Shamousey a dit :

This map looks simple but like the gameplay would work at least. The slanted grounds make this map look far more detailed, I'd like to see a few more of those added to stop it looking so flat. A minor irk I have is that the grounds offscreen at the bottom could be aligned to fit eachother, even though it's just a few pixels off. Another minor irk is that grass from the sign coming off of sand doesn't look too good.

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@5009028 ACCEPT NOW PLEASE!

I'd like to say this to everyone before the reviews:

We can't make your map for you. It's up to you to improve, and it will take *effort* to improve (I myself spent HOURS making every map).

Also, there isn't just one change you can make to get your map accepted. If there is, we'll tell you what it is. Otherwise, the whole map could use improvement. Don't just stop fixing the problems we outline, but go beyond that. Make it better overall, try to change some things around, *get creative*.

Mapmaking isn't simply spitting out maps. You have to put effort in, like art. If you just scribble that won't be good enough for an art gallery. You have to invest yourself in it to make it beautiful.

Knicksfans a dit :

Let's try this map :)

First one @5013805

Sand grounds don't stand out very well on that background
Also, sand is generally just not a pleasant ground on its own, I recommend adding some other complementary grounds to make it look nicer and also change the background
Also, the decorations are good *except* for the poster that's out of place

The design itself is fine, but aesthetically it could look nicer

Toyratz a dit :

done i put some decaration in my map and just accept this dude @5008602

Both teams spawn at the same point (need to fix that)
The circles, frankly, don't look very good and you don't need them once the flags are drawn (will be done automatically in the game)
Also, some alignment is off

Another problem: those two bottom flags are far too low; you should raise that area up some (mice must stand at least 40px away from the bottom of the screen)

I recommend making those smaller grounds (20 height) 40 height

Like the last map, the design itself is fine but aesthetically it could look nicer

Augustinas a dit :

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@5013785 - same problem as shamousey said: the bottom areas are too low (notice they go behind the buttons at the bottom left
The solution is simple: make the grounds at the bottom of the map 40 height

It's a good map, just fix that small problem and will add it

@5014745 - same problem again, bottom grounds need to be a little bigger

Also, this map feels pretty empty. Not saying simplicity is a bad thing; this could work out, but maybe add some decoration to make it a little less bland-looking

Biripin a dit :

@5009028 PLEASE ACCEPT MY MAP NOW!

I've explained as much as I could. Here's a checklist of things you can do to improve, but you'll need to put the effort in to improve.
- Make ground size (width and height) divisible by 40 (40, 80, 120, 160, etc.)
- Usually, tiny grounds (10 width or height) don't look very good, so avoid them
- Add some decoration that fits (for example, stone torches fit with stone grounds)
- Maybe add other ground types, such as grass, to make it look more interesting

Toyratz a dit :

ME 2!!!!!!!111111 new @5014755 @5014778 @5014796

@5014755 - bottom grounds should be at least 40 height
the circle looks completely out of place (maybe give it the same color as the other grounds and add more detail to it so it blends in)
The party skeleton and balloons don't fit the theme of domination (it's a fight not a party)

@5014778 - this *could* be interesting, but a few problems:
- Offscreen gameplay to the left of the map (going around the screen to the bottom flag); this can be fixed either by making an on-screen space to go down or by blocking that area from the left
- Grounds at the bottom of the screen should be at least 40 height
- Those two floating grounds at the bottom would look much better with 40 height
- Those ribbons don't fit the theme at all

Thats not to say those simple changes are enough; try to improve in other ways

@5014796 - looks like it could work, but again a few problems:
- Bad ribbons again
- Bottom grounds too low (40 height is best)

Again, don't stop there; try to make it look better all around
It could work if it looked better

Maxkkk a dit :

@5014930

Could be interesting, but bottom grounds should be at least 40 height
It also looks a little lacking; could easily be fixed with some appropriate decoration and making the grounds larger (40 height looks best, and is consistent with the current standard)

Oyga a dit :

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Could work with a few adjustments:
- Lower the hills a little bit (you'll be playing offscreen a bit too much that high)
- Bottom grounds at least 40 height
- Make grounds look nicer (sand is very plain, maybe add some earth grounds somewhere to complement them)

Emrevegolxd a dit :

@5015457

Insta-death, no flags

Biripin a dit :

@5009028 ACCEPT NOW PLEASE!

You can refer to my previous review for how to improve this map
I'll clarify on the decorations, though: they should *fit the theme*
Paper mache jack-o-lanterns and colorful barrels don't fit the theme

Decorations would look nice, but not just ANY decoration
Remember domination is a battle

@5014930

fxie, uve missed @5015461
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Fxie a dit :

Could work with a few adjustments:
- Lower the hills a little bit (you'll be playing offscreen a bit too much that high)
- Bottom grounds at least 40 height
- Make grounds look nicer (sand is very plain, maybe add some earth grounds somewhere to complement them)

Edited. @5013515

Map @5013805 is now edited, take a look! :D

Fixed all of my map but not the first map @5014755 @5008602 @5014778 @5014796

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@4008775 - Bad spawn
@5015998 - too

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Can i ask? How to put flags in map?

Mishkatave a dit :

Can i ask? How to put flags in map?

Shamousey a dit :

When you're creating maps, certain anchors turn into different things when the map is loaded in #domination. Remember that anchors are the base of flags, so put them half over the grounds you want the flag to be at, so they do not float.

• Red Right Rotating Anchor - Red Spawn Point
• Green Right Rotating Anchor - Blue Spawn Point
• Red Anchor - Red Flag at start of round
• Green Anchor - Blue Flag at start of round
• Yellow Anchor - Neutral Flag at start of round

It's all on the main post

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