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![]() [url=]Banner created by me[/url] ![]() ![]() Star Bait is a fanfiction about a forum newbie who first finds the forums. She finds new people there and obviously messes up terribly. It all went down hill once she found the EN chat thread, a thread filled with 25 year olds who sadly pick on kids that annoy them (not the one actually here though). Her goal is to survive on the forums.. or at least try to. As a newbie, she spams "O.O" and "XD" emotions in every single dang post she makes. Not only that but she also gets really angry when someone is right and refuses the fact. How many "O.O"s and "XD"s will she spam? How annoying will she act to other forumers? How many times will she make duplicate threads or post threads in the wrong topic? How many double posts will she make? Read the story to find out! ![]() EN - Main Information BR - Main Characters/Characters FR - Requests TR - Blacklist/Whitelist DE - Chapters ![]() ![]() Ah, did I forget to mention the names of the main characters in the OP? Well now here's the chance to actually know their names! -- Name: Choochoo Age: 11 (although she acts waaay younger) Gender: Female Personality: Basically the most annoying kid on transformice. She's new and all, she lies and calls everyone noobs. Sometimes she even spams forumers she finds with "hey can i be ur friend? XD" kind of pms (and she'll spam that until you reply). Very hot headed, she gets very upset when people are right about her. She just can't take the fact that she's wrong. Image: ![]() -- Name: Nuno Age: 13 (actually acts like his age) Gender: Male Personality: Makes a ton of mistakes, more than he can even count. He's smart and all but he's sadly picked on by the majority of the EN chat thread for being friends with the "wrong forumers". He's very nice when you meet him, even if he makes mistakes. When he meets Choochoo, he feels bad of how she's treated (even if she's really annoying). Finally after a few days or so he gets the guts to ask Choochoo to be his friend. As a newbie forumer, Choochoo agreed. Nuno fights for Choochoo no matter if she's wrong or right. Sadly, he ends up running shortly after in the weirdest situation you'd find of. Image: ![]() -- Name: Cadence Age: 7 Gender: Female Personality: Basiclly you'd find her draw or read. She has a very special stuffed toy unicorn always beside her(SO FLUFFY!), So she never leaves her alone! As you know, she plays a laptop! All of her friends say "Wow! i love your drawings," But, she likes all drawings, no matter how pretty it is, its still cool. She gets the kind of PMs, "MAKE ME A DRAWING!" but shes not the best. Image: ![]() -- Name: Yukizomi Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: Hyper, shy, and hates to make new friends for reasons. You'd mostly find her drawing and hanging out in the basement corridors of her house, due to the fact other mice don't sociate with her and she doesn't want to sociate with others either. Though she doesn't want to admit it, she actually wants to make friends with other people because she feels left out and lonely. She is also very smart and loves to interact with any electronics she may find. Image: ![]() -- Name: Cinnamon Dunne (Pronounced "dun") Age: 13 (Is wayyyy more mature than that however.) Gender: Female Personality: Kind of a hippie, believes that no one should fight. Kooky, an outcast, excluded often by other forumers. Considered a wacko. She wants friends, but no one has provided her with a chance. Stays quiet most of the time but speaks up when someone she cares about is picked on. Image: ![]() -- Name: Sourisplum, or plum for short Age: 13 Gender: whatever floats your boat Personality: hmmmm mm hmmm idk I'm kind of too honest, but I try not to be. and I absolutely hate forum noobs Image: kinda big so click please -- Name: Axel Age: 16 Gender: Male Personality: Sarcastic, Smart, Quiet. Image: ![]() -- Name: Sock Age: 25 Gender: male Personality: part of the EN chat thread clique who picks on and bullies people like star bait sits around chewing on tfm server cables Image: ![]() -- Name: Spin Age: 25 Personality: She is usually friendly to people until somebody irritates her too much - and little kids tend to do just that. When irritated, she's grumpy and sarcastic to people. Unlike some of her fellow En Chat friends, she prefers to hold back on the insults until shit really hits the fan. In her free time, she enjoys drawing, sleeping, and drinking tea. Image: ![]() -- Name: Zakkie Age: 26 Gender: female Personality: your typical preppy stuck up snob who think she's so much better than everyone because clearly she is. doesnt even try to be nice to people Image: ![]() -- Name: snake Age: 23 Gender: ? Personality: generally doesn't care but easily aggravated by quite a few forumers also sarcasm and magical girls Image: ![]() -- Name: Hollister (Holly) Age: 17 Gender: Who knows? :') Personality: Annoying, childish, horny, grabby, loyal (you put some other things in there I can't think lmao) Image: ![]() -- Name: Kat Age: 15 Gender: female Personality: One of those annoying people that post O.o and XD Image: ![]() -- Name: Beth Age: 15/16 Gender: Female Personality: [Still trying to get and I have a feeling I will mess up if I try making one for her] Personality: [Still waiting on an image] -- Name: Bya Age: 14 Gender: Female Personality: nice, but she can get mad at certain times or be an idiot. but overall shes nice and acts all and well can be stubborn at times Image: ![]() -- Name: Dakota Age: 15 Gender: Female Personality: Really really random and funny. Though she has major anger issues. Also super tomboy... Image: ![]() -- Name: Siiri Age: 14 (act a bit more mature) Gender: female Personality: seems annoyed and grumpy because she doesen't use smilies often.if there's something she obsesses over she goes crazy and starts fangirling.she likes drawing and designing a whole lot.also really despises most of the community. Image: ![]() -- Name: Grejfrutek Age: 12 Gender: Female Personality: Blatantly honest, slightly annoying, commonly acts like a noob but can act very mature when needed to. Often gets into fights, but sometimes tries to end them. Can be very rude. Usually slightly hides hate for other people, trying to not get muted. Dislikes strong positive feelings. Image: ![]() -- Name: Splash Age: 13 Gender:Female Personality: Laid back but when she sees someone getting bullied she'll defend the innocent in any logical ways and assumptions of awesome. Image: ![]() -- Name: Fall Age: 10, though sometimes acts like 12 Gender: Male Personality: Talkative when a conversation fits his points of intrest (birds, killing, drawing) but quiet when not, tempermental (gets angry easily), sometimes crazy Image: ![]() -- Name: Lillith Age: 16 Gender: Female Personality: Fashion freak, loves making jewles, and is a realy good fighter. Image: ![]() -- Name: Fibs Age: 14 Gender: both. no. female. Personality: quiet shy maus who doesnt like talking to people. is sarcastic when annoyed/in a bad mood. Image: ![]() [WE ARE LOOKING FOR MORE CHARACTERS \o/] ![]() Do you want to be apart of the story? Well then you're in luck, because we need more characters! All you must do is fill out this little request form a dit : Sadly in our world, we have those who cause problems. Those people who cause problems here are most likely to be on the blacklist. Those who are on the blacklist sadly cannot request nor reply to this here thread. ![]() Worried that you might get on the blacklist? Do not worry no more! The only true and possible way to get on this blacklist is if you insult me personally, bug me everyday asking when I will make chapters, and/or spam the living heck out of this thread (double posting is fine for bumping ONLY) ![]() ![]() No one, now let's keep it that way! ![]() - Rapidclan - All Staff members (sents, modsents, mapcrew etc.) - Haruhitastic - The Polish Community - Risingclan - Dreamer of Dreams and Fragmented Dreams - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly - Holly (what a bootiful white list yes) Anyone on the whitelist is more than welcome to critique, post, bump, basically to do whatever you'd like here except insult me personally. There is a way to get on the blacklist too even if you're on the whitelist, which is to insult me and make me hate you enough to get you on the blacklist (it's very hard though) ![]() Prologue (scroll down on the page) - Topic-507379 First Chapter - Topic-507379 Second Chapter (you'll have to scroll down a lot though) - Topic-507379 Third Chapter (scroll down on the page to see) -Topic-507379 Fourth Chapter (you need to scroll down though) - Topic-507379 Fifth Chapter (you'll have to scroll down a lot though) - Topic-507379 Also these chapters are probably going to be easy to see since they aren't a sentence long. If you're confused on where a chapter is, just ask here on this thread. |
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This sounds so interesting! I can NOT wait for Chapter 1! |
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Micefamilies a dit : OMG IKR. so interesting already. E: Hey. on the last flag.. the whitelist banner looks like whilelist ;-; thought I'd point it out. |
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thank you kind meece ily all <3 |
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Name: Cadence Age: 7 (wat) Gender: Female Personality: Basiclly you'd find her draw or read. She has a very special stuffed toy unicorn always beside her(SO FLUFFY!), So she never leaves her alone! As you know, she plays a laptop! All of her friends say "Wow! i love your drawings," But, she likes all drawings, no matter how pretty it is, its still cool. She gets the kind of PMs, "MAKE ME A DRAWING!" but shes not the best. Image: ![]() Chapter: 1-4? or 2-5? :/ |
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oh also i forgot to include which thread do you want to be in ahahaha/chapter sorry cadence but can you tell me that pls or else i'll just put you on the en chat thread |
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Bengalstar a dit : editted |
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edited..some things. or you can keep it that way if you want hue. Name: Yukizomi Age: 16 (Acts alot more mature.) Gender: Female Personality: Silent, shy, and hates to make new friends for reasons. You'd mostly find her drawing and hanging out in the basement corridors of her house, due to the fact other mice don't sociate with her and she doesn't want to sociate with others either. Though she doesn't want to admit it, she actually wants to make friends with other people because she feels left out and lonely. She is also very smart and loves to interact with any electronics she may find. Chapter 1-3. Or whatever. ![]() heuehueuheuhe vv yesh yesh okay c: this will be succesfull (in my opinion) |
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Cadencecool a dit : thank you dear ^-^ Noobforevah a dit : yes thank you i shall add right after i add candence to the list of characters |
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Name: Cinnamon Dunne (Pronounced "dun") Age: 13 (Is wayyyy more mature than that however.) Gender: Female Personality: Kind of a hippie, believes that no one should fight. Kooky, an outcast, excluded often by other forumers. Considered a wacko. She wants friends, but no one has provided her with a chance. Stays quiet most of the time but speaks up when someone she cares about is picked on. Whatever chapter this character would fit in with, no preference. Picture: ![]() |
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Where did you get the inspiration for this? |
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Thunderai a dit : This.. I also want to know. Is it because we troll alot in the forums or... what o_o (also I edited my form a bit) vv pfft. maybe, but I really want to know. |
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Maybe she's experienced this before, or she knows someone that has |
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Thunderai a dit : from looking back when i was a forumer of course ha ha i'd always be that annoying kid driving other users nuts :^) Livcorish a dit : adding o/ |
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I assume I'd be the annoying twenty-five year old. |
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Haruhitastic a dit : LOOL |
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ahahah no in a view of a 7 year old possibly but this is supposed to be a funny version of the forums -- also i added you in the OP liv i am planning to make a set of characters to be the main people in the EN chat thread, and they will def not act like anyone in the EN chat thread this is supposed to be extremely sarcastic and not offensive to anyone |
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Yes! Cinnamon is in, my creation has come to life ^-^ ![]() I'm not crazy! My mother had me tested c; |
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Bengalstar a dit : okay. thank god. Livcorish a dit : HOLY GAWD. DAT PIC. |
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shit this sounds amazing I want in Name: Sourisplum, or plum for short Age: 13 Gender: whatever floats your boat Personality: hmmmm mm hmmm idk I'm kind of too honest, but I try not to be. and I absolutely hate forum noobs Which Thread do you want to be seen in/which chapter: idk but I always fanart section Image: pls dressroom has no beautiful brown striped fur http://i.imgur.com/boCVkww.png |