haru's wonderland ♔ fiction

#41

"it was sexy"

BWAHAHAHAhahHAHhahahahHSHahhaahhaHA

#42

ARE YOU STILL READING FINAL TICKET OMG

#43

YESS AHAHHA

#44

no please it's so bad, it's due a rewrite when i finish this novel lol

#45

nein please

crying its not finished

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#46

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#47

milraangel a dit :
crying its not finished

The plot is, however I dropped it for a bit because it needed rewriting.. .then I began doing writing for work and I just kinda never touched it. I'm so glad to hear people like it. ;o;

#48

Nov 2015!!!!!
Can't wait
U.U

#49

i have no words haru you're better than me at writing this is just amazing

#50

I am going to buy everything you publish.

Everything

#51

By the way good luck in the NaNoWriMc writing contest ouo

Go win em like every time lmao

#52

Bugembo a dit :
By the way good luck in the NaNoWriMc writing contest ouo

Go win em like every time lmao

Thank you! I have one more job to do and then I should hopefully be done and can focus on it :)')
If I won, it'd actually only be my fifth win out of ten participations. I'd like to at least have a 50% win rate lol!

Thank you to everyone else <3

#53

haru you´re writing is just can't be described with words, the story orders are just more than great, I have read many books superheros,high school , action,comedy,logical , but the writing have a diffrent way other than any writers, after i read the small story "come on home" I like the story , it made me to get excited to continue reading"still not finished story" I think you can make something more something bigger in writing section!

#54

Thank you so much!
Unsure if I mentioned, but I won't be posting "Come On Home" in full since I'll be publishing it, but you'll get a few snippets. :')

#55

Haruhitastic a dit :
Thank you so much!
Unsure if I mentioned, but I won't be posting "Come On Home" in full since I'll be publishing it, but you'll get a few snippets. :')

where can i buy it?

#56

You'll find out soon enough. All I can tell you is you won't have to pay to read it in full!

#57

A little something for everyone I'm working on before November. Gotta write 3,000 words a day to finish it so my plate is clean November 1. x)

Cat fiddled with her collar nervously, hoping that the wires of the recording device were hidden well. The last thing she wanted was this guy spotting it and yanking it from her. She couldn't spot anything when she had been dressing
Both her and her colleagues had dressed her today, opting for a skirt of a tasteful length and a blue button down shirt. The wire had been tucked below her bra and the shirt, fastened with strips of flesh-toned tape to blend in. It did the job keeping the device in place, but the feeling of her hairs being pulled was far from pleasant.
Her nerves were beginning to get the best of her, but she knew it was too late now to back out now. She'd be called a coward by her She already had everything, already gotten all the intel on the guy and what he was doing. The file said a girl named Tori was working with the cops and told them what was going on shortly after Cat had her meeting. At the least, now she knew she wasn't in the danger she thought she'd be.
But the concept of having to do the whole seduction thing? Not her cup of tea. She was uneasy with the idea, but it was better than not knowing.
She rubbed her arms nervously as she waited at the door, her senses heightened. Every single brush of a branch against the siding of the home, every peep of a bird -- she was intently listening to it all.
The door creaked open, and a man motioned her in; which was exactly how Tori told he cops her meeting went down.
She contemplated if she should bring up that she knew what was going on, or if it'd be suspicious. She wanted things to go quickly and get this whole thing resolved as soon as possible. She could always say a "friend" suggested the job to her and filled her in on the details. Then they could move along to the next step...
Before she knew it, she was already in the room, and the man was already staring her in the face. "Hm. I'm not sure if we're looking for any brown girls."
The words struck her in the chest, and she wanted to lunge forward and take the guy out already. Instead, she exhaled loudly, and flashed a mischievous smile. "A lot of mine find brown girls very sexy."
"That's true."
"My friend Tori told me about this job," she replied, the tone of her voice a bit sly. "I'm sure there's a boy on one of the teams that would like me."
Travis merely nodded in response, his eyes narrow. "The girls are supposed to keep quiet about the job. I thought I had told them that."
"I'm the only one she told, I think." Finding herself a bit more nervous, Cat sat down on the couch and crossed her legs in as best of a seductive manner as she could. But it was hard to be seductive when she was nearly about to break down and say everything she shouldn't. "Please don't let her be in trouble. She's struggling and could really use the money."
"Fair enough."
A huge wave of relief washed over her. She actually had no idea what the stripper's situation was, outside of being busted a few times for prostitution in the city limits. Apparently she had a deal worked out with the department that in exchange for intel about things of this nature, her last charges would be dropped.
"I suppose you're right about one of the guys liking a brown girl," he then murmured, looking at something on the device in front of him and swiping a thumb against it. She figured he was flipping through photos. "There's a few Pakistani players, guess you could appeal to them."
"Oh, be nice, Travis," a feminine voice called out. It echoed through the room the two were sat in, the volume increasing as the person approached. An African-American woman appeared, a little thick in her midsection but still beautiful. She was dressed neatly, in tall stilettos and an outfit similar to Cat's -- only with a jade green shirt instead of blue. "She's gorgeous. She'd do fine."
"I suppose you're right, Temperance." Travis turned back to Cat, questioning, "what was your name, dearie? You never told me."
Gulping, Cat spit out, "Angela Kandiyar."
"Pretty name. Tori told you all the gory details about what we're doin' here?"
"More or less, we're seducing footballers so they can throw their games. yeah?"
"That's the basics. You and the other girls will find out specifics in a bit." Cat gave him a nod in response. "In fact, you are the last girl we needed for the operation. Temperance, if you would be so kind, can you call them up and tell them to come down here so we can get everything started?"
"Right away, Travis."
The woman disappeared back into the dark room after speaking, leaving Cat and this odd man alone. "Tell me about yourself, Kandiyar. What do you enjoy?"
"Hiking and photography," she said, the only truthful thing to spill out of her mouth in this entire meeting. "And clothes, fashion. Stuff like that."
"Hm, alright. Should be able to find you a suitable guy..."
The woman named Temperance showed back up, saying that she had called all the girls and told them to come for a late lunch in an hour's time at the house. Travis encouraged Cat to stay seated and enjoy herself -- encouraging her to check out the coffee table books, or just hang on her phone.
Too afraid to touch anything or risk being caught, she decided to opt for her phone -- not even bothering to ask for the wifi password.

#58

I lile your story :)

#59

fungtszto a dit :
I lile your story :)

Thanks!

#60

stolen 60 comment from everyone

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