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Have you wrote a song/poem/or story?
Sbooky
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I wrote much stories but all of them are Turkish
Linabuggy
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Im writing a Herobrine series
Corduroy
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I've written a lot of poems and stories.

I'm currently working on a song.
Eavenne
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Have written a few (unfinished mostly) chaptered stories and twice as many oneshots.

Currently working on something that I thought would last maybe 5000 words. It's now 13700 words, and it's not half done. Anyway, I feel random and I would love advice, so here's some lines that I'm insecure about.

"After all, how could I just admit everything, all those years of holding back, all those years of running, of watching, of hiding?

But as I opened my mouth to utter some lie, my heart racing and palms sweating, no words came to my aid. I could only watch, brows knit closely and eyes burning with shame and guilt, as the King’s expression shifted from expectant to discerning to disbelieving."

"At that, the King paused and blushed. Then he burst out in laughter, and his body shook with each exclamation of joy."

"I let him glare at me. (AN: This was originally "slap" but that would've been OOC)

“Kieran! Do not think that you can fool me,” he thundered. His eyes were truly intense. (God, this sounds like something from that 50 shades of grey book)"

"“Loyalty? How idealistic. I suppose you believed that our friendship would last forever, did you not? How childish. How foolish. It never would have, for it was never meant to be. Nothing lasts forever, Leon. How could you not have learnt that? Perhaps the throne did wisen you up a little, friend, but you are still that young boy who kept on trying and failing to improve in swordplay, spending hours futilely swinging your weapon around,” I said coldly, eyes darkening, stepping back."

Advice appreciated, thanks!

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Toyplayful
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A couple stories and 5 poems. I'm not that good at singing, and I don't even like listening to music.
I have hundreds of stories but only a few are good. I usually get an incredible idea, start writing an awesome story and suddenly i'm out of ideas and end up abandoning the whole story
Mistalee
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A few (4) poems, though they're all crack ones tbh.
Mignonbear
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I've tried to write my own songs but i suck at it...I've made my own poems and stuff and i don't do parodies, i do covers mostly
Wolfwithred
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Many many stories have been started by myself, but most of them weren't finished, e.g. because I thought they wouldn't be able to have a satisfactory ending. I also have written a couple songs, and a few poems, though not as many as the stories.
Basgetti
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#49
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I wrote a creepypasta. (a horror story)
Shadowwinter
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Wrote plenty of poems and a few (short) stories that I call snippets, haven't wrote much of anything recently however and I don't think my work is very good to begin with.
Musiccyborg
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Yes.
This is a masterpiece:


"Roses are black.
Violets are black.
Everything is black,
Because I am blind."


https://www.timelinecoverbanner.com/cliparts/wp-content/digital-scrapbooking/determined-i-am-determined.png
Foxrabbit
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#52
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poems and songs about past experiences
Sonikkuro
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I'm currently making the Ripple Dot Zero's Dark future comic, that was a story?
Chlobro
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#54
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i made an awful parody for science class in march and im never sharing it again because its awful
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I've written a couple of stories here and there, deleted most of them.
Written a couple of songs and poems, too. Some of them I've published on a crypto blogging site.
Hoping to either find some other kind of legit site or make a site of my own to publish my stuff, though.
Bastlase
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I have one FanFiction in Leisure Lounge.

<<Times Forgotten>>

Its not finished yet, in going to have to contact a teacher for the rest of my story. (It was a school assignment as well)

I have other ones, more if ideas, still on my laptop.
Birdai
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no I just daydream about my stories and never actually write them
https://i.pinimg.com/564x/5b/ca/d0/5bcad0930d4b86bcd1a35a7e80d627c7.jpg
Macetri
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Yup, Lots of em'.
Too shy to share them here though.
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I wrote edgy poems and got bullied
Mishi1
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I love to write...i've written many stories and poems, no songs tho
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