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Can someone redline/critique either (or both if you're up for it??) of these pieces? I know they're non-TFM related, but oh god these two look pretty bad... Please don't be harsh, I'm sensitive, and chances are if you're harsh I'm just gonna get snappy and defensive. I have no clue what anatomy is, pretty much, because I just go "WEE FLOP STYLIZED THIS LOOKS OKAY" ![]() everything about this one is wrong p much so (just dont mention the messy coloring i know about that) desperately need help ![]() this one is kinda excused since it was sketch but how do i bags how do i anything desperately need help on this one too Dernière modification le 1404259980000 |
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Lionzue a dit : Then don't ask for help. |
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one line thing for the sweater is larger (fatter) than the other and the sleeves are kind of puffy by the paws without any bag... ^^ edit: crituqe on my bear plz? Im used to drawing wolves and cats but i also like bears :D http://sketchtoy.com/61965137 edit2: I just realized he's leaning back. Maybe he's escaping from something? O_o (my bear btw x3) Dernière modification le 1404266940000 |
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Zakryah a dit : Um? Excuse you, but I'm sorry if I want help that's something like "the ears are too big and pointy, so you should work on that" instead of "omfg wat wrong with u what dat even supposed to be??!!one11!eleven" on a thread meant for ways to improve art. There's a line between pure, insulting rudeness and constructive criticism. I don't want to be yelled at, I want help. Dernière modification le 1404266400000 |
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![]() ![]() Could I have some tips on the anatomy please? Dernière modification le 1404269520000 |
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Lionzue a dit : Some critiques are harsh but ultimately will help you if it's an actual critique, and you getting defensive over it is annoying and means you're not willing to listen. People won't help you. I'd critique you but I know crap about animals, however I wouldn't hold your hand and help you along the stepping stones. If you don't know what anatomy is, google it, study animals. Don't sit there and get all defensive over someone telling you how to improve. |
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2.) Be prepared for harsh comments. You never know how bad it can be. If you specifically don't want harsh critiques, just say it in your post. Asking for softer critiques is fine. |
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sticks tongue out |
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this is crap plz just stop fighting i know where this is going to end. When someone asks not to be that harsh, say what you're trying to say nicley. |
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hmm... the head is a little pointy and the straps are blowing when the hair is not. ^^ edit: critique? http://sketchtoy.com/61966330 it is (from left to right) Fallingspear, Noobforevah, and Vulli man i backspaced so many times i am so tired its so late at night /).- Dernière modification le 1404271020000 |
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Zakryah a dit : Alright, thank you so much! :D |
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Sadlelight a dit : The hand is in the wrong direction. If you rest your hands on a surface the thumbs will face inwards, and the way you drew them, they are on the outside. It is possible to hold things like that, but it doesn't feel as natural and people don't usually hold things like that (unless you are stabbing someone behind you with something, I guess.) Even if it is turned around, the paw/hand is still not actually holding the knife. I don't know if you just drew a shape and then put the knife behind it or that it is holding it at the very bottom. If it actually is holding it at the bottom, that's not safe. but okay. (since all of the fingers are on one side of it, I doubt it would be very stable.) The fingers should wrap around the item, and normally the thumb and the rest of the fingers are separated to hold it securely. I have a picture to show what I mean, but it is not 100% correct so don't copy it. It is just in case you don't understand what I mean. bad picc |
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RE: Jevjev's painting Nice try with MS Paint. c: 1. Antlers - Make them a little more curvy. 2. Ears - Draw them straight up. ![]() RE: Meideline's drawing What a lovely and fluffy wolf! I love the texture that you used. 1. Refer to the colour outlines if you want more practice. ![]() Dernière modification le 1404399960000 |
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Sadlelight a dit : one thing I noticed right away is that the hands are going in the wrong direction, just switch them. also, if you see what I mean the thumb looks rarely attached. Also I think that the fingers should look more separated, but I think thats just a style so thats optional :) e: sorry for those double posts jfc lag internet Dernière modification le 1404367260000 |
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http://sketchtoy.com/61986387 How is that? (note that was my first time using sketch toy.) |
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Girlkirbyy a dit : Compared to the arms and rest of body, the body should be a bit longer and the legs should be bigger. Other than that, pretty cute style and junk. I'd suggest you look at some pics of antlers and maybe pics of people (with hair!) wearing fake antlers so you can see how they'll come out of the hair. |