۩۞۩ Backstabber: The Past is in the Past.... ۩۞۩

۩۞۩ Backstabber ۩۞۩

Hello everyone.
My name is Cherrieburst, and I am new to fanfictions.
This fanfiction is an original idea, and anything that relates to this is completely coincidencial.
I love writing stories, but I suck at making them.
I've never made a story online before, and I had to get help from a certain friend.
This story is just in my imagination. Any places, happenings, and characters, living or dead, that are real, is also completely coincidencial.

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Intro - Introduction and a bunch of stuff you should know.
Prologue - The prologue and a little info about the plot.
Characters - The characters, of course, and the form. (Follow the form rules)
Other Things - It says it in the title.

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That is all for now.
I hope you enjoy reading this story.
(And please don't copy, otherwise people will hate you for copying)

۩۞۩ Prologue ۩۞۩

Leaves from the trees are falling as Amie was staring at the sunset. It was a beautiful view, but not beautiful enough to make her forget what happened between her and her best friend. "I have to tell her i'm sorry, I don't feel accomplished for what I did to her." Amie said as she pulled out a piece of paper and started writing something. The more she writes, the more tears come out of her eyes. Once she was finished writing, she quickly folded the note with her little paws, opened her backpack and shoved in inside. She wasn't sure what her best friend will think of her, but it's now or never; she could lose her greatest friend, who was always by her side and ready to help. Amie stood up, grabbed her backpack and went back to her house.

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Amie went inside her house and rang the doorbell. After a while, she sighed and just opened the door. She got in, but nobody was home. Amie went upstairs to get changed, and got back down. She went inside the kitchen and looked inside the refrigerator. All she saw was milk and some leftover cheese. She tasted some of the cheese, and spat it out. "Yuck! It's rotten!" she exclaimed. Amie grabbed the milk and a glass. She was starving because she haven't eaten fresh cheese since last week. Her mom wasn't home for days, so Amie was used to being alone. She drank the milk and sighed. "Tomorrow is going to be tough" she said. After drinking the milk, she put it back in the refrigerator and went to bed.

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The next day, Amie woke up bright and early and changed. She grabbed a basket and went out to the supermarket to buy some food. She was about to grab some milk, when someone mysterious came in. Everyone glared at the mouse, even Amie. The mysterious mouse was walking towards Amie, and then stopped. She stared at Amie like she was staring into her soul. Amie was frightened, and let the mouse pass to grab some water. Amie continued grabbing stuff she needed, and went to the counter to pay for it.

۩۞۩ Characters ۩۞۩

These are the characters that is in the story.
Character slots: 5/12

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Name: Amie Stone
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Personality: Loner, only hangs out with her bestfriend.
Brief Backstory: When she was 3, her dad died, so her mom was looking for a new husband. Amie is always alone in her house, and barely eats normally.

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Here is the character form
(Note that only Amie is on the characters list, but you can make your own characters)

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Brief Backstory:

Do not post more than one character. Keeping track of so many mice is very hard.
Do not include powers! This is just about normal mice.
The character has to be 5+ years old to get accepted.
Do not make your character perfect. No mouse is perfect.

۩۞۩ Other Things ۩۞۩

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Hello! May I make a character for this great fanfiction?

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Definitelly applying!

I hope you will accept this,i like making complicated characters ^^;

Ooooohhhhh mwaah pleaz! Good luck!

Name: Taraz Chez
Age:11
Gender: Female
Personality: Kind, nervous, shy, a little bit emotional/worries too much
Beirf Backstory: Parents died a long time ago as Taraz tries to find who killed them. Taraz sometimes gets evil as she always sneaks into mouses home and steal cheese. She gets evil when she is very mad or something terrible happened.
Extra: She always has red eyes even if she is good, she carries an umbrella, she has an paint brush as her weapon][/spoiler]

Intro
Chapter One

۩۞۩ Random Intro ۩۞۩

Hello again.
I'm glad to see that you liked the fanfiction.
I try to make it as simple as possible.
So, yeah.

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eeveewings a dit :
Hello! May I make a character for this great fanfiction?

♥♥♥

Name

Hollie

Age

15

Gender

Female

Personality

Mischievous, Protective, Nice

Brief Backstory

Hollie was born in the urban, where she learned that claustrophobia would never be spared! She never really made friends, and was considered a 'loner." She carried this role all throughout her life.

Sure, this character is accepted.
(Colors are really nice though)

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bublamorce a dit :
Definitelly applying!

He has wings,but if folded,they can't be seen in his fur. His right wing is severely damaged. He can't fly! Has also an X scar on both sides of his left leg
Name: Daniel 'Corrupted'
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Personality: Very silent,speaks only if needed, Nice, A little shy
Brief Backstory: While he was 9,he was captured and kept in some kind of facility as a test subject. After 50 tests,they marked him as 'Corrupted' and wanted to just get rid of him by killing him in some way. Since he learned some strenght and became smarter in the tests,he succesfully escaped. He never really had friends after that. This testing left a huge impact on him. Sometimes has flashbacks. Still has some stuff from the testing facility (for example,the portal gun). Nicknamed as Corrupted,when other mice discovered his story.
His cap has this logo on it

It's totally up to you,how will you make other mice call him. He gets kinda weird if other's call him Corrupted. His bad mood wears off after some moments.

I hope you will accept this,i like making complicated characters ^^;

I don't care if it's complicated.
Atleast you followed the form rules.

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begacheesy a dit :
Ooooohhhhh mwaah pleaz! Good luck!

Name: Taraz Chez
Age:11
Gender: Female
Personality: Kind, nervous, shy, a little bit emotional/worries too much
Beirf Backstory: Parents died a long time ago as Taraz tries to find who killed them. Taraz sometimes gets evil as she always sneaks into mouses home and steal cheese. She gets evil when she is very mad or something terrible happened.
Extra: She always has red eyes even if she is good, she carries an umbrella, she has an paint brush as her weapon][/spoiler]

Of course you can join.
I would totally need the good luck.

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۩۞۩ Chapter One ۩۞۩

After paying for her things, Amie went out of the supermarket and walked back home. She still haven't forgotten about the mysterious mouse, and was filled with determination to really know who the mouse was. While she was thinking, she didnt know that she already bumped into another mouse. "S-sorry..." the mouse said, went around Amie and kept on walking. Amie continued walking, but as curious as she is, she attempted to run after the mouse. "Hello? Who are you?" Amie asked. The mouse didn't speak, and just stared at her. "Cat got your tongue?" Amie giggled. "Daniel. You?" the mouse said. "I'm Amie. It's nice to see you." Amie said. Then, Daniel turned around and kept on walking. Amie did the same, but in the opposite direction.

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When Amie reached her house, she got in and quickly rushed to the kitchen. She put meat and other food inside her refrigerator, canned goods on the shelves, and some kitchenware, such as frying pans and sauce pans, inside the kitchen cabinets. Amie started to cook cheese omelette when someone rang the doorbell. She went out of the kitchen and opened the door. It was her best friend. Amie was shocked. "Hey, Amie." her best friend said. "Look, Carmen, i'm sorry for what I did. Will you ever forgive me?" Amie begged. "Of course, you're my best friend. Can I come in?" Carmen asked. "Sure." Amie said. Carmen came in, and smelled something. "Amie, what's that smell? Is something burning?" Carmen asked and pinched her nose. "Burning? Uh-oh..." Amie said and rushed into the kitchen. Her cheese omelette was burning, so she quickly threw water on it and threw the omelette outside. Carmen went inside the kitchen. "It's a long story..." Amie said. "Here. I'll help you cook."

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"I have to go to the bathroom. You can eat first." Amie said and went to the bathroom. Carmen sliced the omelette into half. She quickly put a drop of poison on Amie's half. She pulled the non-poisoned half towards herself, and left the poisoned one for Amie to eat. Just after that, Amie was out of the bathroom. "Here you go. I saved this half for you." Carmen said, pointing at the poisoned omelette. "This sure looks good!" Amie exclaimed, stuffing omelette into her mouth. "Ugh! Carmen, what did you put in this omelette? It tastes horrible!" Amie said as she pushed the plate. Then, she dropped to the floor, rolling around while holding her neck. "Amie!" Carmen exclaimed. After that, poor Amie was already poisoned, but alive. Trying not to be suspicious, Carmen called the ambulance. After a little while, the ambulance came and took Amie to the hospital.

Ahhh this story is so nice!

Random Intro
Chapter Two

۩۞۩ Random Intro ۩۞۩

Hello (Jesus why do I keep saying that)
This Chapter is going to be shorter, since i'm bored as hell.
But the problem is, i'm going to need more characters (You know why)
I don't want to make characters by my own, honestly.
I'm sorry if my story is a little noob-ish, like I said, this is my first story online.

۩۞۩ Chapter Two ۩۞۩

"H-huh? Where am I?" Amie asked and blinked. "You're in the hospital. Didn't you get poisoned?" Carmen said. "Speaking of getting poisoned, what was in that omelette? I swear I'd rather eat the burnt one." Amie said, disgusted. "I don't know. Usually, it tastes good." Carmen thought. "It doesn't matter, I need to get out of here!" Amie complained. Just after that, the nurse came. She told Amie that she can go out of the hospital. Then, they went back to Amie's house. After a little while, they were eating toast. Meanwhile, someone tumbled out of Amie's window. Of course, Amie and Carmen heard it from upstairs. They went up the staircase as fast as their tiny paws could carry them.

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They were surprised by what they saw upstairs. It was a mouse that originally planned to steal cheese. "Um, what are you doing here?" Carmen asked the mouse. "I was trying to steal your cheese..." the mouse answered and sighed. "Why?" Amie asked. "Isn't it wrong to steal cheese?". "I'm hungry. For the last 3 days I haven't eaten anything." the mouse said. "The kitchen is downstairs." Carmen said and led the mouse to the kitchen.

(Sorry, it was shorter than the prologue)

Oh my!
I love your story so much!

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Ehahahaha love it :D

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W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

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cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

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cherrieburst a dit :
cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

About the grammar thing, not everyone is from America. Some people might be trying hard to learn English, after all, it's said to be the hardest language to learn.
Not to start a flame-war.

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Eeveewings a dit :
cherrieburst a dit :
cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

About the grammar thing, not everyone is from America. Some people might be trying hard to learn English, after all, it's said to be the hardest language to learn.
Not to start a flame-war.

yea, i agree :P

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begacheesy a dit :
Eeveewings a dit :
cherrieburst a dit :
cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

About the grammar thing, not everyone is from America. Some people might be trying hard to learn English, after all, it's said to be the hardest language to learn.
Not to start a flame-war.

yea, i agree :P

(Sorry, i'm too dumb to discriminate people for their grammar and such)
I'm serious. If you don't mind, i'm now going to shut up and buy a million fire extinguishers to stop the problems going over on my head now :) Im very sorry to the person who I judged his/her "grammar"

Now were back on topic, I'll do chapter three later.
Sincerely, your obvious author, Cherrieburst :)
(I'm totally not stressed out because my little brother deleted all my freaking files, my edited photos that I worked so damn hard on, and everything I downloaded including Minecraft which I paid money for. And now i'm about to be a very violent sister who cares about pixels and hit my little brother with a full water bottle)
Edit: Don't mind my temper, it always happens once I get irritated by my little brother.

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#17

cherrieburst a dit :
begacheesy a dit :
Eeveewings a dit :
cherrieburst a dit :
cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

About the grammar thing, not everyone is from America. Some people might be trying hard to learn English, after all, it's said to be the hardest language to learn.
Not to start a flame-war.

yea, i agree :P

(Sorry, i'm too dumb to discriminate people for their grammar and such)
I'm serious. If you don't mind, i'm now going to shut up and buy a million fire extinguishers to stop the problems going over on my head now :) Im very sorry to the person who I judged his/her "grammar"

Now were back on topic, I'll do chapter three later.
Sincerely, your obvious author, Cherrieburst :)
(I'm totally not stressed out because my little brother deleted all my freaking files, my edited photos that I worked so damn hard on, and everything I downloaded including Minecraft which I paid money for. And now i'm about to be a very violent sister who cares about pixels and hit my little brother with a full water bottle)

Don't worry cherrie! No biggie, people make mistakes so it's fine! :)
And whilst reading your stories you just gave me some ideas to add in my story at school! (but i'm not copying this story ^^)

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cherrieburst a dit :
begacheesy a dit :
Eeveewings a dit :
cherrieburst a dit :
cherrysodar a dit :
W-wait!!!
May i join aswell if there is any space left for me?? :)

Name: Apsy
Brief: An farmer but also an person who does karate. She got some weird powers that she can shapeshift and sometimes she causes trouble. Something happened to her eye so she wears an eye patch.

Did you read the form rules?
Also, the form has to be complete.
What's her age, personality, and gender?
And you can clearly see that I do not allow powers here. Skill and strength is okay, but I don't know if I can fit shapeshifting in this story.
The next time you apply for a fanfiction, please follow the form and the form rules :)
Since I don't want to be very rude, I'll give you another chance to redo your form. If you don't do it correctly, I would NOT accept your character.
You may want to work on your grammar though, but I don't want to bring up a huge argument about me being "rude".
Reputation is a must. Have a great day!

About the grammar thing, not everyone is from America. Some people might be trying hard to learn English, after all, it's said to be the hardest language to learn.
Not to start a flame-war.

yea, i agree :P

(Sorry, i'm too dumb to discriminate people for their grammar and such)
I'm serious. If you don't mind, i'm now going to shut up and buy a million fire extinguishers to stop the problems going over on my head now :) Im very sorry to the person who I judged his/her "grammar"

Now were back on topic, I'll do chapter three later.
Sincerely, your obvious author, Cherrieburst :)
(I'm totally not stressed out because my little brother deleted all my freaking files, my edited photos that I worked so damn hard on, and everything I downloaded including Minecraft which I paid money for. And now i'm about to be a very violent sister who cares about pixels and hit my little brother with a full water bottle)
Edit: Don't mind my temper, it always happens once I get irritated by my little brother.

It's alright, Cherrie. I get very, stressed out a lot. I've never understood being the older sibling, but I still will always try and be there for everyone who has.

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