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griffincraft a dit : Ejaffa a dit : esauceb a dit : 1. I never added the mouth because it was supposed to have no mouth xD 2. Thanks for all the tips o/ |
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Can someone criteque my Bear? xD I stayed up late to make it as perfect as I could ;; |
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griffincraft a dit : ![]() Some of this may be a bit nitpicky and harsh, but off we go. Now, I'm not much of a bear expert, but the positions of the legs on your bear are impossible, especially the ones at the back. The tail appears to be coming out of you bears hind leg, that shouldn't look like that, again you have adopted your wolf style for this bear, bears' heads are larger and their ears are small and round, their eyes are small and black and their noses are bigger. I suggest looking at some images of bear faces. Bears' front legs usually aren't in that position, I think the legs should be swapped around, I've shown what I mean in the red lined picture I drew. The back leg that is behind looks like someone has glued it on, a bear would not be able to put their leg in that angle. Staying on the legs, bears' hind legs are very strong, so they might just be a tiny bit bigger than you've drawn. I'm not too sure, but I don't think bears really have manes like you've drawn, their necks are also a bit shorter than what you have drawn. Well, I hope I haven't done any of this wrong, or been too harsh or nitpicky. I don't think any of it is nitpicky though... I hope it helped anyway. Dernière modification le 1404061200000 |
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griffincraft a dit : Your bear head and neck looks an awful lot like a wolf's or canine's head. ![]() As you can see, a bear's head is below the shoulder and is not the highest part of the body. The arms are a lot shorter and stubbier than what you portrayed in the picture C: Bears also have an overall more rounded out shape than any canine or feline...I really don't know how to say this, but while the details on your picture are pretty good *fur, etc*, it's not in a very bear-like anatomy. Dernière modification le 1404087360000 |
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^Lol yeah I know, the sketch I made looked WAY more like a bear than the overall result. I made the fur because why not, bears look fluffy so yeah xD I wanted to make a "Mane" to give it a fluffier appearance, so i had to alongate the neck xP |
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Rosuuri a dit : Dernière modification le 1404093960000 |
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The legs are fine if it was a wolf, but it's not a wolf, so it's not fine. Bears are bears. Their legs aren't as long and skinny as a wolf's. The neck as well. E: Also, I keep forgetting to say this, but thanks Satash and Zarykahhhszasl? for critiquing my piece C: really helped! Dernière modification le 1404091860000 |
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The ear study picture from a page or two ago is very interesting! I will look at it again when I get my tablet PC back from repairs. Conwolf a dit : You're welcome. |
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Conwolf a dit : excuse |
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Can I have a critique? Sorry for the bad shading technique, I made this with MS Paint. ![]() |
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:p ![]() |
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Edit: that was a terrible idea oops Ok can someone critique these guys (before that keep in mind that my style is kind of to narrow down the body as it goes, like a large chest and kind of blocky arms idk it's exaggerated) ![]() Dernière modification le 1404162840000 |
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Hii, how to draw a realistic eye? i currently draw eyes like this: ![]() |
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frogoshogo a dit : Alright, the image you are trying to show isn't showing up, so I will assume that you just drew a random eye. I drew up a little thing on how to draw "realistic eyes", although they are not entirely realistic. The first thing you want to do is to look at the eye's anatomy. You can't make it too big or too wide, otherwise it wouldn't be realistic. This picture might help: ![]() Take a look at the steps below: ![]() Of course, as I said before, these eyes are kind of too big to fit a human face, like the last one. I have a kind of cartoonish style of drawing eyes, and this means I kind of suck at realistic eyes. Well, you get the idea. Study the anatomy and look at pictures online. |
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Thank youuu!! |
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frogoshogo a dit : No problem ouo |
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tips on how to draw good on a laptop with sketchtoy? C; ![]() |
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Eaglerox a dit : The hand of the guy on the left that is over the guy on the right's shoulder is sticking straight down and it doesn't look right nor natural/comfortable at all. The fingers should be curled, just slightly, as that's the default "relaxed hand" pose. Since they're sleeping it looks like, it wouldn't be so rigid. Another is, if they are sleeping (which I'm led to believe by the "sleep bubble" coming from lefty's nose), the left's body doesn't portray that. He should be more slumped against righty if they're just sleeping against one another. If lefty is leaning against a wall, he should be slouching more, with his upper back/shoulder area pressing against the wall and his lower back/stomach sticking out, so he's curved. His head would either be leaning back against the wall, his chin resting on his chest, or his head on top of righty's. His left arm is also not in a relaxed state. Maybe just let it rest at his side or have him drape it over his stomach. |
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I really need help with Cat anatomy and i would really like a critique on this. Be as harsh as you'd like (If anyone has the time a redline would be EXTREMELY helpful) Dernière modification le 1404273720000 |