Another LL Fanfiction - "Bottled Up Message" |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506687780000
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Bottled Up Message A mysterious newcast proclaims that a meteorite is heading straight towards Leisure Lounge. Bethdacat, amongst other Leisure Lounge citizens, decides to find out what is going on, but a cloaked mouse wants to help out. How will things play out? Who is this mysterious Leisure Lounge citizen? And what exactly is the meteorite? Writer: Bethdacat Helpers: [None at the moment.] The beginning. There's always one beginning. The beginning of time, The beginning of mouse, The beginning of Leisure Lounge. But there is one final beginning. One beginning to end all beginnings. The beginning of the end. "...And in LL News today, a 50 km meteorite has been spotted about 1,000,000 km away from our city. Scientists from Leisure Lounge, including Pbthelegend, predict that there is a 100% chance that the meteorite will strike Leisure Lounge. There is no escape. We don't even have enough rockets. So, from all of us in the LL News Broadcasting Center, thank you for all the memories." Psykosauce's voice boomed from all television stations. It was mandatory broadcasting, and people were very afraid. They cried out, saying: "Tigrounette! What did we do wrong?! Please forgive us!" But I watched from among the crowd. I had to do something. I was getting packed up for what was about to happen. 2 weeks to live! And yet, it seemed so short, like everything were to halt at a certain time... Psykosauce wasn't spreading rumors. Neither was Pbthelegend. Already everyone in the Leisure Lounge could see a large rock in the sky. "Maybe they over exaggerated it... Maybe it's just a little ball in the sky..." But everyone else, the citizens, were spreading rumors quickly. "Hey! Need any help with packing?" A voice cut sharply into my thoughts; a knife piercing through my mind. I turned, seeing a cloaked mouse. "What do YOU want?" I grumbled. "Can't you see I'm busy with my packing?" "I just wanted to help with your packing, that's all." "Yeah, well that's not gonna happen." "Oh, alright. Well, can I watch you?" "Not right now." "Why not?" "Because you're annoying me." "Are you heading to Disneyland?" "I wish, so that I can get away from your voice." "And the meteorite?" "Yep." "I'm not completely stupid, you know." "You sure?" The hood nodded slightly. "Do you come from Leisure Lounge?" "If I didn't, I wouldn't be here, packing, at the moment." And it's true. A few months ago, I had stumbled in the Atelier801 forums, looking for a place to call home. Then Melibellule and Tigrounette introduced new, free homes in the Leisure Lounge. I came here as soon as I could, and now I do everything here. "Shit." The folder that held all of my topics goes flying everywhere. "Now I have to clean these up." "You mean 'we,' right?" the cloaked mouse sneaked closer. "Fine." I permitted it to touch SOME of the papers. "Do you wanna know who I am?" "Well, of COURSE. I'm Bethdacat, as it says on top." I gestured to the name tag. It shone gold due to it being from my point of view. "Why don't you have a name tag?" "Because plot reasons." A minor break in the fourth wall. It took off its hood and I gasped. It was none other than... Cliffhanger Dun dun dun It was none other than Rebeccademg. "Rebecca?!" I shouted. "But why didn't you tell me your identity?! I could've spared you my insulting sentences!" "Eh, it's fine." Rebecca shrugged. "Anyways, remember after that weird broadcast by Psyko when all the mice started screaming 'Tigrounette! What did we do wrong?! Please forgive us!'" She uses a high-pitched voice to imitate the other citizens. "Yeah, I did." "Well, Tigrounette needs to stop this shit." "I know, right?" "Anyways, there's a fanfiction about me and these other Leisure Loungers and some murder." "Wink wonk." "Ash is married to a penguin in it." "No surprise, his PFP is a penguin, so he's bound to have Happy Feet ripoff children!" We both started laughing at this. "And Clay USED to be Iceroseunite's friend, but she broke up." "Ouch." "That's just in the fanfiction. I don't even know if they know that the other exists in real life." "Probably, but they don't acknowledge each other." "Say, I've got an idea!" she snaps her paws. "Why don't we SHATTER the sentinels? They're the ones that helped Tigrounette decide what to do with us." "You mean... KILL THEM?!" "Yep!" I shivered. "No no no... If we do, we get banned..." "That is, if they CATCH us!" "NO!" I looked away. I didn't want Rebecca to see me blushing. "Oh, are you in LOVE with Batt_mellamy?" I could've sworn that I could see her wiggle her eyebrows. "NO!" I buried my face. "Hang on, I'll get some mice to help us shatter the sentinels. After that, we'll go out for pizza!" She leaved the room in glee. I looked up just as she shut the door. What was I gonna do? I could hear the phone ringing. I moaned as I checked the clock... 3 AM?!?! 3 IN THE FUCKING MORNING?!?! And yet Rebecca was still calling people... I debated on whether I should stop her for the night or not, but sleep overcame me at that point. Rebecca's POV Good. Beth was asleep again. I put Spidermeme on speaker, waiting for him to pick up. "Hello?" a muffled voice answered. "Hi!" I replied. "Rebecca? Rebecca, it's 3 AM... why did you call me?" "Well, I have a plan about the meteorite!" "And... what's that?" He seemed uninterested. "Well, I called the others last night, and we've decided to meet up at 4 PM tonight!" "Rebecca... every one of us has different time zones." "Ugh, fine... 4 PM EST." "Eastern Standard Time?" "Yep." "Okay fine, I'll be up then." "See ya!" "Bye." The click of the phone tells me that Spidermeme hung up. "Welp! Now that everyone has been called, we'll just have to wait and see what shows up then!" Batt_mellamy's POV I went up to Tigrounette, doing the traditional greeting first and then walking up to his back. "Sir, we've just received information about tensions about the meteorite you sent to Leisure Lounge." I said slowly. "Really? Who was the source?" he murmured. "The source came from LL user Bethdacat's phone, sir." "Who was using it at the time?" "I don't know. Maybe it was Rebeccademg. I could've sworn it was her voice, sir." "We'll lead an assault on her friend." "You mean... torturing?" "Yes, we need the information so that we can stop them." "But which friend?" "The name is not needed at this time. You already mentioned it once." "Rebecca?" "No." "Oh, you mean Beth." "Yep." "The one that keeps saying that she herself is cringy." "Yep." I nodded. "I'll set up the room." "You do that." And with a paw, he dismissed me. Later that day, as 4 PM neared, Ash198, Spidermeme0, Psykosauce, Clayfingers, Iceroseunite, and Rebeccademg came into the house. Nekotonyy showed up at the last moment. "What's he doing here?!" Rebecca screamed at them. "REBECCA STOP THIS SHIT" Clay said. "Amen," Psykosauce agreed. "No, seriously, what are you doing here?" Ice pointed a finger at Neko. "Well, I come to bring some news." he replied nonchalantly. "About what?" Ash said, narrowing his eyes. "News about this... meteor." "How would YOU know?" "Because I am a rebel of the sentinels. I have insight on what they're planning. But they don't know that I'm coming to you." Neko surveyed everyone's reactions. Spider fainted. Ice and Psyko screamed. The others just stared and stared. "So you're a rebel." Rebecca said, finally, to break the silence 10 minutes later. "I guess you can say that." I peeked in on their conversation. Rebecca then spotted me and dragged me over to the group. "Everyone, I'd like you to meet the mouse that's gonna lead us to victory! Please welcome-" She didn't get to finish her sentence, as the glass crashed. "INCOMING!" Neko picked up a knife and started swiping at one of the first sentinels to land inside the building. "MY HOUSE!!! THE WINDOWS!!" I screamed frantically. "THOSE COSTED ME $200!!!" Spider was still unconscious. Ice and Psyko screamed some more. Rebecca, Clay, and Ash fought bravely on Neko's side. "Huh? Why is Nekotonyy fighting with the civilians? The wanteds?" Batt_mellamy wondered. "Must be because he's a REBEL like Rebecca!" one of the sentinels reported. "We're not here to arrest everyone here. Just the one mouse that Rebecca relies on." "Which one? There's too many!" Batt_mellamy facepalmed. "I meant the one in the panda hat! The one they call Bethdacat!" I silently walked backwards. Smack into another sentinel. A big buff one, standing just at the door. "C'mon. You're coming with us." He grabbed my paws. "AAH SHIT" I bit onto one of them, but to no avail. All of them noticed. "THE PRINCESS IS BEING CAPTURED!!!" Toad screamed. "TOAD STOP THIS SHIT" Rebecca screamed back. "Good, we got her. Now let's go!" Batt said. The big buff one got away, but the rebels kept the sentinels fighting inside the room. The last thing I heard before slipping away was: "Hush. You're in good arms. We'll find some way, somehow, to use you in our plan..." Meanwhile, in the room... Rebecca screamed, "COME ON! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!? YOU'RE GONNA MAKE US STALL IN GETTING BETH BACK!!" "We can't," Ash gasped, "because then the sentinels will overpower us. We'll worry *huff* about her later." "LATER!? WE CAN'T WORRY LATER!!" Ice said. "We have to!" Psyko exclaimed. "NEKO! STOP! YOU CAN'T BE WITH THESE REBELS!" a sentinel shouted. "Yeah, well I stopped trusting you a WHILE ago." Neko retorted. And they fought. Shamousey burst in at the exact wrong moment. "Wha... what the hell?! Why didn't you destroy these rebels earlier?!?!" The sentinels looked away. One scratched at his head. "Shamousey?! THE REAL, TRUE TO THE BONE SHAMOUSEY?!" Rebecca hyperventilated. "Yep, it's me!" "What the fuck are you doing here?" Clay pointed at Shamousey. "Explain." Psyko just crossed her arms. "OH NOES HIDE ME IT'S THE GOD OF ALL SENTINELS" Nekotonyy hid behind Iceroseunite. "Neko stop this shit" Ice simply said. "Well now that we have Beth you can't stop us sentinels from unleashing our ultimate weapon!" Shamousey exclaimed. "What weapon?" Ash asked. Rebecca pointed at the incoming meteorite. "Oh." Shamousey smirked. "Even if you could rescue Beth, there's no possible way you could get to the meteorite and destroy it! No one has ever gone past Tigrounette before." "SHAMOUSEY STOP THIS SHIT" Icerose said. "OY! GIMME SOME CREDIT FOR MY NEW MEME HERE!" Rebecca screamed at them. "REBECCA STOP THIS SHIT" "SHAMOUSEY STOP THIS SHIT" "EVERYONE STOP THIS SHIT" Neko shouted above everyone. "We have to stop Shamousey's shit." "That's why I told Shamousey to STOP THIS SHIT" Iceroseunite said. Spidermeme0 shrugged. "Git gud" Elder Kettle said in the background. "N o" Psyko said. "Why am I here?" Pbthelegend said. Rebecca was triggered. "Anyways you guys are all gonna die," Shamousey explained, "since you all are losers." "WE'RE NOT FUCKING LOSERS" Rebecca was now double triggered. Shamousey got on the Melibellule Mobile. "SEE YA LOSERS" he shouted as he drove away. Everyone looked at each other. "Welp. That's that. We're equally screwed." Psyko said slowly. "NO WE ARE NOT!! I'M GONNA FUCKING SHATTER THAT BITCH!!!!!!!1!!!" Rebecca was now triple triggered. "REBECCA STOP THIS SHIT" Clay repeated. "NO I WILL FUCKING NOT" Rebecca shouted at him. "GuYS CALM DOWN we need to find Beth or else everyone dies" Ash198 said. "How do you know that??" Neko asked. "nvm I broke the 4th wall but don't tell anyone because I'm only a harmless penguin" MEANWHILE. I woke up; everything was strange... for example, how did a bunch of mice surround me? And, worse yet, why were their name tags green? "With all of the necessary materials, we can use this mouse to our advantage." one of them said. "Yeah! I hope Shamousey is bragging about it! Without her, the rebels don't stand a chance!" another triumphantly bragged. "Alright, that's enough--" Batt_mellamy interrupted. "BATT STOP THIS SHIT" I interrupted him. INTERRUPT-CEPTION "Beth, finally, you're awake, but you really gotta stop saying--" "BATT STOP THIS SHIT" "Now, now, you know better than to say--" "BATT STOP THIS SHIT" I got slapped by one of the sentinels. "I was hoping we wouldn't have to use violence, but if you insist..." The sentinels closed in, and their attacks washed over me... Meanwhile, Psykosauce and everyone else was in a heated debate. "OBJECTION!" Rebecca said for no reason. "Why are you saying OBJECTION! when you should be saying PSYKO STOP THIS SHIT" Gayfingers said. "Because you're gay." Nekotonyy replied. "Why are we doing a Phoenix Wright scene when we should be saving Beth from the sentinels?" Iceroseunite asked. "No clue" "Anyways..." Iwillforget said, "can you guys remember where Beth is?" "I will forget" Clayfingers said "Yes?" "No, I WILL FORGET" The others laughed. "Stop it, it makes me fucking triggered" Iwillforget said "No it doesn't" Gayfucker said. Bethdacat checked the story at this point and noticed that Clayfinger's username was being changed. "EXE GET YOUR FUCKING ASS OVER HERE RIGHT NOW" she shouted. "What is it now?" Beth.exe appears in Atelier801 for no reason. "WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU CHANGING GAYFI- ER I MEAN CLAYFINGERS' NAME" "Cause he's gay" "Good point but STILL YOU NEED TO STOP" "Fine whatever" she disappears and Clayfingers' name is back to normal. Psykosauce got triggered. "GUYS WE GOTTA SAVE BETH BEFORE THE FOURTH WALL IS BROKEN" "What do you mean 'the fourth wall's gonna be broken?'" Spider asked. "DID YOU JUST SEE THE BREAKING POINT IN THE STORY?!?!?!" "What, you mean this?" Rebecca holds out a spear. "No, I meant a point-of-view change!!" Psyko is more triggered. "PSYKO STOP THIS SHIT" Icefox101 barked. "I thought you couldn't speak English since you're a Pokemon, Icefox." Iceroseunite said. "Oh yeah, I meant GLACE GLACEON" "No you didnt, you meant that you were lOOKING FOR THE FUCK ING SENTINELS AND JOINING THEM" Psyko assumed. "Did you just assume our alliance?" Neko put his paw on Icefox's shoulder and glared at Psyko. "No" "YES" "Everyone stop this shit" Rebecca said. "Wait, we have to exercise before saving Beth" Spidermeme said. "Lies!!!1!!" Neko said. "I'm not going outside." Pbthelegend pouted in a corner. "Yes you are Pb now come ON" Clayfingers dragged him to the middle. "Is Shamousey actually on our side?" Psyko wondered. "No he isn't he's a SENTINEL" Rebelcca reminded her. "I know but what if Shamousey was like Nekotonyy? Like, he was a sentinel spying on them for the rebels?" "Yeah, no. I can see it happening for Batt_mellamy though. He loves--" Rebecca was interrupted by a BANG! A police telephone booth appeared out of nowhere and landed right in front of the rebels. "What the fuck is that thing?" Rebecca wondered. A tiny mouse popped his head from the booth, looking at them suspiciously. Then he smirked. "Hey, y'all." "WHAT?? A FLYING TELEPHONE BOOTH?? MUST BE A SENTINEL-MADE VEHICLE!!" Neko shouted. "No, wait! It's not a sentinel-made vehicle! This thing is the TARDIS." "The WHAT??" "The TARDIS." "Hmm." "Anyways, I'm Bastlase. Another rebel. I hate these sentinels too. I heard that you're in trouble?" "Yeah," Icerose said, crossing her arms. "Some of the sentinels stole our friend and we're going to the Administrators' Section to find her." Icefox101 just barked like a Glaceon. I'll do more later Dernière modification le 1509901020000 |
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Tigrounette! What did we do wrong?! Please forgive us! TIGROUNETTE STOP THIS SHIT |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506688200000
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Rebeccademg a dit : Tig: No >:3 |
Psykosauce « Consul » 1506688740000
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i'm a newser |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506691080000
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Psykosauce a dit : yyyyyyep |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506693840000
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Spoiler Alert: Rebeccademg appears at some point |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506697920000
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im just commenting to myself because no one reads my shit xD |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506698280000
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Chapter 1 is done! Not like anyone cares or anything but whatever |
Ash_willow_iz « Consul » 1506698520000
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Applause!! |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506698640000
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Ash198 a dit : *inhale* |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506698820000
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Plot Twist: The cloaked mouse is Chuck Norris |
Spidermeme0 « Citoyen » 1506699660000
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Ash198 a dit : |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506700500000
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Chapter 2 be done |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506708300000
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Taking a break today. Next time in "Bottled Up Message"...
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Psykosauce « Consul » 1506708600000
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omg it's better than mine... |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506709680000
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Psykosauce a dit : not really lmfao |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506709980000
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beth x batt |
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I SAW YOU BLUSHING also i love shattering sentinels at 3/4AM. <3 |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506735000000
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Rebeccademg a dit : stop shattering sentinels at 3AM rebecca |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1506769620000
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Chapter 3 in progress! |