haru's wonderland ♔ fiction

Depends on when I finish something. If I get "Come On Home" good, it'll be shared for publishing considerations in a couple month's times. ;3

#62

An excerpt of the first chapter of "Come On Home" is available here! and yes I wrote all that in the span of like an hour haha lol

#63

Edited to do list. End me.

#64

An Undertale thing because I'm procrastinating as fuck.
Don't open the spoiler if you're not played/don't want spoilers for the end of the Genocide route.

A retelling of the Sans battle.

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You approach the capital, the "New Home." You run into that stupid flower multiple times, paying no mind to what he says each time. You don't care for his words. Hell, you don't care for anything except one thing.
Death.
That short skeleton guy is now standing in front of you. He's rambling about something. You don't care for his words either, but they still seem to ring in your ears.
"It's a beautiful day outside," the guy says. "Birds are singing, flowers are blooming...on days like these, kids like you..."

You feel like you're gonna have a bad time.

The first attack hits. A flash of bone spurs and lasers shooting into your soul. You don't realise the skeleton is speaking to you until he's almost done with his statement.
"Should be burning in hell."

You felt your sins crawling on your back.

The words are scathing, but you don't care. You came here for one thing, to take out everyone. You want to go home. You don't care for friends.
You try to attack, and he dodges.
"What? You think I'm just going to stand there and take it?"
He lashes out at you as you bare your teeth. You continue trying to attack, only to have him dodge. He continues to attack, bones all around as you feel his grasp on your soul.
He's still talking. He's still yammering on. Doesn't he realise you don't give a damn? That you're just here to take him out?
He dodges every time, then continues on his little spiel. God, why won't he shut up? You'd give anything to slice his voice box, if you could even find it.

You felt your sins weighing on your neck.

"Friendship..."
Your eyes flicker just a bit, as you look up at him beneath your hair. Friendship? You honestly could care less about it. But for some reason, you're intrigued just a bit.
"It's really great. Right? Let's quit fighting."
You could spare him now if you wanted. But you don't want that. His hand is extended in a show of friendship, and you take a jab at him -- literally. Almost as if he expects it, he dodges once more.
"Welp, it was worth a shot. guess you like doing things the hard way, huh?"
You begin sparring with one another once more. He continues to dodge, he hits your soul where it hurts.
You can't stop now. You're determined to finish him off and get back home.

The REAL battle finally begins.

Before you know it, you feel your soul going through the most intense workout of your life. You're slammed from one end to another, the skeleton controlling you all the while.
You deal with the blasts of power, but you manage to dodge them, just as he dodges you.
Then, it stops. It all stops. You're still in Sans' grip. You're still stuck. He goes on about how his "special attack" is to trap you in hopes you grow bored.
He's the one who seems to grow bored instead. He huffs, puffs, catches his breath before sitting down and drifting off into dreamland.
Now's your chance, isn't it?
You ready your knife, bite your lip expectantly, and make your strike.
Dodged. Once a-fucking-gain, your attack was dodged.
"Heh. Didja really think you would be able--"
You can't take it anymore. You strike him again while he's talking. No more niceties. No more letting him talk. You hit him square in his bony chest, knocking him for a loop.

You see the blood escape from his wound, and you feel a sinister grin creep onto your lips as he groans. You pay no mind to the fact that a monster that is seemingly nothing but bones has blood escaping from where you struck.
He says he's going to Grillby's. He asks his brother, which you murdered, if he wants anything.
Then he's gone.
You should feel remorse, but you don't.
You feel nothing, except for one thing: determination.

#65

!!!!!!!!! good fic go౦ԁ fIc! thats ! some good!!fic right!!th ! ere!!! right!there !!if i do ƽaү so my selｆ ! i say so ! thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ! !! !НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ! !! ! !!!!!!!!Good fic

#66

kuokou a dit :
!!!!!!!!! good fic go౦ԁ fIc! thats ! some good!!fic right!!th ! ere!!! right!there !!if i do ƽaү so my selｆ ! i say so ! thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ! !! !НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ! !! ! !!!!!!!!Good fic

#67

Good job with that Genocide story there. <3
I liked it.

The entire time I could almost hear Megalovania play somewhere.

#68

this made me scream how could you DO THIS TO ME

#69

dancingkengo a dit :
this made me scream how could you DO THIS TO ME

me when i watched the final boss tbqh

#70

smartiewolfs a dit :
kuokou a dit :
!!!!!!!!! good fic go౦ԁ fIc! thats ! some good!!fic right!!th ! ere!!! right!there !!if i do ƽaү so my selｆ ! i say so ! thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ! !! !НO0ОଠＯOOＯOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ! !! ! !!!!!!!!Good fic

#71

holy shit that's a really good fan-fic haru

#72

yikes

its worth noting "currently unnamed" does actually have a name i just havent retitled it yet

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#73

''10,574''

so man y words o mg

#74

icegirlypro a dit :
''10,574''

so man y words o mg

The piece open is not even a tenth of the way done tbh..

#75

Haruhitastic a dit :
icegirlypro a dit :
''10,574''

so man y words o mg

The piece open is not even a tenth of the way done tbh..

how many words does it have to be at a minimum

#76

Kayleekitti a dit :
Haruhitastic a dit :
icegirlypro a dit :
''10,574''

so man y words o mg

The piece open is not even a tenth of the way done tbh..

how many words does it have to be at a minimum

no min amount of words, the open document is my personal novel piece, but im pre sure i need a min of 60,000 to contact my publisher so... yea lol

#77

I don't usually adventure further than the art forum and discussions/announcements/etc.

But, I did and I found this beautiful thread.
I read some, but not all so I'll have to come back and read it all.

So until then, I will favorite this and read it when I can <3

#78

thanks so much eee <3 i'm gonna be posting some fanfic soon so if youre into that keep your eyes peeled

#79

Looks like you've invested quite a lot in this;
Good job :^)

#80

I CANNOT WAIT TO PURCHASE LIKE 3 COPIES OF UR BOOK FOR ME AND ALL OF MY FRIENDS GOD BLES

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