[Fanfic] Living a Superhero Life by Vivihi |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376505960000
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[url=]Chapter 1:[/url] BEEP BEEP BEEP! My alarm clock beeped and I hopped out of bed, exhausted from last night’s work. Oh I am SO rude! I didn’t introduce myself...I am Vivihi! You may know me, you may not. But here is something TOP SECRET that you can’t tell ANYONE! Look around, is there anyone reading this story? No? Okay…the truth is…I am a SUPERHERO. Believe it or not, I am! I have many powers. BUT it’s hard to keep it from my best friends and a crush. My best friend Micefamilies does not know and neither does my crush Akinator. It’s really hard to not keep my secret from him when he has those dreamy eyes and brown, handsome hair… I put on a light blue shirt and some jeans and bounced back on my bed, opening my MouseTop. I checked my email and saw 2 messages, each from Akinator and Micefamilies. I first read Akinator’s. It said: ‘’Hey there Vivi! How are ya doing? XD’’ I grinned and replied: ‘’Good. How about you? I’m just hanging at my house. Are you going to Mice’s party next week? It’s her Sweet 16!’’. I hit SEND and then read Mice’s message. It said: ‘’Hey how you doing? Remember my Sweet 16 is next week! Be there or be square! ~BFFL! I typed: ‘’Of course! I wouldn’t miss it for the WORLD’’, then hit SEND. I sat back and relaxed…..then something pinged in my messages. A message from Akinator! It said ‘’Hey there Vivi AGAIN! LOL! Oops, Mom’s calling’. G2G!’’. I sighed and closed my laptop. I had nothing else to do, so I walked downstairs for breakfast. Correction: I FLEW downstairs for breakfast. As I landed on a kitchen table seat, my mom said ‘’Honey! Don’t use your super powers unless they are an emergency!’’ I face palmed and said ‘’M-OM! It WAS an emergency! I was LAZY to get down so I flew!’’ as I grabbed a pop tart. ‘’Plus, it’s a SATURDAY! It’s a weekend full of fun!’’. My mom sighed and handed me a plate of pancakes, then looked at me. ‘’Just don’t cause TOO much trouble, OK hon.’’. [url=]/!\[/url] NOTICE: ANY GRAMMAR MISTAKES OR SPELLING? TELL ME! Kthanksbai Chapter 2: Page 1 (Scroll down a bit) Chapter 3: Page 2 Chapter 4: Page 3 Chapter 5: Page 3 Chapter 6: Page 3 Chapter 7: Page 4 Chapter 8: Page 4 Chapter 9: Page 4 |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1376506080000
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FIRST COMMENT i read fast its a kewl first part |
Littlechedda « Citoyen » 1376506080000
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Mmf i like eet,*slams paw down on table* MAOR |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376506200000
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Susanlwu a dit : Thank yew :) Littlechedda a dit : LOL!!! XD I really lol'd at that so bad. LOOL! Chapter 2 coming tommorrow. NOTICE: ANY GRAMMAR MISTAKES OR SPELLING? TELL ME! Kthanksbai |
Littlechedda « Citoyen » 1376506200000
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Vivihi a dit : Nerp,I dont see any grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. |
Flutterbest « Citoyen » 1376506440000
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Vivihi a dit : lol tht made me laugh...a lot o.o anyways good story can't wait for the next chapter ^u^ |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376506440000
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Littlechedda a dit : Prob not...since I used Microsoft Word 2007 to check spelling mistakes or grammar. Flutterbest a dit : Thanks XD Nice to hear a bunch of compliments from awesome artists :) |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1376508360000
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Thank you for including me in your story Vivihi!! It's so funny! Can't wait to see more!!! |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376508540000
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Micefamilies a dit : Your welcome :) It's not that funny :p |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1376508540000
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Vivihi a dit : To me it is c(: |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376517120000
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Micefamilies a dit : Thanks :) |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376517960000
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[url=]Chapter 2:[/url] After breakfast, I called Mice. I first stared at the clock and thought ''OMG! 1:00 PM! I only have a few minutes to get to karate class!''. I hung up the phone JUST as Mice answered. I put the phone down and ran back upstairs to my bedroom. ''Late, late, late!'' I thought. I grabbed my gi and my yellow belt and went downstairs into the living room. ''See ya after karate, Mom!'' as I opened the door. I ran as fast as I could. My watch read ''1:05 PM''. OMG OMG OMG! NO! Karate class starts at 1:10! I was 3 blocks away, and I had to hurry. I past a few of my friends and shouted ''HEY! WHAT'S UP!''. As I passed a skateboarder, I almost bumped into him! ''HEY! WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING, KID!''. I winced and cried ''Sorry!'' and continued. ''Oh my cheesecakes!'' I worried as I approched the karate place. I saw my teacher in there with other students. I looked at my watch and it read: ''1:09''. Phew! I'm on time. I walked inside and sat down, eager to learn a new lesson... -------------- As my teacher JUST finished a new lesson, my mom pulled up in her car. I smilied and cried ''MOM!''. My karate teacher: Mr. Gou looked at me and shushed me. ''Sorry....'' I said as I got up and walked to my mom's car. As I got in, I saw Akinator! OMG! ''Mom, can I talk to my friend?''. Mom nodded as I ran to Akinator. ''Hey Akin! How you doing?'' Akin smiled as he saw me. ''Good! You?'' as he gave me that crooked smile and brushed his bangs out of his eyes. Just as I was about to say something, my mom whistled to me. I whipped my head around and she signaled me to get in the car. ''Hey, sorry but I gotta go, Akin. I'll talk to ya tommorrow!''. I ran towards the car and hopped in. I sat down and my mom drove back to our house. I looked at the window and saw Akin waving. I smilied and waved back. Then I thought ''I want to tell him my big secret...but what will happen?'' ~~~~~~~~~~ (BTW A gi is a karate uniform) |
Pighouse « Citoyen » 1376521080000
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you should put chapter 2 in your first post? but so far I love it |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1376521200000
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Pighouse a dit : Wouldn't that make it really hard to read then? o-o |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376521320000
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Exactly O.O I don't want people to be blind. Still thanks :|D |
Littlechedda « Citoyen » 1376583240000
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yaayy. still hungry,MAORRRRR im already egging my friends to coninue der tribe forum stories |
Beautyiscool « Citoyen » 1376583660000
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Littlechedda a dit : she is indeed T^T i mean yeesh you can wait to find out what happens to raw xD anyways loving the story vivi, please write more :3 |
Skellies « Citoyen » 1376585580000
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i like this. why r u people such good authors, i demand you give me ur writing powers so that i am superhero too. lol great story write next chapter soon i cant wait |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376585700000
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Littlechedda a dit : LOL XD Beautyiscool a dit : Thanks :D Skellies a dit : OKAY! -gives mah powers to everyone- FEEL FREE AND ENJOY !!! |
Skellies « Citoyen » 1376585700000
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*recieves powers* hteshreshrae must write a story now |