[Fanfiction] Team Oppa!~ |
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EN Flag for main characters, FR flag for side characters, BR flag for settings/places, DE flag for requests to be added on to this story, and the RU flag for the blacklist and whitelist ^-^ /!\ I AM NO LONGER WRITING ANY CHAPTERS, PLEASE NOTE. SORRY FOR EVERYONE THAT WASN'T IN THE STORY ;; If you would like to know what was supposed to happen at the end, please click the PL flag or if you would like to know why I choosed to end the story, please click the TR flag. Thanks ! ![]() ![]() [Banner created by me if you wanted to know] ![]() a dit : ![]() [ALL CREDITS GO TO CFM AND THE CHARACTER FOR MAUS PICS] Main Characters: Linxus: He's not the smartest mouse on the team, but he's sure the coolest! Tigrounette picked him first for he said that he showed great courage. He does take huge risks, but he knows how to get out of situations easily. Image: ![]() -- Joel: Probably the creepiest and smartest member on the team. He's great at tracking down hackers and has a sense of focusing on details rather than the main subject. Linxus will usually ask him for his opinion before going down on a case. Known for having close contact with spirits and paranormal activities. Image: ![]() -- Cindy: She's not very smart, but her looks will get you on your feet. Cindy is known for her beautiful appearance, but don't let that fool you! She's also known for her amazing sharp-shooting skills, even the boys can't beat her! Image: ![]() -- Kia: The sweetest and kindest member of the team. She thinks rather more optimistic than pessimistic, which helps a lot in some situations. When the team needs an extra hand, she'll lend over two! Known for her support and kindness. Image: ![]() -- ~~ Other characters (will probably add more as the story goes) Bengalstar: When the team realized that they accidentally sailed onto the shores of BR instead of FR, they quickly dash to town and look for english speaking people. A white explorer mouse that happened to be on BR. Fortunately, she can speak fluent english. She helped the team on their way back to EN. Image: ![]() -- Xiaojiemei: When the team travels to ID to search for new hacks, they find out that their ride back to EN vanished. As they follow a small trail, Cindy ends up falling into a small hole, which lead them to a long forgotten world (aka cfm). The team searches for an ID helper, which is when they find Xiao :3 . Xiao helps them find their way home through the mysterious ID server. Image: Xiao took this pic of her wonderful maus ^-^ -- Wingcestor: (you can call her Wingy or Wing too) Helped the lost team when they reached to CFM. She's very crazy usually, but when it comes to keeping track of profiles she's pretty serious! When shaman, she is indeed a windmaster! Her wings help her and the team in dangerous situations. She also has pretty good skills, although has never completed a bootcamp before.. (Might add more information) Image: ![]() -- Marliaaa: Found at random times, she's probably the smartest of all mice. She can be a little sensitive and shy, but she's still a great help. Marliaaa also likes reading books, which is great because Linxus does not. Even though she's sensitive and shy, she's also friendly and loves animals! Not to forget that she loves computers too! Image: ![]() -- Nick: A cold, passive, smart character. He wants to do his job as fast as possible. Not very friendly and not very nice. Almost hearthless. Helped the team during a death match round by teaching them how to cannon jump. Found at the death match tournament Image: -- Imae: Found later at the end of the series (The end is a surprise!). She's not the most smartest cookie in the jar, but she's good at quick thinking, and ideas! Mostly she's weird..and funny.. and kinda sweet..but mostly weird and funny. Imae's mostly quiet around new people, but around her fellow teammates she's that weird girl she is, but if you annoy her she'll most likely scream in your face, and kick your butt.. Imae also loves music..so she'll probably be sitting in a beanbag chair listening to music and reading, it she's not helping the team. Imae is good with weapons and fist fighting, getting the fist fighting part from her dad. Image: ![]() -- Iwuvcheesed If it wasn't for her help, the team probably would have never made it to the DM show! She's skilled and smart, but when faced with a stranger or person, she's rather awkward. She's not very social or talks much, when you get to know her, she's engergetic, friendly and hyper and always making puns and people laugh. Just don't get on her bad side. She also has a very strange candy addiction.. (If your looking for somebody to remember someone for you, it's a no brainer) Image: ![]() -- Choo A nice friendly mouse that the team ran into on cfm. Usually quiet but Choo loves to get things done fast. He also love listening to music which is where you'd probably find him doing when not busy. Choo love spy kind of stuff. He also love using dangerous weapons. *-* He's strange e.e lol. He also love darkness!~ Image: ![]() -- Cold Found in the death match tournament. Not-that-smart mouse but logic and math lover. Fun,joker and nice to be with. But when it comes to serious things, serious. Can be seen but not often. Loves chewing gum,listening music and reading jokes book. Always energetic but sometimes become lazy and bored. Quite suspicious though when it comes to knowledge and agility. Image: ![]() -- Bubble Marilaaa's friend. They're usually found together participating in events which are at random times. Shy, insecure, doesn't like to strike up conversations, will only speak if comfortable. Image: ![]() ~~ Home Town (A small town located on the edge of EN) A quiet village with a small clear stream running through. There's only a few large huts, all are made of tall grass and sticks. Surprisingly, there is no town shaman there for it's small population. Although there is a town shaman located 50 miles west, the town is still vulnerable for attacks. Luckily, this town is home of Team Oppa! The anti-hack brigade group of EN! Koffe (Central city of EN) The largest city of the EN server. Known for also having the most hackers there, even though there's a surprising number of moderators. This is the place where Tigrounette recruits the team for the anti-hack brigade. Has a wide variety of huts, made of the most amazing materials in the server. Looks somewhat like the Capitol of the hunger games. Luna (A town located on the shores of FR) This is the town that the team was supposed to meet Tigrounette for a top secret mission. Instead, they find themselves at BR. Fortunately, they get to the town (although it wasn't exactly on time). It is an average size town. Most of the huts are made from mud and stones, mainly because of water being so close there. They say that the mice will collect colored stones/objects and decorate their huts. *-* Kysh (A small town located in the forests of BR) When the team finds out that they landed on BR instead of FR, they quickly search near by for help. The team finally finds a trail that leads them straight to the dangerous forests of BR. They take extreme caution when they enter the forest, mainly because it is known to have mysterious animals that roam around. The huts are what you'd normally see, sticks and mud. Not too advanced, but it's very easy to gather the parts. A small fire pit is at the very center of the village, which is lit every night to keep hackers away. No more than 8 huts are in the village. Cheeseformice (CFM for short) Thought to be long gone after they lost connection with the transformice world. What the people did not know was that mice still lived through the long vast network. The team was shocked to find this world after it was long gone, replaced with the official forums. The leaderboards and ancient writings on the walls of these caverns still glow in the night, just as bright as runes. *-* ![]() [I will add more places and even MORE information to the OP soon!] Chapter and Series currently writing.. - Chapter 1 [The Mysterious ID Server] Chapter 2 [The Mysterious ID Server] Chapter 3 [The Mysterious ID server] Chapter 4 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 5 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 6 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 7 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 8 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 9 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapter 10 [The Mysterious ID Server][CFM] Chapters colored in red are no longer available :( Chapters colored in green are the ones that I am currently working on. Chapters colored in white are ones that I will be working on soon! /!\ I AM NO LONGER WRITING ANY CHAPTERS, PLEASE NOTE. SORRY FOR EVERYONE THAT WASN'T IN THE STORY ;; ![]() REQUEST FORM [DUE TO TIME AND LACK OF SPACE I AM CURRENTLY NOT ACCEPTING REQUESTS, SORRY!] Name: Which Chapter you want to be in: Description (A personality): Picture: [THERE COULD BE A CHANCE THAT I DO NOT INCLUDE YOU IN MY STORY!] /!\ Unfortunately, I cannot allow main characters. Sorry :( [I MIGHT PUT YOU ON TEH BLACKLIST IF YOU ARE RUDE AND SPREAD HATE ON MY STORY THREAD] •Blacklist• None currently •Whitelist• All writers! :D -Note that there is a difference between critiquing and hating ![]() What was supposed to happen at the very end of the ID chapter is that Wingcestor, Xiaojiemei, and the team would group up and destroy the huge laggy cat. After they destroy it, they once again meet Choo which follows the team along until Xiaojiemei leads them to another dock which is located on the other side of the ID server. When they reach the shore they say their goodbyes and what not. At the deathmatch scene/Koffe the team wakes up to a surprising alarm which tells all mice to head to the dock (weird, right?). They found out later that Marlia had set off the alarm, not the admins. When they reach the dock they notice the boat keeper and a HUGE crowd of mice. The team realizes that there was indeed some strange clouds ahead. Although it was a great idea to leave, Team Oppa stayed to figure out what was happening. As predicted, it was a storm. The biggest one they would have ever seen. More and more mice left and fled to Koffe, while the others stayed. The ones that did stay were surprisingly either noobs or rebels. The rebels had favored deathmatch as their skill and were going to instead of evacuating like normal mice, they would take on the storm with their skills and skills only. Team Oppa tried to get the noobs to a safe place, but it was no use. Before the noobs could get on top of a tree, it was too late. The wave had crashed onto the island which then sent Team Oppa scattered around (eww my spelling). They noticed quickly that the deathmatch players survived the wave and surprisingly gained strength from it. Linxus started calling for help, hoping they'd respond. One mouse came over, his name was Cold. He greatfully told the mice how to play deathmatch and told him skills he had learned as a young mouse. The team started to learn slowly and slowly, until finally they could keep up with Cold. He told them to follow him to where the other mice were, and so they listened. Cold told them that they were going to follow the mouse way over by the sea as planned. It looked like a speck to the team, but they agreed and followed anyways. The mouse that was way over by the sea was Nick. They called him the Lone Wolf mainly because he'd normally fly alone during the darkest hours. While the team was cannon jumping over across the sea, Nick told them a few tricks along the way, like how to attack your enemies, how to defend, how to circle jump. They thanked Nick along the way. The whole deathmatch group stopped for a moment, realizing that there was actually a huge storm along the way. Even Team Oppa could see that there was a small cyclone looking thing ahead. Nick ordered everyone to turn around and head to Koffe, and so they did as fast as they could. By then the noobs had found their way on higher land, so they no longer needed help. Even then Team Oppa lead them towards Koffe --one cannon at a time, where they knew it would be more safer. It took less than an hour for the team to head to Koffe, which then Sydoline held a scroll. It looked as if it was the one that The Hack Brigade wrote on, which was strange. What would Sydo want to do though with these hacks? And then there was Lewbot, a rebel to the admin team. Even then it was slightly confusing for the EN Anti-Hack brigade to figure out what was going on. Linxus tried calling Tig, but Sydoline had actually tied up the rest of the admins back stage, including tigrounette. Sydoline had the other walkie talkie, which she carried in her belt (?). From where did she get the belt? It wasn't just Linxus' walkie talkie though, there were many more. They were from FR, TR, BR, RU, more than you'd think. As the town clock struck 12', all the walkie talkies for some reason vanished in thin air (not including what the teams had, though). "Your time is up!" screamed Sydoline. Before the team knew what was going on, she read the directions of hacks on the scroll, which then turned Koffe to the glitchiest spot in the world. Towers and towers fell apart and all the mice scattered everywhere, searching for a safe place. Even the Mods couldn't do anything about the situation, for they had no powers what so ever to ban an admin. The only mouse though who wasn't scared, was lewbot. Lewbot and the Rebels as they knew standed in a huge crowd, staring straight at Sydoline. In a flash, before Sydoline could even charge at them, they teleported. They weren't using hacks though, they had used Sydoline's own lag. Furious, Sydoline summoned a huge herd of Exploding sheep which then set everything on fire and explode as you would normally predict. Thousands of mice screamed for help as they were being eaten away by the fire. The rebel team tried their best to help the mice, but sadly enough, they could not help them all. Sydoline summoned another exploding sheep herd, which hurt the rebel team badly. They were scattered everywhere, just like the other mice. The only surviving team left was the EN anti-hack brigade. Realising that they still had their walkie talkies (just not sydo), they called other teams as well (which was one thing they could do). They called TR, FR, BR, you name it! *insert huge fighting scene here* *sydoline gets killed slowly* at the very end of the chapter they had noticed right away that a few mice survived. Marliaa, Iwuvcheesed, Imae, and bubble. The team actually heard someone coughing and noticed right away that it was Lewbot. They rushed right ahead to try to find Lewbot, which was under tons and tons of debris (eww my spelling). Lewbot coughed and wished the team very good luck, hoping that they'd survive. His words at the end "Y-you did it, y-you actually d-did it." (there were more things that he probably would have said too). At the end ofc EN was a huge mess with the storm and the attack and what not but at the end Team Oppa freed the other admins and saved they day. This scene marks as the players who left and got a life (since most were killed off) There were plenty of more survivors as well, just that Team Oppa hadn't noticed them until later. i was also possibly going to make a new set of chapters just for what happened after only but eh what's the use. It would have been just the ruins of Koffe 100 years later and the EN anti-hack brigade promotions which made them mods and what not. Then they had to take care of the EN server (which was low populated after what had happened) and yeah more adventures to tell. Not to forget a lot more hackers too since the admins were too lazy to ban them all :P Also sorry for typos and what not but that's pretty much what was supposed to happen, ty for reading The main reason why I had decided to close this story down was mainly because lack of free timel. It was also dead too and I never planned to bring this thread back to life. As I said in the OP, some characters may not be added to any chapters or what not. Most, however, were explained in the short ending on the PL thread. Also IRL things are going on as well that has affected me greatly overall and my mood so I would rather not continue trying to work on a dead story at this point. Thank you all very much for your support, I am deeply sorry that I had closed this thread down. |
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First! Sounds like an interesting story |
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Micefamilies a dit : yes thank you I'm gonna make some small edits here and there if you don't mind '-' |
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Bengalstar a dit : Okie but I will be stalking |
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i wanna be in da story *-* |
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Bengalstar a dit : u know i have never heard a story like this |
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Wingcestor a dit : there is a request form in the OP '-' Marliaaa a dit : that is good! I was worried that someone already had the idea '' |
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Name: Wingy/wing/wingcestor Which Chapter you want to be in: cfm chapter Description: aj hair,sunglasses,green and yellow scarf all not customized. she sorta lives in cfm if u kno wat i mean..she keeps track of everyones profiles and yeah.... Picture:ur my friend soooo....yeah. |
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Wingcestor a dit : A bit more information would help (such as a personality) And by CFM you mean the ID server chapter? (which will be the second series in a different chapter) Would this be a good image of your mouse? ![]() |
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Bengalstar a dit : yush yush! ok now...... personality: is very crazy usaly but when it comes to keeping track of profiles shes pretty serious!if the skill trees are included she has wingz to help her *-* she has pretty good skills but has never compleated a bootcamp before..-might edit for more info- |
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Wingcestor a dit : Added! :3 |
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yaaay! <3 |
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Wingcestor a dit : I will make sure that the team finds you at cfm!~ |
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START THE STORY >:O |
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Micefamilies a dit : hold on I want to give a chance to people who have not entered the story yet |
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Name: Marliaaa Which Chapter you want to be in: why not anyone u want Description: Smart,Cheeky,sensitive and shy Picture: ![]() edit :I like reading books! BOOKS ARE AWESOME! Im very friendly its just that im shy.... But i loves animals and i love computers ^^ |
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ok!here is mawr of de personality thing: when it comes to resting wing NEVER gets it. she knows the whole of cfm off her heart and she knows about half of the mice in tfm. |
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hmm lemme edit it then how about that |
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Cute Bengal! I hope to see you in the Brigade soon ♥ |
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Marliaaa a dit : I shall add you soon ^-^ Immagetcheez a dit : aww thanksies holly <3 -- I am currently working on the prologue, so requests might be delayed ;; -- Prologue Cindy quickly hopped onto the table with excitement. "Guys! Guess what?" she screamed. The brown, cold table shakes side to side. Joel slammed his head in frustration. "Could you PLEASE just shut up." yelled out Linxus from the other side of the room, half asleep. Cindy shook the table even harder, almost like an earth quake. Joel sighed and sat down on his navy blue chair. He grabbed the local transformice news and read the top words. In shock, Joel rushed down stairs and grabbed his camera. "Everyone! Come look at the news!" he shouted in excitement. "Tigrounette is recruiting people for a top secret spy mission!". Linxus shot straight out of bed. He dashed to the kitchen in his PJs and glanced at the newspaper. Kia followed a length of a tail behind. "Well I'll be.." stared Linxus in amazement. He quickly searched the newspaper for more information. "11:00am EN Central time, will be located at Koffe." "It's gonna take like an hour to get there!" hollered Cindy in shock. Kia stared at the clock in the kitchen, they only had one hour to get ready. The team rushed their way to the basement and grabbed on their clothes. Linxus ate his breakfast almost as if he was a starving wolf. Stubbornly, Cindy grabbed her eyeliner and stormed out of the hut. "Let's go!" cried out Linxus in stress. The team ran out of the door and climbed on their bikes. Linxus and the others followed behind as Joel raced down the hill. "Catch up with me!" teased Joel down the hill. Linxus quickly catched up behind him. Without warning, Joel flipped over on the trail and smashed into a hard brown tree. He laughed hysterically as Joel slammed his fists into the tree. In anger, he got back up on his bike and went through the bramble. " 'The heck is he thinking." sighed Linxus, for he knew that the team would never make it to Koffe on time. Cindy quickly pulled her brakes at the tree and rushed in the bramble. She noticed a black figure. "Hello?" yelled Cindy in fright. She turned around and ran back to her bike. In shock, Joel sprang up from the bramble and landed right back on the trail. Linxus quickly halted in wonder. He stared in shock as Joel dashed across the trail with his bike in perfect condition. "Springs, they work every time" winked Joel right back at Linxus. Linxus' face grew red in anger. He raced across the bumpy trail and barely caught up with Joel. "CHEATER!" screamed Linxus from behind. Kia and Cindy finally caught up with the rest of the group. Joel turned around and looked at his watch. "C'mon guys, we only have 5 more minutes!" cried out Joel to the rest of the group. The team rushed down the trail in fright, worried that they might not make it to Koffe in time. By the time they got to Koffe, Tigrounette was on stage, waiting for someone to pick. Thousands of mice gathered around him, waiting for his decision. His hand raised up. Everyone waited for the magic words. Tigrounette slowly announced his choice. "I choose.." Tigrounette waited. He glanced at the team, and then back at his letter. "I choose Team Oppa." The team froze in shock. Everyone's eyes grew in surprise. Tigrounette quickly grabbed Sydoline on stage and slowly walked away. Sydoline's face was as tight as Cindy's. Breathless, she quickly grabbed the mic and looked at her papers. "Team Oppa, please come forth." calmly asked Sydoline. The team immediately rushed on stage. Sydoline smiled and looked back at everyone else. "Calm down my dears!" Sydoline hollered on stage. Her voice sounded strange, like if there was something inside her. The idea was cut off when Sydoline handed them over to Melli, who took them off stage before the BRs would start spamming. As they were pulled off stage, a small brown mouse quickly climbed up the stairs. "Beware! Beware of t-" screamed the little mouse. Katburger and Verkon rushed to the crowd and took out their ban hammers. Kia watched in horror as the poor little mouse was banned right in front of the others. "Send them back to EN." whispered Melli to Tigrounette. In a flash, the team was already back at their home town. The team noticed that Tigrounette equipped a dark black belt to each of them. "Looks like we're hired" smiled Linxus in pride. He quickly noticed a strange flashy button on his belt. As soon as he pressed it, a large amount of spy gear came out from below. His eyes grew wide as he picked up what looked like a grappling hook. "Sweeeeet." Joel looked in surprise. A feeling of power struck each of mice, because they are now apart of the EN anti-hack brigade! |