Fxie a dit :

Looks good, just a few things:

Spawns seem like they could easily be bothered by cannons so I'd recommend adding a quick cloud ground (you can rotate it 45 degrees so it pokes out and looks nice)

It's hard to tell the earth grounds don't have collision. Try flipping them 180 degrees, the darkness from the bottom of the grounds may help.

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Lembre-se que os motores são as bases das bandeiras, portanto, posicione parte deles em cima do piso, assim eles não flutuaram.

Lembre-se que os motores são as bases das bandeiras, portanto, posicione parte deles em cima do piso, assim eles não flutuarão.
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• Motor Azul Direito - Spawn da Equipe Azul
• Prego Azul - Bandeira Azul no início do jogo

• Motor Verde Direito - Spawn da Equipe Azul
• Prego Verde - Bandeira Azul no início do jogo

check map please fxie. @5027847


Dominatelord

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Eraoneofthe a dit :

@5025970 I Changed the Diagonal grounds at the side of the screen, changed the grounds hight to 40

I added edges to all the grass grounds and added decorations.

The design is good, but there are way too many flags.
I'd remove the two around each spawn and the one in the center of the map, then it should be good to go.

Lutfihady a dit :

okay I'll get rid of polar : @5020559

There are still areas that are too high, and way too many flags
Also, some grounds go under the map, which looks odd from the side

Iemrevegol a dit :

@5015457 Edit

Bottom grounds too low, too many flags for such a small space, doesn't look very neat

Mishkatave a dit :

If you have not seen these small rectangles here's a clearer photo:
http://imgur.com/MCRZ46Z

White - Flags stand here
Red - Red team spawn
Blue - Blue team spawn

Shaman objects > red nail, teal nail, yellow nail, right motor red, right motor blue
red flag, blue flag, neutral flag, red spawn, blue spawn respectively

Also listed in the first post on this thread

Bigcrushes a dit :

@5026125

Some grounds are too high, more flags than necessary, not well aligned/organized

Lutfihady a dit :

@5026133

Spawning on flags makes it almost impossible for the other team to capture them

The middle underwater flag is a pain to reach and really anything underwater is a bad idea since we shoot when we duck

Also could use some decoration

Iemrevegol a dit :

@5026156

Could work if it was aligned better and looked nicer

Augustinas a dit :

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@5015461 - I liked the middle part before when it was an "n" shape
Also, I think the map would look much nicer if the grounds were 40 height instead of 20

@5014745 - looks fine to me but not shamousey apparently
[08:34] [Shamousey] if you're gonna use scrolling, at least make it enough to count for something
[08:34] [Shamousey] can quite easliy lower grounds here by a little and wouldnt need scrolling at all
[08:34] [Shamousey] as it so happens it just stops me seeing the bottom

@5021858 - looks good, added

@5022313 - I also think this would look a lot nicer with 40 height grounds instead of 20
As resident hamburger suggested,
[08:39] [Impuredeath] it coudl have looked soo much better, but the map layout is fine.
[08:39] [Impuredeath] some full grounds and some better decoration
[08:39] [Impuredeath] it just feels dead and empty.

Iemrevegol a dit :

@5026191

Far too cramped, not enough space to move around

Skalder a dit :

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@5026450 - looks good, added
@5026514 - you did a swell job pulling off a plain old sand map that actually looks pretty good, most likely from the swampy water at the bottom. Shamousey doesn't agree with the color grounds though, but I think they're somehow pulled off here as well. added

Arber a dit :

@5026361

Looks alright, I like the foresty background

Scripert a dit :

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@5026759

@5026711 - looks like a good start, but you can't really tell those earth grounds don't have collision (try rotating them 180 degrees) and it could use some decoration (trees, etc)

@5026759 - looks rather plain, and color grounds don't work well

Jfrl a dit :

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@4612785 - looks better, added

@4654449 - the bottom right ground is too low (at least 40 height)
other than that, looks pretty interesting

@4676064 - We're avoiding these sorts of designs; we prefer a background and regular grounds

@4703504 - the concept could work, but the plain wood and chocolate grounds don't.

Udeos a dit :

@5026859

Looks pretty; not sure how well gameplay would go, but we can test that when you lower flags (http://prntscr.com/3h0tp2)

Flindix a dit :

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Looks fine, added

Garyarcanine a dit :

@4901429

If you could make it look a little nicer with some snow decorations (trees especially would look pretty) and flip the rest of the non-collision grounds 180 degrees this could do

Mrkurt a dit :

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@5020935 - this part is still too tiny (honestly, you could remove that ground altogether and it'd be fine)

@5020961 - it looks like blue team might have an unfair advantage in this map, but we'll see how it goes; added

Smartestguy a dit :

check map please fxie. @5027847


Dominatelord

The flags on the sides by the spawns seem to promote a lot of offscreen gameplay

Also, that circle ground in the middle doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the map, it's very plain

Other than those two issues looks good

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Fxie a dit :

good thing

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thank you

Fxie a dit :

@4654449 - the bottom right ground is too low (at least 40 height)
other than that, looks pretty interesting

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Fxie a dit :

@4703504 - the concept could work, but the plain wood and chocolate grounds don't.

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Fxie a dit :

If you could make it look a little nicer with some snow decorations (trees especially would look pretty) and flip the rest of the non-collision grounds 180 degrees this could do

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Chumpyx's #domination maps

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~ Thx bro!

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