Before I begin, here are the bio's of some of the important characters:

Name: Kodoku (Lone in Japanese)
Sex: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Quiet, Stubborn, Adventurous and Lonley
Description: Kodoku has blind eyes, a black base coat, white stomach and white spots. She tends to wear a robe and a necklace of limestone and marbel, as well as carcillan gemstones. Her only weapon is a cane.

Name: Reiji (Rage)
Sex: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Easy to be annoyed, harsh, brave, hard-headed on choices.
Description: Reiji has a tan base coat and a light tan belly. He has a pin on his side as a weapon and he wears a bandanna on his head, a dark green one. He also has gray-blue eyes.

Name: Onikisu (Onyx)
Sex: -
Sexuality: -
Personality: Harsh, Unruly, Quiet, Greedy and Confined.
Description: Onikisu, or The Concealer of Light, has a black coat with small dents and markings. It wears a helmet with a broken feather crown and a cape with a symbol on it. It has never shown it's face.

I'll begin.

Epilogue:

"A great many years ago, the White Shaman, the highest shaman, and the Yellow Shaman, the spouse of The Shaman of White Feathers, had two sons, who's names were Wreath and Jano. The boy's had envied each other throughout childhood but soon grew out of the childish habit. However, torment and greed still manifested itself inside of Jano, therefore bringing him into all sorts of trouble. As soon as their eighteenth birthday arrived, the parents agreed to pass down their duties as shamans to the rightful son, Wreath. He would also earn a color for his power, a color based upon whom he was, the color of his feathers. Jano had let out all his envy that day, learning all about the choices his parent's made and the secrets, all of it. Jano set off to become shaman on his own. Six years after Wreath's crowning, Jano succeeded, becoming the Gray Shaman, He therefore abused his power, hurting his fellow mice and torturing them.

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Epilogue:

"A great many years ago, the White Shaman, the highest shaman, and the Yellow Shaman, the spouse of The Shaman of White Feathers, had two sons, who's names were Wreath and Jano. The boy's had envied each other throughout childhood but soon grew out of the childish habit. However, torment and greed still manifested itself inside of Jano, therefore bringing him into all sorts of trouble. As soon as their eighteenth birthday arrived, the parents agreed to pass down their duties as shamans to the rightful son, Wreath. He would also earn a color for his power, a color based upon whom he was, the color of his feathers. Jano had let out all his envy that day, learning all about the choices his parent's made and the secrets, all of it. Jano set off to become shaman on his own. Six years after Wreath's crowning, Onyx succeeded, becoming the Gray Shaman. He therefore abused his power, hurting his fellow mice and torturing them.

Continued: The brothers faced a duel, the Duel of Justice. Wreath, the Green Shaman, used his power and overtook the lowly shaman, The power set upon him was so great that it had scarred his face in such bad manners that he wore a helmet. He swore that one day, he would destroy Wreath's family. Ascending to the darkest parts of the world, the Valumon Caves (named by he), he waited for the day that the Green Shaman would have a child. When the Green Shaman did, he left it behind hoping that Jano would never find it.."

(Kinda random, but \/(o-o)\/)

Nice story, but i think you should stop double posting. It looks more organized without double posts :D
Also,can you add characters to this story? I think i have made one worthy for this

This looks like a great story! I really want to see what happens next. ;3; And, as has been said, you should write chapters in one post. It's better.
Good luck with writing! I'll be looking for the next chapters.

why are all the names japanese

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why are all the names japanese

Because Japanese names are epic. :P

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Nice story, but i think you should stop double posting. It looks more organized without double posts :D
Also,can you add characters to this story? I think i have made one worthy for this

Because I don't have alot of characters,lol, I would be happy to let you guys add characters!

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I would be happy to let you guys add characters!

Nice, I want my character to be a part of this story then. >:3

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Name: Hagna
Sex: Female
Sexuality: Asexual
Personality: Stubborn and arrogant, doesn't really care about anything or anyone. Unfriendly, really rude, harsh.
Description: Hagna always wears her black and red helmet, dark spikey necklace and grey moon on a tail. Her fur is grey, eyes are green. She's also have a scar on her right eye and long, bloody fangs.

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Feel free to change anything! c:

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I would be happy to let you guys add characters!

Nice, I want my character to be a part of this story then. >:3

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Name: Hagna
Sex: Female
Sexuality: Asexual
Personality: Stubborn and arrogant, doesn't really care about anything or anyone. Unfriendly, really rude, harsh.
Description: Hagna always wears her black and red helmet, dark spikey necklace and grey moon on a tail. Her fur is grey, eyes are green. She's also have a scar on her right eye and long, bloody fangs.

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Feel free to change anything! c:

Amazing! I think Hagana should be a partner of Onikisu. I will change the bloody fangs however. We don't want to make her too evil looking! Noice design too!

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Jaybirdmm3e4 a dit :VoirMasquer

I would be happy to let you guys add characters!

Nice, I want my character to be a part of this story then. >:3

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Name: Hagna
Sex: Female
Sexuality: Asexual
Personality: Stubborn and arrogant, doesn't really care about anything or anyone. Unfriendly, really rude, harsh.
Description: Hagna always wears her black and red helmet, dark spikey necklace and grey moon on a tail. Her fur is grey, eyes are green. She's also have a scar on her right eye and long, bloody fangs.

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Feel free to change anything! c:

Amazing! I think Hagana should be a partner of Onikisu. I will change the bloody fangs however. We don't want to make her too evil looking! Noice design too!

Thanks! And I think that's a great idea :> Okay now I'm really waiting for the next chapters

Chapter One: The Mouse Cub.

"What!?" barked the grim fiend, gazing down upon each of his weak subjects. "It's outside, making the worst of ruckus,Wyvren.." whimpered a gray mouse. The large black mouse with a missing foot, Wyvren, scuttled through the crowd, pushing a few mice. " I must see it!" Wyvren roared. The group traveled up the many tunnels surrounded by rocks with mold and moss.heading towards the mouth of the cave. The white and punishing light burned the eyes of the mice, making them hiss and cry. Wyvren grunted and moaned, for his eyes had felt nothing from this, making him more irritable due to him being stuck in the hissing mess of rodents. He walked cautiously across the grass and dirt, minding each step and fearing each too. His hearing had led him to a bawling mouse pup. It was lying in a dirt hole, squeaking for help. Wyvren couldn't believe it. It was a pup! It had been a long time since a pup had been born in Vaulmon. The pups had died of diseases or being consumed by spiders."How could this pinky have not been guzzled down by a slitherthing?" hissed Sajeen, a blue-gray mouse with brown eyes. "Luck?" squeaked a mouse. Wyvren turned. "No, luck is not a thing. It's not alone. We must eradicate it!" The other mice were in shock. "No!" yelled a yellowish she-mouse. Wyvren and Sajeen gawked at the she-mouse "What can you do about it, Minzei?" growled Sajeen. "We'll take it in as our own. Besides, we don't have a lot of pups.." Wyvren and Sajeen gawked at Minzei with utter dispute, but,she was right. A daughter of a soothsayer and a student of a philosopher was something you shouldn't argue with. So, they brought the pup in, and little had the posse of mice had known that what had been beholden to them was a mouse that would change the world of mice forever.

Woaah nice o: Can't wait what's this mouse gonna do and what's gonna happen

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why are all the names japanese

Because Japanese names are epic. :P

bad answer

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why are all the names japanese

Because Japanese names are epic. :P

bad answer

Well I am not going to name a mouse "Bob" or something of the like. I want to give the characters unique names.

Oooh... I wish to join. (I have to locate a Japanese name!)
Until then....
Allons-y! *runs into TARDIS, and it soon disappears, heading towards Japan ;P*

*finds one*

Name: 医者 (Isha)
Sex: male
Sexuality: straight
Personality: can be childish at times, but can also be very serious. Very protective of children, and is a fierce warrior, though he doesn't like to fight.
Description:

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Oooh... I wish to join. (I have to locate a Japanese name!)
Until then....
Allons-y! *runs into TARDIS, and it soon disappears, heading towards Japan ;P*

Pssst. This is from 10 months ago, and the author apparently hasn't posted anywhere since then.