CHAPTER 1


Ahh. I rubbed my eyes as I woke to the blinding light of the sun through my window. "SPI!" I yelled. "DID YOU OPEN MY CURTAINS?"

Spiritjonie appeared in the doorway, looking sheepish. "I thought you'd want the sun to wake you up cuz I ummm kinda on accident broke your clock."

I groaned and got up, glancing at my clock as I angrily covered the sun with my velvet curtains. The clock had a big chip missing and it's hands were going crazy. You could see the inside of it going wacko.

"Whatever... but what time is it, we'll be late for school," I growled, shooting my brother a glare. Spi looked at his black spy watch and sighed. "7:50," he said, avoiding my eyes.

"Come on, we'd better hurry so we don't miss the bus," I hissed. Spi stared at me and started laughing. "What??" i asked. then I looked down. I was still wearing my PJ's. "I'll meet you outside," Spi yelled as he left my room, slamming the door behind me.

Soon i was outside, my jacket inside out and my backpack slung around my neck. I ran to the bus stop and halted, panting. Spi was chuckling, I could tell, as the bus arrived. When I entered the bus everyone started laughing at me. "SHUT UP!" I yelled. Whoa. did I just... AH! I hadn't chosen a seat and the bus lurched forward. I swung into a seat, which was currently occupied by two make-up covered girls who "ewed" at me and pushed me into the other seat, which Spi was in. He glared at the girls. "Don't make fun of Pea," he said, his eyes shooting daggers.

Even though Spi was a pain sometimes, he always would defend you in tough situations. I hugged him and sighed, re-putting on my jacket and putting my backpack on correctly. I took out my comb and gave my tangled hair a quick brush.

Soon we were at school. I remembered my plan I had formed last night over the phone with Neutrualise, my bff. Our plan was to start a Crime War with the top bullies of the school. This is how it would pan out:

Every day at school for a month we'd cause trouble, like throwing toilet paper all over the stalls in the bathrooms, or smothering jelly all over the teachers seat.

I grinned. All we had to do was ask mice to join in. I activated my wings, which weren't allowed in school, and glided quickly over to Higmahoy and Tasty. Hig nodded at me, and Tasty turned to glare. "Whaddya want, punk?" asked Tasty. "And make it snappy."

"I want to start a crime war," I replied, then I explained it to them.

"We're in," Hig laughed, punching my shoulder. "Didn't know you were one for causin' trouble, Little Miss Pea," Tasty joked.

"Let's get the boys and inform them of Pea's plan," Hig interrupted, grabbing Tasty's arm and roughly pulling him towards their friends, who were huddled around a younger mouse, terrorizing her most likely.

"I heard your little plan," said a familiar voice behind me. I swung around and there was my other bff, Ak. He was looking at me like I had just stabbed his mini-kitten, Fluffers. "I-I.."

"No excuses," Ak interrupted, glaring at me. "You promised no more games that would get us into trouble."

I sighed. "I just came up with it last night, and Neu agreed, so-" Akbennyboy grabbed me by the shoulders.

"How can we be friends if you're always lying to me, scheming with that trouble-maker Neu and his pals Hig and Tasty?" He growled, shaking me. Just then the bell rung, and he let go of me. "Goodbye, Pea," he called over his shoulder, hurriedly walking away.

I groaned. I should've been more careful about not letting Ak know the plan...

"It's on!" yelled a voice to my left. I turned my head and saw the toughest mouse in school, waving his tiger-patterned paw at me. "The Crime War is on!"
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I didn't read alllllll of it but this is what got my attention
two make-up covered girls who "ewed" at me
just doesnt flow

but good story

LOL!

Nice story! Good writers, GIVE ME YOUR POWERS D:

Vivihi a dit :

LOL!

Nice story! Good writers, GIVE ME YOUR POWERS D:

thanks im glad you like it *gives power* lolololol

It's very interesting. Are you seeking critiques or would you rather none? I understand if you're not~

Skellies a dit :

thanks im glad you like it *gives power* lolololol

GASP! BOO YEAH!

Haruhitastic a dit :

It's very interesting. Are you seeking critiques or would you rather none? I understand if you're not~

I'm accepting critiques.

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btw if you want to be in the story, post ur mouse name and personality. (And if you want add what your mouse looks like.)

example:

Geerkro

Geek, computer nerd, chess-player, bullied often. Bulky tan mouse.

Haruhitastic a dit :

hiiiiii i hope it's okay but just to let you know there's line breaks for every new character that speaks
example

"hi!" vivihi said, throwing up her hand and waving.
"oh hey vivi," replied haru, doing the same.

but this is ok:
"hi!" vivihi said, walking up to haru. "how are you doing today?"

also try to avoid acronyms/slang like omg in your writing~

liking it so far though!

ill just quote what i wrote vivi~

Haruhitastic a dit :

ill just quote what i wrote vivi~

i try to do that and ill try more in next chapter, ty

Chapter 2:

I snuck into the classroom early the next morning, bearing a torch in one hand. I knew that if I was caught I would probably be expelled, so I made sure to be as quiet as possible. It was 4:30 AM, and nobody was here yet. I had lock-picked the doors and all I had left to do was place the torch somewhere...

I glanced around, and my eyes widened. The gym! Perfect. I carefully cracked open the door and peered inside. No one. I then tapped the torch to the wall, which was wood. It fed on the wall quickly. I grinned and threw the still-lit torch out the window, and it hit a tree and managed to set it on fire.

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I sat up, panting. That dream was weird. Setting the school on fire? Whoa. I'd never do something that big. Never.

I got dressed and ate a good breakfast, then sat watching TV for a while. I had woken up early, which is REALLY strange. Spi stumbled into the kitchen, still half-asleep. He glanced at me in surprise but went on to make himself some cereal. "Up early," he muttered to me as he ate. "Yep, I had a weird nightmare," I replied, my eyes still on the TV.

"Don't tell me, it'll make me have nightmares too probably," he said, cleaning his bowl in the sink. He looked at the oven clock nervously. "The bus will be here soon."

"Meet ya outside!" I called, laughing as I skipped out the doorway. I could here him grumbling as I shut the door behind me. In my backpack I had an inflated woopee cushion. I chuckled, thinking of the possibilities.