Kattiej a dit :

omg don't be like that....ok lets judge another one squeak and everyone else, I'll do snoweybuddy will edit

Anatomy (1-5) 1, I'm sorry but I personally thing the anatomy is all wrong, mice aren't rectangles, I'm sure people have told you before. That's the big big thing. Others include missing noses, a tiny head (shaman), and short arms.

Effort (1-5) 3, I'm sure you tried

I'm sorry to create drama, but for the effort part ''I'm sure you tried'' isn't...polite/proper.

You can at least give feedback. Everyone ALWAYS gives at least 2 handfuls of effort.

And this part:

Kattiej a dit :

Anatomy (1-5) I'm sure people have told you before.

You can't always assume people told someone how to do something before.

Sorry :I just stating my opinion.

Well , I tried.

Also , I dont have any "good" programs to use art on , you cannot "shade" on Pant.

x__x Thanks.

E : I can't download things , I dont have my own computer/laptop.

did anybody judge mine?
also please take off for my lack of shading, my program is starting to not allow me to do so

Snowey try Paint tool sai or gimp

Snoweybuddy a dit :

Well , I tried.

Also , I dont have any "good" programs to use art on , you cannot "shade" on Pant.

x__x Thanks.

i'd recommend firealpaca.

Snoweybuddy a dit :

Well , I tried.

Also , I dont have any "good" programs to use art on , you cannot "shade" on Pant.

x__x Thanks.

E : I can't download things , I dont have my own computer/laptop.

paint is a basic program but you can defenitely shade, it is just harder. just draw the section of the shade with the color you want to shade it with and fill it in. bit hard, but doable with time and patience.

also studying other people's mice arts and mice can help you better understand what mice look like. draw a sketch before doing other stuffs

Susanlwu a dit :

paint is a basic program but you can defenitely shade, it is just harder. just draw the section of the shade with the color you want to shade it with and fill it in. bit hard, but doable with time and patience.

also studying other people's mice arts and mice can help you better understand what mice look like. draw a sketch before doing other stuffs

Basicly this c:
But any program is 'good', it just depends on how you use it. Practicing will help you draw better along the years.

If you dont get it the guy who doesnt have cheese is running on chocolate lel
Entering for racing
E: Omg white space :C shoot im gonna fail

Symphoni a dit :

Coloring (1-5) 5
Neatness (1-10) 10
Anatomy (1-5) 4
Creativity (1-5) 7 (including bonus!)
Effort (1-5) 5

31 Total :3

yey ^^
~31/30 wait wh-

Erikadeedee a dit :

i'd recommend firealpaca.

I want to judge yours do it today after school
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Vivihi a dit :

I'm sorry to create drama, but for the effort part ''I'm sure you tried'' isn't...polite/proper.

You can at least give feedback. Everyone ALWAYS gives at least 2 handfuls of effort.

And this part:


You can't always assume people told someone how to do something before.

Sorry :I just stating my opinion.

I don't assume I've seen her put her work into the art critique center and last time haru said something along the lines of "People have given critiques and yet you choose not to use them" or something like that
look on page 100

Kattiej a dit :

have mercy I mean no one if going to get a perfect score....just sayin no offense though <3 your art.
sham looks like it's stepping on its tail.
I mean it's a contest. If I were to be really strict I could name a lot of things wrong because no one is freakin perfect....

~('O')~ I PASSED!!!
and sha was spposed to be making cn in mid-air cx

Snoweybuddy a dit :

Well , I tried.

Also , I dont have any "good" programs to use art on , you cannot "shade" on Pant.

x__x Thanks.

E : I can't download things , I dont have my own computer/laptop.

Keep of the good art, I still love you're art, don't let this bring you down <3
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Erika
Grading Rubric~
Coloring (1-5) 3, Colored out of the lines many times. Also the arrow on the cannon doesn't look that clean.
Neatness (1-10) 3, your lines look scribbled and not very neat. Suggestion: create a new layer on top of the sketch so you can redraw the lines and then you can delete the layer of the sketch.
Anatomy (1-5) 3, One arm is longer than the other.Both ears on one side on the head even though the mouse looks like it is facing forwards.
Creativity (1-5) 3, basic sham and cannon, though I will give you credit for the runes and pose
Effort (1-5) 2, I've seen your art and I greatly think you could do better :/ to me it looks like a bunch of scribbles
Please don't be sad, it's just a little contest. Don't let that stop you
Total:14/30

Kattiej a dit :

I hate failing people

:(

Supastarx

Grading Rubric~

Coloring (1-5) 3
It's totally fine, to be honest. But I think you could use some more colors to ''bling'' it up XD

Neatness (1-10) 2
Sorry, but I think that you kind of scribbled instead of colored in some parts. Do you have the ''Bucket'' tool on the program you use? It'd be way more helpful than just scribbling. It'll look messy.

Anatomy (1-5) 4
I think that a mouse has a nose, otherwise it's gonna breathe through it's butt XD. But the rest looks fine.

Creativity (1-5) 3
I kind of think that other people would use this example. But I think the dialouges really make the drawing much more interesting. Not saying that the drawing itself wouldn't look interesting!

Effort (1-5) 3
I've seen your art (*awesome!!*) but I think you could do a bit better, by editing the scribbly parts. Like the ears, and the outline.

Total: 15/30
Cool! You passed! (:

Awesome thanks vivi cx I didnt use the bucket on sai because everytime i used it it ruined the whole picture... i got so fed up with it i just kinda did the rest with the paint brush

Supastarx a dit :

Awesome thanks vivi cx I didnt use the bucket on sai because everytime i used it it ruined the whole picture... i got so fed up with it i just kinda did the rest with the paint brush

YOu can change to size of your paintbrush
e:___
I have looked at my previous judging I think that snoweybuddy should have gotten a higher score on neatness considering she used a mouse and that means she would have passed. So if you would still like to participate I would be happy to change your score.
If anyone wants to tell her that would be great

Kattiej a dit :

YOu can change to size of your paintbrush
e:___
I have looked at my previous judging I think that snoweybuddy should have gotten a higher score on neatness considering she used a mouse and that means she would have passed. So if you would still like to participate I would be happy to change your score

Hell, everyone should be able to pass round 1. Maybe you can increase the points needed round after round?

( I just wanna see everyone's entries hue hue hue )

vv holy god.

Yea I will prob. do passing points for round 2 as 25 hehe

meep hopefully bucket wont fail me next time

Me and another judge have decided the themes for round 2 if you would like to get a head start on it XD
-Snoweybuddy has rejoined-

Kattiej a dit :

YOu can change to size of your paintbrush
e:___
I have looked at my previous judging I think that snoweybuddy should have gotten a higher score on neatness considering she used a mouse and that means she would have passed. So if you would still like to participate I would be happy to change your score.
If anyone wants to tell her that would be great

because of this ^^

Are we allowed to post the round 2 drawings early, or would you rather have us wait until round 1 ends?