[FINISHED] Crystal's Key |
Ixxiiim « Citoyen » 1483557540000
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hey beauties, thx for clicking on this xx hope you have fun! (NOTE: Lily does equations, they might be true or not) PROLOG: Lily was a mouse. She was a detective mouse. Her nickname was Rosy. In the story, she might be called that some of the time. CHAPTER 1: Lily was sleeping one day in her bed, in the land of MiceMice. She was wearing a golden key, pink bow, and had orange fur. She woke up, and the key was missing! She looked everywhere in her house. She found footprints. She realized they were mouse footprints. She was surprised to see they were mouse footprints. Her search went on to find her key. CHAPTER 2: Rosy went to her friends house. Her friend’s name was Morgan Rose,(she is wearing a ruby red bow as well as her sister)with her twin sister, Mikayla Rose. Rosy’s other friend, Alyssa Noelle, came to see Morgan Rose and Mikayla Rose along with Rosy. They too became hooked into the findings of Rosy’s key. Rosy put up posters saying Golden Key, if found return to 8359 Mouse Street, room #5. Alyssa asked all her friends if they knew anything about Lily’s key. CHAPTER 3: Rosy was sleepy, after 40 hours of searching for the key. She went back to bed. Five minutes later, she heard a scratching noise outside her door. Of course, she went to look. “Oh my, a cat!” she shouted. She ran away from the cat. She heard yet another noise, coming from the attic. She went to see her attic, there was 10 bats huddling around something very shiny. She went over, sleepy and all. There it was! Oh wait, that's a golden bat! Rosy went to sleep. CHAPTER 4: Rosy woke from her sleep. She was looking for her key. Rosy heard Morgan Rose and Mikayla Rose. She made more of the posters. Golden key, 40,000 dollar reward. If found, bring to 8359 Mouse Street, room #5. Rosy was getting very bored, so she did some equations. 1098=? Rosy tried and tried. She got -79. Again comes the equations. “10. That equals 100!” “36560. Another one in the box!” “= Yay!” 99! She became tired. CHAPTER 5: Rosy woke after another slumber. She was destined to get that key. She heard a knock. It was Morgan Rose and Mikayla Rose! Morgan Rose and Mikayla Rose had the key! They got it from the Baby Ogre, who stole it. She was so excited. She put the key around her neck. the end? Dernière modification le 1483557660000 |
Awesome4576 « Citoyen » 1487466360000
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hmmmm....I must say, the chapters are very short, finished reading this in about 3 minutes. But still, I enjoyed this fanfiction and I hope you do more! ^^ P.S: maybe a bit more detail in the chapters? |
Laderik « Censeur » 1487621520000
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That baby ogre :-Ω Nice story so far, but it was really short! If you wrote more your readers would enjoy it longer. |