@6389756 I've been working on this for a lot of time, please say thats good enough <3

@6389778 all of this in a day... Hope you like it ;D

@6382557

@6231648

@5299667

^ mfw I don't get a review in spanish >:((((((((

@6384132
Still editing

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@6385487 - Brasouka
I really like the art in this map, I don't know where this woman is from, but she has nice hair. You need to fix the mech, because it looks weird and it's mass deadly the way it is, mice will jump on the arm and then try to get the cheese but then it'll go back and some will stay but the rest will die, and so on until there's no mice left. The dots have collision but that's hard to know at first since they're the same color as other stuff that have no collision, you should make them lighter/shinier so it's more obvious. I would like to see this map in P5 once it's fixed, so please keep editing it and trying to make it work better.

@6384186 - Brasouka
I really don't see how you ran out of grounds here, isn't it all made with viprin? Anyway, it really needs a floor and some gameplay. The floor is important because once mice get the cheese they will most likely die if they don't land on one of the tiny yellow dots. The art should be worked too, I see some spikes on the shark that make it look bad and some lines are not aligned properly. It's a cute map, try to work on it a bit more.

@6388450 - Fathx
I like the colors you used, but that's pretty much it, sadly. The trees aren't really well done, you should work more on that, trees don't have one big trunk only, they have branches too. And when you cut a tree it falls, so it stops being vertical and it ends up being horizontal, so when people push the tree it should stop being | and be more ___

The gameplay isn't really good, we only accept maps where gameplay is walljumping over art if the art is great, you should work something out to make your trees be more than just obstacles. Keep working on it.

@6388763 - Cassabiel
I will P5 this for Christmas if you make this gap smaller: http://i.imgur.com/dCWMt0T.png, as it currently is only 5 mice in a room of 30 completed the map, the rest died trying to get to the other side.

@6389057 - Alex4evah
Nice mouse, but Halloween already passed and this map's gameplay isn't good enough to stay as a permanent map, I'm sorry. You should consider editing it to add more gameplay, since walljumping over art isn't really fun. Also fix the mouth, it's not really aligned. We might add this to the Halloween rotation next year, though.

@6389052 - Hybinkunduz
Saving this for a future month perm.

@6389756 - Pratton
It's not good enough for a permanent P5, sorry. But I'll save it for a future perm, maybe we can have an "abstract art" month filled with weird stuff.

@6389778 - Extremojuan
Lindo mapa, pero por favor envia tus mapas de navidad al hilo de "Christmas maps".

@6382557 - Jhontew
Please send your christmas maps to the "Christmas maps" thread. As a tip: this snowman needs more destruction around it. Add anvils and boxes, I'd totally perm it for a month if it had anvils and boxes all over it, like it went mad.

@6231648 - Mousechris
Puedes hacer que el fondo sea rosado? (fondo de san valentín) y reduce la opacidad de las nubes rojas donde está el queso, es un poco difícil ver al ratón y los suelos con eso allí. Enviamelo por PM cuando lo hayas arreglado y lo pondré en discusión, me gusta.

@5299667 - Mousechris
Oh dear.

@6384132 - Eliteray
I'm not sure if you edited anything, but please submit it when you're done, not while you're still working on it.


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Day #7 of daily reviews. Now I will stop so other mapcrew can review P5 too.

ups, tarde
@6387605 - edit
@6413826

Removed. Disconsider the maps posted here.

@6391017 - Fiesta, San valentín

@6358070

@6393427
@6396814 bee vs ant ^^

@6389756 - Pratton
It's not good enough for a permanent P5, sorry. But I'll save it for a future perm, maybe we can have an "abstract art" month filled with weird stuff.

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It isn't an abstract art :c It is Tetris

@5754540

@6392643

@6023873 no tengo ideas por ahora jaja cuando tenga una idea nueva lo publicare por ahora esto ..

@6382239

@6388763

Space between the gaps have been reduced ! :D

@6394218

@6370298