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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR WARS
EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS
Luke Skywalker has vanished. In his absence,
the sinister FIRST ORDER has risen from the
ashes of the Empire and will not rest until
Skywalker, the last Jedi, has been destroyed.
With the support of the REPUBLIC, General
Leia Organa leads a brave RESISTANCE. She is
desperate to find her brother Luke and gain
his help in restoring peace and justice to
the galaxy.
Leia has sent her most daring pilot on a secret
mission to Jakku, where an old ally has
discovered a clue to Luke's whereabouts....
PAN across the star field to a bright moon. A RUMBLING is
FELT. A VAST STAR DESTROYER -- unlike any we have seen --
HURTLES PAST US, of seemingly endless length, eclipsing the
moon. After a long beat, FOUR TRANSPORT SHIPS fly from a
hangar. We HOLD ON THEM NOW, as they fly off toward a distant
planet. Jakku. MUSIC BUILDS AND WE...
CUT TO BLACK.
A GROWING ROAR of MEAN ENGINES -- gnarled RADIO CALLS, the
SHUDDERING of a ship's hull. Then FLASHES OF LIGHT: for an
instant we see a STORMTROOPER -- then BLACKNESS. Then ANOTHER
STORMTROOPER, then it's gone.
The FLICKERING CONTINUES until the LIGHTS ARE CONSTANT. We
are in:
INT. TROOP TRANSPORT VEHICLE - NIGHT
TWENTY STORMTROOPERS. Holding on at attention, moving to
the ship's rhythm, in the tense moments before a raid. A
FILTERED COMMAND and they LOCK AND LOAD their heavy blaster
rifles. The BRUTAL NOISE is replaced by SUDDEN, SHOCKING
QUIET:
EXT. JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
WIDE SHOT of a small, peaceful village. Distant sounds of
native animals. A single wind chime.
Suddenly a DROID RISES INTO FRAME, CLOSE: ROUND and SKITTERY,
orange and white, this is BB-8.

Holy thats real
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THE SCRIPT XDDD
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EXT. JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
TRACK FAST with Poe as he and BB-8 hurry through the village,
various ARMED VILLAGERS taking position, prepared to defend.
EXT. JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
A ROAR of WIND and DUST: the TRANSPORTS LAND. Stormtroopers
come out FIRING BLASTERS -- the VILLAGERS FIRE BACK -- many
are HIT!
EXT. RISE ADJACENT TO VILLAGE - NIGHT
Poe runs to an X-WING fighter, parked at a distance from the
village, hidden behind a ROCK OUTCROPPING.
POE
Come on, BB-8! Hurry!
Poe sends BB-8 into the droid socket / co-pilot seat -- he
moves to the cockpit -- the CONTROLS COME TO LIFE. As the
CANOPY CLOSES, Poe shoots a quick look back: the ENEMY ARRIVES
IN THE DISTANCE.
Poe urgently works the controls -- BB-8 BEEPS.
The X-WING LANDING LIGHTS COME ON, ENGINES WHINE TO LIFE!
But just then:
Poe's ship is suddenly HIT BY BLASTERFIRE! Poe turns to
look: two STORMTROOPERS CHARGE HIS WAY, FIRING!
POE (CONT'D)
I see 'em!
BB-8 BEEPS nervously as Poe GRABS HIS CONTROLS and FIRES AT
THEM, using the X-wing's drop-down antipersonnel blaster!
The two Troopers are BLOWN AWAY in the large BLAST HITS!
Poe tries to start the ship now, but the ENGINES SPUTTER.
Concerned, he opens his canopy, jumps down, moves to the
back of his ship: BAD DAMAGE ON THE REAR ENGINE PANEL.
They're in trouble.
EXT. JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
Lor San Tekka moves sadly through the village as STORMTROOPERS
wielding FLAME THROWERS destroy structures. Surrendering
Villagers are ROUNDED UP. Penned ANIMALS panic.
EXT. RISE ADJACENT TO THE VILLAGE - NIGHT
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Back at the X-wing, Poe kneels beneath his ship, pulls from
the leather sack a SMALL, OLD ARTIFACT which he inserts into
BB-8 -- the droid's MULTI-READER ENVELOPS it.
POE
You take this. It's safer with you
than it is with me. You get as far
away from here as you can. Do you
hear me?
(BB-8 BEEPS, hesitates)
I'll come back for you! It will be
alright.
BB-8 watches Poe run off. BEEP-WHINES nervously, then turns
and heads off. Turns back once to look at Poe, then ROLLS
AWAY. Poe uses his blaster rifle to fire at incoming troopers
from cover.
EXT. JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
The Troopers and villagers in battle -- as one Trooper is
HIT and goes down. Another -- OUR TROOPER -- KNEELS to help.
The hit trooper raises a torn, bloody glove -- his HUMAN
HAND visible -- and MARKS OUR STORMTROOPER'S MASK WITH BLOOD
just before he dies. Our Trooper, stands -- overwhelmed by
the battle.
AN IMPOSING SHUTTLE CRAFT -- VERTICAL WINGSPAN 90 FEET TALL --
LANDS NEAR THE TRANSPORT VEHICLES.
The shuttle craft door OPENS -- through the wind and smoke,
KYLO REN exits the ship: a TALL, DARK FIGURE, he strides
through the chaos toward San Tekka.
A senior Trooper moves to our blood-marked Trooper, and orders
him:
SENIOR TROOPER
Stay here.
Our Trooper nods.
Kylo Ren stops before the outraged Lor San Tekka, dwarfing
him. Only now does it become apparent that Kylo Ren wears a
DARK MASK, marked by battle. Inset metal lines reflect FIRE.
KYLO REN
Look how old you've become.
LOR SAN TEKKA
Something far worse has happened to
you.
Our blood-marked TROOPER is placed in line with other
stormtroopers.
KYLO REN
You know what I've come for.
(CONTINUED)
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I can hear this beauty..
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Khonshu a dit :
THE SCRIPT XDDD

I told you I have the script XD
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CONTINUED: LOR SAN TEKKA
I know where you come from. Before
you called yourself Kylo Ren.
KYLO REN
The map to Skywalker. We know you've
found it, and now you're going to
give it to the First Order.
Adjacent to the village, Poe enters frame -- sees the Ren/San
Tekka exchange continue.
LOR SAN TEKKA
The First Order rose from the dark
side... you did not.
KYLO REN
I'll show you the dark side.
LOR SAN TEKKA
You may try, but you cannot deny the
truth that is your family.
Suddenly Kylo Ren raises his LIGHTSABER -- IGNITES IT --
PERPENDICULAR SMALLER BLADES AT THE HILT, A UNIQUE BUZZ --
YELLOW/RED ENERGY, SPITTING SPARKS AND SMOKE --
KYLO REN
You're so right.
And as he RIPS IT DOWN ACROSS SAN TEKKA!
Poe, RUNNING, SEES THIS AND YELLS, AIMS HIS BLASTER AND FIRES
AT KYLO REN! Instantly:
Kylo Ren RAISES HIS HAND -- POE'S BLAST FREEZES -- THE BOLT
OF ENERGY STRAINING AND VIBRATING IN MID AIR!
Kylo Ren sees Poe, who suddenly CANNOT MOVE, but strains to.
He is grabbed by Stormtroopers who drag him past the
VIBRATING, FROZEN BLAST, to Kylo Ren.
A Stormtrooper begins a brutal PAT DOWN. Kylo Ren moves
closer. Poe just glares. The Stormtrooper KICKS OUT Poe's
legs -- he lands hard on his knees.
Kylo Ren kneels to look at Poe.
POE
So who talks first? You talk first?
KYLO REN
The old man gave it to you.
POE
(indicates Kylo's
mask)
It's just very hard to understand
you with all the...
(CONTINUED)
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CONTINUED:
KYLO REN
(to troopers)
Search him.
POE
... Apparatus.
The Troopers roughly pull Poe away. A Stormtrooper begins a
brutal PAT DOWN. Kylo Ren moves closer.
Poe just glares as the pat down ends.
STORMTROOPER #1
Nothing, sir.
KYLO REN
Put him on board.
Kylo Ren regards the Stormtroopers with the rounded up
Villagers, then turns to the CHROME-SKINNED, FEMALE BLACKCAPED HEAD STORMTROOPER, CAPTAIN PHASMA.
CAPTAIN PHASMA
Sir, the villagers.
KYLO REN
Kill them all.
Phasma nods, steps forward:
CAPTAIN PHASMA
On my command!
The Troopers, including OURS, aim at the Villagers.
CAPTAIN PHASMA (CONT'D)
Fire!
Poe is roughly PULLED into a transport ship, the ramp LIFTS.
All around our Trooper BLASTERFIRE ERUPTS -- but we're WIDE
ENOUGH to see he ISN'T FIRING. PUSH IN until the FIRING
STOPS. All the Stormtroopers SPREAD OUT TO SEARCH -- except
ours.
Kylo Ren heads back toward his ship. But then he STOPS.
Feels something. TURNS AND LOOKS AT OUR STORMTROOPER for a
LONG MOMENT. Our Trooper can barely meet his gaze; knows
he's doomed.
Kylo Ren then heads off -- passes the FROZEN BLAST, which,
after a beat, GOES FREE AND SLAMS INTO A NEARBY STRUCTURE,
scaring the hell out of our Stormtrooper.
EXT. EDGE OF JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
A Stormtrooper climbs down from the cockpit of Poe's X-wing,
backs away:
(CONTINUED)
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So Abrams keeps putting ‘continued’ everywhere? Lll
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CONTINUED:
STORMTROOPER #2
Nothing here. Go ahead!
Three other Stormtroopers FIRE LASER CANNONS at the X-wing --
destroying the ship in a LARGE EXPLOSION.
EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF JAKKU VILLAGE - NIGHT
BB-8 rolls across the sand, looks back: the X-wing FIREBALL.
BB-8, afraid, continues on his own in a mysterious, dark
desert. We see a FORM -- an animal, its RED EYES LIFTING
from the sand, watching the rolling droid, who just keeps
going.
In a WIDE SHOT, we HEAR HIM BEEPING to himself, lonely and
frightened.
EXT. SPACE - NIGHT
With the SANDY PLANET OF JAKKU as backdrop, Troop Transports
and Kylo Ren's Shuttle approach a massive STAR DESTROYER.
INT. STAR DESTROYER HANGAR - NIGHT
Poe, shackled, is ushered from the transport through the
hangar. He is awed by the imposing space.
POE
All right. All right!
Our Stormtrooper passes, moves fast:
INT. TROOP TRANSPORT VEHICLE - NIGHT
Our Stormtrooper enters the dark, vehicle. He removes his
helmet. His head comes up and we PUSH IN ON HIS FACE FOR
THE FIRST TIME. This is FN-2187. He is 23, likable. But
in this moment, terrified, desperate.
After a beat, behind him, CAPTAIN PHASMA enters. FN-2187
knows he's in trouble.
CAPTAIN PHASMA
FN-2187. Submit your blaster for
inspection.
FN-2187
Yes, Captain.
CAPTAIN PHASMA
And who gave you permission to remove
that helmet?
FN-2187
I'm sorry, Captain.
CAPTAIN PHASMA
Report to my division at once.
(CONTINUED)
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Khonshu a dit :
So Abrams keeps putting ‘continued’ everywhere? Lll

YEP XD its on every page
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Apathy is death
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Phasma heads off. Shattered, FN-2187 replaces his helmet.
CUT TO:
INT. JUNKED VESSEL CORRIDOR - DAY
A metal sheet is pulled open to reveal the wrapped up face
of A SCAVENGER, perhaps alien, in GOGGLES, FACE MASK and
GLOVES. Backpack with a STAFF strapped to it. Uses TOOLS
to remove various MECHANISMS from inside the wall. We are
in an upside-down, canted CORRIDOR. The Scavenger finds a
valuable piece, drops it in a SATCHEL.
Swings the bag back and begins CLIMBING DOWN on a cable,
between treacherous WALLS OF MACHINERY, headed to:
INT. JUNKED VESSEL - LARGER SPACE - LATER
Alone and tiny in this massive, sideways wreck, the Scavenger
descends, climbing down a two-hundred foot-long cable. LANDS
HARD onto rusty metal.
INT. JUNKED VESSEL - ENGINES - DAY
The Scavenger carries the satchel and another large, found
piece, over enormous pipes in the vast space, heads through
the dust toward a distant SLIT OF SUNLIGHT.
EXT. JUNKED VESSEL ENGINE - DAY
The Scavenger arrives from the darkness and pulls off goggles
and gear, revealing the grimy face of a beautiful, young
WOMAN. This is REY, 19.
She opens her canteen, shakes out the two final drops into
her mouth. HITS THE SIDE of the canteen again and again for
whatever she can get. CUT WIDE:
Rey is rendered minuscule, standing at the bottom of an EPIC
ENGINE OF A DECAYING, CRASHED STAR DESTROYER -- DISTANT SOUND
of her canteen-hitting. She sets her things on a piece of
sheet metal and sits next to it, sliding down the sand dune.
She RIDES DOWN THE MOUNTAIN OF SAND. WE HOLD FOR A LONG
TIME, looking down, as she recedes from us, toward the distant
SALT FLATS below. Random SCATTERED DEBRIS. Her SPEEDER,
tiny from here.
Rey moves to her junker SPEEDER, jumps on, fires the sputtery
engine and DRIVES OFF.
EXT. DESERT - SPACESHIP GRAVEYARD - DAY
Rey races along the desert floor: a GRAVEYARD OF CRASHED
SPACESHIPS.
EXT. NIIMA OUTPOST - DAY
Rey's speeder PASSES us, heading for a dusty, desert town.
Refueling, small trade, scavengers.
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owo i'm backkkkkkk
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Angel a dit :
Phasma heads off. Shattered, FN-2187 replaces his helmet.
CUT TO:
INT. JUNKED VESSEL CORRIDOR - DAY
A metal sheet is pulled open to reveal the wrapped up face
of A SCAVENGER, perhaps alien, in GOGGLES, FACE MASK and
GLOVES. Backpack with a STAFF strapped to it. Uses TOOLS
to remove various MECHANISMS from inside the wall. We are
in an upside-down, canted CORRIDOR. The Scavenger finds a
valuable piece, drops it in a SATCHEL.
Swings the bag back and begins CLIMBING DOWN on a cable,
between treacherous WALLS OF MACHINERY, headed to:
INT. JUNKED VESSEL - LARGER SPACE - LATER
Alone and tiny in this massive, sideways wreck, the Scavenger
descends, climbing down a two-hundred foot-long cable. LANDS
HARD onto rusty metal.
INT. JUNKED VESSEL - ENGINES - DAY
The Scavenger carries the satchel and another large, found
piece, over enormous pipes in the vast space, heads through
the dust toward a distant SLIT OF SUNLIGHT.
EXT. JUNKED VESSEL ENGINE - DAY
The Scavenger arrives from the darkness and pulls off goggles
and gear, revealing the grimy face of a beautiful, young
WOMAN. This is REY, 19.
She opens her canteen, shakes out the two final drops into
her mouth. HITS THE SIDE of the canteen again and again for
whatever she can get. CUT WIDE:
Rey is rendered minuscule, standing at the bottom of an EPIC
ENGINE OF A DECAYING, CRASHED STAR DESTROYER -- DISTANT SOUND
of her canteen-hitting. She sets her things on a piece of
sheet metal and sits next to it, sliding down the sand dune.
She RIDES DOWN THE MOUNTAIN OF SAND. WE HOLD FOR A LONG
TIME, looking down, as she recedes from us, toward the distant
SALT FLATS below. Random SCATTERED DEBRIS. Her SPEEDER,
tiny from here.
Rey moves to her junker SPEEDER, jumps on, fires the sputtery
engine and DRIVES OFF.
EXT. DESERT - SPACESHIP GRAVEYARD - DAY
Rey races along the desert floor: a GRAVEYARD OF CRASHED
SPACESHIPS.
EXT. NIIMA OUTPOST - DAY
Rey's speeder PASSES us, heading for a dusty, desert town.
Refueling, small trade, scavengers.

tf...
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She thought we scared you
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CONTINUED:
CRASH! Rey's sack carrying her heavy FOUND OBJECTS hits the
sand. Working like a tough seaman, Rey hauls the sack from
her speeder toward the town.
EXT. NIIMA OUTPOST - CLEANING TABLE - DAY
TIGHT ON REY'S HANDS as she SCRUBS CLEAN her day's salvage.
Rey glances up: she looks at an old woman, also cleaning
some salvage.
Rey watches her, gets lost in the simple moment. A small,
passing alien UNDERLING barks something to her in another
language. She returns to work.
INT. NIIMA TRADING STRUCTURE - DAY
Rey looks up to a SERVICE WINDOW: two feet above her, behind
a protective screen, is her boss, UNKAR PLUTT (50, blobfish,
unclean). He examines her pieces. Then he offers:
UNKAR
What you've brought me today is
worth... Hmmm... One quarter
portion.
Though disappointed, Rey barely shows it. She nods thanks.
Unkar pushes through his transfer drawer a SEALED PACKET:
DRIED GREEN MEAT in one section, BEIGE POWDER in another.
She takes it.
She swallows her resentment and heads off.
EXT. NIIMA OUTPOST - DAY
The IMMENSE SETTING SUN against the FLAT TERRAIN. Rey's
SPEEDER races, almost insignificant, across frame.
INT. REY'S DWELLING - DAY
She SCRATCHES MARKS into the rusty wall. Another MARK;
another DAY. And there are THOUSANDS of marks.
A SIZZLING SOUND over: A DRIED DESERT FLOWER in a rusty ENGINE
PIECE. A rough, stuffed HANDMADE DOLL, made from what looks
like orange Rebellion flight suit material and twine.
Rey's lonely, ramshackle dwelling. Everything reclaimed.
She cooks for one. Does everything for one. She opens the
POWDER, moves to the makeshift WOK, where the GREEN MEAT
SIZZLES. Pours the powder into milky WATER in a tin. Stirs
it. It GROWS INTO A LOAF as she puts the meat on an old
plate. Grabs the loaf.
EXT. REY'S DWELLING - DUSK
Rey sits, eats like a starving child. Every last drop.
Licks the metal plate. Looks out at the horizon. A single
silent ship heads off, a shimmering, thin contrail. She
wipes her mouth. Picks up an old, broken REBELLION HELMET.
(CONTINUED)
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And she’s posting the whole The Force Awakens script xdfd
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Khonshu a dit :
She thought we scared you

I'm just in school, lol, sorryyy!
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I'm writing star wars XDDDDD
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