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[fanfic] Kikoo till' the end
Wingcestor
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if you see any typos tell me~
yes i am using my bouboum acc for the main character

proluge~
"slash c cfm bot..hi.!"
"Kikoo pwet Icicl!"
then my whispers stopped working.I decided to start playing Bouboum or Transformice instead of doing other things like watching some kind of anime.Of course i chose Bouboum. I killed Ianubisgurl and myself,got some nuts and got back to my anime tab.Then I checked the forum and got back to bouboum and got killed.I decided to go to ranked mode because i would get more nuts.I got distracted by my anime and ended up stopping playing for now. I decided that i would play tfm next time.
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ohey the flags worked
character form~~
tfm username:
personality:
Bouboum or Tfm?:
character look:
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if someone makes a character look for icicl that would be great!
characters~~
tfm username: Icicl
personality: Wild,crazy,there is always one person who dosent understand her,cat lover,wants to learn japanese,
Bouboum or Tfm?: both
character look: -coming soon-
Wingcestor
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post for chapters and stuff
fr for announcements
br for chapters
pl for viewer interaction notes
announcements
-speech starts at chap 2 if characters come
-viewer interacting notes for chapters starting at chapter 1
-paragraphs!!
chapters
chapter 1.
transornuts?
I woke up.My mum said that it was too late to go to school.I had a mini tummy ache for some reason so i went to the toilet.Then I read for a while then I hopped on the laptop.I switched it on and got on tfm.I went on the forums and noticed bouboum had its own disscussions...Thing.I clicked on it and looked around then I chose the thread that had the link to Bouboum on it.I Clicked on it and logged on Icicl and played in room 1 for a while.Then I went to ranked mode.I noticed that you didnt get nuts from killing people anymore.Instead you had to walk over these nut tokens that only you saw.I played for a while and then i got onto my tfm tab and logged on Wingcestor. I wanted to make a Bootcamp map.

I looked around on cfm for a bit to find some ideas but i failed.The forums was quiet and i didnt get cheese these days unless there was an event on.
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notes for viewers!!
-can you help me with my bc map?
Satash
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Since you're going around asking if people likes it, no I don't.
Your prolouge is confusing as hell. Not confusing really but badly written so I can't understand what's taking place, sorry bud, it needs some work.
Go to the EN Writers thread and ask for critiques.

The main reasons why I don't like it is because holy crap it's a wall of text, it's first person (I do not like first-person as they're usually badly written), and you're not spacing your sentences.

You know you're doing something wrong when I really had to ask myself, "Is this some kind of journal or a story?"
Wingcestor
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woo!!
thanks
a lot
no rlly
Sadlelight
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~qutoes saatash~

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