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@569123
@2372637

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@708355
@708233

Shamousey a dit :

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@5048370 Anthonyjones This could work if the style was more like Beachking's circle map
in #domination, I recommend you look at that and redesign it.
The decorations really don't fit in that well.
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Shamousey a dit :

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@5013805 Knicksfans Flags next to spawn make it hard for the other team to take, the
colours are too vibrant and vivid, and useless on a map like this,
the top flags are too high.

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<b>Eraoneofthe</b> will be doing reviews here from time to time now too :]

What do you mean by this?

Knicksfans a dit :

What do you mean by this?

I'd remove the 2 flags near spawn.The red and blue recatangle grounds are too bright and are better off being removed or possibly replaced with earth ground. The top grounds in the middle are too high, you need to lower them.

However if you're asking what do you mean that I'll be doing reviews, it means that I will be reviewing peoples submissions.

@4676064 - edited

@5039799 - Edited
@5040116 - Edited
@5040087 - Remade

@5051068

@5031992 - Edited

@5020559 - Edited
@5026133 - Edited

Changed this one, as you can see the blue spawn side is blue and the red side is red. ^^

@5032562

I've changed these as well.

@5032396
@5033501

Hope my updates of the maps made them any better.

@5042087 - Edited

@4959744 - edited

@5013805 - Edited ;)

Enginfener a dit :

Edited @5030088

Still too many flags and you need to spend some time aligning the grounds to make the maps symetrical aspect work. Also some of the flags aren't placed very well.

Mrkurt a dit :

@5020935 edited.

As said above great map!, added.

Rikkeshang a dit :

fix'd
@569123
@2372637

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@708355

@569123 Added. However some more spawn protection would be nice.

@2372637 Added.

@708355 All the flags are at the top of the map, you need to space them out more. I also suggest possibly removing some pillars and adding in other elements more places for flags, maybe add 2 more in.

Anthonyjones a dit :

Edit- @5048370

As mentioned in the last review take a look at @4997403 try and match that style.

Jfrl a dit :

@4676064 - edited

Looks good now, added.

Potyrat a dit :

@5039799 - Edited
@5040116 - Edited

@5039799 Too generic, way too much cheese on the bottom half of the map and no spawn protection Also the flag in the middle is too high.

@5040116 You need to make the middle of the map not so cramped I suggest reducing the stone grounds hight so it's easier to get mice out, also I suggest you add spawn protection. Also I suggest you restore the decorations to their original colour.


@5040087 It is way too hard to die in the centre, you need to work on that. Also I'd suggest you add in more decorations, possibly change the background even though it's not an issue. Also I suggest you to remove atleast 4 cheese from each side. And spawn protections would be nice, also you need to move the spawn not directly on a flag as it is too hard to be captured.

Mrssxer a dit :

@5051068

Please read original post before posting a reply.

Udeos a dit :

@5031992 - Edited

Looks good - added.

Lutfihady a dit :

@5020559 - Edited
@5026133 - Edited

@5020559 This map is just too generic, try thinking of some stuff you can add to the map or completely redo it to increase it's gameplay potential.


@5026133 I actually like this map, however there are a few things that need to be worked on, the stone grounds at the bottom left and right at the map near the cheese is misleading, remove them and the decoration, the spawn doesn't need those stone pillars all it needs is a small decent sized cloud ground I suggest 100x100 .

Skalder a dit :

Changed this one, as you can see the blue spawn side is blue and the red side is red. ^^

@5032562

I've changed these as well.

@5032396
@5033501

Hope my updates of the maps made them any better.

@5032562 I suggest you remove the blue and red panels and the flag in the middle of the map, also try adding some more decorations. While not an issue, consider playing around with making some of the stone grounds and making them darker.


@5032396 You need to distribute the gameplay more evenly throughout the map, the top needs some more attention.


@5033501 Looks good - added.

Oliferfake a dit :

@5042087 - Edited

Please raise the bottom flags and their associated grounds as they're a little bit too low, Also the background and decorations aren't very interesting, try playing around with them.

Zombiewd a dit :

@4959744 - edited

I suggest you remove the ice squares.

Knicksfans a dit :

@5013805 - Edited ;)

This map is too bunched up towards the middle, try spreading things out more and making the sand square grounds smaller.

Eraoneofthe a dit :

As mentioned in the last review take a look at @4997403 try and match that style.

Edit - @5048370 - right match that style?

fix'd - @708355 , maybe now?


idk why you forgot that map, anyway -- @708233

@569123 - edit spawn mices, pls do a feedback

@5032396

Trying with the ice, maybe it doesn't work out at all? :p Thinking it could add some gameplay to the top of the map.

Eraoneofthe a dit :

@5013805 - Edited ;)

This map is too bunched up towards the middle, try spreading things out more and making the sand square grounds smaller.

What do you guys want me to do? I've removed the color grounds, I made the higher grounds lower, now you're saying they're scrunched up? Srsly?

Rikkeshang a dit :

idk why you forgot that map, anyway -- @708233

When I quoted your message that map wasn't there.