Rotation Officielle - P5

Rotation Officielle - P5 - Art

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@6351754

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@6376677 @6375713 @6222191

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@6376677 @6375713 @6222191

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@6160407
@6377715

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@5828401
@5718418

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@6377899

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@6377947

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friends map @6344309

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Left as is:
@6355655 - Bolaicao
This is already in discussion.

@6358789 - Brasouka
The art in this map is not yours.

@6364209 - Brasouka
Nice art, characters do look like the original ones, it's easy to recognize what it is and I'm sure people would like to see a map of these two characters. Sadly the gameplay is confusing, both characters have no collision, it's hard to know which bubbles do have collision and once you figure it out it's still hard to see them on the right part of the map. The top middle bubble has a high restitution, making it super bouncy compared to the rest, which is also confusing.

I think you should make both characters have collision, be bouncy since they're jumping and delete some bubbles and make the ones that are touchable more visible.

@6356480 - Fuzilakim
I think that's the cutest alien I've seen. It's nice that you want to make alien maps, we don't have many of those (but we had some great ones in the past, I'd like to have more), but the gameplay is only walljumping over the art, which is boring, and the art isn't good enough to compensate for it.

You should work a bit on the art and make a nicer gameplay, maybe some bouncy stuff, or if you want a challenge you could make a flying spaceship.

@6363886 - Fuzilakim
The collision of this map is confusing and might lead to mass death. You could change the lines' color to a lighter one to distinguish them from things that do have collision. I think your map has potential but you need to work on it.

@6368588 - Natrats
Nice map, I like the pink you used for the sunset and I also like the tree. However, the gameplay isn't great. In order for it to be P5 you should make it more fun and make the art better. Have you considered using viprin's drawing editor and drawing some fruits and flowers on the tree?

@6361071 - Natrats
Add a small purple platform where the trampoline is (the arm) to make it clear that it's a trampoline and send to the Christmas map thread.

@6303858 - Vividia
I'm saving this for a month perm in the future.

@6349160 - Okpatinhos
Old maps didn't have scroll. Fix that and I'll save it for a future month perm.

@5719216 - Okpatinhos
I think we already talked about this before. Will keep for a future month perm.

@6359781 - Doublame
I don't think it's a good idea to have maps with religious things, even if a girl praying isn't bad, it might lead to complaints. It's better to leave religion out of the game so no one gets mad/sad about it.

@6359334 - Doublame
There was a better map with the same concept but a different character in rotation a while ago. Try to make the art and gameplay better and it might be good for a month perm.

@6360452 - Lipeproziim
At first I thought it was old style art, but it has decorations and a background, so it's not that. Neither the gameplay nor the art are good enough for P5. Keep trying though, you have potential, you just need some practice to make a good map.

@6360908 - Peterbope
I like the rubiks cube, but that's the only charm in this map. The gameplay is confusing, it's not possible to see the cheese at first or to know what to do, then it's just pushing a ground to find the cheese and walljumping back to the hole. Also the background color doesn't match the figures. I'd like to see a good 3D map that can be P5'd, keep working on it.

@6362125 - Sunbyrd
You did not make the art in this map.

@5967400 - Toyfreddyman
You did not make the art in this map.

@6362347 - Aeonvspapyjo
First, it doesn't need to be that much cheese, one will do. Second, I can see you legitimately tried to create whatever art it is here, but I have no idea what this is. The map in general needs to be improved, a lot, but basically, the base ground isn't aligned with the building too, watch out for things like that. It looks like you tried to make some gameplay with the holes, that's good, keep that intent, but go for something bigger, the gameplay should involve the whole map, not just this one corner jump. Keep it up, it's better than you think.

@6363383 - Cardnel
This map has no visible cheese or hole and it breaks the rules, so I've deleted it. Please follow the rules when making a map for normal rotation next time.

@6363435 - Souradiativo
You did not make the art in this map.

@3138098 - Mrkurt
This is so great in every way. But the colors are too bright, could you change them for nicer ones? And resubmit.

@6363835 - Renaxan
I like this, but can you fix the water and the iceberg? They look weird. I think it deserves to be discussed if those two problems get fixed.

@6365842 - Vennyvenn
First, collision is extremely confusing, if you're using grounds for color art, use this formula:
Dark Background = no collision
Light backgroud = collision
Dark forground = collision
Light forground = no collision
and a single color should continue to have collision or no collision throughout the map.

Second, art style is very unique, try to expand on that however, past living things, and go onto object, just practice with them first, but your art style could work better like that.
Besides this, the map is just bad, I would recomend resubmitting, just continue practicing until you improve, experiement around, see what you like. Good luck.

@6366074 - Guybuo
I love Gravity Falls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the lineart is cool, but only great art is allowed to have no collision with mice or no play in the map. Make the art better, work on the rest of the map too, the background, the gameplay, make it look like Bill's palace maybe. I'm still sad about GF getting cancelled, I hope you make a great Bill map so we can remember it. :(

@6294931 - +Mistersacri
I'm saving this for a future month perm.

@2991238 - Reppam
You moved a step backwards with this map. It was fine before (the desert, moving things), it was just confusing and made people dizzy. I like the road runner, but you need to work on the enviroment too, it can't be the only attractive thing in your map.

@5787882 - Reppam
The map has so much potential but is just ruined from the lack of shading, this needs shadings very badly, it's as simple as recoloring already added lines. Also gameplay is bad. Collision is bad too, I actually got stuck under Rukia's hair... somehow?

@6368172 - Littlesimmer
Forground outlines, very bad, use laying systems if it's really that big of and issue, however to save on lines and to force youself to shade lines, try not to add outlines at all, it really helps. Besides this gameplay is bad, grounds are unaligned, and the art has nothing to do with the map itself.

@6370021 - Littlesimmer
While the use of the black and white has a very interesting effect, there's too much unalignment, both with the lines, and the collision of the lines, also, use foreground smartly, for instance, the dog's ear is likely to be infront of the mouse, but the dog itself is likely to be level with it, making the whole dog foreground just add a bad sense. If say certain sections were foreground based off real life perspective it add to the map greatly.

@5782416 - Supersildeon
Lots of people love minnions, but map making is about originality, especially in P5, many people have already done these maps, so try something else. Also, the base ground is wood, unless the map is wood themed, you should always theme your grounds in general to said theme, in this case minnions. Gameplay is poor, just walljump over art, don't do that, and the hole is unaligned with the base ground.

@5183553 - Jaedee
Pretty cool honestly, but mouse goes off-screen, this can be fixed by moving the whole map down about 40 pixels. Gameplay isn't very good either, but let's focus on that blood, blood like the knife should be shaded, as well, keep blood to be darker colors, dark blood looks really flowing compared to bright red as it turns too much attention to the bright blood, with dark red blood, it blends and fits with whatever it's on, plus, darker is scarier after all.

@3565321 - Keyx
Not an art map, take this to P7 maybe. Lower it a bit too, while it appears aligned at first once the grounds go away it's so obvious, going too lower is always better than going too high.

@6369988 - Ms3
El gameplay es de poca calidad, y el arte no es el mejor tampoco, la parte derecha está un poco desalineada, y la P parece como si pudiera ser mejor, además, no hace nada en el mapa. El arte es lo que agrega el gameplay, no debes agregarle gameplay al art. En otras palabras, utiliza el arte en si para hacer el gameplay.

@6356893 - Eliteray
Please submit your christmas themed maps to the Christmas thread. Also, gameplay has low quality, try to do something about that, as well as the art, it's cute but it could be better, it needs much more work, so make that penguin look cuter.

@5761072 - Andrifrumi
Not an art map.

@6351754 - Peterbope
While that bike is honestly amazing, there's practically nothing about it that connects to the map. In my honest opinon, delete everything except the bike. Form the map around the bike, instead of making a gameplay that just includes the bike in it. Keep editing this until it's perfect, it has potential.

@6160407 - Srmal
This is really, really pretty, just not something good enough for P5.

@6377715 - Srmal
While this is cool, it could give someone seizures, try not to do flashy maps, also mech breaks if a mouse goes behind the hand.

@5828401 - Curinfake
Already P1, and that's about it for this one, it's cool but just not cool enough.

@5718418 - Curinfake
This is just a previous version of your other map. And its gameplay isn't good. Just stick with your other map, it was good, so move onto something else, otherwise you won't improve.

@6377899 - Resourc
It's nice, but the gameplay is just walljump over art. I think we could have a pixel art maps month though, so I'm saving this code for later.

@6377947 - Nathancapsz
Unaligned, so tall mice almost go offscreen, and it just looks bad, the way you did everything just doens't work for a bunny. Try make it smaller.

@6344309 - Jetschild
Lovely letters, but that's not exactly art.

Will be discussed:
@3189722 - Shalander - pretty
@6366966 - Xariio - good for month

Ignored:
@6365415 - Lzereturn - Blacklisted
@6376677 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)
@6375713 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)
@6222191 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)
@6376677 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)
@6375713 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)
@6222191 - Saybean - Posted more than 2 maps (same post)

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@6368179 - Cancer ♋
@6360919 - Pisces ♓

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@6380455 - Spaceship challenge accepted
@6363886 - More easy now

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#2353

Left as is:
@6349160 - Okpatinhos - Map is a nice attempt at old school art. However the art itself is not brilliant enough to draw away from the fact that the gameplay is just walljump around the tank. I feel if more art themed gameplay was put into the map it would be more suitable for the category. Overall this has the potential for possibility of perm if something was done to improve the gameplay. PS: Bogkitty said thanks for editing it and is saving this for a future month perm.
@6368179 - Doublame - Center art was well put together and looks great. There is theme with the gameplay and that's good too. However it is unclear what restitutions the grounds have. The water on the side is almost pointless except to help a few mice that dont use the tramp to jump to the cheese. To improve this map I would say somehow make the starsign on the left more incorporated with completing the map.
@6380455 - Marselord - Overall the map is nicely put together and interesting. I really like the whole being beamed up thing.
Bogkitty is saving this for a future month perm.

P1'ed:
@6360919 - Doublame - The gameplay on this map is a lot more interesting than the other. Well put together as well, I feel like the starsign symbol however is necessary or would look better if done in viprin's editor. As it is it's good enough for P1. If you wish to edit it as I suggested then feel free to contact me in-game.

Will be discussed:
@6363886 - Marselord - Unsure why one dot has a higher restitution on the far left but otherwise is an interesting map with lots of paths. Makes for a fun race.

Ignored:
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[Modéré par Bog, raison : wow ok :(]

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@2243422

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owww sorry hehe, a fix the restituition on the dot :)

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@6367981 - Scorpio ♏
@6360440 - Aquarius ♒

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