Atelier 801
Transformice 
| The Great Sled Race |
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| Chapter 5 out in a few days! The plot of the story is that four mice are living in the world of transformice, where the only job is to collect cheese. Leading character 1: Taken by Gadgetrocks Gadgetrocks a dit : Leading character 2: Taken by Bastlase Bastlase a dit : Leading character 3: Taken by Ayumiouo Ayumiouo a dit : Leading character 4: Taken by Rebeccademg Rebeccademg a dit : Side character 1: Taken by Cookie_kitten Cookie_kitten a dit : Side character 2: -Open- Side character 3: -Open- Villain 1: Taken by Longtail1 Longtail1 a dit : Villan 2: Taken by Basgetti Basgetti a dit : Villan 3: -Open- Character enrollment form: Name: Personality: Appearance: Gender: Age: Character role you want: This will be updated every saturday or sunday when I post Prologue There was a commotion at the town center, mice were excitedly talking and they were all crowded around a small poster. Birch tried to squeeze her way through the crowd but found it almost impossible. Eventually she made her way to the front where she found the root of the commotion. There was a poster that said; ‘It’s that time of year again! The great sled race is just around the corner! This year mice will compete in a 4 day race through the freezing forest starting on December 18th! The prizes are a secret, they will be released at the start of the race! To sign up please go to the booth at the entrance of town hall.’ Birch smiled and right then and there, decided that she was going to enroll in the race and she was going to try her best! “Birch!” Called a voice from somewhere in the crowd. She recognized the voice as Alex, one of her good friends. She wandered over to him, which took a long time considering the thickness of the crowd. Once she reached where he was standing, she told him “I want to sign up for the Great Sled Race this year! I remember really wanting to last year, but I wasn’t old enough yet, this year, I am determined to do it!” He looked alarmed and said, “But Birch, last year half the teams were disqualified on the first trial, they all couldn’t seem to beat the trial! What if you get wiped out on the first round too! When the ones who were disqualified came back last year they looked like they were hurt pretty bad, we don’t know what the contestants will be facing this year, what if it’s even more hard to pass than last year!” Birch responded, “I know the risks! I really want to try! Plus, last year the prize was 100 fraises!” And with that she marched off to town hall to register. Chapter 1 Chapter 1: Birch neared the long line of mice waiting to sign up for the sled race. She noticed her two friends Holly and Rebecca waiting in the back of the line. She joined them, excitedly talking about the upcoming race. As they neared the booth someone behind them called, “Wait!” They turned around and saw Alex running up to them. “Actually, I decided I would like to participate in this race too,” he told them, “Even though I still think it’s a bad idea!” Birch looked surprised and said, “Really? Just a few minutes ago you were trying your hardest to convince me not to!” Holly jumps in front of her and says, “Glad you want to join us! We were thinking of creating a team of 3, but if you want to come it will be 4!” Rebecca nodded and smiled. Alex responded, “Sure, it seems safer to go in a group than alone!” Rebecca smiled and enthusiastically said, “All right then! It’s settled! We’re gonna face this as a team!” The group reached the front desk, where there was a tan mouse with a long list of names, in front of her. She smiled at us and said, “Hello, are you here to sign up for the race?” Birch, Rebecca and Holly all nodded enthusiastically, Alex sighed and said, “Unfortunately, yes” “Well you surely aren’t the first” She responded motioning at her long list of names, “Anyways, what are your names, and are you going to be separate teams or all one big team?” Holly stepped up and said “I’m Holly, the mouse with the blue hair and black and white scarf is Rebecca, the barn owl mouse is Birch and the one who looks very unhappy and is scowling is named Alex! We would like to form one big team!” The tan mouse wrote down all the names, and proceeded to say “You will be given a certain amount of supplies, each day you will have to cross uncharted lands from city to city, there will be a time limit on how long you can take to get across to the next city. In addition to that, there will be 4 challenges that have been placed along the way, they will be hard to defeat, and you may have to team up with other teams to defeat or get across the challenge, would you still like to compete?” The four nodded, Alex a little slower than the others. The tan mouse asked, “Well then, what will be your team name?” The four mice discussed their team names and Rebecca finally approached and said “Our team name is…. The Chairs!” The tan mouse looked at the group for clarification, and when Birch nodded she wrote it down. “Alright, your sled will be number 12, bring anything from home that you would like to, but make sure it doesn’t weight down the sled. The race will start tomorrow at noon, so don’t be late! Thank you for signing up.” The tan mouse told them. They walked off all chatting about their upcoming adventure. Alex looked at Rebecca and said, “The Chairs? Where did that come from?” Rebecca shrugged and said, “I honestly don’t know” Birch replied, “I think it’s great!” The group split up and went back to their homes to prepare and get some rest. Chapter 2 Chapter 2: “Welcome to the great sled race! Today our champions will be starting their race! To see the route they will go on and to learn more information, please see the help booth.” Announced a almost robotic sounding voice. It was 11:30 and the morning of the great race. A long line of sleds and teams was slowly assembling. One of those teams, at sled 12, was The Chairs. “Participants, please line up at the starting line!” Announced a voice, “And now we will be announcing the teams that are competing! At sled one we have the Octopuses! At sled two we have the DreamCatchers. At sled three we have…” 10 sleds later, “At sled 12 we have the Chairs!” The crowd looked at the sled wondering if the team was made up of chairs. Nope. It was mice, 4 of them! An unusually large team. “Hah! The chairs! What a pathetic name!” Shouted a mouse from the sled next to the Chair’s, “I’m gonna crush you and your pathetic name!” (This mouse, was named Sozimo, but they didn’t know that at the time) “Pah! You wanna get a chair in your face!” responded Birch. At that moment Holly and Rebecca promptly threw a chair into the other sled, hitting Sozimo on the head. “Owww! You’ll pay for that!” Sozimo shouted back. The whole time the crowd was watching with wide eyes. At the end, they cheered for The Chairs and their cleverness! The team smiled and waved at the crowd. The announcer blinked and said, “Well that was a surprise!” then proceeded to list out the names of the teams, “At sled 13 we have team Blue. And at the last sled we have team Mystery! Both of these last two teams have only one team member, wish them extra luck in this race!” Alex whispered to his friends, “When do you think they’ll announce the prizes?” Birch shrugged, Rebecca replied, “I think they’re doing that now!” A new mouse dressed in a suit and tie walked up onto the stand, he smiled at the crowd and said, “Now we will be announcing the prizes, then the teams will be off!” The crowd cheered and all leaned closer wondering what the prize would be. The mouse smiled even wider at the crowds excitement, “This years prize will be… 1000cc and 1000 fraises, it can be split up if your team is larger than one person!” Everyone gasped and started to chatter, “Wait” the mouse said, “Because of the larger prize this year, there will be a change in plans, instead of a four day race, now it will be a seven day race, prepare yourselves teams, adventure awaits!” All the teams started looking at each other worridley and the atmosphere of the race changed from loose hearted and excited, to moody and serious. A few mice even shook their heads in disbelief. The Chairs were among the few teams still happy and excited for the race, well, most of the team, Alex began to doubt the race again. Birch and Holly were pumped and was practically shouting about how excited they were! Rebecca just grinned and stood at the head of the sled. (I did not mean for that to rhyme! XD) The announcer was back with a megaphone, “Ready teams?!?” she shouted, “Ready, set, go!” The teams shot off into the wilderness, not knowing what lay ahead. |
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Gadgetrocks  « Censeur »
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| Name: Birch Personality: Happy and likes to help others Appearance:  Gender: Female Age: 13 Character role you want: Leading 1 |
Longtail1  « Censeur »
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| Wow just from that it sounds amaaaazin'! Name: Sozimo Personality: Mischievous, won't stop at anything to succeed, doesn't care for others Appearance:  green eyesGender: male Age: 15 Character role you want: Villan #1 |
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| Name:Alex Personality: kind, caring, loyal, nerdy (watches Doctor Who, Pokémon, and several different cop shows/ documentaries), smart, fast, understanding, stubborn, looks at both sides of the story, excitable, loves to have fun, but also thinks of himself as a mouse version of the Doctor- he also carries a trinket he has more or less forgotten about, a fob watch. Has a toy sonic screwdriver that is like the 11th Doctor's. Appearance:  Gender:male Age:19 Character role you want: leading 2 |
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| well here's my form :o I'm enjoying the story so far ^^ Name: Holly Personality: Holly is very carefree and kind of a clutz, but she's kind and trusts pretty much everyone she meets (which both helps and hurts her.) Appearance  Gender: Female Age: 14 Role: Leading #3, I suppose. |
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| This sounds fun ! Name: Bas (Username: Basgetti) Personality: Mischievous and mysterious; always hides behind a mask, whether it be his iconic Deku Mask (from Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask) or other varied masks. Often enjoys causing trouble and misfortune for other people and will laugh at their shortcomings. The type of mouse to play behind the scenes and pull all the strings, but keep their identity hidden. Wouldn't mind winning but doesn't really care if he doesn't, and would rather just cause trouble for the other competitors. Often skilled in handiwork, cleverness, and athletics, although keeps these facts hidden unless needed. Enjoys manipulating other mice. Appearance:  Gender: Male Age: 18 Character role you want: Villain #2 |
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| This looks amazing, I want to be in there!
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Cookie_kitten  « Consul »
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| Alright! Name: Akari Personality: Sweet, kind, cheerful, never fails to help others or make people smile in a bad situation, calm, never angry, despite being cheerful and happy, she can also be polite and serious if she has to be, if she senses something wrong, she will distract people and talk to them to observe what's happening and to try to see what's happening, despite being younger than everyone there, she is very smart and usually knows what's going on, people don't know how smart she really is besides her close friends Appearance:  Gender: Female Age: 10 Character role you want: Side character 1 |
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