Rotation Officielle - P5

Rotation Officielle - P5 - Art

#2361

@6381816 - Theme Christmas.
@6382380 - Animated desert.

#2362

@6382479

#2363

@6382608

#2364

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@2243422 - Ratoninjay
Nice map, it's well aligned and colors are good. But it has a fake floor and the gameplay is only walljumping over art. I like the plain style, no shades or anything, it's nice, keep working on it but try to find a way to make your map funnier.

@6328916 - Marselord
I'm not sure what this is, it looks like rectangles with eyes and just a background, can't really be considered art. Try to make it clear and maybe add more than one path, it's boring doing the same over and over every time a map passes.

@6367981 - Doublame
I see you like zodiac signs, maybe we'll use your maps for a future month perm. I like the gameplay, it's a bit boring but fun enough. You should really work on alignment, I see some spikes in the hair.

@6360440 - Doublame
As I said in the previous review, we might use your maps in a future month perm, and you should work on alignment. This one has a boring gameplay and the collision isn't clear. The water is bouncy, you should make it real water and make people have a challenge to get to the cheese, that'd make the map funnier.

@6381921 - Reppam
I'm keeping this for a future month perm.

@6381816 - Mckamgoxd
Por favor envia tus mapas de navidad al hilo de "Christmas maps".

@6382380 - Mckamgoxd
Me gusta como usaste la madera para hacer los picos del dinosaurio y el hielo para los dientes. Sin embargo el arte no es lo suficientemente bueno para compensar por la falta de jugabilidad que tiene el mapa, es simplemente escalar el dinosaurio, conseguir el queso y volver a la madriguera, cosa que no es muy divertido para los demás ratones. Intenta hacer algo más dinámico, que los ratones no tengan que escalar nada más, sino saltar, subir por agua o girar en tablas rotatorias. Sigue practicando.

@6382479 - Lolfakie
I'd love a map with this concept, but this one is poorly executed. The collision isn't clear, why does one part of the block where mice spawn have no collision but the rest do? It's the same color, it's confusing. Then it's not possible to see the cheese at first because it's behind the A, you shouldn't do that unless it's obvious the cheese is there.

The rest of the art doesn't have collision with mice, making the map plain and boring. I like this concept and I think you should find a way to make this map much more fun.

@6382608 - Peterbobe
I like the tank, it's really well done, super well aligned, good colors used and it actually looks like a real tank. The gameplay is kinda boring, walljump a big wall first and then jump on the tank (I like that part actually, but it's too hard right now for most people). You're getting better, though, the trampoline part was nice, you just need to work the rest of the gameplay.

Remove the cannon's restitution, it's too high and people don't expect it, leading to death. The elevator is nice, but it ruins the fun race to the hole.

Will be discussed:
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Ignored:
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#2365

@6381311
Permed

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#2366

@6382616
I love the way you used the mouse skeleton decoration, and the toxic waste is really well made, it looks like it's glowing. Is it supposed to be a sewer? You should keep working on this map, make it funnier to play in, currently the gameplay is boring, maybe add some mutant mice to improve the art too.

Left as is.

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#2367

@6382883
I'll consider this for a future month perm if you remove the "no to racism" on top. Not that there's something wrong with the message, it's just that it might be seen as controversial by some.

Left as is.

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#2368

@6382982
Está bonito, pero la jugabilidad no es muy buena, considera agregar otro camino, agregar agua de verdad u otra cosa que haga que sea más divertido.

Left as is.

@6383591
La colisión del árbol es un poco confusa, no solo el tronco debería tener colisión sino las ramas también:

Además no tiene mucho sentido poner suelos sobre la madriguera si los ratones no pueden alcanzarlos. Es un lindo arbol, pero deberías trabajar el resto del mapa.

Left as is.

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#2369

@6383619
I like plain art, but not plain gameplay. You make pretty art, just a few details (

) but you have potential. However, you must work on the gameplay, make it funnier, make that fish swim in actual water, make something bouncy, add a mech, anything you can think of that makes mice want to play your map.

Left as is.

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#2370

[Modéré par Bog, raison : Double post.]

#2371

@6382678
Will be discussed if you put a floor where the cheese is or move the cheese 30-40px up so it doesn't lead to mass death. Lovely map.

MC EDIT

Cheese has been moved to the right. :)

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#2372

@6375707 - Taurus ♉
Could you make the bull look better? And bulls are not bouncy! You are really getting better.

@6382290 - Sagittarius ♐
Oh I like this one, but consider making the arrow more obvious, no need for it to be bigger, just change the color to shiny red or something similar. Also same thing as the other map, don't make random things bouncy, if you're going to do it make them purple so it's obvious they're bouncy.

Would you mind sending me the whole zodiac maps set through PM so I can save the codes? I believe we already talked about monthly perm for them, no need to keep submitting them here 2 at a time. :)

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#2373

@6383873
Nice football player, but only great art is allowed to have no collision with mice, like this: @1712079 (just an example)
You should keep practicing, color the player, make the lines look nicer, or even better, try to make it with no lines so it looks more real! Also, you should work on the rest of the map, he's a football player, shouldn't he be in the field playing? There's football balls, you can use those to make your map more dynamic.

Left as is.

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#2374

Checkpoint.

Today I will be editing the posts with the reviews to see if it is easier that way, so once I edit this to say it's done you may check your comment.
Maybe this way I can even include images to make it easier to understand!

Edit: All reviews are done.

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#2375

@6383873 edited!

#2376

removido

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#2377

@6384123

@6384170

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#2378

@6384132

#2379

@6384186
@6366778

:D

#2380

@6384120

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