[Fanfiction] The confusion |
Lifewizard « Citoyen » 1382853120000
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Hi! I decide to make a new story. This time the action takes place nowadays, and the characters are, of course, some mice. Application Form: Name: Age: Moral Traits: physical Features(You can put a picture of the mouse or describe it) Another things about the character Ok, now I will show my character: Name:Damian Age: 13 years old Moral Traits: Smart, analyzed with caution perfect all around him, an innate strategist, yet very sadistic, extremely grim. It has a ‘’cool’’ personality. Physical Features: Other things about the character: When he was six years his parents were killed in a terrorist attack. He grew up with his aunt. Being the smartest kid in America, a secret organization wanted to capture him. They made a plan that his aunt is murdered and he escape unhurt. Always wear a scarf because he has neck problems. Okay, now wait for registration to the story. P.S : I don't finded a good title of the story. xD |
Satash « Citoyen » 1382860920000
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You've already made a good opening post! Let me make a character as even though your English is a bit off, it sounds like a promising story. However you might need to explain the plot a little bit so we can understand. **Also, I can be your beta reader. ;) Name: Raul Age: 15 Personality Traits: Empathetic, socially awkward, smart, caring, patient, strong to his emotions, and very hopeful. If you catch him on a bad mood he will lash out and say things he doesn't mean. Aftwards, he'll be coming right back and beg for the mouse he lashed out on for their forgiveness. Physical appearance: http://i.imgur.com/ewf2sGj.png Other things about the character: Raul enjoys farming and gardening, he's a green thumb but has just began his nature hobbies. History: He was sheltered and homeschooled by his parents for most of his life. (You can change things around.) |