@6383619 Edited. Thanks for the tips. I made a edit, now the map has ''pictures'' in the wall that rotate.

@6382883 Editado, espero que te guste.

Left as is:
@6383873 - Segabite
This map has a long way to go until it becomes P5, but you're improving, it looks so much better with a green background. Keep working on it!

@6384123 - Marselord
That mouse is majestic. And it looks way better than before, but it still needs some work until it can be considered for P5. The few elements the map has feel kind of forced, try to make everything have a certain balance, so they feel natural in that enviroment and not like they're all put together there.

Have you considered drawing the map first with a pen and paper to see how it'd look? Just a quick sketch, it helps a lot sometimes.

@6384170 - Marselord
This is so cute, I'm keeping it for a future month perm.

@6384132 - Eliteray
Really nice art, but I feel like the enviroment could be worked more. So many decorations make it look like it's too much for a single map, remove some or try to place them differently.

@6384186 - Brasouka
It's hard to see the art because of the water, and since there is no floor mice might die when ducking to get the cheese. Add a floor, make water invisible. Make make those dots rotate so it's more fun?

@6366778 - Brasouka
Fix the kite and I'll save it for a future month perm.

@6383619 - Pratton
It looks nicer now. Still a long way to go until it gets P5, but you're improving, keep working on it!

@6382883 - Iulianbuhai
Bieeen, lo voy a guardar para un futuro!



Will be discussed:
None


Ignored:
@6384120 - F5ll1p5d4p4z (Blacklisted)


Day #5 of daily reviews. (Will stop at day #7 to give a chance to other mapcrews)

@6385684

@6385753 - the orange balls here are useless for expert mice. They are here just for novice.
Aaaand no more random things bouncy! hahahaha

@6386798 - and that's a peculiar map... the ball who spins outta screen is for expert mice. (PS: the three upper grounds disappear steadily, when all they disappear, the balls will start to decrease in number and will only leave the one who spins outscreen).

obrigado por avaliar meu mapa, sou brasileiro.

Avaliar ''@6385803'' Mapa igual a esse @6383873, Só que fiz outro.

@6384132
I feel that this map is awful, I would settle with a P1 if it is even worth a P1

@6356893
Initially made it for christmas
-Improved gameplay by adding a kicking leg for the penguin.

@5505272

@6387032

@6387538
Thank you.

@6323729 @6324093 @6324354 @6325034 @6346460

Gracias por los consejos Bog :D
@6387605

@6352436

hola, soy celoso de lulianbuhai, puedes me das una resena en espanol tambien? <3

Left as is:
@6385753 - Doublame
I like the gameplay of this, it's simple yet fun. The art, however, needs some improvement, it's cute but it doesn't have much to do with the gameplay, it's more of an obstacle. Try to include it more in the gameplay, maybe but something in the girl's hands that affects the gameplay (a bouncy ball? a bird, something)

@6386798 - Doublame
What is this? http://i.imgur.com/UghXjx7.png it has no collision with mice. I see you like circles, they can make a good gameplay if you know how to use them, and I like how you included them here. It's boring having to wait for the outer circle to complete the map, maybe you could add more? Maybe make them 3 or 4, so it's easier to complete it in case you miss one.

Also remember how you think it's ok to add a few details in viprin's drawing editor? Well, you could add some edits here, maybe decorate the jester's clothes a bit, just to make it look prettier.

@6385803 - Segabite
The art, which has really nothing to do with the playbility of the map, doesn't collide with mice. Try adding some shades and align it better (I see a few green spots in the shirt and hair). The map needs improvements everywhere, but overall you're improving, this is better than your first map, but you should keep working on it for more than a day, there's no hurry to submit it, we'll be here to review it when you think it's good enough. :)

@6383873 - Segabite
^

@6384132 - Eliteray
Looks better now, and the water makes it a bit more fun. Try to make Steve have collision with mice, it's unclear what has collision and what doesn't. Also try to make it more fun, it's really missing something.

@6356893 - Eliteray
Mice get stuck between the penguin's legs. :(
It's funny, fix it and I'll P5 it for Christmas.

@5505272 - Guiprezotto
Halloween already passed, and this map's gameplay isn't really fun to keep it as a permanent P5, sorry. It's a really cute map though, and we might reperm it in Halloween 2016 again!

@6387032 - Fortesain
No estoy segura de qué es esto, el arte no es muy bueno, y no entiendo por qué has puesto una pared a la derecha y un techo, no es necesario. Trabaja en el arte y la jugabilidad, haz que se entienda qué se supone que es el mapa, y trata de alinearlo mejor. En la jugabilidad intenta hacerlo más divertido.

@6387538 - Xxmeeping
Please submit your Christmas maps to the "Christmas maps" thread.

@6387605 - Danilowtf
No sé qué es esto pero me gusta, sin embargo, tienes que trabajar en el arte y la jugabilidad. Se ven los anclajes, no sé si eso es intencional, y está un poco desalineado (http://i.imgur.com/31T0Iva.png) si arreglas estos errores y haces que el gameplay sea un poco más divertido lo consideraré para P5/mes.

@6352436 - Mousechris
kkkk Chris.



Will be discussed:
@6385684 - Peterbope - BAYMAX.


Ignored:
@6323729 - Hazelhearts (Submitted more than 2 maps)
@6324093 - Hazelhearts (Submitted more than 2 maps)
@6324354 - Hazelhearts (Submitted more than 2 maps)
@6325034 - Hazelhearts (Submitted more than 2 maps)
@6346460 - Hazelhearts (Submitted more than 2 maps)


Day #6 of daily reviews.

@6385487
@6384186 - #Editado - Mais trabalho deixar os pisos se movendo e é arriscado que faça um outro mapa. Já cheguei na meta dos 50 pisos.

@6388450

@6388763

'-- ' Voltei õ/

I know it's not enough for a P5 map but I want to hear if this map can be improved.

@6389052