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Story of Cheese
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Chapter 1
Cheese Is In Town

Cheese opened her eyes from thw warmth of me mothers milk scenty fur, she looked around and saw her mom, she had a sharp thing stuck to her fur, like one of those darts her mom said about when she hadn't opened her eyes.... they looked exactly what she had explained. A sharp abject with feathers on it sometimes, she would say this all the time,"These darts make you sleepy you see deary! they make you pass out, maybe sometimes kill ya," Cheese poked at her mom, she only kept snoring,"lucky it's a sleepy one," she yawned, she then squealed as a giant hand grabbed her from above,"MOMMY!" Her mother suddenly opened her eyes, she looked over tired and tried to move. As another monster reached and picked up Cheese's mom, she watched as she struggled to help her daughter. Soon, they were reunited in a box like opject,"moomy?" she whined. She remembered her mothers tales of her sisters being taken away by twoleged creatures of pure evil. She shivered, but she knew now, her mother and herself would be reunited for sure.......... right?

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*For a second there, I thought this story was about the food-- cheese.

AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDD
I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDD

May I make a story for Thornpaw/Thornwhisker?
He had such a dramatic apprentice-hood, I wouldn't even have to start around the time he was born!

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^ sure you can make another thread for him <3
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Thanks! :D

So lazy
Why don't I make that Story already??? D:
Too lazy

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Chapter 2
Cages

Cheese was awoken as a hand had picked her up from the box her mother and her were in,"MOMMY HELP!" the mother awoke and hissed trying to grab her kit without falling out and onto the hard surface of ground. The twoleg slammed the cage on the she-cat. Cheese screemed,"MOMMY NO!" Cheese watched as the twoleg took her away and into a twoleg den. She looked around and shived at the cats and dogs that were in cages,"hey Petey look it's a new she-cat,""heh wonder if theres a mother around, probably fiesty, isn't she Patrick?""heh probably," Cheese flatted herself in the hand as the toms watched her. She was then taken into another room where the twoleg set her down. Cheese was too frightened to move in fear if she did something would happen. As the giant gate opened again she saw her mother, she was asleep. Maybe another dart? the twoleg put the mother next to Cheese, Cheese crawled over to her mom and curled up next to her. A few minutes later the twolegs came back with two needle sharp objects, Cheese was struck by fear as they picked her up. She screamed as the object was stuck into her fur and cringed as she was put down onto the ground next to her mom. Cheese watched as they stuck a needle into her mother as well, but her mother was still instead of moving. Cheese put her ear to her mothers chest, loking for the calming heartbeat. Nothing. Cheese backed away. They killed her! THEY KILLED MY MOTHER! Cheese shreiked as she was dragged away from her mother by another hand. She clawed and bit at the hand, but nothing had happened. Cheese was flung into a dark cage. She cried to her mother. Waiting...............

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OH MY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
POOR CHEESE D':::


Awesome story, btw. :D
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ty ty
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khjfkjh a dit :
ty ty

Of course!!! :D
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