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Piegirlseyaj « Citoyen » 1487506260000
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(Note: I'm new at this so lock it if it's not allowed. ( also i didnt find another one like this so pls dont say i copied) Warning: language that is lot appropriate for 9- is used in the story. Chapter 1 ----------- It was a dark and stormy night. Actually it was morning and sunny. Anyway there was a mouse named Sunday, she was a brown mouse who lived in a small home with her dad. Her mom died in survivor. Anyway so the story begins... "SUNDAY! Pack your things we're going camping!" Sunday was tired of camping but she did it anyway.She got into the jeep and they drove off. They went to the village and camped where that nice green grass is.You set up camp then it's late so you make smores then the first bite you took everything went blank... Chapter 2 ------------- You wake up you find yourself surround by pandas.You weren't in Transformice,"This isn't China you thought to yourself." You go over to talk to them and they drop a bomb so you're running for your life "EEEEE!! Wait.....Oh no PLEASE don't tell me i'm in Bouboum!! OH NO!" You try talking to them but they drop bombs EVERYWHERE!You pinch yourself hoping it's a dream. "OWW!" You find some weird devices and you end up telaporting back to the camp area. "whew" "AHEM YOUNG LADY WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!" " Umm....I dont know?" " Ugh get your ass in the car." You sit in the car and drive home. You take another bite of ur smore and... To be continued. Chapter 3 Anyway so the second you take that bite you teleport to a bridge. You cross it but half way a troll comes out. " Listen closely and near human. For me can only speak in rhymes you must seek the answer hidden within the key. You may answer the riddle correctly to ge along this bridge swiftly, get it wrong and stuck in ice for near 100 years." You gulp saying," O-okay I'll take the riddle." " What can be as small as a pea and as big as an elaphant worth more than gold and humanity?" You think wanting to make sure you don't die and freeze You think to yourself," okay so it can be any size... and it's worth a lot... hmm.. A GIFT!!!" Then you tell the troll it's a gift. As he speaks," for humans may not heed to warning do no trespassing in these woods. For creatures lurk and more to come the adventure as just begun." Then he disappeared. Creepy you thought as you crossed the bridge and found yourself in a forest that seemed healthy. Walking into the forest felt like walking through a meadow.onward with the story. You find a unicorn and gaze as it speaks," What're you looking at weirdo, my GOD humans are rude." " wow you can talk??" " uh of course silly." Eventually you find yourself on the horse's back and ride off toward a castle. " Listen human, this is the tower of Spells. Your training will begin." Then a wizard came out greeting you and explaining this was a wizard academy. Chapter 4 Teacher's always say it's good to read so, you just read one chapter show her/ him that then move on Chapter 5 to come Dernière modification le 1487638560000 |
Laderik « Censeur » 1487621700000
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It's great! But, maybe use "your" instead of "ur". Grammar is a big part of a good story! |