Smokepaw and Poisonpaw come in now.
"Are you two done yet?" Smokepaw asked.

"Not unless this Clan thinks we're done." Greenpaw said.

Redpaw shrugs. "Fine. Let your ancestors be destroyed. Just don't say we didn't warn you." Redpaw always gives up when he's fustrated.
Greenpaw sighs. "Well then, let's go."

The four apprentices leave the camp, knowing these guys wouldn't let up.

Later, as night falls, the apprentices are having a small conversation.

Redpaw: Well, at least we tried to warn them, right?
Greenpaw: They weren't even CLOSE to convinced. Besides, Soar had a lot of logic there.

Greenpaw: Tried is not a good word for it. Flopped, not exactly. Miserably failed? Yes.

Greenpaw and his friends sleep. Greenpaw can't help but think he'd failed Rainstar.

Greenpaw has no dreams again. Why is StarClan silent? Are they upset with me, so they aren't talking to me anymore?

Greenpaw then sees a strange light nearby. He was having a dream! He padded toward the light. The light then turned to darkness like everything else. Wha- what's going on?

I'm going too XD bai

"What will you name them?" Raspberrypaw squealed, her voice edged with excitement. "When I have kits, I'm going to name them after some great cats like Hollyleaf!
"If you live to have them," Deerrun purred. "You have so much excitement,"

A Wild Cat Approaches Raspberrypaw.

^^ no

Hawkscreech froze...he smelled something. "R-RATS!" he yowled. He ran to camp, but cats were already streaming in the spot where the rats were, alarmed by his call.He bit on a rat spine, hearing it crunch. The battle went on until the rats got scared.

Two cats laid on the ground. Iciclestar and Raspberrypaw. Raspberrypaw wasn't moving, but there was a faint rise and fall in her body. Icilestar wasn't moving either..but he wasn't breathing. "StarClan, don't let it be his last life," Hawkscreech murmured.