[fanfic] Kikoo till' the end |
Wingcestor « Citoyen » 1384807800000
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if you see any typos tell me~ yes i am using my bouboum acc for the main character proluge~ "slash c cfm bot..hi.!" "Kikoo pwet Icicl!" then my whispers stopped working.I decided to start playing Bouboum or Transformice instead of doing other things like watching some kind of anime.Of course i chose Bouboum. I killed Ianubisgurl and myself,got some nuts and got back to my anime tab.Then I checked the forum and got back to bouboum and got killed.I decided to go to ranked mode because i would get more nuts.I got distracted by my anime and ended up stopping playing for now. I decided that i would play tfm next time. ~~ ohey the flags worked character form~~ tfm username: personality: Bouboum or Tfm?: character look: ~~ if someone makes a character look for icicl that would be great! characters~~ tfm username: Icicl personality: Wild,crazy,there is always one person who dosent understand her,cat lover,wants to learn japanese, Bouboum or Tfm?: both character look: -coming soon- |
Wingcestor « Citoyen » 1384807920000
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post for chapters and stuff fr for announcements br for chapters pl for viewer interaction notes announcements -speech starts at chap 2 if characters come -viewer interacting notes for chapters starting at chapter 1 -paragraphs!! chapters chapter 1. transornuts? I woke up.My mum said that it was too late to go to school.I had a mini tummy ache for some reason so i went to the toilet.Then I read for a while then I hopped on the laptop.I switched it on and got on tfm.I went on the forums and noticed bouboum had its own disscussions...Thing.I clicked on it and looked around then I chose the thread that had the link to Bouboum on it.I Clicked on it and logged on Icicl and played in room 1 for a while.Then I went to ranked mode.I noticed that you didnt get nuts from killing people anymore.Instead you had to walk over these nut tokens that only you saw.I played for a while and then i got onto my tfm tab and logged on Wingcestor. I wanted to make a Bootcamp map. I looked around on cfm for a bit to find some ideas but i failed.The forums was quiet and i didnt get cheese these days unless there was an event on. ~~ notes for viewers!! -can you help me with my bc map? |
Satash « Citoyen » 1384859100000
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Since you're going around asking if people likes it, no I don't. Your prolouge is confusing as hell. Not confusing really but badly written so I can't understand what's taking place, sorry bud, it needs some work. Go to the EN Writers thread and ask for critiques. The main reasons why I don't like it is because holy crap it's a wall of text, it's first person (I do not like first-person as they're usually badly written), and you're not spacing your sentences. You know you're doing something wrong when I really had to ask myself, "Is this some kind of journal or a story?" |
Wingcestor « Citoyen » 1384859520000
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woo!! thanks a lot no rlly |
Sadlelight « Citoyen » 1386552780000
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~qutoes saatash~ ikr |