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Sukikmu
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I just had this crazy idea and wanted to write it down, so I hope you read and enjoy ;)


I, Suki, laid down on the bed staring at the roof of the room. I did nothing but think of how bored I was and then finally decided to get up and play Transformice. I opened the computer and logged in and started playing in room 1. I entered in another window the tribe forum, Manga and Anime. I saw them talking about the usual stuff. Even though they sometimes speak of things I dislike, I still found it very enjoyable to talk with them.
I sighed, closed the forum, and continued playing Transformice. I wished that something fun would happen, and just as I did, a bright light shown and I closed my eyes.
I woke up in a vast room which was atleast 10 km in diameter, and i wasn't alone. All around me I found all sorts of people with tails, ears, and whiskers of a mouse! "What the f*** just happened! I was speaking with Mich in the forum when a f***in light appeared and now I find myself in this f***in place!" Something in me told me that that was Becca speaking and I sweat dropped along with a few other people.
After a moment or two of confusion, another bright light appeared and after it was gone, the Shaman Goddess appeared in a human form! Though she still had a tail, ears and whiskers of a mouse.
" Dear mice, I have come to explain to you your position. because of unknown causes, every person logged in on Transformice or the Atelier forum was transferred here inside the game by a magical light. All of you people are now stuck inside the game of Transformice and your appearances has changed to that of your avatar mouse..."
After the Shaman Goddess said that, she waved her hand and mirrors appeared in our hands. I looked into the mirror and saw that my skin was darker than the usual, because I still haven't bought any other skin color yet, my ears turned to that of a mouse and I had a tail and whiskers and long sharp fangs with a red coloring at the tips. I looked so cool! I finally had my dream come true to have fangs! Thank God that I bought them when I had the chance in the Halloween event.
My hair changed as well, it was shoulder length and brown in color. And I was wearing a whites shirt and a black tie and black pants and shoes. Strange, I didn't buy a white shirt, or pants, or shoes. I tried to act like in SAO and slide my hand in a downward motion to get the options menu and it worked! I chose the shop and saw that now we can buy clothing and shoes now as well, even weapons! So these must be the beginner clothes. The other people had the same shirt and pants and shoes, but instead of a tie, they either had a flower necklace, etc or nothing at all. There were players with Rainbowdash hair or Ichigo's hair. Put simply we all looked like our mouse avatars in human forms.
The only thing that haven't changed was our faces, well that's atleast one thing. "If you want to know how to get out of here, then atleast 10 of you have to get to the Divine Mode to do the ultimate magic that will get all of the people hear to the real world. Though there are disadvantages, first of all, you are your body's soul, your real bodies are still in the human world unconscious. You also have 150 lives, so you don't have an infinite amount so when playing normal rooms, vanilla, prophunt, etc. every life you lose will be counted and if you lose all of them, you die for real. Bootcamp and Circuit, if you die in them, you won't lose a life. Infected, is like Bootcamp and Circuit, you won't lose a life but...never mind. If you want to buy something from the shop, then you have to have enough cheese like the usual game. Also there are weapons for sale but you can buy up to two weapons only, but you have to be careful because you can kill other people with them. If you want to access to the options menu like stats, skills, inventory, shop, levels, rooms, etc. then slide your index finger upward into a downward motion, there should be a 'help' choice in case you have any problems. The rest is as if you are playing Transformice from your computer. I think this is all, so good luck to all, and LET THE GAME BEGIN!" The Shaman Goddess finished and clapped her hands. Another light engulfed us, and when I woke up, I found myself sitting on the grass with a few other players and one that was painted in blue and had to feathers in his head, the Shaman. I was in room 1. So basically what's happening to us is a Transformice version of Sword Art Online. Oh F***! Oops, I cursed '^.^ !


So this is the first chapter. If you want to join in writing your welcome. You have to write in first person though. If you didn't understand anything then please ask. So umm yeah, hope you enjoyed the chapter and tell me what you think ;) :D ^_^ >.< =3 'v'

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Omg i thought it would be like sword art online, and when i was sure, I WAS SO HAPPY SOMEONE FINALLY MADE IT
THIS IS AWESOME
I LOVE IT!





lmao i have this idea tora should be kirito and meet his harem girls xDDD
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omg same!!!
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I'm happy you guys enjoyed it ^_^
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Chapter 2:

I stared at the sky for a while, while the others were panicking, when something hit me. I slid my hand in a downward motion, and clicked on 'help'.
"Oh curses, we lose a life as well if the shaman freezes us." I slumped even more. Though what was the Shaman Goddess about to say about the room 'Infection'. It seemed pretty dangerous. Maybe she didn't tell us not to let us panic. And now after having a closer look, everybody has their names and levels written over their heads. It's seriously like SAO except that we don't have HP and MP bars.
"Hey you, your name is Sukikmu right? So please move it and get the cheese, or else I'll freeze you. We don't have much time left..." Time? I looked up, and sure enough there was a big timer that read 1 minute and 30 seconds, and it was decreasing by the second! It's seriously like Transformice! Also before I even realized, people stopped panicking and started playing.
I finally reached the hole with the cheese, this wasn't easy stuff like I thought, but somehow my body felt lighter than the usual. I checked 'help' again to see if we would lose a life if time was up, and guess what, we do lose a life, even if we ourselves did '/mort' we'd lose a life too. Ugh, I started to hate this.
I checked the tribe menu to see where the other tribe members were, and saw that Red was in Survivor 3. Yosh, I'll go there. I tapped the small arrow that was above Red's name, and then my body started to glow again.
When the light deminished I found my self in room Survovor 3. How did I know? Well there were mice tossed everywhere and a grinning Shaman who was throwing canons at them. Yup, I'm in Survivor all right.
"Abunai!" Someone screamed and pushed me out of the way. When I looked over his/her head to see his/her name and it read 'Rednin' wait Red!?
"Are you ok?" "Hai! Arrigatou." "You're welcome." Red helped me up as we both fell down and we didn't find the Sham, he probably tripped and fell and lost. "Hey Red?" "Yes?" "The Divine Mode was there for a while, isn't it possible that already 10 people achieved it? I mean I know three people who got it." "I thought of the same thing but look..." Red showed me his Stat window and the amount of mice saved in any room, badges, and titles were all reduced to zero! I checked mine and it was the same! The only that was left was the amount of cheese we already had, the things we bought and our skills. Even the things we used to have in our inventory was gone! I stared wide eyed, "See. Whoever put us here made sure that they, the people who already achieved Divine Mode or even Hard Mode, were rendered useless and obliged to repeat from zero." I sighed and pushed him as a canon was about to get him, a new round started, "I'm no longer indebted to you Red!" I screamed and he smirked.
Transformice is still a game, even if our lives are in danger now, so why not enjoy it a bit?

How was the second chapter? Hope you enjoyed, and tell me what do you think ^_^

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3 lazy to read it BUTT GIMME DEM GURLS
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COUGH if anyone should be Kirito it should be me I mean have you seen the 7DS AHEM
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no it should be Wickszz from 7ds do u even read

Lol we ain't fighting don't worry about it... -.-

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It's not obliged to be the exact replica of SAO, each one of you can have their own story or harem, so don't fight over this -.-
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I wanna ask this question since I'm supposed to be a 'no gender'. Should I be in this story a male or female ?_?
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the genderless troll (the creature)
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or use the gender you fucking got from when u were born <3

so the one of ur body, not ur mind
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lol
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ooh i like the second chapter!
Also why not your real gender? Like in real life.
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I'm asking because I'm not sure, ugh whatever, Female then -.-
I'll write the third chapter today but later on, and Tora will make an appearance ;)

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"ur not sure" jezus as if we dont stalk ur profile, you cant be serious about not being sure what your body is, i understand you dont know if u wanna be a guy or a girl but that does not make ur body both (unless ur transgendered or how it was called)
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xtoradx a dit :
"ur not sure" jezus as if we dont stalk ur profile, you cant be serious about not being sure what your body is, i understand you dont know if u wanna be a guy or a girl but that does not make ur body both (unless ur transgendered or how it was called)

I'm not sure of my gender because of my actions but I sure know what my sex is, there is a difference between gender and sex you know ;P
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yeah yeah i know (i didnt) (i use both for the same purpose)

then i meant to use your sex @.@
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Ok, then female it is, arrigatou
But sadly I don't have time today, so I'll write the chapter tomorrow ;)
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i want to make the most amazing appearance in history in this story plz
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