named Traitor earlier in this room" Marlee called. "Matter of fact I have" Marlee turned to see where this snobby snort of a mouse came from. A female mouse walked up to her pushing mice out of the way on the way. Marlee squeaked in surprise as the mouse towered above her. "Why would you want to know" she snarled. Marlee suddenly felt very small " I I I heard him but didn't see him a a and figured we should do s s something" Marlee squeaked her voice quivering. "Who died and made you Shaman " She retorted hunching over a very scared Marlee. " N n no one I just think its best to find out the most we can" Marlee said finding the courage to stand up but not to stop shaking. The mouse snarled and Marlee braced herself for another arrogant comment but instead she felt the female mouses body crash into Marlee. Marlee had been in a fight before but not with someone this big! Marlee yelped and the mouse hit her with something heavy. "Kriss stop your gonna kill her" a mouse shouter. Kriss stopped and raised the hard object above her head and slammed it on to Marlee. She stopped then. Marlee laied on the floor fighting for breath quivering with fear she saw some mice with docter hats picker her up and out of the corner of her eye she saw Kriss following. Neather Kriss or Marlee new that somewhere just out of sight was a mouse laughing at what had just happened.

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Thanks I have some writers block at the moment but ill be back to writing in no time

Chapter 2

Marlee awakened and saw Kriss by her side watching her. Marlee covered her face in the blanket as Kriss began to speak "sorry" she muttered " I its okay but why did you get so mad about it" Marlee said standing up now. " Well" Kriss started " I have been trying to figure this guys out for awhile and when I found out that someone else started looking I got mad" she said. The moment only lasted a little longer but then the fire came back into Kriss's eyes. " Why would you care about what happens to me" she growled "Kriss stop it! You use your anger to scare people. Well how about trying to be nice for a change and try to make some real friends!" Marlee yelled at Kriss. Kriss started to feel small " wow no one has ever yelled at me" she said. " I'm sorry" marlee said looking down "no no I like your spirt you may be a awesome start to a friend" Kriss said smiling "ok" marlee said "Lets go find out who this person is!" Marlee yelled

Anyone reading can u plz submit a char I'm running out of ideas and may need to take a long time to think something up

I'll put a character!

I also may submit a character

Name: Sapphire
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: (links or discription please) http://orig15.deviantart.net/1522/f/2016/149/6/7/560_5_0b400e1_0_0_22_08600f4_0ed8e00_0ffc57e_0f42_by_snowstormishdabest-da4am26.png
personality: Energetic, a weeaboo, slightly annoying, and suspicious of others. (aka me)
Bio: Her mother disowned her at a young age. There were no orphanages, so she was forced to be sent out into the world. She has always liked marshmallows more than cheese, making her an outcast.
Does your character like traitor: Yes
Sham, normal mouse., main mouse: Main mouse