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| Banner coming soon... *Still editing, but Chapter One is done!* Hi! Everyone (well... not everyone) seems to be making fanfiction these days, so I thought maybe I should make one. Critiques are highly accepted here! Even nitpicks count. <: Here I go: Prologue a dit : Okay! So that was a really short, but fast transitioning prologue.... I guess I can do character applications, so: Open! 1 slot. Form in 'Characters' tab. Characters: Ref:  Name: Katie Gender: Female Age: 15 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Humans - (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Was known for being the most curious person, adventurous, and a fun-loving person. She can get high-tempered at times (dramatic even) and be naughty. Fun Fact: Can shoot every single target in the bulls-eye/designated spot with a bow and arrow. Ref:  Name: Hase Gender: Male Age: 10 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Katie and Hadeus' younger brother, can be very judgmental at times, pressured easily, and never cries for anything. Fun Fact: Instead of crying, he gets shocked/emotional. Ref:  Name: Hadeus Gender: Male Age: 17 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Katie and Hase's oldest brother, know for his strong biceps, and can make corny jokes at random times. He is very friendly at most times, can be a nuisance whenever he starts making corny jokes, and loves popcorn. Fun Fact: He thought he was a girl until age 10. Ref:  Name: Mrs. Hades Gender: Female Age: ? Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Mother of 3 kids, lost birth certificate while moving into Mousehattan, and is very sensitive (not emotionally). Fun Fact: Fish is her inspiration. Ref:  Name: Mr. Hades Gender: Male Age: ? Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Can be very strict sometimes, is calm whenever there is an emergency, and he sleeps with one eye open. Fun Fact: Forced to like fish when he married Mrs. Hades. Ref:  Name: Granny or Mrs. Emao Gender: Female Age: 70 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Very strong for her age, no wrinkles were shown on her face until she was 68, and makes really scrumptious croissants Very nice and grateful.. Mother of Mrs. Hades. Fun Fact: Swims like a pro. Owner: Boefie Ref:  Name: Yuka Gender: Female Age: 16 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Yuka has been an silent girl till the age of seven. She started to speak up for herself, even if it was just about someone taking her plushie away. As she grew older she always ignored boys. And till the age of 16, she only liked a boy once. Is very caring for her hat. Her twin brother died in a accident when she was 8. Still very traumatizing. Doesn't has much friends, and is mean to strangers. If shes mad, SHES MAD. Fun fact: Is strong, very strong. Owner: Sirusthemice Ref:  Name: Pawnee Gender: Female Age: 21 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Pawnee grew up in a slightly wealthier than average family, was home-schooled for a long time and cut away from society but her family members. Pawnee was very good at chess, and still is. She's a bit socially awkward because of the long-lasting isolation, but isn't shy. Stays inside most of the time, disliking the sun. Fun Fact: Nicknamed Pawn, but isn't easy to control as her name suggests. Owner: Griffincraft Ref:  Name: Blacksoul Gender: Female Age: 24 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Scary Souls Background/Bio/Personality: Abandoned at 6 months old, grew up as a rogue, with a bit of a gentler personality than she looks. Skillful at horror; murder, sneaky, thieving. Fun Fact: An unknown ritual used to summon demon souls has been trusted in her hands. Owner: Flyinghamsty Ref: http://i.imgur.com/D35scRP.png Name: Nomui Gender: Male Age: 20 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Scary Souls Background/Bio/Personality: The brother of a mystical mouse, but instead of becoming one he chose another path instead.He ran away from his family. He grew up alone,no one to care for him. At 18, he made a deal with a demon, to cause havoc for immortality. He is mature, and will not give up, and also wants everything and is a little-lot bossy. Fun Fact: He sold his soul to a demon. Form: Ref: Name: Gender: Age: Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Background/Bio/Personality: Fun Fact: ________________________ About 1 slot open.... ~OPEN~ Chapter One: As the Hades family panted and sweated throughout the migration to their new house in Mousehattan, Katie started to feel queasy. Not that her health was in danger, but it was terribly hard for her to adapt a new place called 'home'. Her brothers, Hase and Hadeus, began to snort and cry in laughter. "Cheer up Katie, I know this is hard for you to accept this new place, but you'll get used to it! Let's explore around the house, shall we?", Hadeus reacted. Katie sighed and nodded 'yes' to her brother. At least she was going to make new friends, right? As the door busted open, Hase's mouth was filled with drool while his eyes blinked with admiration. He danced until his eyelids drooped, making him feel tired and sleepy. It was an exciting day for the parents, so they started turning the house into tip-top shape. Katie smiled as she saw her new room filled with pretty decorations. Her paw sprung forward and decided to touch the mural that was alongside her nest. A sigh came out as soon as Hadeus came crashing into her room. "You like your room? Mom and dad ordered special decorations just for you! I was really jealous, Katie! You must have been shocked to see that mural? Hmm?", questioned Hadeus. "Of course! I loved it!", Katie replied. As they chatted, a strange creature caught Katie's eye. "Did you see that?", Katie asked. "See what?" Chapter Two: Katie's P.O.V ________________________________ "Ah, never mind Hadeus." Five hours has passed by for me and I still haven't decided what to make out of my life honestly. My two brothers seemed to be joyful and all, but me. Unfortunately, I am practically the only female around in the house, so I had to pick up and clean after what they have done. My oldest brother, Hadeus, found a job earlier than expected and started signing up for a university again. So, that leaves me and Hase all alone. My parents? Oh, they started finding cheese-gathering jobs that would fill out our year supply. Which is a bummer, because I thought they would stay around longer for the summer. Sigh. I climbed back to my room and started day-dreaming about all these different kinds of life-case scenarios. Which, none of them fitted me. I sat on my nest hoping something new would pop up, but it seemed nearly impossible. With all respect, I didn't like our new house or the new place much. I haven't been able to make new friends either. All of a sudden, our doorbell rang and Hase started yelling "I GOT IT!! DON'T OPEN IT!". I slowly climbed out my room and peeked downstairs near the door. My brother was talking to some dude outside and asked him to play ball with him. He shouted "Goodbye Katie!" and slammed the door. As my shoulders felt heavy, I realized I was lonely. I called Granny a few times before she picked up and asked me 'what's wrong'. I explained after a few minutes of silence and cried throughout the whole conversation. She told me to go outside and make some new friends. However, that was impossible for me, but she still gave me some alone time and hung up. I crawled over to the living room and sat on the ground for a minute to think. A gush of wind flew through me as I sat down crying. "No need to cry, darling! I'm sure you can make friends if you tried!", spoke the unknown she-mouse. "Huh?" "If you keep sulking your eyes out, you'll still won't get any friends if you sat here.", replied the she-mouse. "Who are you?", I asked. "You'll get to that information later, but right now, you need some calming to do." My head was doubtfully playing tricks on me, so I sat there like an idiot and waited for the unknown mouse to step out. A white mist almost blocked my view of the she-mouse so I instinctively waved my paws around to make a clearing for my eyes. She had a white headband with silver hair flowing along her side as she grinned at me with her long wings flapping up and down. My eyes widened and started to blink rapidly. What's going on? Chapters grow as they go on! Send in your fan drawing! Empty for now~ |
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| Ref:  Name: Yuka Gender: Girl Age: 16 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): Normo Mice Background/Bio/Personality: Yuka has been an silent girl till the age of seven. She started to speak up forherself, even if it was just about someone taking her plushie away. As she grew older she always ignored boys. And till the age of 16, she only liked a boy once. Is verry caring for her hat. Her twin brother died in a accident when she was 8. Still verry traumatizing. Doesnt has much friends, and is mean to strangers. If shes mad, SHES MAD. Fun fact: Is strong, verry strong Sounds so awesome |
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| this. is amazing. this fanfiction is great. Ref: Name: Pawnee Gender: female Age: 21 Mystical Mice/Scary Souls/Normo Mice- (Choose One): normo mice Background/Bio/Personality: Pawnee grew up in a slightly wealthier than average family, was homeschooled for a long time and cut away from society but her family members. Pawnee was very good at chess, and still is. She's a bit socially awkward because of the long-lasting isolation, but isn't shy. Stays inside most of the time, disliking the sun. Fun Fact: nicknamed Pawn, but isn't easy to control as her name suggests. |
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Blacksoul Gender .:. Female Age .:. 24 Scary Souls Background/Bio/Personality .:. Abandoned at 6 months old, grew up a rogue, with a bit of a gentler personality than she looks. Skillful at horror; murder, sneaky, thieving Fun Fact .:. An unknown ritual used to summon demon souls has been trusted in her hands ---- I wanted to get a bit dark with this one ^^' |