Yaaaaaay get da get @me

Wingedflight a dit :

Unloved, hated, and abused, a cat called: Cynders left her kittypet home. Attacked by Rogues, she asked them if they wanted to die. She killed them all. She made a clan of 'Underdogs', believed StarClan existed, and was made into a Clan. Cynder renamed herself: Wingedstar. And thus they started their terror!

This kinda seems a bit like power-playing. No offense, but I'm about 99,9% positive that a single cat could kill a gang of cats that had been training probably their entire life in fighting, and the one cat was a kittypet, housefed and tamed. It would seem to make sense to write how she found out about StarClan and Clans in general. How could a tamed cat be able to kill a whole gang of rogues? I'm sorry but that doesn't seem realistically possible if you looked at the odds against a tamed kittypet winning against a bunch of feral cats. I understand she was abused but I don't see how that would make her stronger than they other than being able to handle the pain Cinder may have went through.

I'm sorry if that seemed rude, but it was bothering me. I'm sorry.

Emberkitx a dit :

This kinda seems a bit like power-playing. No offense, but I'm about 99,9% positive that a single cat could kill a gang of cats that had been training probably their entire life in fighting, and the one cat was a kittypet, housefed and tamed. It would seem to make sense to write how she found out about StarClan and Clans in general. How could a tamed cat be able to kill a whole gang of rogues? I'm sorry but that doesn't seem realistically possible if you looked at the odds against a tamed kittypet winning against a bunch of feral cats. I understand she was abused but I don't see how that would make her stronger than they other than being able to handle the pain Cinder may have went through.

I'm sorry if that seemed rude, but it was bothering me. I'm sorry.

It was bothering me too, but I just didnt want to sound rude, some people don`t like this kindof stuff being pointed out, but I agree with Ember, it is pretty unrealistic, also she couldn`ve renamed herself with a leader name, that`s inaccurate, she would have went through the ceromony and StarClan would have renamed her.

Hawkstarcat a dit :

It was bothering me too, but I just didnt want to sound rude, some people don`t like this kindof stuff being pointed out, but I agree with Ember, it is pretty unrealistic, also she couldn`ve renamed herself with a leader name, that`s inaccurate, she would have went through the ceromony and StarClan would have renamed her.

... One: She killed them by time
TWO: She found out about BloodClan and undid their mistake!

KK!?

Wingedflight a dit :

... One: She killed them by time
TWO: She found out about BloodClan and undid their mistake!

KK!?

How did she kill them by time? Just like scratched them then ran away waiting untill they died?

I was just pointing out that bit was a little inaccurate and that StarClan would`ve renamed her.

Hawkstarcat a dit :

How did she kill them by time? Just like scratched them then ran away waiting untill they died?

I was just pointing out that bit was a little inaccurate and that StarClan would`ve renamed her.

NO! By battle! Then if you will be caring enough to wait, I will change it!

Now you may say what you want about it now.

RisingClan would like to be allies with your clan :D

Foxykat a dit :

RisingClan would like to be allies with your clan :D

RisingClan's invite accepted!

Wingedflight a dit :

Now you may say what you want about it now.

Better, but they wouldn`t ask her if she wanted to change her name, it`d just be changed. And the rouges saved her? That`s a bit confusing, finnaly Er Moonshine Stone? Cat`s don`t know about moonshine you know, the special places where cats get their 9 lives is named something like 'Moon Stone, or Moon Pool'. The prfix is only 'Moon'. Another note, random cats can`t exactly just belive in StarClan and become leader, so maybe add something about StarClan saw something special inside Cynder, but deadly and they chose to give her leadership but to watch her closly?

Agileclan wants to be allied with Risingclan

Hawkstarcat a dit :

Better, but they wouldn`t ask her if she wanted to change her name, it`d just be changed. And the rouges saved her? That`s a bit confusing, finnaly Er Moonshine Stone? Cat`s don`t know about moonshine you know, the special places where cats get their 9 lives is named something like 'Moon Stone, or Moon Pool'. The prfix is only 'Moon'. Another note, random cats can`t exactly just belive in StarClan and become leader, so maybe add something about StarClan saw something special inside Cynder, but deadly and they chose to give her leadership but to watch her closly?

1: They didn't know what name
2: Rogues from BloodClan's line, that is how she found out!
3: Moonshine Stone is Moonstone with a twist! XD
4: Idk how she would have made the Clan then...

Wingedflight a dit :

1: They didn't know what name
2: Rogues from BloodClan's line, that is how she found out!
3: Moonshine Stone is Moonstone with a twist! XD
4: Idk how she would have made the Clan then...

No they`d know.
Oh so one group of rouges attacked her, then another from BloodClan ansestory saved her?
Hmm...Maybe Moon Gem instead?
Well StarClan would have given her dreams and signs.

Hawkstarcat a dit :

No they`d know.
Oh so one group of rouges attacked her, then another from BloodClan ansestory saved her?
Hmm...Maybe Moon Gem instead?
Well StarClan would have given her dreams and signs.

1: Hmmm... well, lets say that she needed to ask.
2: yes
3: Sure!
4: That was a sign! But true, it seems like she just went th there, so I will add a dream part.

Wingedflight a dit :

1: Hmmm... well, lets say that she needed to ask.
2: yes
3: Sure!
4: That was a sign! But true, it seems like she just went th there, so I will add a dream part.

Okay.
Ah okay, probably want to make that a little clearer.
Glad to have given you that idea.
Yeah, that`d make it clearer.

Hawkstarcat a dit :

Okay.
Ah okay, probably want to make that a little clearer.
Glad to have given you that idea.
Yeah, that`d make it clearer.

Ok, doing so! ;)

How the hell do you make a banner? XD

I was wondering if this unloved clan cat could join you? I have a long story and history of clan life but... I won't explain it here... I could chat with you at another time perhaps and tell you the story?

I whipped this up, you can use if you like:

Unloved, hated, abused, that was Cynder`s life. She was a kittypet who belonged to a cruel Twoleg family. One day she had had enough, and fled into the forest, leaving her brutal old life behind. Unfortunately her torture did not end there as she had stumbled upon some vicious rouges who were looking for trouble. They had shredded and attacked her until she was near dead, then some other rouges appeared and drove away the cruel ones, thus saving Cynders. They took her in as one of their own, brooding strength in her, strong, but with malice and revenge. Soon she learned that her saviors were ancestors of cats from BloodClan, a dark group of cats from all over, who had once spread terror in the forest. She also learned of the enemies of BloodClan, the old Clans. She grew fascinated with the idea of these ‘Clans’ and wanted to make one of her own, she did not know that one could not simple make a Clan, but she also didn`t know, StarClan was watching her. They saw greatness in Cynders, but also her brutality and hunger for blood, the great spirits argued for some time on her fate, until they made up their mind. They would guide Cynders to becoming a Clan leader, but watch her carefully. They sent her dreams and signs leading her to Gem Cave, where the Moon Gem lied. There Cynders was pulled into the leader`s ceremony and was granted 9 lives from StarClan and told about more of the Clans as they progressed. “Now Cynders,” Said the final cat who had given her last life, “You`re name shall change to that of a leader`s. Do you accept leadership of a Clan?” “Yes.” She said. “Very well, for the greatness we see in you that will soar high, we shall name you, Wingedstar!” The name rang out in StarClan and Wingedstar purred with pride. “Now Wingedstar, what shall your Clan be named?” She smiled with an evil glint in her eye. “I know exactly what my Clan will be called; those rouges once struck fear into me, now I shall strike fear into them…we shall be known, as FearClan!” She yowled. Then the ceremony was done, Cynders was now Wingedstar she recruited her BloodClan rouges and now she make everycat in the forest tremble with fear. FearClan has begun to rise.

But BloodClan didn't believe in StarClan and this was confirmed in the books.