[Fan Story]

Chapter 1

Everything seemed distant into the past. Nothing seemed normal after that happened...After IT happened...

{3 Days Ago...}

"Hey Jake!"
"Hey!"
Me and my friend Hornhelper were talking. It was a normal day. People around gathering cheese, saves, firsts and even titles. The every day atmosphere. The sky suddenly turned dark. Dark as a hole in a hollow wall. I felt strange, scared. I feared this turbulent sky for it had made me feel as if something was going to ruin this day. Something unusual.
"Jake...we should go into a tribehouse..." said Horn.
"Kay', I'll be going to my tribehouse. I'll ask Admshumaker what's going on." I replied.

"Adm, what's going on?" I asked.
"I...don't...know... if I should tell you yet..." Adm replied to my question.

He wasn't in his normal mood, no. He was in a much more agrivated mood. It could be the atmosphere around. My soul turned pale and white like the clouds of a sunny day, but sadly, it wasn't sunny. I had heard shouts and screams outside of the mousehole. A mouse had walked in. I was shocked and terrified to see him like this.

"Holy Cheesus!" I shouted out loud, so loud the french server must have heard me.
"No...no...this isn't how this was supposed to be!" Adm cried as he saw Delatex bleeding from his neck and head.

Blood dripped from his mouth as well. Drooping in a puddle of his own blood. His dark, dark blood.

"We need to form an alliance with Impure!" Adm said.
"Go find Impuredeath, and tell him...It has begun..." Adm had told me as I saw a tear full of despair and anger dropped from his eye.

So I ran out of the tribehouse in search of Impure. Many mice dead on the floor. Some that I recognized, others not. The ground was full of blood, splattered everywhere. Something had made me stop. Stay still, in a paralyzed stand. I had seen the most horrifying thing on the ground. Tig... with a half ripped up face. Who could have done this? And why? At that point I saw Acidrain, or morely known as Redditguy. He was standing there fighting off some mysterious figure of a distorted mouse. A sword firmly gripped in his pale, white knuckles, his face splattered with blood. Blood of the mouse's, not his.

At that point I saw...
I saw Impure's tribehouse. Redditguy was defending it along with many others I had just noticed. Defending it from more distorted mice. I had assumed Tig was as well, but he has fallen. These mice were not normal, they had eyes of hatred and, confusion. They looked like they had no idea what they were doing, but it wasn't really them in control.

I walked into the tribehouse. I found Impure lying in a bloodstained bed. He was injured. Analetta stopped me from approaching him.

"Stop, he's sleeping. You'll have to wait. We knew you were coming though." Analette had told me.

So I had to wait...
Until the next day...

[To Be Continued...]
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are you making your own charactors or could people give you charactors to join in

Falconpawx a dit :

are you making your own charactors or could people give you charactors to join in

You can ask to join in-game or here. Then I might just add you in.

This is legit

Can i join?

im kicking you because wounding the tribe leader is just not nice mk
eta - wait youre not in the tribe are you
because if not im recrutiing you just to kick you :)

can i join in

Chapter 2

{2 Days Ago}

The sun shining dimmly through the clouds and over the hills of grass. People wounded, still fighting on through the swarm of "dark" mice, as I call them.

"Okay, you can see Impure now, he's awake." Analetta informed me.
"Thank you, I hope you survive this, horror." I thanked Analetta.

Impure was lying in his bed, eyes open. Well, 1 eye, the other had an eyepatch over it. I had never seen him without a hat before. Now I have...

Scars covered his face and head. He seemed calm though. Finally I decided to make a move since it seemed like forever.

"Impure, Adm said we should form an alliance..." I sent my message.
"Yes, I know. It has begun. I need you to go. Go over the hills and the dark stone mountains to find Herobrinefan." Impure ordered me.

I nodded, knowing I had another message to send.

"She will know what's going on once you reach her. Take care, if you die... We lose all hope, for most of us are too injured to take on this quest." He had told me with determination in his eyes.

I nodded agan, this time I certainly knew I had to make it through. I headed out the door as I saw Redditguy walk past me into the tribehouse. His fur stained with dried blood, and some wet. He seemed angry.

"You can't go. You need help, from someone. Or some people." Redditguy said.
"Take Falconpawx with you. He is skilled enough to strike enemies you run into. Also if you find Sydoline... Tell her to unban my main account. The Real Redditguy..." he had said with hope in his voice, but fear in his eyes.

Falcon had stepped out from the battlefield. It was a windy day as we strolled through the hills. My paws ached, and I felt as if I could collapse at any moment.

"You okay?" Falcon asked.
"Yeah..." I said out of breath.

That was when things had to get worse. I was tired and worn out. In no condition to fight that. A dark mouse had appeared out of a bush. It looked hungry. Hungry for us...

Falcon pulled out a sword and gripped it firmly in his paws. This stance seemed similar to Reddit's. His knuckles pale and white, his Knees bent slightly, and ready to take on a whole swarm of cannons.

He fought like a warrior. He fought on and on. The dark mouse took countless blows until it finally collapsed down the hill and rolled into a place we didn't need to go. The sky turned darker as we headed into the dark mountains of stone. Broken planks on the floor, shaman feathers scattered all over the place. We had assumed this was a room that was occupied pretty well. But it had fallen.

"We need to rest" Falcon told me as he set up the camp.
"I'll be first watch" He said.
"No, you fought that mouse, I'll be first watch. I'll wake you up if an enemy comes by" I rejected his request to watch first.

He accepted, as I could see he was tired as well.
So the night ended with a silent howl of the wind...
And no enemies had came that night...

[To Be Continued...]
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That's the second chapter we got there! I have gotten some new characters i this quest. I will only list people who requested to be in here though.

New Characters :
-Herobrinefan
-Falconpawx

Lol XD ^^'''

So you assume i live on the Holy Mountains :P

Can I join pls

Can I join as a evil maniac?

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very funnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
LOL
XD
:)
:-P

Nice story

Bumping this, and I will write a new chapter today, later.

Jjaakkee a dit :

Bumping this, and I will write a new chapter today, later.
This post is to be edited :D

Yay

i realy like the story and how you implemented my charactor

Chapter 3

{1 Day Ago}

Once again we set out over the mountains. Still no enemies as we strolled through the silent roads and paths. It was vacant, like Tyto's tribehouse...

"I think I see a fire, c'mon let's go." Falcon said with anxiety.
"You sure this is a [url]good[/url] idea?" I asked with some concern in my voice.
"Yeah, it has to be Herobrine!" He shouted.

So we headed towards the fire. The trees and branches blocked our way as we saw leaves and stones scattered across the floor. Then we saw a hut, made of small pieces of planks and boxes. Anvils to support the framing as well.

Hero was standing there picking at the bottom of her foot.

"What the cheese are you doing o_o?" I said in confusion.
"Oh, just preparing to walk on a ton of burning hot stones! :D" she answered.

Her answer had made me even more confused. I was lost of why she was going to do this. She walked across a mini-road of layed out stones that seemed a bit red.

"By the way I already know it has begun!" she said as she walked across the mini-road, then off of it.
"What is "it" anyways?" I asked

"Wow, Impure didn't tell ya? So basicly someone went on to throw a coded bot into Tig's special coding "volcano" and it screwed everything up." Hero answered with a calm voice.

She was strangely happy all the time. She was too much of a joyful person, I don't think she will help too much.

"So Tig had predicted that this was all going to happen, and many mice will die!" she added with a smile.

Time had passed by quickly. I hadn't noticed the dim sun was setting behind us, yet again. The sky still dark and misty. I could see the battle from all the way up here. I saw mice dying, being injured by the dark mice. If only I could have participated. Hero guided us into his hut. It was surprisingly enormous on the inside. Packed with random things like mice skulls, shaman feathers decorated with different shaman tattoo paints. I saw another mouse though. A mouse decorating a stone carved mouse statue. A statue of a shaman. They were painting it with tattoo paint, and adding different feathers to it as well.

"Hello!" the stranger greeted.
"...hello?" I greeted unsure if I should have.
"This is my assistant, Bethdacat." Hero introduced Beth.

"I'm planning a new type of shaman mode! It will have extremely fast spawning and good aim with cannons to battle the enemies that are to come!" she explained her process.

It seemed interesting, but ever since the "End" as I call it, shamans wouldn't come when they put on their feather. They'd have to go to a shrine nearby the Impure tribe, but it is blocked by a giant clutter of boulders.

Hero and Beth helped us settle into the hut. Me and Falcon had our own room. Beds and chests were prepared for us.

Yet another silent night with no enemies coming by...

[To Be Continued...]
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Yet another chapter has been published. We're getting close to the current time! I'm going to get some action into this soon!

Just a heads up for you guys! ^^

Jjaakkee a dit :

Chapter 3

{1 Day Ago}

Once again we set out over the mountains. Still no enemies as we strolled through the silent roads and paths. It was vacant, like Tyto's tribehouse...

"I think I see a fire, c'mon let's go." Falcon said with anxiety.
"You sure this is a [url]good[/url] idea?" I asked with some concern in my voice.
"Yeah, it has to be Herobrine!" He shouted.

So we headed towards the fire. The trees and branches blocked our way as we saw leaves and stones scattered across the floor. Then we saw a hut, made of small pieces of planks and boxes. Anvils to support the framing as well.

Hero was standing there picking at the bottom of his foot.

"What the cheese are you doing o_o?" I said in confusion.
"Oh, just preparing to walk on a ton of burning hot stones! :D" he answered.

His answer had made me even more confused. I was lost of why he was going to do this. He walked across a mini-road of layed out stones that seemed a bit red.

"By the way I already know it has begun!" he said as he walked across the mini-road, then off of it.
"What is "it" anyways?" I asked

"Wow, Impure didn't tell ya? So basicly someone went on to throw a coded bot into Tig's special coding "volcano" and it screwed everything up." Hero answered with a calm voice.

He was strangely happy all the time. He was too much of a joyful person, I don't think he will help too much.

"So Tig had predicted that this was all going to happen, and many mice will die!" he added with a smile.

Time had passed by quickly. I hadn't noticed the dim sun was setting behind us, yet again. The sky still dark and misty. I could see the battle from all the way up here. I saw mice dying, being injured by the dark mice. If only I could have participated. Hero guided us into his hut. It was surprisingly enormous on the inside. Packed with random things like mice skulls, shaman feathers decorated with different shaman tattoo paints. I saw another mouse though. A mouse decorating a stone carved mouse statue. A statue of a shaman. They were painting it with tattoo paint, and adding different feathers to it as well.

"Hello!" the stranger greeted.
"...hello?" I greeted unsure if I should have.
"This is my assistant, Bethdacat." Hero introduced Beth.

"I'm planning a new type of shaman mode! It will have extremely fast spawning and good aim with cannons to battle the enemies that are to come!" she explained her process.

It seemed interesting, but ever since the "End" as I call it, shamans wouldn't come when they put on their feather. They'd have to go to a shrine nearby the Impure tribe, but it is blocked by a giant clutter of boulders.

Hero and Beth helped us settle into the hut. Me and Falcon had our own room. Beds and chests were prepared for us.

Yet another silent night with no enemies coming by...

[To Be Continued...]
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Yet another chapter has been published. We're getting close to the current time! I'm going to get some action into this soon!

Just a heads up for you guys! ^^

B-b-b-b-but I'm not that cruel ;;

(And I know many people mistaken me as a male...)

Herobrinefan a dit :

B-b-b-b-but I'm not that cruel ;;

(And I know many people mistaken me as a male...)

Fixed the male thing, and how are you cruel?

Jjaakkee a dit :

Fixed the male thing, and how are you cruel?

I dunno... :o

Nice story *0*