The Lone Warrior Cat (unfinished) |
Pengweneytwo « Citoyen » 1411161600000
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This is the unfinished version. The finished version will have pictures. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Lone Warrior Cat By: Pengweneytwo Chapter 1 Clover’s Secret "Here Wiskers! Here Clover!" ten year old Katherine called her cats. "I wonder what Katherine wants." Clover said. "Hopefully it's food, because I'm hungry." Wiskers said. "Wiskers, you're always hungry when Katherine calls us." "Whatever, Clover." Wiskers said in an annoyed voice. "Here's some food, you two must be hungry, you haven't eaten all day." Kathrine put the food and drink bowl in front of them. That night, everyone was asleep peacefully, except for Clover and Wiskers. The house was quiet. "I think it's time." Clover mummbled to himself. "Wiskers, you up?" Clover asked. "Ya" replied Wiskers. "Follow me" Clover commanded. "Why Clover?" "Just come, it's important." replied Clover. "Fine Clover, but this better be good.” Wiskers said annoyedly. They walked down the hall, and then down the stairs. Clover stopped at the front door. "Why did we stop here Clover?" "Beacause we're going outside." Clover replied. "What do you mean Clover? I'm not allowed outside, and neither are you. ESPECIALLY at night!" said Wiskers. ''Calm down Wiskers, I know what I'm doing. I'm outside practically every night. "Why would you-" Wiskers calmed herself down. "What's it like outside, Clover?" Wiskers asked. "If you follow me, Wiskers, you'll see. "Ok, ok Clover, lets go. Wait, how will you open the door?" "I have my ways." Clover replied. Clover used his claws, unlocked, and opened the door. "How the tail did you do that!" Wiskers said with the most surprised face Clover had seen. "Lets go, I'll tell you later. "Ok!" said Wiskers. They walked outside, Clover pushed the door closed with his paw. Clover kept walking, and Wiskers kept following. They were in the woods that were only 10 minutes away from home. As they were walking, Wiskers noticed a weird shadow. It's just nothing,Wiskers thought I'll just keep walking. Then Wiskers noticed something weird. She saw the shadow again, it was like it was following her and Clover. Then she noticed something different, something.... glowing. "Clover..." "Ya Wiskers?" "Why is that shadow following us?" Wiskers said in fear. "What do you mean?" Clover asked. A fox pounced out. "THAT!" Wiskers yelled. ''Run, just run to that big tree!!! Clover yelled to Wiskers. Wiskers ran as fast as she could to a huge, tall old tree. Clover tried to fight off the fox. The fox scratched a cut on Clover's ear. Clover scratched back. He scratched across the fox's face. The fox ran off into the darkness of the night. "Wow" Wiskers was shocked. Clover ran to Wiskers at the big tree. "C'mon we're almost there." Clover said. They padded through the woods further. Then Clover saw the special tree. The WildClan tree. Clover and Wiskers stopped at the special tree. "Wiskers, I want to tell you something." Clover said nervously. "Ok!" Wiskers replied. "I'm.. I'm.. I'm a warrior. Clover said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you like it and you want chapter 2, just... tell me i guess. You can give me feedback! Dernière modification le 1411161720000 |
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Chapter 2 The Clans Wiskers was speechless. She kept staring at Clover. "A warrior." Wiskers hesitated. "Like a warrior who's in a clan?" Wiskers asked. "Ya, I'm in a clan. WildClan." Clover replied. "Cool!" said Wiskers. "Well.. I'm VERY close to the end of being an apprentice. In this "group", I guess you could call it, there are six different clans. WildClan, ForestClan, WaterClan, WeatherClan, DiamondClan, and of course SkyClan. SkyClan is where the souls of our great ancestors are. Beloved or hated, if they passed on there in SkyClan." "Do you become a warrior right away?" Wiskers asked. "No no no no no! It takes moons of training. By the way, a moon is a month if you don't know. If you are born into the clan you will nurse until you are six moons. You will be a kit until twelve moons, by then there should be a mentor for you. When you have a mentor, you will be known as an apprentice. After moons of training and when you're two years, you will be a warrior.. When you get too old to fight anymore, you will be an elder. You will get a ceremony for all of them." Clover explained to Wiskers. “Will I still be known as Wiskers?" she asked. "No. Only with Kathrine and her friends and family. In a clan you pick a name. If you are a kit, which you are because you're ten moons, you will have the start of your name then Kit at the end. If you're an apprentice, like me, you'll have Paw at the end of your name. If you're a warrior, you can have anything at the end of your name, except for kit or paw. I'm Shadowpaw." replied Clover "I want to be.. um... Moonglow. If I were a warrior. So I guess I'm Moonkit?" asked Wiskers. "I'm not trying to be mean, but why Moon? Clover asked. "It's Moonglow because when I was born, the first thing I saw was the full moon. It was beautifully glowing. That's why I wanna be called Moonglow." Wiskers replied. "Oh, okay. Listen, when we get to WildClan, don't say you have an owner, please. Clover said. "Why Clover?" Wiskers replied. "Well.. clan cats don't like kittypets. Just don't mention it to clan cats. Just our little secret. Okay?” replied Clover. "Oh, okay. I get it. But why don't they like cats like us?" Wiskers asked. "I don't know. I never knew why. Well, the tree is right there... want to go to meet my clan?" Clover asked. "Wait. What if someone asks me where I came from?" Wiskers asked. "Say..." Clover thought. "Say, you were born in the woods.... Out of clan territory... and we're friends." Clover replied. "Okay. Well, lets go!" Wiskers said. They ran through a big hole at the very bottom of the tree. They ran around trees, and finally, Clover stopped Wiskers. Clover saw his Clan Leader, Lionstar. Then he saw his mentor, Runninglake. "I have to call you Moonkit when your here." said Clover. "And I'll call you Shadowpaw." added Moonkit. "There's my mentor, Runninglake." Shadowpaw pointed with his tail to a white and orange- brown tom.Want to go meet him?" Clover asked. "Sure!" Moonkit replied. When they were going to talk to Runninglake, he started to walk away. Moonkit and Shadowpaw ran to Runninglake. They caught up to him, and Shadowpaw tapped his mentor's shoulder. Runninglake began to talk to Shadowpaw. "Oh hey, Shadow! Who's this?" Runninglake asked. "Hi! This is Wis... I mean Moonkit.” Shadowpaw hesitated. "Hi!” Moonkit said. “Hi Moonkit! When you want to join the clan you have to talk to the leader.” Runninglake pointed his tail to a brown, white and black tom. Moonkit padded over to Loinstar. She tapped his shoulder with her paw. “Umm.. do I know you? Lionstar asked. “Oh, sorry. I’m new, and Runninglake told me to talk to you.” Moonkit replied. “Oh, okay! I’m going to have to ask you some questions, since you weren’t born into WildClan. Okay, number one, Who brought you to WildClan, and how long have you known the cat.” Lionstar said. “Shadowpaw brought me here, and I’ve known him ever since I was one moon.” “Okay. Question two, how many moons are you?” “I’m ten moons.” Moonkit replied. “You must know the names of all six clans, name them.” Lionstar said. “WildClan, ForestClan, WaterClan, WeatherClan, DiamondClan, and SkyClan.” Moonkit said without any hesitation. “Good. Now, since you’re new here Firewind, our clan Deputy, will be watching you so we can trust you. Don’t be scared if you see her. We did this with every cat in the clan.” Lionstar replied. The sun was starting to rise. Moonkit and Shadowpaw had to go back to the house. Shadowpaw walked over to Moonkit. “Moonkit, we have to go back to Katherine.” Shadowpaw tried to whisper in Moonkit’s ear. “Who’s Katherine?” Lionstar asked. Oh no. No no no no no! Lionstar’s going to know we have an owner! Shadowpaw thought. I have to think quick. “She’s uhh she’s..- Shadowpaw got cut off. “I know you have an owner.” Lionstar said. “You do!” Moonkit and Shadowpaw both said at once. “I, myself was a kittypet. In WildClan, it’s okay if you have an owner. As long as you come every day or night. Just don’t tell other clans. It’s fine, you can go to Katherine.” Lionstar replied with a smile. “Thank you so much!” said Moonkit. “Yes thank you.” Shadowpaw said as well. The sun was rising more and more every second. “See you tonight!” Shadowpaw said to Lionstar. Shadowpaw and Moonkit ran out of WildClan territory, ran through the woods and then they saw Katherine’s house. “C’mon, lets go.” said Moonkit. “When we get into the house we have to be very quiet. Okay?” Shadowpaw said. “Okay.” Moonkit replied. They walked to the door, Shadowpaw unlocked and opened the door the same way he did when they were going outside. Then they went in. Shadowpaw stretched up, and with his claws he pulled and closed the door as quiet as possible. But it wasn’t quiet enough. Katherine woke up. She stretched hers arms up in the air and yawned. “What was that?” Katherine mumbled to herself. She went down the hall. Kathrine was still kind of, half asleep. “Katherine’s coming!!” Moonkit said. “Lets run to our cat beds.” Shadowpaw said. The two cats ran to the living room and into their cat beds just as Katherine was about to walk down the stairs. There’s nothing here, Kathrine thought, it must of been my imagination. Katherine walked back to bed. “Shadowpaw, how will we tell them we know how to go outside and come back?” Moonkit asked. “That’s easy! We don’t.” Shadowpaw replied. “Why?” Moonkit asked. “There’s no way we can, and we could never show them.” Shadowpaw replied. “But I don’t- “ Shadowpaw was already asleep when she was talking. “Whatever.” Moonkit said to herself with a frown. Moonkit fell asleep as well. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hope you liked chapter 2! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 3 The Bad News As Shadowpaw was waking up, he heard Katherine talking. Shadowpaw tried to wake up Moonkit. “Moon, do you hear that?” Shadowpaw asked. “Ya.. it sounds like Katherine and Eliza.” Moonkit replied. “Let’s go see.” said Shadowpaw. Shadowpaw and Moonkit quietly walked to where Katherine and and her sister, Eliza, were talking with their parents. “Katherine, Eliza” Mrs. Hamilton was saying. “We have to move to from Canada to California.” “Okay..” Eliza said. “We can’t bring Clover and Wiskers.” Mr. Hamilton added. “What!! Katherine and Eliza both said at once. “Where will they go?” Katherine asked. “They’ll probably have to go to the adoption center.” Mr. Hamilton replied. “WHAT!” Moonkit said. Moonkit rubbed Katherine’s leg. Then Shadowpaw was rubbing on Eliza’s leg. “Can a friend adopt them?” Eliza asked. “We can ask.” Mrs. Hamilton replied. Eliza raced to the kitchen phone. She dialed her friend, Alexa’s phone number. Alexa answered. “Hello.” Alexa said. “Hey Alexa! Listen, we’re moving to California soon, and we need someone to adopt one or two of our cats. Can you?” Eliza asked. “Umm my dad is allergic to cats, sorry.” Alexa replied. They both hung up. “No luck with her.” Eliza said. “I’ll ask Ruby. She’s wanted a cat for a while now.” Katherine said. Eliza passed the phone to Katherine. She dialed the number. “Hello.” Ruby said. “Hi Ruby. We are moving to California in a few days, and I was wondering if you wanted to adopt Clover or Wiskers or both.” Katherine replied. “Sorry, my mom said I can’t get a pet. Bye.” Ruby hung up. Then Katherine did. “No luck.” Katherine said with a frown. “We have four or five days.” Mrs. Hamilton said. “Why don’t you girls go to bed. It’s 9:50, and you girls have school tomorrow. We can talk more about this tomorrow.” She added. Katherine and Eliza went to bed. Then Mr. Hamilton went to bed. “You guys are going to be fine. I’ll miss you.” Mrs. Hamilton said to the cats. Mrs. Hamilton then went to bed too. “We have to go to WildClan now.” Shadowpaw said. “Okay.” Moonkit replied. Shadowpaw and Moonkit walked down the stairs to the front door. Shadowpaw unlocked, and opened the door the same way he did before. They walked through the same way they did before. Fortunately there were no foxes or any enemies. They walked some more, finally they were at WildClan. Lionstar raced over to Shadowpaw. “Shadowpaw! Shadowpaw! I’m afraid I have some terrible news.” Lionstar said. “More bad news?” Shadowpaw mumbled. “What do you mean more bad news?” Lionstar asked “I’ll tell you after, finish your bad news. Shadowpaw replied. “Okay. As I was saying, I have some bad news. Today we had a battle with Diamond clan.. and Diamondtail took Runninglake. He betrayed us.” Lionstar hesitated. “WHAT! No no no no no no no. This can’t be happening. Shadowpaw paced back and forth. “Ignore him. The other bad news is.. our owners are moving to California, and there trying to get someone to adopt us. That might mean we can’t come here anymore.” Moonkit explained. “Okay. when will you be leaving?” Lionstar asked. “We don’t know, but there trying to find someone in four to five days. We’ll come back every night to give you news about it.” Moonkit replied. “Okay, but for now you should calm down Shadowpaw.” Lionstar said. Moonkit walked over to Shadowpaw. “Shadowpaw, Shadowpaw. It’s going to be okay. Calm down. We’ll get him back.” “No we won’t. We can’t get him back because we can’t cross clan territory. There will be guards everywhere. Okay please don’t tell anyone, Runninglake’s whole family is in DiamondClan, and they’ve wanted him to go to DiamondClan for years, he never did. It’s because he loves WildClan but his family is enemies with WildClan.” Shadowpaw said. “Why are they enemies?” Moonkit asked. “When Runninglake was just born, their den that they were living in got set on fire, and they claim it was Firewind because they have been enemies for too long. But it was actually Diamondstar, DiamondClan’s leader.” Shadowpaw explained. “How do you know it was her?” “Every cat knows now. Diamondstar now is somewhere no one knows. Well, she might be alive. Her daughter, Shiningstar, is now the clan leader.” Shadowpaw replied. “How do you know so much about DiamondClan?” “I was born in DiamondClan.” he replied. “But you said you were-” Moonkit got cut off. “I know what I said. I told you I was born at Katherine and Eliza’s house, but that was because I didn’t want to tell you about the clans and outside. If I did, you would want to be outside, you were too young. Too jumpy.” Shadowpaw said. “Oh. I get it. You thought I would be too hyper, too curious. You think I wouldn’t be ready. I was ready when I was born, but no, everyone thinks I’m too hyper. I thought you were nice, honest to me. Well you know what, my mom was a clan leader. WeatherClan leader. And you know what else? My dad used to be ForestClan leader.” Moonkit yelled. “That’s not what I meant!” Shadowpaw replied nervously. “Then what did you mean? Huh?” Moonkit barked back. “Why are you over reacting?” he asked. “Before I met you everyone always said I was too hyper, too bouncy. I hated it. When I met you You were really nice. And maybe I do overreact.” “I think we should stop.” “Stop what?” Moonkit asked. “Fighting!” Shadowpaw replied. “Fine.” “I’m sorry if I offended you.” Shadowpaw said. “It’s fine I guess. I can overreact sometimes.” Moonkit looked down. “Can I tell you something?” “Of course!” he replied. A beautiful brown, and orange-brown stripes, green-eyed fluffy she-cat walked over to Shadowpaw. “Hi Shadowpaw.” Sparklepaw said. Dernière modification le 1411164840000 |
Tadame « Citoyen » 1411225800000
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How could Katherine not notice the cut on Shadowpaw's ear when she saw him? e.e |
Pengweneytwo « Citoyen » 1411253580000
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She wasn't really paying attention. Also it was dark so she wouldn't be able to see it. |