Rotation Officielle - P5

#2309

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@6349537 - Figoi
This is a nice concept, I like that you used runes, it's not something people see in a map every day. The art is nice too, it doesn't have much detail but it's pretty well done and that's something impressive considering it's mostly made with grounds.

However, the gameplay and the art don't have much to do together. You should consider changing the art or making a new map where the runes don't look so forced. Maybe an explosion or the space and runes can be rockets, anything you can think of.

@6348214 - Figoi
The art on this one doesn't look as good as the other one. And this one is a guy hitting another one, not nice. My advice for this one is the same as the other map.

@6351754 - Peterbope
The owl is pretty impressive, the details and all are very good, but the rest of the map is just boring, gameplay is just walljumping over the owl, you should change that to make it funnier. Also it'd be cool if it was all black and white to match the owl.

@6351760 - Peterbope
Trees are nicely done, shades of orange work well, but the collision of the map is confusing and gameplay is boring, the 3 bottom skulls have no collision, but the top one does. And only a bit of the orange ground has collision, its color is a bit different than the rest, but it's not obvious enough for people to understand it has collision.

You make really nice art maps, but you need to work on gameplay, mice should have fun while enjoying the art.

@6352192 - Doublame
Collision is confusing here, some parts have collision while others don't. Also some parts are bouncy while others aren't, for example the chimney is bouncy, the black circles are bouncy but the black rectangles aren't. I don't think mice should be hidden when they spawn, people might get confused.

It's funny how you used the tables and chair, I've never seen that before. Keep working on it, make the art better and work on the collision and restitution of things, make them clearer.

@6352980 - Doublame
When there is a moon eclipse the moon turns red, and when there is a sun eclipse the moon covers the sun, making it black, you mixed the two in this map, it's no big deal but it's always good to know the difference.

I like your idea, but not the way you made it. Maybe you could make a simple mechanism that makes the black part covering the moon rotate (so that it moves in a circle and not from left to right), so it's be more interesting. Also you may want to make that hole at the bottom more obvious or cover it, it might lead to mass death.

@6343921 - Lokyclowzs
Lindo mapa de pokemon, pero el gameplay es aburrido, escalar el arte solo es aceptable en mapas P5 cuando el arte es impresionante. Sigue trabajando en el mapa, quizá podrías agregar unas pokebolas que reboten o algo que lo haga más divertido. O trabajar más en el arte, quizá hacer que el fondo sea 8-bits también.

@6353167 - Lukinolk
Collision isn't clear in this one, the blue and red parts of the flag have collision, but the white one doesn't. Also there isn't much art in this one, it's just the flag and some clouds. Is this a tribute map for what happened in Paris a few days ago? I think it'd be a nice idea having a tribute map for a month or so, but this one needs some working on it. France has so many pretty things you could make, the Eiffel tower and the arch of triumph for example.

@867522 - Mrkurt
I like this a lot!!!! But that blue thing looks kinda ugly, can you make it look better? Also the squares aren't even, some are rectangles, some are squares and sometimes people get stuck on the green platforms.

Fix it and send me the code on a private message again. (or resubmit here, whatever you think is faster)

@6349160 - Okpatinhos
Old style art! But it has colored circles and one of the chocolates has restitution which is confusing. Find another way to make it soloable and resubmit. We need an old style art maps month!

@5719216 - Okpatinhos ^ I'm saving these map codes for later.

@6353653 - Jucieezin
It'd be cool if you could make it have the colors of the flag instead of it being all white. Would be a nice month perm. Recolor it and send me a private message with the code (or resubmit here, whatever you think is faster)

@6354005 - Jucieezin
Religion is a really controversial thing and this game is played by many people from different religions, so if this gets permed it might lead to complaints from people about it, and it's best to avoid it.

Really nice art though, you have potential. Keep working on art maps.

@6354302 - Mmauskatze
Me gusta el mapa, pero la colisión es confusa, dos de los tres cuadrados amarillos tienen colisión con los ratones, mientras que el tercero no, lo mismo con varias de las figuras de otros colores. Esto hace que la gente no sepa a dónde ir y terminen chocando con todo hasta encontrar el camino "correcto".

Sería bueno que mejoraras la colisión y la hicieras menos confusa, que pusieras unos colores menos brillantes para no lastimar los ojos de algunos y, quizá es mucho pedir, pero si sabes sobre mecanismos (o si te gustaría aprender y necesitas un reto), sería bueno hacer un mapa de tetris donde los ratones tengan que mover las piezas, y al completar una fila esta "baje", hasta lograr despejar 2 o 3 y que sea posible conseguir el queso.

@6354301 - Mapadded
Me gusta la idea de tener un mapa como tributo por lo ocurrido en Francia, por un mes o quizá un poco más/menos, especialmente porque Atelier 801 es de Francia, pero tendrías que trabajar en esto si quieres que sea P5. Puedes hacer la torre Eiffel mejor, quizá si quieres un reto puedes probar el editor de viprin para tener más posibilidades.

@3965432 - Thetroz
La colisión es confusa, unos suelos tienen colisión y otros no. No se entiende muy bien qué es, parece un barco con un gato? O puede que sea otra cosa. El gameplay no es muy bueno tampoco, no hay forma de completarlo sin un chamán, pero aún así no hay suficiente espacio para que el chamán construya.

Sigue practicando, puedes usar imágenes de referencia o hacer un dibujo de cómo te gustaría que sea el mapa antes de hacerlo. Imaginate jugándolo primero y pregúntate si es lo suficientemente divertido para ser P5, si crees que no, sigue intentando con otras ideas.

@6355679 - Brasouka
Collision is not clear and too much white hurts the eyes. Fix it and submit to the Christmas maps thread, looks good for Christmas.

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@4792827 - Viniciusdara - cat must be p5

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